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Thanks for your order.
In regard to your question, this is an used item I obtained from my friend.
There is no additional fee. I will send the invoice for the fee, please kindly check it.
It's night in Japan now, I will check compatibility with NTSC and English support with the manufacturer tomorrow morning and let you know again. Please kindly wait a little more.

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Thanks for your order.
In regards to your question, this is a used item I obtained from my friend.
There is no additional fee. I will send the invoice for the fee, please kindly check it.
It's night in Japan now, so I will check compatibility with NTSC and English support with the manufacturer tomorrow morning and let you know again. Please kindly wait a little more.

元の翻訳
ご担当者様

配達員によると、400グラム以上の荷物だったためその金額になったそうです。あなたが正しい重量を確認して送料をお支払になったのですから、こんなことは起こるべきではありませんでした。

私が見た感じでは税金の関係かと思います。受領書にはGST7%$41.15、手数料$10となっています。個人使用目的なので、販売用となっていなければこうならなかったはずです。

ご意見をお聞かせください。

宜しくお願いします。
Vinson

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ご担当者様

配達員によると、400グラム以上の荷物だったためその金額になったそうです。けれども、あなたが正しい重量を確認して送料をお支払になったのですから、こんなことは起こるはずがないと思います。

私が見た感じでは税金の関係かと思います。受領書にはGST7%$41.15、手数料$10となっています。個人使用目的なので、販売用となっていなければこうならなかったはずです。

ご意見をお聞かせください。

宜しくお願いします。
Vinson

元の翻訳
Today I have requested to certify the documents numbered 1 to 6 at US embassy, but my application has been declined by the US ambassador saying "It is depicted on the document number 6 that A signed in front of the ambassador, but this is not true (A did not come) therefore application for no. 6 cannot be approved.

As you know, in Japan normally the president of the company does not go to the embassy to sign, instead it is conventional that an agent completes procedure using company stamp.

I'll be waiting for your reply regarding how I should proceed from now on.

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Today I have requested to certify the documents numbered 1 to 6 at US embassy, but my application has been declined by the US ambassador saying "It is depicted on the document number 6 that A signed in front of the ambassador, but this is not true (A did not come) therefore application for no. 6 cannot be approved.

As you know, in Japan normally the president of the company does not go to the embassy personally to sign, instead it is conventional that an agent completes procedure using company stamp.

I'll be waiting for your reply regarding how I should proceed from now on.

元の翻訳
As I checked the items received, multiple items I did not order were included and the quantity was incorrect.

I received type A5 (hourse) 19 pieces, missing 1 piece, 5 pieces of type A6 (cat) missing 15 pieces and 7 pieces of A9 (coffee cup) missing 3 pieces.

Other than that, one or two variations of illustration I did not order were included.
I cannot sell these at my side so there is no choice to but to discard and I do not want to pay for them.

Will you send lacking 19 pieces or deduct amount of 19 pieces?

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As I checked the items received, multiple items I did not order were included and the quantity was incorrect.

I received 19 pieces of type A5 (hourse) , missing 1 piece, 5 pieces of type A6 (cat) missing 15 pieces and 7 pieces of A9 (coffee cup) missing 3 pieces.

Other than that, one or two variations of illustration I did not order were included.
I cannot sell these at my side so there is no choice for me but to discard them and I do not want to pay for them.

Will you send lacking 19 pieces or deduct amount for 19 pieces?

元の翻訳
About meeting in person and make deals...
I cannot speak English.
I really want to meet you, but I run a company and I hardly have time.
I deeply regret it.
If you make domestic bank transfer for domestic delivery, I can offer more reasonable shipping cost.
It's same for PayPal.
I'll be waiting for your payment.

Sorry for the inconvenience cause you this time.
Will you return the item?
I will make refund including shipping cost as soon as I receive it.

Are you not convinced with 150 pound refund?
If not, I'll make full refund.

