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As you know, exchange rate of US dollars and Japanese yen is drastically changing and Japanese yen has dropped more than 10% since we started business. Will you review the price?

Based on the current exchange rate, item AA almost makes no profit.
Please kindly reconsider the price.

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As you know, exchange rate between US dollars and Japanese yen has been drastically changing and Japanese yen has dropped more than 10% since we started business. Will you review the trade price?

Based on the current exchange rate, item AA generates almost no profit.
Please kindly reconsider the price.

元の翻訳
Thank you always.

Thanks for arranging the address change.

I understood about CRC16-1 price.
If the price changes, price indicated in B2B shop also should be corrected.

I just made payment so please kindly check and arrange shipment.

Thank you.

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Thank you as always.

Thanks for taking care of the address change request.

I understood about the price for CRC16-1.
If the price changes, shouldn't be the price indicated in B2B shop also be corrected?

I have made the payment just a while ago, so please kindly check and arrange the shipment.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
About volume discount, I'm asking if I order large quantity would you please consider it?

However, is maximum shipment per month 50 pieces?

I noted about 00.
Please arrange it to be delivered here within this month.

Let me confirm one thing.
By making contract this, level of recognition in Japan will be improved. Therefore I guess orders will come from companies or individuals in Japan to Thailand, will you kindly forwad all of these to us?

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About volume discount, I'm asking if I order a large quantity would you please consider it?

However, is maximum shipment per month 50 pieces?

I noted about 00.
Please arrange it to be delivered here within this month.

Let me confirm one thing.
By making this contract, the level of recognition in Japan will be improved. Therefore I guess orders will come directly from companies or individuals in Japan to Thailand, will you kindly forward all of these to us?

元の翻訳
* Regarding out of stock issue

We will make big change on stock management system. About our stock, stock check on shipment basis will be changed from update once in 3 days to every day. Also by matching with inventory report order cancellation will be minimuzed.

Please let us know if there are anything missing.

We are very sorry for causing you inconvenience many times. We will continue to try our best to further satisfy the customers in the future, and we appreciate your kind support.

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* Regarding out of stock issue

We will make a big change on the stock management system. About our stock, stock check on shipment basis will be changed from update once in 3 days to every day. Also by matching with inventory report order cancellation will be minimized.

Please let us know if there are anything missing.

We are very sorry for causing you inconvenience many times. We will continue to try our best to further satisfy the customers in the future, and we appreciate your kind support.

元の翻訳
I duly noted.
Your item will be delivered with highest priority by using international speed post (EMS).
There is no additional fee, so please do not worry.
Thanks for using our service.

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I duly noted.
Your item will be delivered with the highest priority by using international speed post (EMS).
There is no additional fee, so please do not worry.
Thanks for using our service.

元の翻訳
There are 5 dolls in item image.
How can I order dolls I want among them?
Please let me know how to order.
Thank you.

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There are five dolls on the item image.
How can I order dolls I want among them?
Please let me know how to order.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
The item I bought on October 3rd was delivered today.
However, the item I bought on October 24th has not arrive. Please let me know roughly when it would reach here.

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The item I bought on October 3rd was delivered today.
However, the other one I bought on October 24th has not arrived yet. Please let me know roughly when it would reach here.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340 including postage.
If you agree to this I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

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Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest price I can offer you is $340 including postage.
If you agree to accept this offer, I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340 including postage.
If you agree to this I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

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Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340, including shipping.
If you agree to this, I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Actually, the guitar you bought had been sold out by yesterday afternoon.
This was caused by an error in communication between stock management and item registration staffs. Sorry about this.

Instead, we'd like to sell B guitar in stock at the same price.
This is a very beautiful wooden guitar sold at $C in Japan.
If you accept our suggestion, we'll send this at declaration price of $D.

This guitar also has high quality and it's an excellent guitar not found in Japan.
We look forard to your favorable reply.

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Actually, the guitar you ordered had been sold out yesterday afternoon.
This was caused by a communication error between stock management and item registration staffs. We deeply apologize for the mistake.

As a compensation, we'd like to offer B guitar which is in stock for the same price.
This is a very beautiful wooden guitar sold for $C in Japan.
If you accept our offer, we'll send this at declaration price of $D.

This guitar also has high quality and it's an excellent guitar not found in Japan.
We look forard to your favorable reply.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I forgot the order number.
When will the item I ordered delivered to my address?
Thank you.

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Hello.

