Mami S (mechamami) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
パーティーパスを取得するには、（PPIDNO）またはパーティパスID番号オーガナイザーに、Eメールでメッセージを送信してください。

自分の名前、住所を記入し、五月三十日のパーティーパスをリクエストしていることを伝えてください。それから、あなたの仲介人の名前がMs. Keesha MitchKeeshaであることを書くのも忘れないで下さい。次に、その後で、（PPIDNO）が私に確認のメールを送ってきます。私があなたを私のパーティーのパートナーであることを承認する確認を終えると、（PPIDNO）はあなたにメールを返信し、パーティーパスID番号をお渡しします。あなたはそれを１時間以内に受け取るかもしれませんし、もしかしたらそれ以上かかることもあるかもしれません。その処理がどのくらいの時間を要するのかについては、私ははっきりと分かりません。

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Eメールでパーティーパスを取得するには、（PPIDNO）またはパーティパスID番号オーガナイザーに、メッセージを送信して頂くだけです。

ご自分のお名前、住所を記入し、五月三十日のイベント用のパーティーパスIDをリクエストしていることを伝えてください。それから、あなたの仲介人の名前がMs. Keesha MitchKeeshaであることも忘れずに伝えて下さい。次に、その後で、（PPIDNO）が私に確認のメールを送ってきます。私があなたを私のパーティーのパートナーであることを承認する確認を終えると、（PPIDNO）はあなたにメールを返信し、パーティーパスID番号をお渡しします。あなたはそれを１時間以内に受け取るかもしれませんし、もしかしたらそれ以上かかることもあるかもしれません。その処理がどのくらいの時間を要するのかについては、私ははっきりと分かりません。

元の翻訳
1 カメラが標準フォーカシングスクリーンではないのは残念です。

2 それはそうなりますが、自動的に巻いてしまいロールを駄目にしてしまうこともあります。私はどこの郵便局にそれを出せばいいでしょうか？

3 ちょうど、コンタックスGの90ミリの支払いを済ませたところで、私の配送先住所は東京です。国内の配送を考慮して、配送料の差額を返金していただくことはできませんでしょうか。

よろしくお願いいたします。

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1 カメラが標準フォーカシングスクリーンではないのは残念です。

2　巻くことは出来るのですが、自動的に巻いてしまいロールを駄目にしてしまうこともあります。私はどこの郵便局にそれを出せばいいでしょうか？

3 ちょうど、コンタックスGの90ミリの支払いを済ませたところで、私の配送先住所は東京です。国内の配送を考慮して、配送料の差額を返金していただくことはできませんでしょうか。

よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
不動産クラウドファンディングの魅力は次の通りだ。投資家が資産バスケットにアクセスできる不動産投資信託（リート）とは異なり、これらのサイトでは、投資家がより低コストで個々の資産に資金投入する。しかし、もちろんリスクもある。プロジェクトが失敗すれば、投資家は全資金を失う可能性がある。

2月12日午後5時45分（SGT）更新：CoAssetsがTech in Asiaの質問にの回答を追加した。

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不動産クラウドファンディングの魅力は次の通りだ。投資家が資産バスケットにアクセスできる不動産投資信託（リート）とは異なり、これらのサイトでは、投資家がより低コストで個々の資産に資金投入する。しかし、もちろんリスクもある。プロジェクトが失敗すれば、投資家は全資金を失う可能性がある。

2月12日午後5時45分（SGT）更新：Tech in Asiaの質問に対するCoAssetsの回答を追加した。

元の翻訳
FTP information is as follows.


Could you tell me the file name that you changed, if possible?

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FTP information is as follows.


Could you tell me the name of the file that you changed, if possible?

元の翻訳
FTP information is as follows.


Could you tell me the file name that you changed, if possible?

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FTP information is as follows.


Could you possibly tell me the file name, which file you modified?

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.

We sell this sprinkler for $ 118.55 a piece.
However, there was a mistake in the product name on Amazon side and it was written four pack.

I'm terribly sorry, but could you please cancel it, or we will refund $90, so could you purchase products again for the proper price?

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Sorry for the late reply.

We sell this sprinkler for $ 118.55 a piece.
However, there was a mistake in the product name on Amazon side and it was written as four packs.

I'm terribly sorry, but could you please cancel it, or alternatively reply to us if you prefer to get $90 refund and receive the product for the price of one?

元の翻訳
I'm writing about the Sugi-base that you have inquired.
We negotiated with the wholesaler, but $ ** + Shipping Cost is the best price.
The list price of this base is $ 4500, so it is difficult to lower the price any more.
Thank you for your consideration.

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I'm writing about the Sugi base [spelling] that you have inquired.
We negotiated with the wholesaler, and $** + shipping is the best price.
The list price of this base [spelling] is $4500, so it is difficult to further lower the price.
Thank you for your consideration.

元の翻訳
1. Defectives that occurred
The order defective ratio (ODR) became more than 1% and we became no longer meet the performance goals of the Amazon.
Sales permission was removed from the reasons described above.
The defective rate of Filed A-to-z Claim Rate was 1.27% .
The defective rate of Negative Feedback Rate was 0.63%.
The failure rate in total was 1.9%.
Because of the above numbers, we exceed the target number, which was 1%.

