玉玲 秦 (raidou) — もらったレビュー

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Convention of 6 regions held the JOINT WORKSHOP on the Tokyo Bay cruise ship at 7/24.
About 60 persons from society who is person in charge attended it.

Convention of 6 regions are the group of SENDAI, NIIGATA, MATSUMOTO CONVENTION ASSOCIATION, SIGA/BIWAKO VISITORS BUREAU, TATAKATSU TOURISM CONVENTION BUREAU, NAGASAKI TOURISM LEAGUE/ NAGASAKI-SHI AND SASEBO-SHI.
They hold workshops or sessions together in the year, and expanse the convention invitation activity by the coorperation of each group.

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Convention of 6 regions held the JOINT WORKSHOP [why in cap?] on the Tokyo Bay cruise ship at 7/24.
About 60 persons from society who is person in charge attended it [ungrammatical, unreadable].

Convention of 6 regions are the group of SENDAI, NIIGATA, MATSUMOTO CONVENTION ASSOCIATION, SIGA/BIWAKO VISITORS BUREAU, TATAKATSU TOURISM CONVENTION BUREAU, NAGASAKI TOURISM LEAGUE/ NAGASAKI-SHI AND SASEBO-SHI [why in cap?].
They hold workshops or sessions together in the year, and expanse the convention invitation activity by the coorperation [spelling] of each group.

元の翻訳
今、Xiaomiのユーザーが8月5日の三回目フラッシュセールのため、改めてログインしなければならない。
そしてMi３のブームが帰った。このブームはインディア発のTwitteratiから面白いに可笑しい反応より刺激された。
下記のように：Xiaomi　Mi3の発売は時間をかけてユーザーにXiaomiの読み方をおしえていた。

— Kingslayer (@Goddamittt) July 29, 2014

XiaomiはおそらくFlipkartで使用可能の数より、ブロガーに多くのMi3レビュー単位を配った

Xiaomiのマーケティングでは「フラッシュセール」の形が一番効いた、その結果はマスコミの拡大。
Xiaomiはマーケティングを削減し、直接ユーザーに届くのを理念としている。

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これからXiaomiのユーザーは8月5日の三回目フラッシュセールのため、改めて登録し直さなければならない。
そしてMi３の獲得ブームが再び始まった。このブームはインド発のTwitteratiで面白おかしく取り上げられた。
例えば下記のように：Xiaomi　Mi3の発売は終わった。ユーザーがXiaomiの読み方を知る前に。

— Kingslayer (@Goddamittt) July 29, 2014

XiaomiはおそらくFlipkartで購入可能の数より、ブロガーに多くのMi3のレビューを配った

Xiaomiのマーケティングでは「フラッシュセール」の形が一番効いた、その結果はマスコミの反応の増大。
Xiaomiはマーケティングを削減し、その分を直接ユーザーに届くのを理念としている。

元の翻訳
Sorry, could you pls confirm the mail from Olympas and reopen the account ?

thank you

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I am sorry to bother you, but could you please reactivate the account after the confirmation of the mail from Olympus?

Thank you

元の翻訳
謝る必要はありません。

最近の国際送料は安くありません。なのでわたしに返送料金を送ってもらえますか？
またこちらに来てピックアップしてください。

どうも

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返信ありがとうございます。↵
↵
これらのことについて謝る必要はありません。

最近の国際送料は安くありません。そのため、もし可能であればわたしに返送料金を送ってもらえますか？
或いはそちらの負担で運送業者を手配してください。

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
I could receive the maximum about 50USD

I am very appreciate with your coorperation of the returning and your friendly attitude.

So I would like to do my best to repay to you asap

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I will receive the maximum 50USD.

I am very appreciated with your coorperation of the returning and your friendly attitude.
Thank you.
↵
So I would like to do my best to repay to you asap.

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The invoice has not been attached with the product you have shipped.
So that the product is now stopped at custom.
Please send invoice asap to the email which is my paypal account.
The product will back to you if there is no invoice.

Thank you very much for shortly respond.

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The invoice was not attached to the product you have shipped.
For this reason, the product is now stopped at customs.
Please email the invoice to my paypal account ASAP.
The product will be returned to you without the invoice.

Thank you very much for your prompt action.

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Thank you for your message.

