Mami S (mechamami) — もらったレビュー

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それは私には動作していないように見えます。クレドールバンドは日本でのみ使用できます。あなたは私に他の時計を販売するか、その商品からの私にリンクを提供することはできますか？

クレドールのためのバンドは日本でのみ使用できます。だから、あなたが所有されている別のものを売ってくださるか、バンドつきの別のリンクを販売してくださらない限り、時計は私にとっては動作しないことと同じになります。

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それは私に使えないと思います。クレドールのバンドは日本でのみ買えます。あなたは私にもうひとつの時計を販売するか、その商品からのリンクだけを提供することはできますか？

クレドールのためのバンドは日本でのみ入手できます。だから、あなたが所有されているもうひとつのものを売ってくださるか、バンドつきの別のリンクを販売してくださらない限り、時計は私にとっては使えないことと同じになります。↵
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元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
I've relieved and am glad to hear that you received the car safely.
If you will ride it carefully, the car would still live a long life.
Once again, thank you for your dealings with us.
I am looking forward to the business with you again.

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Thank you for contacting us.
I've been relieved and am glad to hear that you received the car safely.
If you will ride it carefully, the car would still live a long life.
Once again, thank you for your dealings with us.
I am looking forward to the business with you again.

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We are very sorry for the trouble.
It was a mistake of our worker who was in charge of shipping that the street address was missing.
In order to prevent a recurrence, we will enhance our double-checking system.

Thank you so much for letting us know that and receiving the package.
We really appreciate you.

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We are very sorry for the trouble.
It was a mistake of our worker who was in charge of shipping that the street address was missing.
In order to prevent a recurrence, we will enhance our double-checking system.

Thank you so much for contacting us, and receiving the package.
We really appreciate you.(「ご連絡」と「荷物の受け取り」なので修正。）↵

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Limited music video of the new song of May J, "Kiss of the oath", that was unreleased in the package was decided to distribute on UULA!

To celebrate broadcasting the UULA original drama "STRANGE LOVE STORY- THE AMAZING LOVE STORY-" that May J is responsible for the theme song in "Kiss of the oath", UULA limited music video "Kiss of the oath 〜STRANGE LOVE STORY Special Ver. ~" will begin being aird from July 3 in UULA.

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Limited-edition music video of May J's previously unreleased new song, "Kiss of the Oath" will be available at UULA!

To celebrate the broadcast of UULA's original drama "STRANGE LOVE STORY- THE AMAZING LOVE STORY-" in which May J sings the theme song "Kiss of the Oath", the limited music video "Kiss of the Oath 〜STRANGE LOVE STORY Special Ver. ~" will begin airing July 3rd on UULA.

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Thank you for your reply.
I'll return Y113709294 then, so could you procedure the cancelation please?
I'll send you the tracking number later.

I'd like to return the product, so could you send it please?
I would like you to pack it very neatly.
After shipping it out, please let me know the tracking number.

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Thank you for your reply.
I'll return Y113709294 then, so could you procedure the cancelation please?
I'll send you the tracking number later.

I'd like to return the product, so could you send the replacement please?
I would like you to pack it very neatly.
After shipping it out, please let me know the tracking number.

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売りに出ています：有名なディズニーアーティスト、ジェームズ·コールマンのサイン、通し番号付き紙リトグラフ！ 「Splendiferousピクニック」。画像は新品同様です。 Ebayでの他の売り手とは異なり、これらはストックフォトではありません。あなたは今見ているものを手に入れることができあます。私はそれを所有しており、既に梱包され出荷される準備ができています！本物の証明書も提供されています！
今が、ジェームス·コールマンの素晴らしいアートワークを所有するためにあなたのチャンスです！ディズニーコンテンポラリークラシックプーさんのキャラクターと彼のユニークなスタイルを組み合わせ、ジェームズ·コールマンは、さらに別の傑作を作成しました。 「Splendiferousピクニック」は「アーティストによって手書きでサインされ、限定版の番号が付けられたコールマンによる紙リトグラフです！本物の証明書も付いてます！

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売りに出ています：有名なディズニーアーティスト、ジェームズ·コールマンのサイン、通し番号付き紙リトグラフ！ 「Splendiferousピクニック」。画像は新品同様です。 Ebayでの他の売り手とは異なり、これらはストックフォトではありません。あなたは今見ているものを手に入れることができます。私はそれを所有しており、既に梱包され出荷される準備ができています！本物の証明書も付いてきます！
今が、ジェームス·コールマンの素晴らしいアートワークを所有するチャンスです！ディズニーコンテンポラリークラシックプーさんのキャラクターと彼のユニークなスタイルを組み合わせ、ジェームズ·コールマンは、さらに別の傑作を作成しました。 「Splendiferousピクニック」は「アーティストによって手書きでサインされ、限定版の番号が付けられたコールマンによる紙リトグラフです！本物の証明書も付いてます！

元の翻訳
Dear all developers,

I'm a sure who purchased ZONASINHunter.
This is a very helpful tool because I can use it sensuously albeit my poor English.

I am writing you today to ask if you are developing a tool to monitor the stock availability of the amazon.com seller.

