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George, my wife is pregnant.
Although I have to earn lots of money to support my family, I cannot make much money due to cheaper yen and more competition in Japanese market.
Thanks to your watches I make some money, but will you further cooperate to raise my sales in the future? I'd like to increase the sales quantity of your watches, so I appreciate that you let me know many items you can sell at wholesale price.

Following items are selling well in Japan.
Please let me know the items you can sell at wholesale price.

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Shouji, my wife is pregnant.
Although I have to earn lots of money to support my family, I cannot make much money due to the cheaper yen and more competition in the Japanese market.
Thanks to your watches I make some money, but could you further cooperate to help raise my sales in the future? I'd like to increase the sales quantity of your watches, so I would appreciate it if you could tell me whatever items you are able to sell at wholesale price.

The following items are selling well in Japan.
Please let me know the items you can sell at wholesale price.

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I'd rather travel alone than with someone. Because when traveling someone, I tend to be careful of my behavior and I cannot enjoy travel as I want to. I consider traveling as something I do to face my internal self, so I want to travel alone freely without thinking about others.

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I'd rather travel alone than with someone. Because when traveling with someone, I tend to worry about my behavior and I cannot enjoy travel as I want to. I consider traveling as something I do to face my internal self, so I want to travel alone freely without thinking about others.

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I'm using ebay for the first time. I'd really like to buy your item, but I don't know how to use feedback function. How should I do it?

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I'm using eBay for the first time. I'd really like to buy your item, but I don't know how to use the feedback function. How should I do it?