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元の翻訳
ご注文確認
あなた様の注文確認書はメールに添付いたします。そちらをご確認いただき、もし変更点があればご連絡ください。
この書類は、見積もり送り状として扱われます。注文品の確定をご希望される場合はお知らせください。ご希望に沿い準備いたします。

取り寄せ注文
私共の在庫は日々変わります。すべてのお客様のご要望に沿えるように努力しております。もし取り寄せ注文の詳細到着予定日時をご希望の場合はご連絡ください。取り寄せを最小限で抑えるため、注文品の確定をご希望される場合ＡＭにご連絡ください。

支払
注文確認書に記載されている価格は、ユーロ表示で工場渡しの価格です。取り寄せ委注文を除いた全金額お支払いください。

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ご注文確認
あなた様の注文確認書はメールに添付いたします。そちらをご確認いただき、もし変更点があればご連絡ください。
この書類は、見積もり送り状として扱われます。注文品の確定をご希望される場合はお知らせください。ご希望に沿い準備いたします。

取り寄せ注文
私共の在庫は日々変わります。すべてのお客様のご要望に沿えるように努力しております。もし取り寄せ注文の詳細到着予定日時をご希望の場合はご連絡ください。取り寄せを最小限で抑えるため、注文品の確定をご希望される場合ＡＭにご連絡ください。

支払
注文確認書に記載されている価格は、ユーロ表示で工場渡しの価格です。取り寄せ注文の場合を除き、全金額を事前にお支払いください。

元の翻訳
We appreciate your suggestions, however, we have finally decided to return the product to the supplier based on the product condition, as a result of the discussion in our company.
We are very sorry to put you in this situation, but would you be able to accept our decision?
As soon as we receive the product from you, we will refund you the amount which is the total of $658.94, $50 and the shipping cost to return the product.
Please make sure to insure the package when you return the product to avoid the situation where the package is lost and we can't refund you.
Please let us know if you accept our suggestion, and we will give you our address.

修正後
We appreciate your suggestions. However, we have finally decided to return the product to the supplier based on the product condition, as a result of the discussion in our company.
We are very sorry to put you in this situation, but would you be able to accept our decision?
As soon as we receive the product from you, we will refund you the amount which is the total of $658.94, $50 and the shipping cost to return the product.
Please make sure to insure the package when you return the product to avoid the situation where the package is lost and we can't refund you.
Please let us know if you accept our suggestion, and we will give you our address.

元の翻訳
We will make sure that a wall calendar is wrapped in a plastic bag and a paper tube.
In this way, you don't need to worry about the calendar being destroyed. You will receive it in a perfect condition.
If you choose SAL, the shipping cost is free.
(Please note that there are areas where you can't choose SAL. Please contact us for details.)
Please order now!

修正後
!We will make sure that a wall calendar is wrapped in a plastic bag and a paper tube.
In this way, you don't need to worry about the calendar being destroyed. You will receive it in a perfect condition.
If you choose SAL, the shipping cost is free.
(Please note that there are areas where you can't choose SAL. Please contact us for details.)
Please order now!

元の翻訳
６月の請求書は既に支払ったと昨日お話しました。これは本当です。しかし、気づかなかったのですが、支払いが戻ってきてしまいました。銀行情報に間違いがあったためです。

あなた様の銀行情報を再度送ってください。この件に関しては解決できるはずです。

このようなことがまた起きないように、あなた様の請求書のテンプレートを訂正してくださいませんか？そうすれば、銀行情報は請求書を見ればわかりますので。

ありがとうございます。そして、混乱させてしまい申し訳ありませんでした。

修正後
６月の請求書は既に支払ったと昨日お話しました。これは本当です。しかし、気づかなかったのですが、支払いが戻ってきてしまいました。銀行情報に間違いがあったためです。

あなた様の銀行情報を再度送ってください。この件に関しては、やっと解決できるはずです。

このようなことがまた起きないように、あなた様の請求書のテンプレートを訂正してくださいませんか？そうすれば、銀行情報は請求書を見ればわかりますので。

ありがとうございます。そして、混乱させてしまい申し訳ありませんでした。

元の翻訳
We understood that you are not looking for sales partnars at this point.
If you ever look for them, please let us know.

You don't sell products at a whole sale price?
Then, would you please tell us to whom you are selling your products?
I wonder if they could sell products to me at a whole sale price if I have your reference.

If we can buy this product in a huge quantity, we think we could build a good business relationship with you and your supplier.

We would like to keep our business for long term by dealing with your products.
It would be grateful if you could help us.

