Mami S (mechamami) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Now next try was the elevator door. The thickness of the door is about 15cm.
Oh?
I tried waiting for a while, but it was not able to notice from the elevator at all.
So we obtained a result that "as for the iron, the radio penetrate up to the door of the building".

② meat (human body)
Next to the iron, we investigated the meat.
As for the result of the examination of the procurement of handy meat, it was decided to carry out the investigation in the human body.

We gathered people as the meat in the conference room immediately.

As starters, we let the Tech Red with a beacon terminal at their stomach toward the side wall.

It was a perfect success of the notification.

修正後
Now next attempt was the elevator door. The thickness of the door is about 15cm.
Oh?
I tried waiting for a while, but it was not able to notice from the elevator at all.
So we obtained a result that "as for the iron, the radio is able to penetrate up to the door of the building".

② meat (human body)
After the investigation on iron, we conducted the investigation on meat.
Take the preparation of test resouce into account, it was decided to carry out the investigation in the human body.

We gathered people as the meat in the conference room immediately.

As starters, we let the Tech Red with a beacon terminal at their stomach toward the side wall.

It was a perfect success of the notification.

元の翻訳
Research theme
Until the last survey, we conducted a survey on speed and distance, and then obtained a result for us to consider of using a variety of methods.
However, there is a question that can not be avoided when we examine more specific scene to use it: "Does the radio waves of iBeacon penetrate a building or a person?" So, as the last fourth research, we are going to experiment on "transparent" of the iBacon radio wave.

Research summary
This research intercept obstacles of various materials between the originating beacon terminal and the receiving iPhone5S and experiment if they can notify each other.

修正後
Research theme
Until last survey, we conducted surveys on speed and distance, and then obtained some results for us to consider of a variety of usage.
However, there is a question that can not be avoided when we examine more specific scene to use it: "Does the radio waves of iBeacon penetrate buildings or human bodies?" So, as the last fourth research, we are going to experiment on "transmittance" of the iBacon radio wave.

Experiment overview
To put obstacles made of various materials between the originating beacon terminal and the receiving iPhone5S and experiment if they can notify each other.

元の翻訳
Research theme
Until the last survey, we conducted a survey on speed and distance, and then obtained a result for us to consider of using a variety of methods.
However, there is a question that can not be avoided when we examine more specific scene to use it: "Does the radio waves of iBeacon penetrate a building or a person?" So, as the last fourth research, we are going to experiment on "transparent" of the iBacon radio wave.

Research summary
This research intercept obstacles of various materials between the originating beacon terminal and the receiving iPhone5S and experiment if they can notify each other.

修正後
Research theme
Until the last survey, we conducted a survey [word choice] on speed and distance, and then obtained a result for us to consider using a variety of methods.
However, there is a question that can not be avoided when we examine a more specific scene to use it: "Does the radio waves [subject-verb agreement] of iBeacon penetrate a building or a person?" So, as the last fourth research, we are going to experiment on "transparent" of the iBacon radio wave.

Research summary
This research intercept [subject-verb agreement] obstacles of various materials between the originating beacon terminal and the receiving iPhone5S and experiment if they can notify each other.

元の翻訳
Hekko. I'm Tanaka.
I'm sorry to cause you some trouble, but would that be possible for you to put my order #04294975 and # 04274759 together?
That would be nice if you could adjust the postage, too.
Thank you very much.

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Hello. My name is Tanaka.
I'm sorry to cause you trouble, but would that be possible for you to put my order #04294975 and # 04274759 together?
It would be nice if you could adjust the postage accordingly as well.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Our agency received the products with the incomplete address.

Is it products that you have shipped?

If so, you need a proof that you shipped it.

Please send us some image to prove it by e-mail.

The reason is I am not sure if it is my products since the address is incomplete
and I can not accept it yet.

修正後
Our agency received a product with an incomplete address.

Will you make sure that this is a product which you have shipped?

If so, we need a proof of the product that you shipped it.

Please send us some images to prove it by e-mail.

The reason is that I am not sure if it is my product since the address is incomplete
and I can not accept it yet.

元の翻訳
There is the following person whom we want to add the conference.
Is that possible?

修正後
There is a person shown below whom we want to add to the conference.
Is that possible?

元の翻訳
「この投資は、タイ発のベンチャーと、これまでの東南アジア最大のベンチャーの一つによる、最も大きなシリーズAなんです。」tp、aCommerceの地域最高経営責任者（CEO）かつ創業者であるPaul Srivorakul氏は言う。記憶に新しい別の大規模シリーズのAラウンドは、GrabTaxi氏の募金で、伝えられるところによると1,000万米ドル以上にのぼったそうだ。

Srivorakul氏は、eコマースの物流インフラを強化するだけでなく、受注管理、倉庫、配送管理システムに投資する新たな資金を使用する予定だ。

修正後
「この投資は、タイ発のベンチャーにとって、これまでで東南アジア最大級のシリーズAなんです。」と、aCommerceの地域最高経営責任者（CEO）かつ創業者であるPaul Srivorakul氏は言う。もうひとつの記憶に新しい大規模シリーズのAラウンドといえばGrabTaxi氏の資金調達で、伝えられるところによると1,000万米ドル以上にのぼったそうだ。

Srivorakul氏は新たな資金でeコマースの物流インフラを強化するだけでなく、受注管理、倉庫、配送管理システムへの投資にも使用する予定だ。

元の翻訳
aCommerceこの時点で会社の評価額を開示することはできないが、熱烈な資本は依然として大株主のポストシリーズAであることは確認できる。

SingPost以外の他の地域のライバルとしては、最近の一連のラウンドを調達したシンガポールを拠点とするAnchantoが挙げられる。当社は、取引の規模は明らかにはしていない。

