玉玲 秦 (raidou) — もらったレビュー

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Do you have a schedule to performance with other members?↵
In addition, what about G of ex.F will take part in the next live.
Please tell us the background of G, who played a big role in the album and recording this time.
A held live in Paris, which was no better president for oversea fans, especially who live in Europe, how was their reaction?
And it there a schedule to performance in other places abroad excepts Paris?

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Do you have a plan to perform with other members? In addition, what about G of ex.F will take part in the next live (?).
Please tell us the background of G [どのような経緯で参加されることになった], who played a big role in the album and recording this time.
A held live [?] in Paris was no better president [mistranslation] for oversea fans, especially who live in Europe [unclear]. How was their reaction?
And is there a plan to perform in other places abroad excepts Paris [mistranslation]?

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Sorry for so many questions.
Could you tell me more about the function as below?
What does AAA mean?
And I think it's better to register CCC than BBB in the category.

I haven't received the reply until now. It is clearly that Author doesn't work in concern server as the screenshot attached.
Please work on refund asap.

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Sorry for so many questions.
Could you tell me more about the function below?
What does AAA mean?
And I think it's better to register CCC rather than BBB in the category.

I haven't yet received a reply. It is clearly [parts of speech] that Author doesn't work in a concern [word choice] server as the screenshot attached shows.
Please refund asap.

元の翻訳
下記の商品：

最小注文数量：２０－１００ｐｃｓ

価格：USD３０．００／ｐｃｓｘ２０＝USD６００．００＋USD３５．００（DHLかTNTエクスプレス）＋USD２０．００（手数料）＝USD６５５．００

商品は入庫しました。入金次第次の平時に発送します。
Paypalで支払いできます。貴方のPaypalメールアドレスを教えてください、そしたらPaypalを通じて”リクエストマニー”を送ります。

もし他に何か問題があれば教えてください
ご返事をお待ちしております

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下記の商品：

最小注文数量：２０－１００個

価格：USD３０．００／個ｘ２０＝USD６００．００＋USD３５．００（DHLかTNTエクスプレス）＋USD２０．００（手数料）＝USD６５５．００

商品は入庫しました。入金次第次の営業日に発送します。
Paypalで支払いできます。貴方のPaypalメールアドレスを教えてください、そしたらPaypalを通じて”請求書”を送ります。

もし他に何か問題があれば教えてください
ご返事をお待ちしております

元の翻訳
下記の商品：

最小注文数量：２０－１００ｐｃｓ

価格：USD３０．００／ｐｃｓｘ２０＝USD６００．００＋USD３５．００（DHLかTNTエクスプレス）＋USD２０．００（手数料）＝USD６５５．００

商品は入庫しました。入金次第次の平時に発送します。
Paypalで支払いできます。貴方のPaypalメールアドレスを教えてください、そしたらPaypalを通じて”リクエストマニー”を送ります。

もし他に何か問題があれば教えてください
ご返事をお待ちしております

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下記の商品：

最小注文数量：２０－１００個

価格：USD３０．００／1個ｘ２０＝USD６００．００＋USD３５．００（DHLかTNTエクスプレス）＋USD２０．００（手数料）＝USD６５５．００

商品は入庫しました。入金次第次の平日（営業日）に発送します。
Paypalで支払いできます。貴方のPaypalメールアドレスを教えてくだされば、Paypalを通じて請求書を送ります。

もし他に何か問題があれば教えてください
ご返事をお待ちしております

元の翻訳
#habit

When could you refund the jetspeed to me?

Regarding RBZ TOUR PROTO Irons, I am interested in it, however we don't know whether it is necessarily in Japan, so we don't need this time.
Is SLDR drivers sldr 460 8°(Toe Screw)?
Is any other loft else?

And another question, is it impossible to hang TourIssueitem on eBay?
It is great if there are variety kinds of products as when hung on eBay.

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#habit

When could you refund the jetspeed to me [mistrainslation]?

Regarding the RBZ TOUR PROTO Irons, I am interested in it [antecedent?]. However, we don't know whether it is necessarily [parts of speech] in Japan, so we don't need this time.
Is SLDR drivers [s-v agreement] sldr 460 8°(Toe Screw)?
Is any other loft else [?]?

And another question, is it impossible to hang [usage] the TourIssueitem on eBay?
It is great if there are variety kinds of products as when hung [tense] on eBay.

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I'm sorry that the rent should be cancled and I'm going to handle procedures of rufund.
1. Please reply the email after completing filling the form attached
2. The fee of cancelation will be deducted from refund as written on document

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Unfortunately, the rent should be cancled and we are going to handle procedures of rufund.
1. Please reply the email after completely filling the form attached
2. The fee of cancelation will be deducted from refund as written on document

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I would like to apologize to you sincerely for you are not satisfied with the product in our business.
↵
I'm sorry that you gave eBay Negative for feedback.
↵
Then, there are 2 proposal.

