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元の翻訳
Therefore I highly recommend that you add tracking number.
That way you can track your parcel and there is no need to worry about parcel not arriving for a long time.
Only additional $4 is needed for adding a tracking number.
Please contact me if you understand and would like to add tracking number.
I'll send you an additional invoice.

I'll prepare shipment of your item then.
I'll send you an email after it dispatches.

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Therefore I highly recommend that you add a tracking number.
That way you can track your parcel and there is no need to worry about the parcel not arriving for a long time.
Only additional $4 is needed for adding a tracking number.
Please contact me if you understand and would like to add a tracking number.
I'll send you an additional invoice.

I'll prepare shipment of your item then.
I'll send you an email after dispatch is completed.

元の翻訳
(1) It was heart warming to see him say "Micky is that important? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you makin such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours lager
(6) What do you use to draw this? Are you using mobile application to draw by fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

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(1) It was heartwarming to see him say "Is Micky that important? Then I'll be Micky!"
(2) Why are you making such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours later
(6) What do you use to draw this? Do you draw with your finger by using a mobile application?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use a translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

元の翻訳
(1) It was heart warming to see him say "Micky is that important? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you makin such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours lager
(6) What do you use to draw this? Are you using mobile application to draw by fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

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(1) It was heart warming to hear him say "Micky is that important to you? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you making such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours later
(6) What did you use to draw this? Are you using a mobile application to draw it with your fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use a translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

元の翻訳
#illiam

I see it takes 1 to 2 weeks for delivery.
I noted.
I'd be happy if you can send it as early as possible.
Please inform me the tracking number when you send it.

If sales goes well, I'l keep buying on regular basis.

Regarding Question Mystery AR.3, I'll pass it this time.

If possible will you let me know the manufacturer you are dealing with (Tour VAN) other than Odyssey?
I might find something I want to buy.

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#illiam

I see it takes 1 to 2 weeks for delivery.
I noted.
I'd be happy if you can send it as early as possible.
Please let me know the tracking number when you send it.

If sales goes well, I'll keep buying on a regular basis.

Regarding Question Mystery AR.3, I'll pass it this time.

If possible will you let me know the manufacturer you are dealing with (Tour VAN) other than Odyssey?
I might find something I want to buy.

元の翻訳
Stock of gray one ran out, so is it possible to despatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

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Stock of gray one ran out, so would it be possible to dispatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting much cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Stock of gray one ran out, so is it possible to despatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

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Stock of gray one ran out, so would it be possible to dispatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
ir0753

こんにちは、あなたが送ってくれた荷物が届きましたが注文したものと違うものが入っています。間違って届いた商品を変装しますので正しい商品を送ってください、Super Robot Chogokin Great Mazinger が注文した商品です。荷物にはフィギュアが2点入っていました。Mazingerが届くのを楽しみにしています。Adrianoさん、宜しくお願いします。

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ir0753

こんにちは、あなたが送ってくれた荷物が届きましたが注文したものと違うものが入っています。間違って届いた商品を返送しますので正しい商品を送ってください、Super Robot Chogokin Great Mazinger が注文した商品です。荷物にはフィギュアが2点入っていました。Mazingerが届くのを楽しみにしています。宜しくお願いします。Adrianoより

元の翻訳
Thanks for the payment.
I will send the item tomorrow.
You will receive it on June 29th.
Please let me know if there is specific day and time you'd like to receive it.

I made mistake in the title.
As you say, I think this piece was made by Chinese artisan.
If you buy multiple units, I will discount $10 on each additional item.

Thanks for buying again.
I'll send it to your designated address.

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Thanks for the payment.
The item will be shipped tomorrow.
The estimated delivery date is around June 29th.
Please let me know if you have a specific time and date of your preference for the item delivery.

I have entered the wrong title.
As you say, I think this piece was made by Chinese artisan.
If you buy multiple units, I will discount $10 on each additional item.

Thanks for your business with us again.
I'll send it to your designated address.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your reply.
Then I'll return Y113709294.
Please kindly cancel it.
I'll let you know the tracking number later.

I'd like to return it, please kindly send it.
I appreciate your careful packing and delivery arrangement.
Please let me know the tracking number after you send it.

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Thanks for your reply.
Then I'll return Y113709294.
Please kindly cancel it.
I'll let you know the tracking number later.

I'd like to return it, please kindly send it.
I appreciate your careful packing upon shipment
Please let me know the tracking number after shipment.

元の翻訳
There was a big dent on the side of the guitar I received today. I cannot sell this guitar in such condition to the customer, so I'm afraid to ask you this but will you order it again within today? Please let me know the delivery date as well.

Regarding this guitar with a problem, if I do not return how much discount will you offer?