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1. Defects that occurred
The order defective ratio (ODR) became more than 1% and we no longer meet the performance goals of Amazon.
Selling privileges were removed for the reasons described above.
The defective rate of Filed A-to-z Claim Rate was 1.27% .
The defective rate of Negative Feedback Rate was 0.63%.
The failure rate in total was 1.9%.
Because of the above numbers, we exceed the target number, which was 1%.

元の翻訳
Dear Amazon performance team,
Hello.
My name is ***** of a retail store in Japan and I sell products on your site.
I deeply apologize that there was a deficiency in the sale procedure of our store this time and that caused a great deal of inconvenience to customers who purchase products from Amazon.
I received an email from you saying my seller authority was deleted since we did not meet the performance goals of the Amazon.

I understand the contents of the e-mail.
Yet, I would like to resume sales of the Amazon very much.
So, I'm going to present an improvement plan below.

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Dear Amazon performance team,
Hello.
My name is ***** of a retail store in Japan and I sell products on your site.
I deeply apologize that there was a deficiency in the sale procedure of our store this time and that caused a great deal of inconvenience to customers who purchase products from Amazon.
I received an email from you informing that my seller privileges had been removed since we did not meet the performance goals of Amazon.

I understand the contents of the e-mail.
Yet, I would like to resume sales of the Amazon very much.
So, I'm going to present an improvement plan below.

元の翻訳
We are going to change the status on Amazon into "sent" now.
(Because Amazon requires explanation if I don't shipped within 4 days after the sale is made.)
However, the day that the product will actually be shipped to you is the release date. Please note about that.

Even if I was a scam and did not ship the product when it's launched (I never do such a thing though!), you will wtill be able to receive guarantee from Amazon as always, so please don't worry.

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We are going to change the status on Amazon into "Shipped" now.
(This is because Amazon will require us to provide a reason if we don't shipped within 4 days after the sale is made.)
However, the day that the product will actually be shipped to you is the release date. Please note about that.

Even if I was a scam and did not ship the product when it's launched (I never do such a thing though!), you will be guaranteed compensation from Amazon so please don't worry.

元の翻訳
It will led to the next topic, which is to start with a purpose.






Now, aren't your days just passing by as they are because of the everyday busyness or being chased by things to do?
You need a clear vision of yourself about what kind of person you would like to become in the future throughout your business.
The results between those who begin anything with a goal and those without goal are totally different.
In the work, it's very important to have an especially clear goal of the person you want to be or things you want to achieve.

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It will laed to the next topic, which is to start with a purpose.






Now, aren't your days just passing by as they are because of everyday business or being chased by things to do?
You need a clear vision of yourself about what kind of person you would like to become in the future throughout your business.
The results between those who begin anything with a certain goal and those without any goal are totally different.
At business/in your work, in particular, it is very important to contemplate your future and have a clear goal to achieve.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been sentenced for examination since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the examination told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the examination will take a few days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

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Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been on restriction since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the screening process told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the screening will take a few more days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you the money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

元の翻訳
Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been sentenced for examination since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the examination told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the examination will take a few days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

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Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been put on hold for examination since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the examination told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the examination will take a few days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

元の翻訳
We're sorry　for the delay.
With regard to the product which you ordered, we could not ship it by air unfortunately.

After the confirmation that we couldn't send, we are now sending this message.
We apologize that it took a while to inform you.

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We're sorry for the delay in response.
With regard to the product which you ordered, unfortunately we could not ship it by air due to the regulations for air shipment.

After the confirmation that we couldn't send, we are now sending this message.
We apologize that it took a while to inform you.

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I have a question about the book on sale.
How many cards are there in the book?

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I have a question about the book you have listed.
How many cards are there in the book?

元の翻訳
As for one of the 2 packages that did not arrive, it hasn't arrived yet after all, so
I would like refund the price of that one.

In addition, I would like to buy XXX if there is any in your stock.

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As for one of the 2 packages that did not arrive, it hasn't arrived yet after all, so
I would like you to refund the money I paid for that one.

In addition, I would like to buy some XXX, if there is any in your stock. Do you have any in you stock?

元の翻訳
Please let me know in advance next time.
We always prefer airmail.
Shipping service does not be allowed.

This product will be sold in July-August in our country.
However, it does not sell well if it pasts September.
Large loss occurs because of that.
We will wait for four weeks as you guys said.
However, if a product does not reach even ​​in August (one month from now), I will ask you for a full refund.
Please accept the refund request.

If it became a refund, but
the product arrive here, we will let you know.
Please send a request of Paypal invoice again at that time.

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Please let me know in advance next time.
We always prefer shipments by air.
Shipping service by sea is not be allowed.

This product will be sold in July-August in our country.
However, it does not have good sale if it pasts September.
Large loss occurs because of that.
We will wait for four weeks as you said.
However, if the product will not have been delivered even ​​in August (one month from now), I will ask you for a full refund.
Please accept the refund request.

In case that it became a refund, but
the product arrives here, we will let you know.
Please send a request of Paypal invoice again at that time.