Tearz (tearz) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for your enquiry.
You can use the merchandise as it is.
Thank you

Supplementary explanation:
In the picture, the skin-colored head is not included.

two-set.

It is possible that a popular product might be shipped with some delay.

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Hello
Thank you for your enquiry.
You may use the merchandise as it is.
Thank you.

Supplementary explanation:
In the picture, the flesh-colored head is not included.

2 pieces in 1 set.

It is possible that a popular product might be shipped with some delay.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your inquiry.
You can use the item as it is.
Thank you.

Additional description
It doesn't come with pictures and the skin colored parts of the head.

2 sets.

It is popular items so it could be delay.

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Hello.
Thank you for your inquiry.
You can use the item as it is.
Thank you.

Additional description
The flesh-colored part of the head in the photo is not included

2 pieces in 1 set.

It is a popular items with a possible delay in shipment.

元の翻訳
We are looking forward to the arrival of goods.
Do you have any goods that are made in Thai silk ?

When will you send out 00?

As I was on a business trip, sorry for the late reply.
Attached please find the order form. We will pay the bill and will contact you after we finished.

We have paid the bill.

As Thailand and Japan have signed the tariff treaty EPA, according to the treaty, if there is a certificate of region no tariff will be charged.
Thus, could the Chamber of Commerce and Industry of Thailand issue one and send it to us?

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We are looking forward to the arrival of goods.
Do you have any goods that are made of Thai silk ?

When will you send out 00?

As I was on a business trip, sorry for the late reply.
Attached please find the order form. We will pay the bill and will contact you after payment.

We have paid the bill.

As Thailand and Japan have signed the tariff treaty called EPA, according to the treaty, if there is a certificate of region no tariff will be charged.
Thus, could the Thai Chamber of Commerce issue one and send it to us?

元の翻訳
I am waiting and looking forward to the arrival of the product.
Are there products that use Thai silk?

When would be the estimated shipping of 00 be?

I am sorry for delays in contacting you since I was on some business trips recently.
I have attached the order chart so I will be paying this amount.
I will contact you after paying the amount.

I have sent the payment.

I have one request.
There is a customs treaty called EPA between Thailand and Japan and there won't be customs taxes if there is an existing certificate of origin.
So can you kindly have the Chamber of Commerce and Industry issue the document and send it over to me?

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I am looking forward to the arrival of the product.
Are there products made of Thai silk?

When would be the estimated shipping of 00 be?

I am sorry for my delay in contacting you since I was on a business trip recently.
I have attached the order chart so I will be paying this amount.
I will contact you after paying the amount.

I have sent the payment.

I have one request.
There is a customs treaty called EPA between Thailand and Japan and there won't be customs duties if there is an existing certificate of origin.
So can you kindly have the Thai Chamber of Commerce issue the document and send it over to me?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your speedy dealing.

We got contact from entruster that cope with peyment until at the end of this month is in time.
Thank you for everything.

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Thank you for your prompt action.

We were informed from entruster that the payment due at the end of this month was settled in time.
Thank you for everything.

元の翻訳
I truly appreciate your prompt action. Our consigner informed us that the payment was processed in time.
Thank you so much for your kind support.

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I truly appreciate your prompt action. Our consigner informed us that the payment, which is due at the end of this month was processed in time.
Thank you so much for your kind support.

元の翻訳
Hello,

I‘m looking for the belt of Bolt 0829.
I want to have a stainless steel belt, so I'm looking for a belt which is compatible with Bolt 0829.
Which belt can be compatible with it?

Thanks,

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Hello,

I‘m looking for the belt of Bolt 0829.
I want to have a stainless steel belt, so I'm looking for a belt which is compatible with Bolt 0829.
Which model number is compatible with it?

Thanks,

元の翻訳
Good day!
I am lookging for the belt of Bolt 0829. I would like to obtain the stainless belt, so I am looking for the belt that is compatible with the Bolt 0829. Which product number of the belt is compatible?

I appreciate your understanding.

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Good day!
I am lookging for a belt of Bolt 0829. I would like to obtain the stainless belt, so I am looking for one compatible with Bolt 0829. Which model number of the belt is compatible?

I appreciate your support.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I am looking for a belt of Bolt 0829.
I would like to have it made of stainless steel, I am looking for a belt which is interchangeable with Bolt 0829. Which model number is interchangeable belt?

Thank you.

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Hello,
I am looking for a belt of Bolt 0829.
I would like to have it made of stainless steel, so I am looking for a belt which is compatible with Bolt 0829. Which model number is compatible?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I am looking for a Bolt 0829 belt.
As I would like to have a stainless steel belt, I am looking for compatible one with Bolt 0829. Which model of belt is compatible with it?