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There was a big dent on the side of the guitar I received today. I cannot sell this guitar in such condition to the customer, so I'm afraid to ask you this but will you order it again （再オーダーして下さいとあるので、Will you orderだと、他のサプライヤーに発注してくれといっているように見えますが、いかがでしょう？）within today? Please let me know the delivery date as well.

Regarding this guitar with a problem, if I do not return how much discount will you offer?

元の翻訳
I just ordered the same rag as Order# WS6051 again.

Since Order# WS6051 rag was lost during UPS transportation, I ordered the same rag again.
Please explain the situation to the vender and arrange it to reach by May 4th.
Thank you in advance for your prompt arrangement.

The parcel with this tracking number arrived on April 29 at 10:53 am.
It still has not been reflected on the account.
Please have the information shown on the account immediately.

I think either of the ordered item below is already dispatched.

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I just ordered the same rag as Order# WS6051 again.

Since the rug with Order# WS6051 was lost during UPS transportation, I ordered the same rag again.
Please explain the situation to the vender and have them ensure that it will arrive here by May 4th.
Thank you in advance for your prompt arrangement.

The parcel with this tracking number arrived on April 29 at 10:53 am.
It still has not been reflected on the account.
Please have the information shown on the account immediately.

I think either of the ordered item below is already dispatched.

元の翻訳
I have not received your reply to below inquiry.
I have received 3 spam mails since then. If necessary I will forward them.

Access from Vietnam to my website I run has been made again, I guess the person is trying to annoy me ( I see the trace of attempted log in). As I can see on the access log, the person seems to have checked not only one site but multiple sites. However there is no obvious evidence for this.

Anyways, please let me know if you are going to apply severe penalty, countermeasure in detail and whether you will process refund or not. I feel very uneasy.

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I have not received your reply to the below inquiry.
I have received 3 spam mails since then. If necessary I will forward them.

The website that I run has been accessed from Vietnam again, I guess the person is trying to annoy me ( I see the trace of attempted log in). As I can see on the access log, the person seems to have checked not only one site but multiple sites. However there is no obvious evidence for this.

Anyways, please let me know if you are going to apply severe penalty, countermeasure in detail and whether you will process refund or not. I feel very uneasy.

元の翻訳
インド出身です、今はアメリカに滞在中です、4月8日に帰国します。カメラを持って帰りたいのでなるべく早く発送してください。
ご協力よろしくお願いします。

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インド出身です。今はアメリカに滞在中で（す）、4月8日に帰国します。カメラを持って帰りたいのでなるべく早く発送してください。
ご協力よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
注文のキャンセルはしません・・・そうするしかない場合はしょうがないですが。この商品はなかなか見つからないので。
購入者がPayPalアドレス以外使えないと書いてある部分のリンクを送ってもらえますか？そういう規定は知らなかったし、どこにも見当たりません。複数のアドレス所有は可能だったと思います。

他に解決方法があれば教えてください。誰も損しない形で早く解決したいです。

あなたのオークション2件別々に予約注文し、送料2件分支払いました。リリースと発送予定日はいつでしょうか、同梱可能ですか？できれば送料1件分返金してもらえませんか？

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注文のキャンセルはしません・・・そうするしかない場合はしょうがないですが。この商品はなかなか見つからないので。
購入者がPayPalアドレス以外使えないと書いてある部分のリンクを送ってもらえますか？そういう規定は知らなかったし、どこにも見当たりません。複数のアドレス所有は可能だったと思います。

他に解決方法があれば教えてください。誰も損しない形で早く解決したいです。

あなたのオークション2件別々に予約注文し、送料2件分支払いました。リリース後の発送準備をされる時に同梱していただきたいと思っているのですがいかがでしょう？できれば送料1件分返金してもらえませんか？

元の翻訳
I want official instruction manual.
There are many cases which are not sent together.
Please at least provide the following quantities.

Short screw for using A on stand.
Short screw for using B and C on stand.
Please send 6 pieces of each.
Thickness of stand to mount C varies for A and B.

I'd like to order additional 4 pieces of D. Can you make it?
If possible, please add on the invoice for this time.

Please attach invoice on top of the box in plastic envelope.

I'll wait for this item to be available.
I want it delivered as soon as possible.

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I would like to have the official instruction manual.
There are many cases where they were not included in the shipment.
Please at least provide the following quantities.

Short screws for using A on the stand.
Short screws for using B and C on the stand.
Please send 6 pieces of each type of screw.
Thickness of stand to mount C varies for A and B.

I'd like to order additional 4 pieces of D. Can you make it?
If possible, please add on the invoice for this time.

Please attach invoice on top of the box in plastic envelope.

I'll wait for this item to be available.
I want it delivered as soon as possible.