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People in the cold area might laugh, but it's so cold when the temperature goes below 8 degree at night.

So I take long bath with my children.

I put various bath additive and my children seem to enjoy various fragance and colors.

That's how popular bath additive is in Japan.

There are medicinal additives which you can easily enjoy hot spring at home.

Japanese people love hot spring!!

If small pack of bath additive comes with the item as a free gift, please give it a try.

(Free gifts are added at random, so you might not get it, though...)

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People in the cold area might laugh, but it's so cold when the temperature goes below 8 degrees at night.

So I take a long bath with my children every night.

I put various bath additives and my children seem to enjoy various fragrances and colors.

That's how popular bath additive is in Japan.

There are medicinal additives with which you can easily enjoy the experience of hot springs at home.

Japanese people love hot springs!!

If a small pack of bath additive comes with the item as a free gift, please give it a try.

(Free gifts are added at random, so you might not get it, though...)

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Operation check has been done.

Main unit
Controller
10 softwares

Regarding softwares, some might have little problem reading.
However all has been checked and there was no problem.

-Mario Party 6
-Mario Party 4
-4 Swords
-Gash Bell Friendship Tag
-Harry Potter
-Pokemon Box
-Bokujou Monogatari
-Doubutsu no Mori

Enjoy world famous Japanese gaes.
They'll definitely support you spend wonderful time.

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Operation check has been done.

Main unit
Controller
10 softwares

Regarding softwares, some might have little problem reading.
However all has been checked and there was no problem.

-Mario Party 6
-Mario Party 4
-4 Swords
-Gash Bell Friendship Tag
-Harry Potter
-Pokemon Box
-Bokujou Monogatari
-Doubutsu no Mori

Enjoy world famous Japanese games.
They'll definitely support you spend wonderful time.

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I forgot to write this.
Please ask A to ake the document previously mentioned.
I found out that the person in charge at B had a trouble with the customs, and the person in charge of the custom clearance got upset and that's why it's taking extra days.
If you canot create the documents, I'll return the item once so please change the forwarding company from B to xx and resend it.
If xx cannot send it, i'm afraid to ask you this but please make refund.
If I use B, it takes time till I receive it, and the item of A I bought from other company in US was sent by xx and already received.

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I forgot writing this.
Please ask A to make the documents previously mentioned.
I found out that the person in charge at B had a trouble with the customs, and the person in charge of the customs clearance got upset and that's why it's taking extra days.
If you can't create the documents, I'll return the item once so please change the forwarding company from B to xx and resend it.
If xx cannot send it, i'm afraid of asking you this, but please make refund.
If I use B, it takes time till I receive it, and the item of A I bought from another company in US was sent by xx and already received.

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I forgot to write this.
Please ask A to ake the document previously mentioned.
I found out that the person in charge at B had a trouble with the customs, and the person in charge of the custom clearance got upset and that's why it's taking extra days.
If you canot create the documents, I'll return the item once so please change the forwarding company from B to xx and resend it.
If xx cannot send it, i'm afraid to ask you this but please make refund.
If I use B, it takes time till I receive it, and the item of A I bought from other company in US was sent by xx and already received.

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I forgot to write this.
Please ask A to ask for the document previously mentioned.
I found out that the person in charge at B had trouble with customs, and the person in charge of customs clearance got upset and that's why it's taking extra days.
If you cannot create the documents, I'll return the item once so please change the forwarding company from B to xx and resend it.
If xx cannot send it, i'm afraid to ask you this, but please make a refund.
If I use B, it takes time until I receive it, and the item of A I bought from another company in the US was sent by xx and already received.

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I was thinking about sending the item I bought from you the other day via US forwarding company.
However, due to US export regulation I need documents.

Below is the email sent from the forwarding company.

○○

I submitted the documents in the attached file for this.
Then there was a reply as below.

○○

It looks like I still need further documents.
If it's kept longer, it will be returned to your company.

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I was thinking about sending the item I bought from you the other day to Japan via a forwarding company in the US.
However, due to US export regulations I need documents to send it.

The text below is the email sent from the forwarding company.

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For reply, I attached the documents required to the email.
Then there was a reply as below.

○○

It looks like I still need further documents for it.
If it's kept longer, it will be returned to your company.

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It's been a long time since we last communicated. I'm in xx now and will stay for one year.

By the way, my Malaysian friend Mr. xx is seeking suppliers and he is very interested in your products.

Mr. xx is speaks fluent Malay, Chinese and Japanese, and also can communicate a little in English and Thai.

He'd like to know the minimum lot and price of the item in the attached file image.

Below is Mr. xx's email address, so I appreciate that you contact him.

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It's been a long time since we last communicated. I'm in xx now and will stay for one year.

By the way, my Malaysian friend Mr. xx is seeking suppliers and he is very interested in your products.

Mr. xx speaks fluent Malay, Chinese, and Japanese, and also can communicate a little in English and Thai.

He'd like to know the minimum lot and price of the item in the attached image.

Below is Mr. xx's email address, so I would appreciate it if you could contact him.

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I'm thinking about buying many items which I can sell.
I'd like to buy ** and **.↵
I want to ordering each one of these.