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Hello,
I am looking for a belt for Bolt 0829.
As I would like to have a stainless steel belt, I am looking for the one compatible with Bolt 0829. Which model number of the belt is compatible with it?

元の翻訳
Sorry for contacting you so often.

The remittance information on the invoice I received below and the one in the mail I received previously do not match it seems.
Sorry for the trouble but, could you please re do the invoice and send it to me in an email attachment.
Again my apologies, payment will not be able to be made till the end of the month. I ask for your understanding in this matter.

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Sorry for contacting you so often.（誤訳：この場合に使う「度々の」はso oftenという意味ではありません。）

The remittance information（誤訳：原文には「振込先」とあります） on the invoice I received below（誤訳：以前＝belowではありません） and the one in the e-mail I received previously (誤訳：原文には「先日」とあります）do not match it seems.
Sorry for the trouble, but could you please re do（誤訳：原文には「差し替える」とあります） the invoice and send it to me in an email attachment.
Again my apologies, payment will be made at the end of next month（誤訳：原文では来月末日となっています）. I ask for your understanding in this matter.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for bothering you again.

It seems that the payee's account indicated in the invoice is different from that given by email the other day.
Could you please replace the invoice and send it by email?
I am terribly sorry, but the due date will be the end of next month.
I would appreciate your understanding.

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I am sorry for bothering you again.

It seems that the payee's account indicated in the invoice is different from that given by email the other day.
Could you please replace the invoice and send it by email as an attachment?
I am sorry to bother you, but the payment will be made at the end of next month.
I would appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
The close button that should be visible in the pop up window isn't there.
And also, I think its better if we could chat with more people. Also please consider a function to login via Twitter and also connect to iTunes.

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The close button in the pop up window does not show.
And also, I think its better if we could chat with multiple people. Also, please consider a function to login via Twitter and also connect to iTunes.

元の翻訳
There is no close button on the screen which pops up.
I also think that it would be better if we can chat with more people at the same time. Please think about a function which is to log in with Twitter and a function which is to connect with iTune.

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There is no close button pops up on the screen.
I also think that it would be better if we can chat with multiple people at the same time. Please take into your consideration about functions for Twitter log-in and iTune connection.

元の翻訳
Did you enjoy that last night?
I'm in Korea right now.
I was studying in Korea before too, I come here frequently.
This time, I'm accompanying my mom and her friend as an interpreter.

Let's have fun in Korea this time.
This town is very exciting.

Be careful on your way home.
From your sister in Japan, with love

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Did you enjoy that last night?
I'm in Korea right now.
As I used to study in Korea before, I come here frequently.
This time, I'm accompanying my mom and her friend as an interpreter.

Let's have fun in Korea this time.
This town is very exciting.

Be careful on your way home.
With love,↵
from your sister in Japan

元の翻訳
Could you enjoy your last night?
I'm now in Korea!

I have been to Korea as an exchange student, it's good to go!
This time I'm accompanying my mom and a friend of hers as a translator.

Let's have fun in Korea as well next time!
It's a really exciting place!

Be careful on your way home!
With love,
From your Japanese sister

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Did you have fun last night?
I'm now in Korea!

I used to be an exchange student in Korea so I visit here often!
This time round I'm accompanying my mom and a friend of hers as a translator.

Let's get together in Korea as well next time!
It's really an exciting place!

Be careful on your way home!
With love,
From your Japanese sister

元の翻訳
Are you shy too?
You're still young, so you can become good at Japanese if you study some.
I'm looking forward to the day when it happens.
Don't expect much from my English.

Next time we meet, you talk in Japanese, while I will speak English.

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Are you shy, too??
You're still young, so you can be good at Japanese if you study some!
I look forward to the day to come!
Don't expect much from my English though!

Next time we meet, you will talk in Japanese and I will in English!

元の翻訳
Please can you respond to my questions.
I emailed you a week ago on the Vergil Special MM2.4 so why don't you reply?
Is it because you don't understand the question? Unless you reply, I don't understand the situation.
I'm asking and inquiring because I don't understand.
I'll say this once again, I've tried setting but the fixed Lot doesn't work so please instruct me on how I should proceed.

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Please respond to my questions.
Since a week before, I have been emailing you several times on the Vergil Special MM2.4. I wonder why you don't reply to me.
Is it because you don't understand the question? How am I supposed to know without your reply?
I'm asking and inquiring because I am in big trouble.
I'll say this once again, please do something about this because the fixed lot cannot be operated no matter how I set it.

