玉玲 秦 (raidou) — もらったレビュー

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分居后我和女兒的見面次數按照妻子的要求僅有每2個月1次。

分局后我每月支付給妻子＄?不含稅。是直到女兒到3嵗爲止的約定。10月22日她就要3嵗了。
我想之後根據協調直到決定金額還需支付＄１０００吧。

目前妻子的要求是，單獨撫養權。還沒有詳細説到撫養費的要求。

雖然我想每周都見女兒一次，但是她說已經很多了。但是離婚協調將在文件后才進行。

我想和女兒在妻子不在的情況下見面，但是妻子卻不願意讓我和女兒單獨會面。

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分居后我和女兒的見面次數按照妻子的要求僅有每2個月1次。

分居後我每月支付給妻子＄?不含稅。是直到女兒到3歲爲止的約定。10月22日她就要3歲了。
我想之後根據協調直到決定金額還需支付＄１０００吧。

目前妻子的要求是，單獨撫養權。還沒有詳細説到撫養費的要求。

雖然我想每周都見女兒一次，但是她說已經很多了。但是離婚協調將在文件後才進行。

我想和女兒在妻子不在的情況下見面，但是妻子卻不願意讓我和女兒單獨會面。

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京都市写真馆“红叶COLLECTION”决定举办！

大获好评的“祇园祭COLLECTION“之后，作为秋季特别企划，举办”红叶COLLECTION“。
与通常的”最佳照片“不同，我们将从向”红叶“栏目投稿的照片中选取优秀作品并发表。

尽可能多地选择“红叶COLLECTION”。预定每周更新发表作品。
记录下色彩丰富的京都的山以及街道，请用您得意的一张照片来应募吧！

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京都市写真馆“红叶COLLECTION”决定举办！

在大获好评的“祇园祭COLLECTION“之后，作为秋季特别企划，将举办”红叶COLLECTION“。
除”最佳照片“外，我们还将从向”红叶“栏目投稿的照片中选取优秀作品并发表。

“红叶COLLECTION”将尽可能地选择更多的照片。预定每周更新发表作品。
记录下色彩丰富的京都的山群以及街道，请用您得意的一张照片来参选吧！

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If it is possible to purchase few quantity of the item, please contact us.

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If it becomes possible to purchase the item in a small quantity, please contact us.

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If it is possible to purchase few quantity of the item, please contact us.

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Please contact us when it becomes possible to place orders for small quantities of that product.

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He has arrived in Japan for 2 months. We are very satisfied.
We have an import request to you.
If you have received the Serval's offer from xxx in Japan, we hope you will reject it. The reason why is they are the oppsite party from my judgement, who said he doesn't need the children who grew up under your education. Serval you brought up by heart is our family. However, XX takes them as a thing but not family. He is terrible. Be careful.
I am drawing Dessan of Serval by heart to you. Thank you for giving me a great dream.

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2 months have passed since they arrived in Japan. We are very satisfied.
We have an important request to you.
If you receive Serval's offer from xxx in Japan, please reject it. The reason why is they are the oppsite [spelling] party from my judgement, who said he doesn't need the children who grew up under your education [awkward]. Serval you brought up by heart is our family. However, XX considers them as an object but not a family. He is terrible. Be careful.
I am drawing Dessan [?] of Serval by heart to you. Thank you for giving me a great dream.

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Thank you for information.
Regarding to rejects, please send it back to the address as below.
As soon as you finished the procedure of returning, please send us the photo of receipt of postage as a mail attachment.
We would like to ship a new product out and rufund postage to you after confirmation.
Or we would like to give you all refund of product and postage.
Please suggest your idea.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Regarding to rejects [word choice], please send it [unclear antecedent] back to the address below.
As soon as you finish the procedure of returning [unnatural], please send us the photo of receipt of postage as an attachment.
We would like to ship a new product out and rufund [spelling] postage to you after confirmation.
Or we would like to give you a full refund of the product and postage.
Please suggest your idea.
Thank you very much.

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I would like to go to the store and purchase it by myself at the first time.
Our budget is totally around 3000 euro
Is it possible for you to sell us at the price excluding tax?
If you could, would you provide a discount to us?

* Since I would like to sell the products at almost the same price as I bought in the store, ↵
considering the freight, import tariff, comsumer tax, translation fee ( I cannot speak neither English or Italian) ↵
and operation charge of web shop, we were going to have a great deficit from pricing.

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I would like to go to the store and purchase it by myself at the first time.
Our total budget is around 3000 euros
Is it possible for you to sell us at the wholesale price excluding tax?
If you could, would you provide a discount to us?

*Since I would like to sell the products at almost the same price as I bought in the store, considering the freight, import tariff, comsumer [spelling] tax, translation fee (I cannot speak either English or Italian) and operation charge of the web shop, we were going to have a great deficit from pricing.