1. Please return the product by Air mail. I will pay for the shipment as soon as the product arrived.
↵
2. If you are not going to return the product, I will give you $30 for gift.
If you could change Negative to Positive, I will pay you via Paypall

Please inform me which one you will choose.

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I would like to apologize to you sincerely for you are not satisfied with the product.
I'm sorry that you gave negative feedback on eBay.
Then, there are 2 proposals.

1. Please return the product by air mail. I will pay for the shipment as soon as the product arrived [tense confusión].
2. If you are not going to return the product, I will give you $30 for a gift.
If you could change negative to positive, I will pay you via Paypall

Please inform me which one you will choose.

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Do you have it from when you were 10 years old?
I am a beginner.

Your age is the same with my mother.
However, you are so skillful at internet.

This is a traditional Japanese craft and it is difficult to be found in other countries.

By the way, have you sent photo to me?
Please send it again.

In addition, I have found a big size box as you requested.
But it is a little bit wider.
And the cap will be settled by hinge.

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Have you had it since you were 10 years old?
I am only a beginner.

You are the same age as my mother is.
However, you are so skillful at internet.

This is a traditional Japanese craft and it is difficult to be found in other countries.

By the way, have you sent the photo to me?
Please send it again.

In addition, I have found a big size box as you requested.
But it is a little bit wider.
And the cap will be settled by hinge.

元の翻訳
I have confirmed the contents of the translation right now, the workload is unexpected.
So please postpone the deadline to 9am on 10/1, German time.
Thank you

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I have just confirmed the contents of the translation, and the workload is less than expected.
So please change the deadline to 9 am on 10/1, German time.
Thank you

元の翻訳
貴方がヨーロッパ事務所にいるEric　Hansonへのリクエストを期待していました。↵
時差の為彼が月曜日に出社のようです。
彼のメールアドレスは○○。

下記の受信者の受信は永久にできません
永久に受信できない技術詳細
Googleがメッセージの送信をしていたが、受信者のFilter02のサーバーに拒否されました
サーバーからエラーの詳細は下記
550 No such user (am)

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貴方のメールはヨーロッパオフィスのEric　Hansonへ転送いたしましたが、時差がありますので、返事はおそらく月曜日になると思います。
彼のメールアドレスは○○。

下記の受信者へ送信できませんでした。
送信できなかった理由：
送信を試みたが、受信者側のドメイン am のサーバに拒否されました。
サーバーからエラーの詳細は下記
550 No such user (am)

元の翻訳
The reason that refund had not been done is because it is very dangerous to do so individual via Paypal.
For example, it is still probably receive a second claim through eBay requiring refund after finishing refund from Paypal.
Especially it is common in foreigners, please attention.↵
So I would like to refund to you via eBay.

I think you look very honest so I will refund you by Paypal.
However, it costs over 1 month to reach you, so I am asked to pay the fee of eBay or Paypal.
So the shipment charge will not be returned.

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The reason why you have not been refunded yet is because it is very dangerous to do so individually via Paypal.
For example, it is still probably receive a second claim through eBay requiring refund after completing a refund on Paypal.
This kind of scam is especially common among foreigners so I am always very careful. Because of this I usually prefer to refund only via eBay.

You do seem honest to me, so I will give you a refund.
However, it took more than a month to arrive here, so I have to pay a high commission both to eBay and Paypal.
Because of this, I will not be refunding you for the shipment fees incurred in order to return the article.

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I don't know well about the Canadian post.
However, it only takes 2 weeks by air without a tracking number from USA to Japan.

Maybe you're not satisfied with the purchasement,
please understand that it was me to surfer the serious losses.

If you are not suppose to return the product,
we will refund $60 to you to resolve the trouble.

The product is very difficult to get in Japan,
so I think it could be a great collection.

If you return it, please undertake $30, half of the shipment.

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I don't know well about postal services in Canada.
However, it only takes 2 weeks by air without a tracking number from USA to Japan.

Maybe you're not satisfied with the purchase, but
please understand that it was me who surfferd serious losses.

If you are not suppose to return the product,
we will refund you $60 to resolve the trouble.

The product is very difficult to get in Japan,
so I think it could be a great collection.

If you return it, please undertake $30, half of the shipment.

元の翻訳
2005年、06年各发行的最佳大碟都突破了200万张。
2007年12月于东京巨蛋举行单独公演，取得了巨大成功
2008年6月发行的单曲<MOON>中收录了与黑眼豆豆FERGEi合作曲<That Ain't Cool"PUSHIM">，雷鬼爱好者作词作曲的一曲以及与国外著名艺人合作曲共4首

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2005年、06年各发行的最佳大碟都突破了200万张。
2000年12月于东京巨蛋举行单独公演，取得了巨大成功。

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending account form.