I forgot the order number.
When will the item I ordered be delivered to my address?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
#myus
商品の発送は可能です。Record Headのパッケージが装着済みとなっている理由は、商品が電池入りの状態で私たちに届いたからです。他のパッケージは電池を入れてくださいとなっています。電池入りなので危険物取扱手数料の＄10.50を支払う必要はありません、電池なしで発送された場合と同様です。

ご質問などございましたら気軽にお尋ねください。

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#myus
商品の発送は可能です。Record Headのパッケージが装着済みとなっている理由は、商品が電池入りの状態で私たちに届いたからです。他のパッケージは電池の装着待ちとなっています。電池入りなので危険物取扱手数料の＄10.50を支払う必要はありません、電池なしで発送された場合と同様です。

ご質問などございましたら気軽にお尋ねください。

元の翻訳
We do believe you.
However, we have not done any business yet. Therefore we think it's important to take necessary steps.

We think that eBay fee is a burden to you as well.
Therefore we'd like to solve this by bearing 5% of eBay fee at our side for this first transaction. Please create a page for 1 carton (50 pieces) with 5% surchage which is $2362.5 and let us know URL.
This is faster, more accurate and economical solution than sending samples.

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We do believe you.
However, we have not done any business yet. Therefore, we think it's important to take necessary steps.

We think that eBay fee is a burden to you as well.
Therefore, we would like to solve this by bearing 5% of eBay fee at our side for this first transaction. Please create a page for 1 carton (50 pieces) with 5% surcharge which is $2362.5 and let us know the URL.
This is faster, more accurate and more economical to solve rather than sending samples.

元の翻訳
Below are my requested conditions.
I'm free from 9:00-17:00 on 14th.
-Commute by MRT
-Budget: maximum S$3200
-Area: over 500sqft
-Desirably separated rooms instead of studio type
*Separate (bedroom/living)
-Partially furnished/installed large electronics (refridgerator/washing machine) requested
(Remarks) Only I will be staying, but my wife would be frequently visit. So please introduce places which Japanese women would have no problem with.

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Below are my requested conditions.
I'm free from 9:00-17:00 on 14th.
-Commute by MRT
-Budget: maximum S$3200
-Area: over 500 sqft
-Desirably separated rooms instead of studio type
*Separate (bedroom/living)
-Partially furnished/installed large electronics (refrigerator/washing machine) requested
(Remarks) Only I will be staying, but my wife would visit frequently. So please introduce places which Japanese women would have no problem with.

元の翻訳
Thanks for using our service.
Regarding LA-50 you purchased, item will be forwarded from Australia which made delivery mistake.
We already sent replacement from our side, too.
That means you will receive 2 items.
However, since it was our fault you do not need to return it.
Please use both of them.
We are very sorry for the inconvenience caused you this time. We look forward to serving you again if there is a chance.

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Thanks for using our service.
Regarding LA-50 you purchased, the item will be forwarded from Austria to where it was delivered by mistake.
We already sent a replacement from our side, too.
That means you will receive 2 items.
However, since it was our fault you do not need to return it.
Please use both of them.
We are very sorry for the inconvenience caused you this time. We look forward to serving you again if there is a chance.

元の翻訳
SEIKOダイバーズｓｋｘ００９の価格についてわからないことがあります。あなたの商品と他のセラーの商品との違いは何ですか？よろしくお願いします。昨日あなたのサイトから問い合わせをしましたが返事がありませんでした、ご連絡よろしくお願いします。

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SEIKOダイバーズskx009kの価格についてわからないことがあります。あなたの商品と他の販売業者の商品との違いは何ですか？よろしくお願いします。昨日あなたのサイトから問い合わせをしましたが返事がありませんでした、ご連絡よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
D2 Box deadline is 9:00 on 10th, is this correct?
Translation from this side is done, but I cannot open the downloaded file after it's done and cannot add Japanese translation of "Patent pending" to this file.
Attached is downloaded file, so will you kindly check this?

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D2 Box deadline is 9:00 on 10th, is this correct?
Translation from this side is done, but I cannot open the downloaded file after it's done and cannot add Japanese translation of "Patent pending" to this file.
Attached is downloaded file, so will you kindly check it?

元の翻訳
Thanks for your effort.

Either way I will send tea cup so please do not worry.
You can withdraw damage report application or leave it.

I always think process at the post office would go more smoothly for these cases.
But there is nothing we can do about it.

The cup will be sent out by EMS tomorrow.
It will take around 3 to 5 days to Germany.

Thanks for your continued support.

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Thanks for your effort.

Either way I will send tea cup so please do not worry.
You can withdraw damage report application or leave it as is.

I always wish the process at the post office would go more smoothly for cases like this.
But there is nothing we can do about it.

The cup will be sent out by EMS tomorrow.
It will take around 3 to 5 days to Germany.

Thanks for your continued support.