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About meeting in person and make deals...
I cannot speak English.
I really want to meet you, but I run a company and I hardly have time.
I deeply regret it.
If you make domestic bank transfer for domestic delivery, I can offer more reasonable shipping cost.
It's same for PayPal.
I'll be waiting for your payment.

I am sorry for the inconvenience caused you this time.
Will you return the item?
I will make refund including shipping cost as soon as I receive it.

Are you not convinced with 150 pound refund?
If not, I'll make full refund.

元の翻訳
Now I need large amount of cables for rushing demand before closing the shop. Since it might be the last time, I'm ordering 100 pieces. I'd be happy if you give me discount and sell around $4.5 each.

Also, I'm looking for PIONEER Blu-ray drive with model number "BDR-US01" now, and I'd like to buy 10 units. Please let me know the price if you can get them.

Anyways, I appreciate the support you provided for a long time, and hope to maintain good relationship in the future.

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Now I need a large amount of cables for rushing demand before closing the shop. Since it might be the last time, I'm ordering 100 pieces. I'd be happy if you give me a discount and sell around $4.5 each.

Also, I'm looking for PIONEER Blu-ray drive with model number "BDR-US01" now, and I'd like to buy 10 units. Please let me know the price if you can get them.

Anyways, I appreciate the support you provided for a long time, and hope to maintain good relationship also in the future.

元の翻訳
This will be the first transaction.
I don't want to return it, so please make sure you check thoroughly before sending.
There were many faulty items from other company which gave me a trouble.
Please strictly inspect before dispatching. I appreciate your arrangement.
It'll help me if you send it as soon as possible.

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This will be the first transaction.
I don't want to return it, so please make sure you check it thoroughly before sending it.
There were many faulty items from another company which gave me trouble.
Please strictly inspect it before dispatching. I appreciate your arrangement.
It'll help me if you send it as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
Thank you always.

Thanks for informing us the return tracking number.

We deeply regret that this case resulted in return because of US customs.

However, in order not to repeat the same problem, we'd like to take coutermeasure.

Below are the plans we are currently discussing.
1. Specify HS code for all items
2. Issue invoices specially designed for watches

Will you advise if there is anything we can do to make future customs clear more smoothly?

We sincerely appreciate your cooperation.

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Thank you always.

Thanks for informing us [proposition missing] the return tracking number.

We deeply regret that this case resulted in return because of US customs.

However, in order not to repeat the same problem, we'd like to take countermeasures.

Below are the measures we are currently considering.
1. Specify HS codes for all items
2. Issue invoices specially designed for watches

Will you advise if there is anything we can do to make future customs clearance more smooth?

We sincerely appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I received "Complete your purchase" email again.
I already completed the payment, what's going on?

When will you send the item I ordered?

Please let me know immediately.

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I received a "Complete your purchase" email again.
I already completed the payment. What's going on?

When will you send the item I ordered?

Please let me know immediately.

元の翻訳
A happy new year.
I received mouth piece on Deceber 29th. BJ was great and I loved it! I think you really are genious of making mouth piece.
ss had a little too small opening for me so may I take advantage of the trial system and have it exchanged with 7 which is one size more open? And I'd like to make additional order of ny.
Please let me know the return address. Thank you.

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A happy new year.
I received the mouthpiece on Deceber 29th. The BJ was great and I loved it! I think you really are a genius at making mouthpieces.
The ss had a little too small opening for me, so may I take advantage of the trial system and have it exchanged with 7 which is one size more open? And I'd like to make an additional order of ny.
Please let me know the return address. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your inquiry.
This is an old item and it looks a bit used.
However, it's a good item as in the standard of used item sold in Japan.
And I'm listing it at a very reasonable price despite of its good condition.
There are less of this item available in Japan.
Considering the quality and price, it's a great buy.
I had the expert check its operation, so please do not worry about it.
I will clean it as much as possible before sending it.

Of course I'll be happy to negotiate, so please feel free to ask when you win the bid.