修正後
aCommerceは現時点で会社の評価額を開示することはできないが、Ardent Capital がシリーズA以降、依然として大株主であると正式に発表した。

SingPost以外の他の同地域の競合企業としては、最近シリーズAラウンドで資金調達した、シンガポールを拠点とするAnchantoが挙げられる。同社は、取引規模を明らかにしなかった。

元の翻訳
2013年6月に設立されたaCommerceは、タイ、シンガポール、インドネシア、フィリピンの4事業所に250人のスタッフがいる。そして、次はマレーシア、ベトナムへの進出を計画している。 Srivorakul氏は言う：

「タイとインドネシアは最も速いスピードで成長している、最も大きく、最も成熟した市場です。私達はちょうど2月にシンガポールでビジネスを開始し、それが地域的なパートナーシップや、HPとの協力会社として売上を支援してきました。私達はちょうどフィリピンでのビジネスも開始し、現在は、いくつかの主要な小売店の閉鎖について取り組んでいます。」

修正後
2013年6月に設立されたaCommerceは、タイ、シンガポール、インドネシア、フィリピンの4事業所に250人のスタッフがいる。そして、次はマレーシア、ベトナムへの進出を計画している。 Srivorakul氏は言う：

「タイとインドネシアは最も速いスピードで成長している、最も大きく、最も成熟した市場です。私達はちょうど2月にシンガポールでビジネスを開始し、それが地域的なパートナーシップや、HPとの協力会社として売上を支援してきました。私達はちょうどフィリピンでのビジネスも開始し、現在は、いくつかの主要な小売店との締結にむけて取り組んでいます。」

元の翻訳
持続的に極度の貧困を終了し、共有繁栄を後押しするという世界銀行の目標は、次回の年次総会で紹介される次の世界銀行グループ全体の戦略のためのフレームワークです。しかし、目標の実質的な影響は現実的なものになります。極度の貧困を終わらせるための銀行の目標は、1日1.25ドル未満で生活する人々の割合を、2030年までに3パーセント以下に減少させることです。新しい共有繁栄インジケータは、それぞれの発展途上国の下位40パーセントの所得の伸びを測定するために使用されます。共有繁栄のこの目標は、成長と株式の両方へのコミットメントを反映しています。

修正後
持続的に極度の貧困を終了し、共有繁栄を後押しするという世界銀行の目標は、次回の年次総会で紹介される次の世界銀行グループ全体の戦略のためのフレームワークです。しかし、目標の実質的な影響は現実的なものになります。極度の貧困を終わらせるための銀行の目標は、1日1.25ドル未満で生活する人々の割合を、2030年までに3パーセント以下に減少させることです。新しい共有繁栄インジケータは、それぞれの発展途上国の下位40パーセントの所得の伸びを測定するために使用されます。この共有繁栄に関する目標は、成長と平等の両方へのコミットメントを反映しています。

元の翻訳
Since my HP suddenly stopped being displayed yesterday, I examined and found that DB you are using in this script became an error.
I called the management company of the server and was told that it has been error because the connection was not cut out correctly and there are so many processes that have been "sleep".
I haven't updated the Script to the latest version, so I'm sorry if you have already resolved this problem, but I'm going to report the above issue anyway. ↵
I think it's a fairly critical bug, so please improve.

修正後
Since my HP suddenly stopped being displayed yesterday, I examined and found that DB you are using in this script became an error.
I called the management company of the server and was told that it has been error because the connection was not cut out correctly and there are so many processes that have been "sleep".
I'm going to report the above issue anyway, but as I haven't updated the Script to the latest version, and do not know if you have already resolved this problem, in that case I apologize.↵
As I think it's a fairly critical bug, please improve.

元の翻訳
SNS for people who love film camera.

It is a SNS & developing timer app that people who love film camera gather.
Let's share timer that you created and make a network of camera film lovers!

It is a convenient timer app that can be used when you tank-develop the film.
You can set the time freely to each process, such as stop and development.
When you stir, you can use the notice function in alarm.
The information of films and chemicals you used are also collectively manageable.

Let's streamline the film developing and cut the shutter more!

修正後
SNS for people who love film cameras.

It is an SNS for those who love film cameras and here is a developing timer app.
Let's share timers that you created and create a network of film camera lovers!

It is a convenient timer app that can be used when you tank-develop films.
You can set the time freely for each process, such as stop and development.
When you stir, you can use the notice function in alarm.
The information of films and chemicals you used are also collectively manageable.

Let's streamline film developing and taker more photos!

元の翻訳
The photograph is a machine used to determine the amount of the flow of electricity.

The left number of the second row (in this case 839mAh) indicates the cumulative capacity.

I began to charge in the power bank that had been fully discharged.
Then, after one day passed, LED lamp of the power bank showed a full charge.

However, as shown in the photograph, only 839mah electricity flows.
It was not possible to store 12000mah of electricity in this item.

修正後
The photograph is a machine used to determine the amount of the flow of electricity.

The left number of the second row (in this case 839mAh) indicates the cumulative capacity.

I began to charge in the power bank that had been fully discharged.
Then, after one day had passed, the power banks' LED light showed a full charge.

However, as shown in the photograph, only 839mah electricity flows.
It was not possible to store 12000mah of electricity in this item.