If we could monitor it, we can confirm how many sales are sold each day.
In Japan, there is a monitoring website for amazon.co.jp, but we don't have anything to monitor oversea amazon sellers.

If you know any, could you please let me know? I will appreciate you.

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Dear all developers,

I'm a user who purchased ZONASINHunter.
This is a very helpful tool because I can use it sensuously albeit my poor English.

I am writing you today to ask if you are developing a tool to monitor the stock availability of the amazon.com seller.

If we could monitor it, we can confirm how many sales are sold each day.
In Japan, there is a monitoring website for amazon.co.jp, but we don't have anything to monitor oversea amazon sellers.

If you know any, could you please let me know? I will appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
どの住所を荷物に書かれたのか教えてもらえませんか？もしそれが私の住所できちんと15/74 Auburn roadと書かれているのなら、心配しません。あなたはPaypalの住所と言っていましたが、もし他の住所なのであれば私は友人に追跡してもらうよう、知らせる必要があります。

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どの住所を荷物の宛名に書かれたのか教えてもらえませんか？書かれた住所が15/74 Auburn roadでしたら、心配ありません。もしあなたの言われたPaypalの住所が他の住所なのであれば、私は友人に知らせて追跡してもらう必要があります。

元の翻訳
As I informed you before, the release date of your product will be August 30, 2014.
On the screen, it says "shipped", but it appears so due to the Amazon procedure and it has actually not shipped yet.

I notified you about that by email on the following date.

You can cancel the order anytime, so don't hesitate to do so, if you are wondering.
However, cancellation will be done easily only if it is conducted 3 days before the actual release date.
Thank you.

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As I informed you before, the release date of your product is August 30, 2014.
On the screen, it says "shipped," but it appears so due to the Amazon procedure and it has actually not shipped yet.

I notified you about that by email on the following date.

You can cancel the order anytime, so don't hesitate to do so, if you are wondering.
However, it will be cancelled easily only if it is done 3 days before the actual release date.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Do you happen to know any old books similar to 〇〇?
If it is an interesting book, I'd like to purchase it.

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Do you know any old books similar to 〇〇?
If it is a fascinating book, I would like to purchase it.

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I have something to ask you.
A rug mat will be arrived from "Anthropologie" with the tracking number "1Z28763V0388719748".
It is the product I already canceled, but shipped out for some reason.

When it arrives, could you please refuse to receive it?
Thank you.

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I have a favour to ask you.
A rug mat will arrive from "Anthropologie" with the tracking number "1Z28763V0388719748".
It is the product that I already canceled, but shipped out anyway for some reason.

When it arrives, can you please refuse to receive it?
Thank you.

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I receive a message that the products were shipped, but I sent you an e-mail to cancel the order yesterday.
Please check it.

Regarding the products sent, I will tell the transfer company to apply to the procedure or refusing to accept it.
Or could you please stop the delivery company to deliver the products from your side?

I didn't get the products I wanted because of your side's mistake.
However, the shipping fee for returning is expensive.
So I will give it up this time.

Please make cancellation of "Y113709294" this time.
Please show some responsibility to deal with this because it is your mistake.
Thank you.

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I received a message that the products were shipped, but I already sent you an e-mail to cancel the order yesterday.
Please confirm this.

Regarding the products sent, I will tell the transfer company to refuse to accept it.
Or could you please stop the delivery company from delivering the products from your side?

I didn't get the products I wanted because of your side's mistake.
However, the shipping fee for returning is expensive.
So I will give it up this time.

Please cancel the order "Y113709294" this time.
Please show some responsibility when dealing with this because it is your mistake.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I was updating, but the error occurred at the last.

I will try installing from the beginning when the next official update comes.

I have something that I want you to always check when you update.
Please make sure that you have actually created a category with different Category Name and Slug value on the demo site.
At that time, H1 should refer to the value of the Category Name. URL is of course Slug.
Please check if the Password Reset page works properly as well.

Reply is not needed.

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I was updating, but an error occurred at the last.

I will try installing from the beginning when the next official update comes.

There is something I want you to always check when you update.
Please make sure that you have actually created a category with a different Category Name and a Slug value on the demo site.
At that time, H1 should refer to the value of the Category Name. URL is of course Slug.
Please check if the Password Reset page works properly as well.

No Reply Needed.

元の翻訳
③ water (bath)
The third try was to investigate in the water depth.
We thought to have experiments in the river, but first we tried in a handy bathtub.

Bathing time with the beacon terminal in Zip-lock.
Next to the unit bath which hot water is gradually accumulated, we checked frequently if the notification would come from the beacon terminal.
I had off guard because I thought the water was still shallow still, but suddenly the notification no longer came.
While gradually removing the hot water bath, we explored the depths where notification comes.
At about 10cm depth, screen has changed in Shinjuku.

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③ water (bath)
The third try was to investigate in the water depth.
We thought of conducting experiments in a river, but first we tried in a handy bathtub.

Bathing time with the beacon terminal in Zip-lock.
Next to the unit bath where hot water is gradually accumulated, we checked frequently if the notification would come from the beacon terminal.
I had off guard because I thought the water was still shallow still, but suddenly the notification no longer came.
While gradually removing the hot water bath, we explored the depths where notification comes.
At about 10 cm depth, the screen changed to Shinjuku.