I don't like the product in color, so please let me cancel it.
Thank you very much.
And I would like to research the battery.

Thank you for your message.
Okay.Please return the product.
We will confirm it.
If there is any fault we will repair and ship it again.

Thanks for message.
The shipment has been fixed tomorrow, please kindly wait for another moments.

Sorry, the settlement of the product has been completed.
Please reprocess the credit card again.

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Thank you for your message.

If you are not happy about the item's color, so please cancel your order.
Thank you very much.
And we will investigate about the battery at our end.

Thank you for your message.
We have understood your situation.↵
Please return the product.
We will confirm it.
If there is any fault we will repair and ship it back to you again.

Thanks for message.
The shipment will be made tomorrow, please kindly wait for another moments.

We are sorry, but the payment for this item has not been settled yet.
Please retry the credit card payment process again.

元の翻訳
So, I would like to purchase another 5 pcs of the same product.
All 6 pcs.
By the way, could it be shipped to Japan?
If it is possible, please tell me the price of 6 pcs including shipment.

Thanks a lot.

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So, I would like to purchase another 5 pcs of the same product.
All 6 pcs.
By the way, could it be shipped to Japan?
If it is possible, please tell me how much the shipment fee for 6 pcs is.

Thanks a lot.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
The color in picture is the same with the products.

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Thank you for your message.
The color in the products is the same with the picture.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I am not good at English.
I would like to clean up the information.↵
I will buy it again, so please tell me about Tour Issue SLDR Head( Toe Screw)↵
Looking forward to your reply

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I apologize for the inconvenience caused by my poor English.
As I need to organize the information again, please let me know Tour Issue SLDR Head (Toe Screw) that is available to purchase right now.↵
I am positive about the purchase and I would appreciate your response in advance.

元の翻訳
Thanks for message.
We garuantee to repair it if there is an initial opreration or initial error.
Best regards.

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Thanks for message.
We guarantee to repair it if there is an initial failure.
Best regards.

元の翻訳
Thanks for reply.

We could supply the product for 1200USD.
But you should pay it previously, we will refund the rest of amount.


Thank you for your messenge.
I'm regret that we don't have discription in English because it's Japanese product.


Thanks for E-mail.
Sure, we will send the product to the address you advised.


Thanks for messenge.
Return Policy is as followed

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Thanks for your reply.

We could supply the product for 1200USD.
But you should pay it previously, we will refund the rest of amount.


Thank you for your message.
I regret that we don't have description in English because it's Japanese product.


Thanks for E-mail.
Sure, we will send the product to the address you advised.


Thanks for message.
Return Policy is as follows.

元の翻訳
当時、Sol　Republic主な流通チャンネルはApple, RadioShackとBest Buy.

”実体の詳細”。会社の部門。デラウェアの国務長官。
Siemers, Erik (December 16, 2011). ”Sol　Republicは騒音を作ってる”。ポートランド・ビジネス・ジャーナル
Rogoway, Mike (April 26, 2014). ”Sol Republic ”はファッションとテクノロジーをブレンドして、賑やかなAVマーケットに自分の立場を探している。
Siemers, Erik (July 13, 2012)　”Sol Republic ”の売上は22百万ドールを増加した。

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当時、Sol　Republicの主な流通チャンネルはApple, RadioShackとBest Buy.

”実体の詳細”。会社の部門。デラウェアの国務長官。
Siemers, Erik (December 16, 2011). ”Sol　Republicは騒音を作ってる”。ポートランド・ビジネス・ジャーナル
Rogoway, Mike (April 26, 2014). ”Sol Republic ”はファッションとテクノロジーをブレンドして、賑やかなAVマーケットに自分の立場を探している。
Siemers, Erik (July 13, 2012)　”Sol Republic ”の売上は22百万ドールを増加した。

元の翻訳
Hello, how are you?

The mail sent last Friday hasn't been replied yet.
Which is witten as...

++++++++
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Have you received the mail?
It is greatful if I can get your reply asap.

Thank you very much.
Your best,

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Hello, how are you?

The mail sent last Friday hasn't been replied yet awkward].
Which is witten [spelling] as...

++++++++
++++++

Have you received the email?
It is greatful [spelling] if I can get your reply asap.

Thank you very much.
Your best,