Currently I'm working on creating a website.
I hope to complete my webiste and start selling there.
If I can use some images on your website, I can sell more of ** to the Japanese market.
I'll place order as soon as I can, so will you let me use the images first?
I'm putting a lot of effort on selling your items as much as possible.
Please trust me.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I'm thinking about buying many items which I can sell.
I'd like to buy each one of ** and **.

Currently I'm working on creating a website.
I hope to complete my webiste and start selling there.
If I can use some images on your website, I can sell more of ** to the Japanese market.
I'll place an order as soon as possible, so will you let me use the images first?
I'm putting a lot of efforts on selling lots of your products.
I will appreciate that if you could trust me.
Thank you.

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Thanks for your feedback.

I deeply regret to know that this item was not of your satisfaction.
So may I sugget below two solutions?

1. If you send me a photo of the 10-piece item yo received this time, I'll send you 12-piece item by express mail at free of charge. You don't have to return the item you have.

2. If you send me a phot of the 10-piece item you received this time, I'll refund the amount of the item and add 10 dollars as a sign of my apology. Of course you don't have to return the item.

Please kindly send me a phot and let me know which solution you would prefer.

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Thanks for your feedback.

I deeply regret to know that this item was not of your satisfaction.
So may I sugget below two solutions?

1. If you send me a photo of the 10-piece item yo received this time, I'll send you 12-piece item by express mail at free of charge. You don't have to return the item you have.

2. If you send me a photo of the 10-piece item you received this time, I'll refund the amount of the item and add 10 dollars as a sign of my apology. Of course you don't have to return the item.

Please kindly send me a photo and let me know which solution you would prefer.

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I made a list of guitars requested at e mall.

Besides in US, we provide K guitars to professional musicians around the world.
As we checked inventory, fortunately we currently have KGP available in stock.

If you'd like, we can make a deal outside e mall.
In that case we can offer a bit of discount, so if you'd like please let us know your email address.

This guitar comes with a special gig bag.
The hard case will be ordered at the manufacturer, so it will take around one month for delivery.

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I made a list of guitars requested at e mall.

Besides in US, we provide K guitars to professional musicians around the world.
As we checked inventory, fortunately we currently have a KGP available in stock.

If you'd like, we can make a deal outside e mall.
In that case we can offer a bit of discount, so if you'd like please let us know your email address.

This guitar comes with a special gig bag.
The hard case can be ordered from the manufacturer, so it will take around one month for delivery.

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I made a list of guitars requested at e mall.

Besides in US, we provide K guitars to professional musicians around the world.
As we checked inventory, fortunately we currently have KGP available in stock.

If you'd like, we can make a deal outside e mall.
In that case we can offer a bit of discount, so if you'd like please let us know your email address.

This guitar comes with a special gig bag.
The hard case will be ordered at the manufacturer, so it will take around one month for delivery.

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I have made a list of guitars requested at e mall.

Besides in US, we also provide K guitars to professional musicians around the world.
As we checked our inventory, we found that currently KGP is available in stock.

If you'd like, we can make a deal outside of e mall.
In that case we can offer a small discount, so if you'd like to place an order, please let us know your email address.

This guitar comes with a special gig bag.
Since the manufacturer will take the order and deliver the hard case directly, it will take around one month for delivery.

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This is a display item, unopened and unused.
Since it was displayed in showcase, there are little dust inside the lens. There is no scratches on body, lens and hood.

It's highly recommended!

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This is a display item, opened but unused.
Since it was displayed in showcase, there is a little dust inside the lens. There is no scratches on body, lens and hood.

It's highly recommended!

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Thank you very much for your purchase.
The item has just been sent out.
Since the size of ○○ is large, it was sent by EMS following Japan Post's size regulation.
Additional shipping cost is paid by me as a part of service, so you do not have to pay additional fee.
Also, EMS reaches faster than small packet. Usually it take 3 to 10 days for delivery.
Furthermore, I appreciate that you leave favorable feedback if you like it after receive it.
I'll be waiting for your next order.
I look forward to serving you again.

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Thank you very much for your purchase.
The item has just been sent out.
Since the size of ○○ is large, it was sent by EMS following Japan Post's size regulation.
Additional shipping cost is paid by me as a part of service, so you do not have to pay additional fee.
Also, EMS reaches faster than small packet. Usually it takes 3 to 10 days for delivery.
Furthermore, I appreciate that you leave favorable feedback if you like it after receive it.
I'll be waiting for your next order.
I look forward to serving you again.

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Hello.

I'm interested in this item.

I'm thinking about buying it, do you have this item in stock?

Please let me know if you have stock.

Previously when I purchased from other shop, I was told that they were out of stock which made me sad.

I'll be looking forward to your reply.
Thank you in advance.

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Hello.

I'm interested in this item.

I'm thinking about buying it. Do you have this item in stock?

Please let me know if you have stock.

Previously when I purchased from another shop, I was told that it were out of stock which made me sad.

I'm looking forward to your reply.
Thank you in advance.

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Fortunetely I have not sent it out to UK yet.
I'll cancel this transaction.
Later you will receive cancellation notice from eBay.
Import tax is at the buyer's responsibility. I recommend that you check before bidding.

