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The item I bought on October 3rd was delivered today.
However, the item I bought on October 24th has not arrive. Please let me know roughly when it would reach here.

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The item I bought on October 3rd was delivered today.
However, the other one I bought on October 24th has not arrived yet. Please let me know roughly when it would reach here.

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I have noted that you have mistakenly bought the mount.
To facilitate the goods returning process, please send the product the the following address.
Upon the arrival of the product, the amount you paid with be refunded after deducting the postage fee.
Thank you for your support to us.

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I have noted that you have mistakenly bought the mount.
To facilitate the goods returning process, please send the product to the following address.
Upon arrival of the product, we will repay the paid amount after deducting the shipping fee.
Thank you for your support.

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This is OO, who emailed you a week ago from Japan.
I plant to stay for 4 nights starting from XX/ZZ/2015.
I would appreciate it if you could reply as I would like to contact directly Japanese staff.

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This is OO, who emailed you a week ago from Japan.
I plan to stay for 4 nights starting from XX/ZZ/2015.
I would appreciate if you could reply as I would like to contact Japanese staff directly.

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If I can’t directly purchase products from your company, I have no plans to handle your products.
Please do not share my information with the distributor in Tokyo you mentioned as I have no plans to talk to him.

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If I can’t directly purchase products from your company, I have no plans to deal with your products.
You must not share my information with the distributor in Tokyo you mentioned as I have no plans to talk to him.

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As written in the rule, from the start, YouTube API and Adsense cannot be used in the same place. However, as far as Google doesn't notice, (probably because of someone's report, ) you may use Adsense.

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As written in the Adsense agreement, to start with, YouTube API and Adsense cannot be used in the same place. However, as far as Google doesn't notice, (probbably unless reported by a third party) you could use Adsense.

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In the first place, you can't use YouTube API and Adsense simultaneously. It is written in the agreement with Adsense.
However, as long as Google is not aware of it (as long as no third party reports it), you can technically use Adsence.

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In the first place, you can't use YouTube API and Adsense simultaneously. It is written in the agreement ofAdsense.
However, as long as Google is not aware of it (as long as no third party reports it), you can possibly use Adsence.

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49 years old woman, injured falling from chair.
Right hand injury, right-handed person, radius distal edge bone fracture AO C2.

So-called rim fracture near the articular facet.
We operated using a APTUS 2.5 locking plate this time.

The most suitable operation method to be studied (what kind of plate to use; other operation method like use of the back side plate which is not introduced in Japan to be considered).

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49 years old female, injured when fell off a chair.
Right-handed, right hand injury with a radius distal fracture AO C2.

So-called rim fracture near the articular facet.
Performed a surgery with a APTUS 2.5 locking plate this time.

What'd be the most appropriate surgical procedure (a consideration for what kind of plate to use, a new dorsal plate not yet introduced in Japan, and other surgical procedues, etc.).

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A 49 years old female injured when she falled down from a chair.
distal radius fracture on right hand which is her dominant arm. (AO C2)

It is around the joint so called rim fracture.
We perfomed surgery using APTUS 2.5 locking plate.

What is the best operative procedure? (We considered which plates should be used, a back side plate yet to be imported in Japan, and other methids.)

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A 49 years old female injured when she fell off from a chair.
Right-handed, a right hand injury with distal radius fracture, AO C2

So called a rim fracture close to the articular facet.
We perfomed a surgery with APTUS 2.5 locking plate.

What is the best surgical procedure? (A consideration for which plates to use, a new dorsal plate not introduced in Japan yet, and other surgical procedures.)

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Hello.
I want to buy 50 of this product.
They are sold out in many other shops. Is it possible to order from you?

Also, I am thinking of buying with a bargain price since I would buy in a bulk.

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Hello.
I want to buy 50 of this product.
They are sold out in many other shops. Is it possible to order from you?

Also, I am thinking of buying with a bargain price since I would buy in bulk.

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Lens is fogging.

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The lens is foggy.

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Today I received the product.
Thank you for your prompt reply.

May I ask if you have a 3ml vial bottle?
And please also let me know the unit price of ordering 10,000 3ml pump spray vial bottle.

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Today I received the product.
Thank you for your prompt reply.

As for the vial bottle, do you have those of 3ml?
And please also let me know the price per unit if I ordered 10,000 pcs of 3ml pump spray vial bottle.

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I received the item today.
Thank you for your quick response.

As for the vial bottle, do you have the a bottle for 3ml?
Could you also tell me how much it is per bottle if I order 10,000 bottles of 3ml pump spray vial?

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I received the item today.
Thank you for your quick response.

As for the vial bottle, do you have the bottle for 3ml?
Could you also tell me how much it is per bottle if I order 10,000 bottles of 3ml pump spray vial?

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The item had been received.
But the lightening part of the bulb were crooked on both side.
Further more, one side of the lightening part had a scar on it.

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The item was received.
But the both bulbs at the luminous part were bent.
Further more, one of the bulbs had a major scratch on the luminous part, too.

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The item has successfully arrived.
However, both light-emitting parts of the bulbs are broken.
Also, one of the bulb has a big scratch on the light-emitting part.

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The item has arrived successfully.
However, both light-emitting parts of the bulbs are bent.
Also, one of the bulbs has a big scratch on the light-emitting part.

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The product has been delivered.
However, both sides of the lighting parts of the bulb were bent.
Also, one side of the bulb was greatly damaged.

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The product has been delivered.
However, both sides of the luminous parts of the bulb were bent.
Also, one of the bulbs has a major damage on the luminous part.

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We are waiting for 2 products.
We still haven't reveived one of them after one month.
Please tell me the respective arrival time.

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We are waiting for 2 products to arrive.
We still haven't reveived one of them that was ordered over a month ago.
Please tell me the respective delivery time.

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I have understood the content of the following.
Today I have requested the delivery agent to arrange delivery by the end of the week.
As the goods this time could not be sold as they were late.
If possible, can I ask for a discount with my next order please?

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I have understood the content of the following.
Today I have requested the delivery agent to arrange delivery by the end of the week. ←　ご自分でもお気づきだと思いますが誤訳です。
As the goods this time could not be sold as they were late.　←　文章が途中で途切れています。
If possible, can I ask for a discount with my next order please?

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We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange a delivery company to send it by air maill on weekend today?
In the accident where it was delayed in delivery this time, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the item.
For this reason, if possible, could you give a discount for the item that we order the next time?

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We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange a delivery company today so it will be shipped by air on weekend?
Due to the delay in delivery this time, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the item.
If possible, could you give us a discount for the item we will order the next time?

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Please send me 10 of A as replacements for the defective product.

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Please send me 10 pieces of A as a replacement for the defective products.

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Please send me good A instead of the defective products.

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Please send me 10 pieces of goods A instead of the defective ones.

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I'm sorry, I know you must be busy.
How is the progress on the case of AAAAAAA.
Hope to hear from you soon.

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I'm sorry to bother you.
What is the progress status regarding the case of Mr./Ms. AAAAAAA?
Hope to hear from you soon.

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Sorry for bothering you while you are busy.
Referring to Mr./Ms. AAAAAAAA's case, could you tell me the progress?
I look forward to your reply.

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Sorry for bothering you while you are busy.
With regard to Mr./Ms. AAAAAAAA's case, could you tell me the progress?
Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
日本からキセルを何度も購入していますが、これまで発送に関するトラブルは経験していません。日本はとても優秀です。

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日本からキセルを沢山購入していますが、これまで発送に関するトラブルは経験していません。日本はとても優秀です。