翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: ebay 取引で使用します

日本語

こんにちわ
お返事ありがとうございます
そしてお気遣い頂いたこと感謝致します
私もあなたとebayを通じて知り合えたこととても嬉しく思います
これからも良好な関係を築けるよう努力します
私のショップでよければこれからも是非ご利用ください
また、製品について知りたいこと等があれば
いつでもお問い合わせください
英語はちょっと苦手なことお許しくださいね（笑）
※締めの言葉

英語

Dear XXX (相手の名前),
Thank you very much for your reply. I also appreciate your thoughtfulness.
I am very happy to meet you through ebay.
I will keep working on building a good relationship with you.
Please come back to my store again in the near future.
If you have any questions about my products, please feel free to contact me.
I am sorry for my poor English:)
Kind regards,
XXX（依頼主様の名前）

レビュー ( 2 )

yosuke-oshidaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/18 13:09:45

there are no points to fix, keep on learning!

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/20 16:30:40

元の翻訳
Dear XXX (相手の名前),
Thank you very much for your reply. I also appreciate your thoughtfulness.
I am very happy to meet you through ebay.
I will keep working on building a good relationship with you.
Please come back to my store again in the near future.
If you have any questions about my products, please feel free to contact me.
I am sorry for my poor English:)
Kind regards,
XXX（依頼主様の名前）

修正後
Dear XXX (相手の名前),
Thank you very much for your reply. ↵
I also appreciate your thoughtfulness.
I am very happy having met you through eBay.
I will further strive for building a good relationship with you.
If my shop suffices your needs, please do continue shopping with us.
If you have any questions about my products, please feel free to contact me.
Please excuse me for my poor English:)
Kind regards,
XXX（依頼主様の名前）

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