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元の翻訳
日本から沢山のキセルを買います。出荷に関しては何の問題もありません。日本はとても効率が良い。

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日本から沢山のキセルを買っていますが、出荷に関しては一度も問題が起きたことはありません。日本はとても効率が良いです。

元の翻訳
日本からキセルをたくさん買いましたが、一度も発送で問題があったことはありません。日本はとても効率的です。

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日本からキセルをたくさん買っていますが、一度も発送で問題があったことはありません。日本はとても効率的です。

元の翻訳
君は郵便局に確認に行ったけど、閉まってた… アメリカの私たちがそれほどバカだと本当に思ってるんですか?

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郵便局に確認に行ったが、閉まってた、ですか… アメリカの私たちがそれほどバカだと本当に思ってるんですか?

元の翻訳
あなたが郵便局に行って確認しようとしたが、閉まってしまった...本当に我々アメリカ人がそんなに馬鹿だと思ってるのか?(できれば前後の文脈を提供していただければ)

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郵便局に行って確認しようとしたが、閉まっていた、ですか...　本当に我々アメリカ人がそんなに馬鹿だと思ってるのですか?

元の翻訳
郵便局へ確認へ行ったが、空いていませんでした、ですって？アメリカ人がそんなにバカだと思うのですか？

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郵便局へ確認へ行ったが、開いていませんでした、ですって？アメリカ人が本当にそんなにバカだと思うのですか？

元の翻訳
You have sent an item on September 15th, but I have not received it yet.
I tracked it, and found that it was under the status of　"opening" on September 17th
and no progress has been made thereafter.
If there was an accident about it, I ask you to refund it.

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You have sent an item on September 15th, but I have not received it yet.
As I tracked it, I found that the status was under the status of "opening" on September 17th
and no progress has been made thereafter.
If there was a shipping accident, I'd like to ask you for a refund.

元の翻訳
It was sent on 15 September, but the product hasn't arrived yet.
I tried to track, the opening was on 17 September but no progress of it.
Because it seems like the postal service trouble, we ask for refund for awhile.

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The item was sent on 15 September, but it hasn't arrived yet.
As I tried to track it, the status became "opening" on 17 September but no progress since then.
Because it seems like the postal service trouble, please issue me a refund first.

元の翻訳
Dear Mr.

I confirmed it with my friend and we have decided to pass up this opportunity this time.
We appreciate your kind effort to do a search for us.

We're looking forward to shopping with you next purchase.

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Dear Mr./Ms.

I confirmed it with my friend and we have decided to pass up this opportunity this time.
We appreciate your kind effort to do a search for us.

We're looking forward to shopping with you next time.

元の翻訳
I can't understand very well because I'm not a native English speaker. Can I add websites like Google, Yahoo, YouTube, or iTunes? Is it too difficult to add my own preferred websites by myself?

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I can't understand very well because I'm not a native English speaker, but can I add websites like Google, Yahoo, YouTube, or iTunes, etc.? Or is it too difficult to add specific websites by myself?

元の翻訳
Since English is not my first language, I don't know if I am explaining this right but,↵
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for example, could I add internet site such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes"?
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Is it quite difficult to add certain sites by myself?

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Since English is not my first language, I don't know if I understand this correctly, but for example, could I add a website such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes", etc.?
Or, is it quite difficult to add certain websites by myself?

元の翻訳
I'm not a native speaker of English, so I don't understand it though.↵
Do you think I can add web sites, such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube and iTunes?
Otherwise, is it so difficult to add some particular sites?

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I'm not a native speaker of English, so I don't understand it, however, do you think I can add web sites, such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube and iTunes, etc.?
Otherwise, is it so difficult to add a specific website by myself?

元の翻訳
Because I'm not a native in English, I can't understand very well, can you sign in to the sites such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube or iTunes?
Or is it difficult to sign in on a particular site by yourself?

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Because I'm not a native in English, I can't understand very well, but could a website such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube or iTunes, etch be added?
Or is it quite difficult add a particular website by myself?

元の翻訳
I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.↵
For example, can you add the website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add the special website by ourselves?

