翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

①彼が『そんなにミッキーが大事なの？それなら僕がミッキーになる！』と言っているのをみて、微笑ましい気持ちになった。
②なんでそんな顔しているの？そんな顔していたら私帰れないよ。
③彼女の仕返し
④今日一緒に出掛けない？今日はやめとく…。予定があるから行けない。
⑤数時間後
⑥あなたはこれを何で描いてますか？携帯のアプリを使って指で描いているの？
⑦あなたの言葉を全て理解することは翻訳機を使っても私には難しいです。
⑧私はこの髪型はあまり好きじゃありません。

英語

(1) It was heart warming to see him say "Micky is that important? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you makin such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours lager
(6) What do you use to draw this? Are you using mobile application to draw by fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

レビュー ( 2 )

ozsamurai_69はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/27 22:56:31

元の翻訳
(1) It was heart warming to see him say "Micky is that important? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you makin such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours lager
(6) What do you use to draw this? Are you using mobile application to draw by fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

修正後
(1) It was heart warming to hear him say "Micky is that important to you? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you making such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours later
(6) What did you use to draw this? Are you using a mobile application to draw it with your fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use a translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/29 00:07:54

元の翻訳
(1) It was heart warming to see him say "Micky is that important? Then I'll be Micky"!"
(2) Why are you makin such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours lager
(6) What do you use to draw this? Are you using mobile application to draw by fingers?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

修正後
(1) It was heartwarming to see him say "Is Micky that important? Then I'll be Micky!"
(2) Why are you making such face? I cannot go home if you make a face like that.
(3) Her revenge
(4) How about going out today? Not today... I cannot go because I have a plan.
(5) Several hours later
(6) What do you use to draw this? Do you draw with your finger by using a mobile application?
(7) It is difficult to understand all of your words even if I use a translation device.
(8) I don't like this hairstyle much.

「数時間」の解釈はfew hoursの他にseveral hoursとも捉えられるのだということが勉強になりました。マイナーなタイポはあれど、全般的な解釈はあっていると思います。