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Thanks for your inquiry.
This is an old item and it looks a bit used.
However, it's a good item as in the standard of used item sold in Japan.
And we list it at a very reasonable price despite of its good condition.
This item is also becoming less available in Japan.
Considering the quality and price, it's a great buy.
Please don’t worry about the operation which has been confirmed by professional.
We will clean it as much as possible before the shipment.

Of course we'll be happy to negotiate, so please feel free to contact us when you win the bid.

元の翻訳
After that please inform us about the progress of guarantee for parcel with tracking number 8799057713.
I want this issue to be solved as soon as possible.

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Please update me on the warranty status of the parcel with the tracking number 8799057713.
I want this issue to be solved as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
Since you made series of complaints in the initial email, I thought I was to be blamed, however I found out that was not right. As I think more, more I become sure there was no mistake in my item explanation
Each person may think differently about description of the dust, but I think interpretation of the succesful bidder is too much. I never mentioned it was in mint condition, but the bidder requires such condition.
Of course the item has certain dust as described.
The way the bidder trips me up is not normal, he picks some words and makes everything to suit his needs.

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Since you made series of complaints in the initial email, I thought I was to be blamed, however I found out that was not right. The more I think, the more I become sure there was no mistake in my item explanation
Each person may think differently about description of (the?) dust, but I think the interpretation of the succesful bidder is too much. I never mentioned it was in mint condition, but the bidder requires such a condition.
Of course, the item has a certain amount of dust as (I?) described.
The way the bidder trips me up is not normal, he picks some words and makes (← tries to make?) everything to suit his needs.

元の翻訳
Hello!
Thank you so much for choosing our shop and ordering!

I'll add a little gift!
This is a Japanese traditional culture.
It's called "Origami"!
This origami was made by Japanese disabled children who work very hard!
We donate $0.3 per one origami as support fund to the disabled children support center.
A part of your purchase helped Japanese children!
Thank you so much!
We'll be happy to serve you again in the future!
Thank you in advance!

Shop owner

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Hello!
Thank you so much for buying products from our shop!

I'll add a little gift!
This is a Japanese traditional culture.
It's called "Origami"!
These origami products were made by disabled children in Japan; these children tried their best to make them.
We donate $0.3 for per origami as support fund to the support center for disabled children.
A part of your purchase helps these children!
Thank you so much!
It would be our pleasure if you would like to purchase in our shop again in the future!
Thank you in advance!

Shop owner

元の翻訳
Thank you for the payment.
I just confirmed the receipt of the payment. Sorry for rushing you. It was the most expensive item I've ever sold and I was pressed. I regret to have acted like that.
I have thoroughly packed it and it's ready to be sent out, but it's night in Japan so I'll send it tomorrow morning.
I will inform you the tracking number as soon as I send it, so please wait a little more.

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Thank you for the payment.
I just confirmed the receipt of the payment. Sorry for rushing you. It was the most expensive item I've ever sold and I was pressed. I regret to have acted like that.
I have thoroughly packed it and it's ready to be sent out, but it's night in Japan so I'll send it tomorrow morning.
I will inform you of the tracking number as soon as I send it, so please wait a little more.

元の翻訳
A means creazy boys and girls in Portuguese. Crazy origginally means peculiar or strange, but here crazy means "the one who chose to challenge something has different sense from others." In the world A creates, there are various attractions in wonderlands where such crazy boys and girls come across in lives. Sometimes it's adventurous although is endangered like a pirate ship or dreadful yet makes you curious like a ghost house. Therefore..

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A means creazy boys and girls in Portuguese. Crazy originally means peculiar or strange, but here crazy means "the one who chose to challenge something has different sense from others." In the world A creates, there are various attractions in wonderlands where such crazy boys and girls come across in lives. Although you might be endangered or dreadful as there's a pirate ship yet it is adventurous. Also the ghost house makes you curious. Therefore..