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I am not a native speaker of English, so I don't understand it well, but for example, can you add websites such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube, iTunes and the like?
Or is it extremely difficult to add a specific website by myself?

元の翻訳
As I am not a native English speaker, I have difficulties in well unstanding English.↵
For example, could you tacked on site such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube, iTunes, etc. ?
Or is it too hard for you to tack on specific website by yourself?↵

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As I am not a native English speaker, I don't understand it very well, but for example, could websites such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube, iTunes, etc. be added?
Or would it be quite difficult to add a specific website by myself?

元の翻訳
I'm so sorry for being late in related to work. I'd like to return the grill, but I lost the shipping office label, so I don't know your address. I know it's troubling you, but please reply me with the destination of return.

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I'm so sorry for being late to get back to you because I was busy at work. I'd like to return the grill, but I lost the shipping label, so I don't know your address. I am sorry for troubling you, but please reply to me with the destination of return.

元の翻訳
I am sorry to have responding you sooner. I have been occupied with my work.
I would like to return the grille, but unfortunately I lost the delivery slip ( or return address lable). It would be appreciated if you could tell me the return address by return mail. Thanks.

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I am sorry I could not respond to you sooner. I have been occupied with my work.
I would like to return the grill, but unfortunately I lost the delivery slip so I don't know where your address is. It would be appreciated if you could tell me the return address by return of mail. Thanks.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I bought this item from Amazon.com.

This item didn't have a warranty or a instruction manual.
So,please send both to my address,thank you.

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Hello.
I bought this item from Amazon.com.

This item didn't come with a warranty or an instruction manual.
So, please send both to my address, thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I purchased this product on Amazon.

The warranty and instruction manual did not come attached with the product.
I would like to have the warranty and instruction manual sent to my address.

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Hello,
I purchased this product on Amazon.

The warranty and instruction manual did not come with the product.
I would like to have the warranty and instruction manual sent to my address.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I purchased this item at Amazon.com.

But this product hasn’t come neither with a warranty and a manual.
I’d like to you to send those to my address.

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Hello,
I purchased this item through Amazon.com.

But this product came with neither the warranty nor the instruction manual.
I’d like to you to send those to my address.

元の翻訳
親愛なる友へ
当店でのお買い物、有難うございます。
さて、DHL経由での送料無料サービスを提供できます。
インヴォイスを小包の外側に添えることができます。私の経験上、きっと貴方にとって役立つ情報ですが？
ご連絡お待ちしております。
宜しくお願いします。

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親愛なるお客様、
当店でのお買い物、誠に有難うございます。
勿論、DHL経由での無料配送サービスを承っております。
請求書を小包の外側に添付可能です。請求書に記載する申告金額はおいくらをご希望になられますか？
ご連絡お待ちしております。
宜しくお願いします。

元の翻訳
親愛なる友人、
私たちの店をご利用いただき、大変ありがとうございます。
もちろんDHLで送料無料で出荷することができます 。
また、小包の外側に請求書を表示することができます。どのくらいの値段を請求書で申告したらいいですか？
お返事を待っています。
敬具

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親愛なるお客様、
弊店をご利用いただき、誠にありがとうございます。
もちろんDHLで送料無料で出荷することができます 。
また、小包の外側に請求書を表示することができます。どのくらいの値段を請求書で申告ご希望なさいますか？
お返事をお待ちしております。
敬具

元の翻訳
親愛なるお客様、
私たちの店でたくさん注文していただいてありがとうございます。
もちろん、DHL形式で送料無料でお届けいたします。
また、インボイスを荷物の外側につけるのも可能ですが、インボイスに商品数と合計金額をどう書けばよいかを教えていただけないでしょうか？
お返事をお待ちしております。
よろしくお願いいたします。

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親愛なるお客様、
弊店にてご注文いただきありがとうございます。
もちろん、DHL経由で無料配送が可能です。
また、インボイスを荷物の外面につけることも可能です。請求書に申告金額をいくらでご希望か教えていただけないでしょうか？
お返事をお待ちしております。
よろしくお願いいたします。