修正後
We understood that you are not looking for sales partnars [spelling] at this point.
If you ever look for them, please let us know.

You don't sell products at a whole sale price?
Then, would you please tell us to whom you are selling your products?
I wonder if they could sell products to me at a whole sale price [割引価格] if I have your reference.

If we can buy this product in a huge quantity, we think we could build a good business relationship with you and your supplier.

We would like to keep our business for long term by dealing with your products.
We would be grateful if you could help us.

元の翻訳
1. There is a trace of a leakage in the battery chamber of the grip.
A part of the shutter speed dial is missing. It has no practical problem when in use.

2. The appearance of the body and the part inside the lens are like new, but there is an error message when pressing the shutter button. Please purchase this item if you can fix the problems or need the parts.

修正後
1. There is a trace of a leakage in the battery chamber of the grip.
A part of the shutter speed dial is missing. It has no practical problem when in use.

2. The appearance of the body and the part inside the lens are like new, but there is an error message when pressing the shutter button. Please purchase this item if you can fix the problems or take the parts you need out of it.

元の翻訳
Thanks to the national policies like FIT (Feed in Tariff), the renewable energy is getting a great deal of attention in Japan.
1. What is the durable period of the products?
2. What is the manufacturer's warranty and how long is it valid for?
3. Is it OK to have only rice hulls for fuels?
4. How to remove the tar?
What is the concentration level of the tar in gas, as well?
5. Is the ash in the surplus soil reusable? (i.e. manure)
6. What is the cycle of the maintenance, what kind of maintenance should be done, and what is the target of the cost?
7. Are there other necessary things than biomass fuels, such as external electrical source or fossil fuels?

修正後
Thanks to national policies like FIT (Feed in Tariff), renewable energy is getting a great deal of attention in Japan.
1. What is the service life of the products?
2. What is the manufacturer's warranty and how long is it valid for?
3. Is it OK to have only rice hulls for fuel?
4. How do you remove the tar?
What is the concentration level of the tar in gas, as well?
5. Is the ash in the surplus soil reusable? (i.e. manure)
6. What is the cycle of the maintenance, what kind of maintenance should be done, and what is an estimated cost?
7. Are there other necessary things besides biomass fuels, such as an external electrical source or fossil fuels?

元の翻訳
あなた様のSSL証明書のひとつががもうすぐ期限切れになるので、お知らせのためにご連絡差し上げました。
期限切れのためにサービスが中断することがないよう、本日更新することをお勧めします。

SSL証明書の詳細については以下をご覧ください。

SSL証明書は１年で１０．９５ドルから更新していただけます。

メールをいただき、 Pia Collectionに興味を持っていただきありがとうございます。

御社の詳細をご連絡いただけると大変うれしいです。御社の所在地、他にどのブランドを扱っているかなどを教えてください。

よろしくお願いいたします。サンドラ

修正後
あなた様のSSL証明書のひとつががもうすぐ期限切れになるので、お知らせのためにご連絡差し上げました。
期限切れのためにサービスが中断することがないよう、本日更新することをお勧めします。

SSL証明書の詳細については以下をご覧ください。

SSL証明書は１年で１０．９５ドルから更新していただけます。ぜひ本日更新してください。

メールをいただき、 Pia Collectionに興味を持っていただきありがとうございます。

御社の詳細をご連絡いただけると大変うれしいです。御社の所在地、他にどのブランドを扱っているかなどを教えてください。

よろしくお願いいたします。サンドラ

元の翻訳
入札者、phung.2014、の入札をキャンセルいたしました。これらの入札はeBayに登録されていないからです。

161420258553 - #13189 CONTAX Carl Zeiss Sonnar T* 135mm F2.8 AEJ From Japan Excellent
161421141625 - #12352 CONTAX Carl Zeiss T* Sonnar 180mm F2.8 MMJ Excellent From Japan

このような状況の場合、この入札者によって入札された既に消去されているリスティングの最終価格を返金します。もし、これが１個のみの掲載の場合は掲載料金も含めて返金する予定です。
全ての関連費用も返金されています。
このリスティングが既に消去された場合、あなたの商品を簡単に再出品できるようにしました。リスティング検索でこの商品は出てきませんが、「My eBay」にある「Sold section」（売却済み）で見ることができます。更に詳しい情報は、こちらをご覧ください。