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Have you shipped out the items we purchased on Tuesday dated 10th?
Usually we receive the email of Invoice and Tracking Number on Thursday however we have not received yet this week.
Has the delivery been delayed?

Regarding the products returned by customer days before, after the investigation we concluded that since there was no serious splodge and no problem for sale. We appreciate for your intention but there is unnecessary to return the product and we would sell it again.

It is supposed to be restored at the beginning of March, and have you shipped them out?

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Have you shipped out the items we purchased on Tuesday dated 10th?
Usually we receive the email of Invoice and Tracking Number on Thursday however we have not received yet this week.
Has the delivery been delayed?

Regarding the products returned by customer days before, after the investigation we concluded that there was no serious splodge and no problem for sale. We appreciate for your intention but there is unnecessary to return the product and we would sell it again.

It is supposed to be restored at the beginning of March, and have you shipped them out?

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We received the mail from your company the other days mentioned that over 100 pcs could be manufactured.
However, what about 100pcs? Please advise that why 100pcs could not be manufactured.

Since our company established right away and we need founds to purchasing, we are going to issue purchase order progressively.

If you could not offer 100pcs we would like to return your sample.
Is 300pcs okay for you?

Please advise the payment method.
How long will it take to shipout?
We would like to know about shipping method.

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We received the mail from your company the other day mentioning that over 100 pcs could be manufactured.
However, what about 100 pcs? Please advise why 100 pcs could not be manufactured.

Since our company established right away [unclear] and we need founds [word confusion] to purchase, we are going to issue a purchase order progressively.

If you could not offer 100 pcs, we would like to return your sample [different from the original].
Is 300 pcs okay for you?

Please advise the payment method.
How long will it take to ship out?
We would like to know about [article ]shipping method.

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I'm very glad you like the present.
It was christmas present, however it took much more time of delivery than I thought lol

You may find out that in the animation book "oooo", the animation will change according to the page, it is an interesting detail.
There is a video on Youtube, here is URL

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I'm very glad you like the present.
It was Christmas present, but it took such a long time for delivery (lol).

You may find out that in the animation book "oooo" the animation will change according to the page you flip to, which is an interesting detail.
There is a video on YouTube, and here is the URL.

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Long time no see.

For the effect of yen devaluation, the sales amount don't increase.
We ordered the purchase through staff the other day.

We look forward to the business with you this year.

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Long time no see [wrong register].

For the effect of yen devaluation, the sales amount don't [s-v agreement] increase.
We made a purchase through our staff the other day.

We look forward to doing business with you this year.

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To those who are person in charge

Hello, my name is XX
I send you this mail to inform you that I would like my account of the store to be closed

If any message is necessary, please refer the following

The reason I would like to close my account is that
I considered of the direction of business and found there is no need to remain it.

Thank you very much

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To whom it may concern,

Hello, my name is XX.
I send you this email to inform you that I would like my account of the store to be closed

Below is the information needed.

The reason I would like to close my account is that
I considered of the direction of business and found there is no need to keep it.

Thank you very much

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Is it possible to deal with you the following products?
"Item"
If it is possible please send quotation.

Since we have received some customers inquired about the item, we look forward to make a deal with you
Thank you

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Is it possible to deal with you the following products?
"Item"
If it is possible please send quotation.

Since we have received some customers inquired about the item, we look forward to making a deal with you
Thank you

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I have checked Paypal account, however it doesn't show you have finished wiring payment.
Usually after finishing the payment by Paypal, there is a mark displayed on eBay.

The whetstones displayed in my store are all authenticated by professional cutlery polisher,↵
so i am very confident in the quality of my products.

This is the highest quality in the stones i possess.

However, according to the material of cutlery, the polishing is changeable,↵
it is necessary to polish the cutlery at first in order to check whether it is good or not.

I don't know much about the stones abroad so i could not answer your question.

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I have checked my PayPal account, but it doesn't show that you have made your payment.
Usually after finishing the payment by PayPal, there is a mark displayed on eBay.

The whetstones displayed in my store are all authenticated by a professional cutlery polisher, so I am very confident in the quality of my products.

This is the highest quality of the stones I possess.

However, according to the material of cutlery, the polishing is changeable [unclear], so it is necessary to polish the cutlery at first in order to check whether it is good or not.

I don't know much about the stones abroad, so I could not answer your question.