There are some questions when I was filling in it.
Is it necessary to fill in 「Accts. Payable Name」?
What shall I write down?

Is it also necessary to fill in 「Freight Forwarder」?
Since I have a coorperation with freight forwarder from Florida to Japan,
could I write down the company's name?

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Thank you for sending account form.

There are some questions that I found when I was filling in it.
Is it necessary to fill in ”Accts. Payable Name”?
What shall I write down?

Is it also necessary to fill in ”Freight Forwarder”?
I have a coorperation with freight forwarder from Florida to Japan.
Could I write down the company's name?

元の翻訳
Hello.

Since I would like to know about the distribution status, please inform me about the delivery company and tracking number.
Thank you

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Hello.

Please inform me of the shipping company and the tracking number for the shipment as I would like to check on the shipment status.
Thank you

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I'm sorry that I could not understand the meaning of the words.
This is not the common word used in nowadays, and it's difficult to research.
I'm not sure if I could find out it, if I did, I would like to contact you.
Thanks for understanding.

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I'm sorry that I could not understand the meaning of the [letters/characters/Kanji].
This is not a common [letter....] used nowadays, and it's difficult to research.
I'm not sure if I can find out anything about it, if I can, I will contact you.
Thanks for understanding.

元の翻訳
-300 at the profit of AN column of GD, make "cancled by private company" as purchasing status, paint the whole line grey and complete the abolishment.

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Have 300 at the profit of AN column of GD, make "canceled by own company" as purchasing status, paint the whole line grey and complete the cancelation

元の翻訳
I can't believe such unfair treatment. He was treated as enemy by friends, family and others.

He lost the thought of leaving home. Further more, he knew that the money he received from wife who is a homeless, is all save for KANEMOTO. He used the money to fund Okay web.

Then fortune came endlessly. The community site made by the beginning members for communication was adopted by NTT related company as official website, and they purchased the development.
The site gets a great praise, and over 100 major companies import the knowledge software.
In this intense field, he digged a big goldmine

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I can't believe such unfair treatment. He was treated as enemy by friends, family and others [mistranslation].

He lost the thought of leaving home [mistranslation]. Further more, he knew that the money he received from wife who is a homeless [mistranslation], is all save for KANEMOTO. He used the money to fund Okay web.

Then fortune came endlessly. The community site made by the beginning members [mistranslation] for communication was adopted by NTT related company as official website, and they purchased the development [mistranslation].
The site gets [tense confusion] a great praise, and over 100 major companies import [tense confusion] the knowledge software.
In this intense field, he dug a big goldmine.

元の翻訳
10. If you have decided the shop and amounts, input the product's title in <PRODUCT'S NAME> of GD where you purchased.
And then input the monetary, if you remit the money by cash in <Purchase by cash>, if it is credit card payment then in <Purchase by credit>.
And paste the supplier's URL in < Purchasing URL>.
When the purchasing completed, put the "Complete" in <Purchasing status>

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10. If you have decided the shop and amounts, input the product's title in <PRODUCT'S NAME> of GD where you purchased.
And then input the amount of money, if you remit the money by cash in <Purchase by cash>, if it is credit card payment then in <Purchase by credit>.
And paste the supplier's URL in < Purchasing URL>.
When the order is completed, put the "Complete" in <Purchasing status>.

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The new charactor of KARARIO is AKB's MAYUYU

Manufacture and sales of the printers which used the lastest technology, SEIKO EPSON and EPSON supporting decorates of event halls will be released on 9/2, at the "EPSON KARARIO NEW PRODUCT & CM CHARACTOR PRESENTATION" in TOKYO DOME HOTEL.

As a new product faced to consumers, starting with the KARARIO series, ink-jet printer renew the lineup involved 12 types of machine.

At the presentation, as the new character from DARARIO CM "MAYUYU", AKB's WATANABE MAYU attended as a guest and introduced the new CM

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The new charactor of KARARIO is AKB's MAYUYU

SEIKO EPSON and Epson Sales, which support the decoration of the event hall, have manufactured and sold the printer using used the lastest technology and held the "EPSON KARARIO NEW PRODUCT & CM CHARACTOR PRESENTATION" in TOKYO DOME HOTEL on 9/2.

As a new product for consumers, starting with the KARARIO series, the ink-jet printers have renewed the lineup involving 12 types of machine.

At the presentation, as the new character from DARARIO CM "MAYUYU", AKB's WATANABE MAYU attended as a guest and introduced the new CM