修正後
入札者、phung.2014、の入札をキャンセルせざるを得ませんでしらた。これらの入札はeBayに登録されていないからです。

161420258553 - #13189 CONTAX Carl Zeiss Sonnar T* 135mm F2.8 AEJ From Japan Excellent
161421141625 - #12352 CONTAX Carl Zeiss T* Sonnar 180mm F2.8 MMJ Excellent From Japan

このような状況の場合、この入札者によって入札された既に消去されている出品の最終価格を返金します。もし、これが１個のみの掲載の場合は掲載料金も含めて返金する予定です。
全ての関連費用も返金されています。
この出品が既に消去された場合、あなたの商品を簡単に再出品できるようにしました。リスティング検索でこの商品は出てきませんが、「My eBay」にある「Sold section」（売却済み）で見ることができます。更に詳しい情報は、こちらをご覧ください。

元の翻訳
We are terribly sorry that the shipping is delayed.
It took more time for packaging than we expected.
We will ship it today by EMS.
Once we ship it, we will let you know the tracking number.

We have sipped the product today.
We are terribly sorry that it took a long time.

We are sorry. We broke the product you won a bid.
To make a refund, please accept when we will open the cancel transaction on ebay.
To compensate, we will give you 10% reduction on any products if you would like to purchase.

修正後
We are terribly sorry that the shipping is delayed.
It took more time for packaging than we expected.
We will ship it today by EMS.
Once we ship it, we will let you know the tracking number.

We have shipped the product today.
We are terribly sorry that it took a long time.

We are sorry. We broke the product you won a bid.
To make a refund, please accept the processing when we will open the cancel transaction on ebay.
To compensate, we will give you 10% reduction on any products if you would like to purchase.

元の翻訳
I don't know much about the Canadian mail system, but it usually takes less than 2 weeks to receive a package in Japan from the US by air without tracking number.

I understand you may not be happy with the transaction with me this time, however, I would also like you to understand that I received huge losses.

If you don't return the product, I would like to solve this problem by giving you a refund of $60.

The product which you bought is very rare and difficult to buy in Japan, so it should be a good collection for you.

If you would like to return the product, I would like you to pay the half of the shipping fee which is $30.

修正後
I don't know much about the Canadian mail system, but it usually takes less than 2 weeks to receive a package in Japan from the US by air without a tracking number.

I understand you may not be happy with the transaction with me this time. However, I would also like you to understand that I received huge losses.

If you don't return the product, I would like to solve this problem by giving you a refund of $60.

The product you bought is very rare and difficult to buy in Japan, so it should be a good collection for you.

If you would like to return the product, I would like you to pay the half of the shipping fee, which is $30.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting us.
We are sincerely sorry that we could not find the scratch on the front lens when we checked the product, and did not explain correctly on the product description.
As It didn't meet your expectation as a result, we would like to refund as part of the payment. What would you think if we refund 20USD through paypal? Could you please let us know if you agree with this.

修正後
Thank you very much for contacting us.
We are sincerely sorry that we could not find the scratch on the front lens when we checked the product, and did not explain correctly on the product description.
As It didn't meet your expectation as a result, we would like to refund a part of the payment. What would you think if we refund $20 through PayPal? Could you please let us know if you agree with this?

元の翻訳
As mentioned above, Japanese products has started being sold on the market.
If there is a price difference of more than 30% in the same category, please put the product up for sale.
If not, please find a category where you see a price different, then put it up for sale.
When you put it up for sale, you type the product information, then go back to the previous page.

修正後
As mentioned above, Japanese products have started being sold on the market.
If there is a price difference of more than 30% in the same product category, please put the product up for sale.
If not, please find a category where you see a price difference, then put it up for sale.
When you put it up for sale, you type the product information, then go back to the previous page.

元の翻訳
Click onto "INVENTORY" at the top of the screen, paste the copied ASIN, and search.

修正後
Click onto "INVENTORY" at the top of the screen, paste the copied ASIN, followed by search.

元の翻訳
Dear XXX (相手の名前),
Thank you very much for your reply. I also appreciate your thoughtfulness.
I am very happy to meet you through ebay.
I will keep working on building a good relationship with you.
Please come back to my store again in the near future.
If you have any questions about my products, please feel free to contact me.
I am sorry for my poor English:)
Kind regards,
XXX（依頼主様の名前）

修正後
Dear XXX (相手の名前),
Thank you very much for your reply. ↵
I also appreciate your thoughtfulness.
I am very happy having met you through eBay.
I will further strive for building a good relationship with you.
If my shop suffices your needs, please do continue shopping with us.
If you have any questions about my products, please feel free to contact me.
Please excuse me for my poor English:)
Kind regards,
XXX（依頼主様の名前）