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私は作品を完成するためハイエンドの砥石を探しています。これよりも細かいのがありますか？貴方の石を全部目を通したんですがこのとあの目立つ石は良い砥石でしょうか？
この砥石たちはヨーロッパのベルギーブランドCoticuleかドイツのEscherの石と同じ様にいいですか？

私は前の注文を支払いましたので確認をお願いします。

注文した番号は121366248368です

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私は作品を完成するためハイエンドの砥石を探しています。これよりも細かいのがありますか？貴方の石に全部目を通したのですがこの目立つ石は良質な砥石でしょうか？
この砥石はヨーロッパのベルギーブランドCoticuleかドイツのEscherの石と同じ様にいいものですか？

私は前の注文分の支払いをしましたが間違いがあると思いますので確認をお願いします。

注文した番号は121366248368です

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I'm X running a intrument store in Japan.
I am planning to go to the N show next year.
Since we are not intrument manufacture, so we go there for business talk but not participate in booth.
We wish we could find products adopt Japanese market by looking around all the product in the world like America.

We have got the account the other day and 3 staffs and me will go there from Japan.
Could you tell me where and how to buy badges, how to handle it out?
Please kindly give us advices.

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I'm X running an intrument [spelling] store in Japan.
I am planning to go to the N show next year.
Since we are not an intrument [spelling] manufacture [word confusion], so we go there for business talk but not participate in a booth.
We wish we could find products to adopt the Japanese market [unclear] by looking around all the products in the world like America [unclear].

We have got [unclear] the account the other day and 3 staffs [uncountable noun] and me [parts of speech confusion] will go there from Japan.
Could you tell me where and how to buy badges, how to handle it [unclear antecedent] out?
Please kindly give us advices [uncountable noun].

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I appreciate that we shipped products before recieved your mail.
We still researching that whether the package is in the post office.
We will keep you informed.

The package has been delivered from post office.
Could you resend the product after receiving it? We will refund to you ASAP.
And we are sorry that please assume the shipment

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I appreciate that we shipped products before recieved [spelling] your mail.
We [verb missing] still researching [unnatural] whether the package is in {wrong proposition} the post office.
We will keep you informed.

The package has been delivered from the post office.
Could you resend the product after receiving it? We will refund you ASAP.
And we are sorry that please [ungrammatical] assume the shipment↵

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I appreciate that we shipped products before recieved your mail.
We still researching that whether the package is in the post office.
We will keep you informed.

The package has been delivered from post office.
Could you resend the product after receiving it? We will refund to you ASAP.↵
And we are sorry that please assume the shipment

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I apologize. We shipped the products before receiving your email.
We are now checking whether the package is still in the post office.
We will keep you informed. Thank you for your patience.

The package has already been shipped out of the post office.
We apologize for the trouble, but could you send the products back to us when you receive them? We will give you a refund as soon as we receive them back. We are sorry but you will have to assume the shipping fees.

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すみませんが、お客さんにもう既に可笑しいな事が起こっています。私の届け先は日本なのになぜ国際送料になってしまうのが知りたいだけです。
私が知っている限り、貴方、それに商品は日本にあるはずです。もし送料は安くなりましたら、返金をもらえないでしょうか？
もう一度すみませんが、不便を起こってないことを祈ります。
最後に、私は重要な詳細を見通したかもしれませんが、説明だけが欲しいです。

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顧客にとって異例の事態へと発展することとなり申し訳ありません。ただ私が知りたいのは私の届け先は日本なのになぜ国際送料になってしまうのかという点です。
私が知っている限りでは、貴方はもちろんのこと、商品も日本にあるはずです。もし送料は安くなりましたら、差額を返金していただけないでしょうか？
返す返すお詫び申し上げるとともに、お客様にご不便となっていないことをお祈り申し上げます。
最後に、私は重要な詳細を見落としたかもしれませんが、詳しくご説明いただけると幸いです。

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お時間を頂いて貴方の考え方をご教示してありがとうございます。トラブルが行ってお客様からのご教示を感謝します。貴方の限界を増やすの大切さを存知していますが、スムーズに進めなくて大変お詫びを申し上げます。それは高く気をつけ、そして協力で解決し、当たり前なことをされませんのでご安心ください。因みに私はeBayカスタマサービスのArvieと申します。本日お客様に役立てればと思います。

さやこさん、貴方のアカウントと前他のスタッフとの会話を徹底的にレビューしましたが、レビューの結果を既に通知していました。

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お時間を頂いて貴方の考え方をご教示いただきありがとうございます。トラブルがあってからの客様のご教示感謝します。貴方の限界を増やすことの大切さを存じていますが、スムーズに進まなかっとこと大変お詫びを申し上げます。それは高く気をつけ、そして協力で解決し、当たり前なことをされませんのでご安心ください。因みに私はeBayカスタマサービスのArvieと申します。本日お客様に役立てればと思います。

さやこさん、貴方のアカウントと前他のスタッフとの会話を徹底的にレビューしましたが、レビューの結果を既に通知していました。