翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

大変、お手数をおかけし申し訳ございませんでした。
住所の番地が漏れていたのは出荷担当のミスです。
再発防止のためにチェック強化の対策をします。

ご連絡と荷物の受け取り重ねてありがとうございました。
感謝いたします。

英語

We are very sorry for the trouble.
It was a mistake of our worker who was in charge of shipping that the street address was missing.
In order to prevent a recurrence, we will enhance our double-checking system.

Thank you so much for letting us know that and receiving the package.
We really appreciate you.

レビュー ( 1 )

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/10 09:33:36

元の翻訳
We are very sorry for the trouble.
It was a mistake of our worker who was in charge of shipping that the street address was missing.
In order to prevent a recurrence, we will enhance our double-checking system.

Thank you so much for letting us know that and receiving the package.
We really appreciate you.

修正後
We are very sorry for the trouble.
It was a mistake of our worker who was in charge of shipping that the street address was missing.
In order to prevent a recurrence, we will enhance our double-checking system.

Thank you so much for contacting us, and receiving the package.
We really appreciate you.(「ご連絡」と「荷物の受け取り」なので修正。）↵

our worker who was in charge of shippingが長いので、our shipping staffなどにされたらいかがでしょう？

[mechamami]

有難うございます。

[chee_madam]

mechamamiさま
いつも、ご丁寧にレスをくださってありがとうございます。バタバタしていることが多く、素っ気ないレビューのことが多いのに恐縮です。