So the shipping cost from NYC to FL is $*. Honestly, it might be difficult to sel this bass in Japan. Adding shipping cost from FL to Japan, tariff and my cost would make the sales price really expensive.
If I find any buyer, I'll let you know the required information.

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Fortunately I have not sent it out to UK yet.
I'll cancel this transaction.
Later you will receive cancellation notice from eBay.
Import tax is at the buyer's responsibility. I recommend that you check before bidding.

So the shipping cost from NYC to FL is $*. Honestly, it might be difficult to sell this bass in Japan. Adding shipping cost from FL to Japan, tariff and my cost would make the sales price really expensive.
If I find any buyer, I'll let you know the required information.

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Thanks for your order. The item you ordered has just been sold out. We don't get much of this item in stock so it might be difficult to get it again, but we'll try my best to get it until the deadline for your shipping. If we cannot get it by shipping deadline, we will notify you of cancellation. Furthermore, if you are in a hurry please send us cancellation request and buy from other shop. Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions.

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Thanks for your order. The item you ordered has just been sold out. We don't get much of this item in stock so it might be difficult to get it again, but we'll try our best to get it until the deadline [word choice] for your shipping. If we cannot get it by shipping deadline [word choice], we will notify you of cancellation. Furthermore, if you are in a hurry please send us a cancellation request and buy it from another shop. Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions.

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Please make refund to shimatora345@gmail.com.

If you can't do that,

works as well/

Pleae refund by Send Money.

Please do not refund by credit card.

If you are not convinced, you can leave it as it is.

In that case, I'll return the item and evaluate again.
Please send me a request then.

Please let me know by email when you make refund.
Also please send me the return address again.
I'll charge you for the return shipping cost.

I demand soonest resolution.

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Please make refund to shimatora345@gmail.com.

If you can't do that,

it works as well/

Pleae refund by Send Money.

Please do not refund by credit card.

If you are not convinced, you can leave it as it is.

In that case, I'll return the item and evaluate it again.
Please send me a request then.

Please let me know by email when you make refund.
Also please send me the return address again.
I'll charge you for the return shipping cost.

I demand soonest resolution.

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Is my understanding right that the 41-37 on True Temper website does not mean 8 pieces of 3-PW, but it does indicate up to number 1-LW?

However, S400 listed on your online shop says 41-37 for 8-piece set of 3-PW.↵
Please kindly explain it.

Have you noted the delivery address for True Teper?↵
If it is delivered to wrong address, I'll penalized for fine. Please make sure you inform about it.

I'll be waiting for your reply.

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Is my understanding right that the 41-37 on the True Temper website does not mean the eight-piece 3-PW set, but indicates up to 1-LW?

However, the S400 listed in your online store says 41-37 for the eight-piece 3-PW set. Please kindly explain this.

Are you clear on the delivery address for True Temper? If it is delivered to the wrong address, I will be penalized with a fine. Please make sure you communicate this.

I'll be waiting for your reply.

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Sorry for my late reply.↵
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Thank you for waiting.

Herewith sending you 2 manuals.
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1. Manual for eBay listing tool released yesterday.
2. Manual for finding items to list on eBay etc.

It looks like I got confused because of this little long manual.↵
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In case there is no instruction by me, please follow the following rules and list on eBay.↵
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When listing on eBay, the item must be sold in Amazon Japan and Amazon US.↵
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When listing on eBay, please list with the price calculated by the following formula.

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Sorry for my late reply and thank you for waiting.

I am sending you two manuals:
1. For eBay listing tool released yesterday
2. Methods for finding items to list on eBay, etc.

It looks like I got confused because the manual is a bit long. If I provide no instruction, please follow the following rules and list on eBay. When listing on eBay, the item must be sold on Amazon Japan and Amazon US. When listing on eBay, list with the price calculated by the following formula.

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I appreciate you for working in a long term.

I highly recommend him for other requesters.↵
I hired 5 people for this project, and for me ○○ was my NO.1.↵
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He is honest and highly responsibile. He asks whenever he faces something unclear, he corrects positively when I point out the mistakes. He completes the requested works without giving them up.

Provided that, gradually I came to delegate many jobs to him and I could finally leave important task to him.

I'll ask for your cooperation when I start business again, thank you in advance.

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I am very thankful for your working over such a long term.

I highly recommend this person to other clients. I hired five people for this project, and for me ○○ was the best. He is honest and highly responsible. He asks questions whenever he something is unclear and he obediently corrects mistakes when I point them out. He completes requested work without giving up on it.

Due to these traits, I gradually came to delegate many jobs to him and was able to have him work on important tasks.

I'll ask for your cooperation when I start business again, thank you in advance.

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Thanks for your eail.↵
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The one I'm looking to buy is the old mode.↵
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I'm attaching the photo here, so please refer to it.↵
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Also please let me know the shipping cost to Japan.↵
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If you have any questions, please ask me.↵
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Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your email. The one I'm looking to buy is the old model. I'm attaching the photo here for your reference. Please also let me know the shipping cost to Japan. If you have any questions, please ask me. Thank you in advance.