元の翻訳
I'm begging you to answer my question.
I've sent you some messages about the questions of Vergil Special MM2.4 since last week. Why you don't get back to me?
That's because you don't understand my question? I will never know anything if you don't get nack to me.
I'm in trouble so I'm asking you a question.
The setting Lot doesn't work, I tried with many ways but it doesn't work. Please do something.

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I'm begging you to answer my question.
I've e-mailed you some messages about the questions of Vergil Special MM2.4 since last week. Why don't you get back to me?
Is it because you don't understand my question? I will never know anything if you don't get back to me.
I'm in trouble that's why I'm asking you the question.
Please allow me to repeat. The setting Lot doesn't work, though I tried with many ways. Please do something about it.

元の翻訳
Please reply to my question.
A week ago I sent you a question by email regarding the Vergil Spesial MM2.4. Why are you not replying to me?
Is it because you don't understand my question? If there is no reply I can't understand anything.
As I'm in real trouble I asked a question.
I will say it once more. Please tell me why I can't change any settings in the Lot application.

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Please reply to my question.
A week ago I sent you a question by email regarding the Vergil Special MM2.4. Why are you not replying to me?
Is it because you don't understand my question? If there is no reply I can't understand anything.
I am asking you this question because I am in big trouble.
I will say it once more. Please do something about it, because I cannot operate it with the fixed lot no matter how I set it.

元の翻訳
New message from: andby36 (90Blue Star)
こんにちは。私のPayPalアカウントを確認したのですが、あなたからのEmail見つかりません。
しかし私は、請求書を指示通りお支払したことが確認できます。
この先どうしたらいいかわかりません。2週間で腕時計が届くことを期待しています。
よろしくお願いします。

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andy36 (90Blue Star)からの新規メッセージ
こんにちは。私のPayPalアカウントを確認したのですが、あなたからのEmail見つかりません。
しかし貴方が仰ったとおり、請求書の指示通りそちらにお支払したことが確認できます。
私のほうでこれ以上やることはないかと思うので、あとは2週間で腕時計が届くことを期待しています。
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
andyb36 (90Blue Star)からの新しいメッセージ；
こんにちは、paypalアカウントを確認しました、あなたからのEメールは確認できませんでした。
しかし、あなたがおっしゃったように、あなたにお支払いした請求書の確認はできました。
これ以上何かこちらで動く必要があるか分かりません。今はただ時計が2週間以内に届くことを期待するのみです。
ありがとうございました。

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andyb36 (90Blue Star)からの新しいメッセージ；
こんにちは、paypalアカウントを確認しました、あなたからのEメールは確認できませんでした。
しかし、あなたがおっしゃったように、あなたにお支払いした請求書の確認はできました。
これ以上何かこちらで動く必要はないと思うので、あとは時計が2週間以内に届くことを期待するのみです。
ありがとうございました。

元の翻訳
こんにちは、私はもうペイパル口座を確認しましたが、あなたからのメールは届いてません。
ただし、あなたに払ったのインボイスを見えました。
私はこれで完成したと思いますので、これ以上は何もしなくてもいいと思います。これからの2週間をお待ちします。
ありがとうございます

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andyb36 (90Blue Star)　からの新規メッセージ↵
こんにちは、私はもうペイパル口座を確認しましたが、あなたからのメールは届いてません。
ただし、貴方が仰っていた通りあなたに支払った分のインボイスは確認できます。
私のほうからできることは全て行いましたので、あとは腕時計が2週間ほどで到着するのを待つのみです。
宜しくお願いします。

元の翻訳
このすばらしい時計を購入したところです。書類上、「贈り物」と記入していただけませんか？そうすれば、こちらで輸入税を支払わなくて済みます。
ありがとうございます。この時計は私の夢の時計です。どうか、きちんと梱包していただけますようお願いいたします。ありがとう。アンドリュー

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このすばらしい腕時計を購入したところです。書類上、「贈り物」と記入していただけませんか？そうすれば、こちらで輸入税を支払わなくて済みます。
本当に本当にありがとうございます。この時計は私の夢の時計なので、どうかきちんと梱包していただけますようお願いいたします。ありがとう。アンドリュー

元の翻訳
こんにちは。この素晴らしい時計を買いました。関税を払わないために書類にはプレゼントと記入してください。
本当にありがとう。梱包をしっかりお願いします。これは夢に見た時計です。ありがとう。アンドルー

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こんにちは。この素晴らしい腕時計を買いました。関税を払わないで済むように書類には「プレゼント」と記入してください。
本当に本当にありがとう。これはずっと欲しかった腕時計だったので梱包をしっかりお願いします。ありがとう。アンドルー