Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

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I got feedback from customers.

I understand I can hit the ball more closely and increase the power to hit. Do you know any other advantage if we use this bat in practice?↵
Does the ball go further if I swing compactly?

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The customer has given us feedback.

Though I realize that this bat allows me to hit the ball with it approaching and the meet force increases, what are other merits of practicing with this bat? Will the flying distance of the ball also increase once I have stopped swinging the bat remotely?

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I felt regret to read your mail very much.
You sent a fake letter to us, but you never apologize for that, Far from it, you requested us the sign back of the receiver.
This is indeed a receiver information phishing.
The important thing on business is how to cope with problems. This time we could avoid the issue before happens, but if we had received the sign on the document, we would have lost our trust.
Are you still going to recommend this case to others in the future, either?

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I felt regret to read your mail very much.
You sent a fake document to us, but you never apologize for that, On the contrary, you requested us the sign back of the receiver.
This is indeed a receiver information phishing.
The important thing on business is how to cope with problems. This time we could avoid the issue before happens, but if we had received the sign on the document, we would have lost our trust.
Are you still going to recommend this case to others in the future, either?

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I'll ship the item bend because of size rule.

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The item will be folded for shipment due to the rules of the size.

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Good evening.

I thought that the product supports multiple languages because it is a Sony product, but when I checked the user's manual it turns out that it is only in Japanese.

As you requested, I will accept the product return.
The return shipping fee is $20.
(Shipping from our store to you is ¥2180.)

Please deliver the product to the following address.

After the product has arrived and after we perform an inspection, we will refund $320 to you.

Thank you.

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Good evening.

I thought that the product supported multiple languages because it is a Sony product, but when I checked the user's manual it turns out that it is only in Japanese.

As you requested, we will accept the product return.
The return shipping fee is $20.
(Shipping from our store to you cost ¥2180.)

Please return the product to the following address.

We will refund $320 to you after we have received the product and inspected it.

Thank you.

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わたしはそのカメラを書いたいと思っていますが、Paypalではなく銀行による送金でしか支払いができません。(今中国にいまして、滞在中にわたしの携帯で現地のクソみたいなセキュリティーリクエストによって購入をキャンセルされないために、PayPalのアカウントを停止しました。)

また他にContax T3が買える所があるので、もし2時間以内に返事がなければそちらの商品を購入します。(大体は金額が違っているだけで、あまり金額に関しては気にしてないので、少しくらい高くても安くても構いません。)

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そのカメラはよさそうですね。↵
しかし、Paypalではなく銀行振込でしか支払いができません。(今中国にいまして、滞在中にわたしの携帯で現地の手際が悪いセキュリティーリクエストによって購入をキャンセルされないために、PayPalのアカウントを停止しました。)

また他にContax T3が買える所があるので、もし2時間以内に返事がなければそちらの商品を購入します。(大体は金額が違っているだけで、あまり金額に関しては気にしてないので、少しくらい高くても安くても構いません。)

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Thank you for your message.

I will return the item back to you by EMS, not using the label attached.
Once I complete returning the item, I will send a bill attached to an e-mail article.

Also, I would like you to accept the returning the items of following order numbers because of the same reason.
Both backpacks possibly have been updated to new models now.

I would like to pack those two items into one package and to send it to you, but can I use the same destination address for those two?

I am looking forward to your reply.

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Thank you for your message.

I will return the item back to you by EMS without using the attached label.
Once I have returned the item, I will e-mail you with the bill on the attached file.

Also, I would like you to accept the returning items of the following order numbers because of the same reason.
Both backpacks possibly have been updated to new models now.

I would like to pack those two items into one package and to send it to you.↵
Can I use the same destination address for those two?

I am looking forward to your reply.

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Thanks for your purchase.
Sorry for not being able to reply to your email.

Actually, there is a customer whom I have been talking to previously, and that person bought it in Japan first.
I apologize for the delay in update on eBay.

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Thank you for your purchase.
I am sorry I did not reply to your email earlier.

Actually, there is a customer with whom I have discussed business deals, and he bought the item in Japan first.
I apologize for the delay in update on eBay.

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Thank you for your purchase.
I'm sorry for the late response.

In fact, I have a client considering of purchasing our product and the person has just bought the product first in Japan.
I apologize for the late reflection of it on eBay.

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Thank you for your purchase.
I'm sorry for the late response.

In fact, I have a client with whom I have been discussing business matters and he/ she has just bought the product first in Japan.
I apologize for the late reflection of it on eBay.

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Please be sure to settle the payment from your Paypal's account in order to prevent fraudulent transactions.
The delivery address will be the shipping address registered in the Paypal transaction history.
I am sorry for the inconvenience but please cancel it once, would you order again? Then you can select the Paypal settlement.

Bank settlement is only available in Japan. I apologize it was mistakenly displayed on overseas sales.
For the total price will be JPY13,000YEN.

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Please be sure to settle the payment from your Paypal's account in order to prevent fraudulent transactions.
The delivery address will be the shipping address registered in the Paypal transaction history.
I am sorry for the inconvenience but please cancel it once, would you order again? Then you can select the Paypal settlement.

Bank settlement is available only in Japan. I apologize it was mistakenly displayed on overseas sales.
For the total price will be JPY13,000YEN.

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Those 2 cards is limited edition which were handed out at the count down event of Pokemon card game 20th anniversary.
I put tthem into a hard case right after I got them so they are in a very good condition.

"M sachiko EX" cards were handed out to 100 visitors and "Suzukisan" cards were handed out 100 visitors + 50 selected people from Nikoniko video premium members which is total 150 people, so these cards are very rare.

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These 2 cards are the limited editions which were handed out at the count down event commemorating the Pokemon card game 20th anniversary.
I put them into a hard case right after I got them so they are in a very good condition.

"M sachiko EX" cards were handed out to 100 visitors and "Suzukisan" cards were handed out 100 visitors + 50 selected people from Nikoniko video premium members which is total 150 people, so these cards are very rare.

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In November, some students hope to change their subjects, the 80% students changed to Physics from Chemistry. so at present the students in Chemistry are only two.
Therefore, the students who take a lecture of Chemistry class on Sunday are only two, it is difficult to start classes. If students taking courses increase, the classes will be started.
Since we will contact according to the conditions, the class in November will be stopped.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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In November, some students hoped that they would change their subjects and 80% students of them changed to physics from chemistry. so at present the number of students taking chemistry is only two.
Therefore, the students who take a course of the chemistry class on Sunday are only two, which is difficult to start the classes. If the number of students taking the chemistry course increases, I will resume giving the class.
Since we will contact you based on the conditions, the class in November will be suspended.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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There are currently only 2 Chemistry learners because 80% of students changed their desired subject Chemistry to Physics since it turned November.
So it is difficult to open a class since there are only 2 students for Chemistry class on Sunday.
It will be open once more students come up and want to take the class in the future.
I will upload you with its situation so the class for November is stopped for now.
Thank you for your understanding.

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There are currently only 2 Chemistry learners because 80% of students changed their desired subject Chemistry to Physics since it turned November.
So it is difficult to open a class since there are only 2 students for the Chemistry class on Sunday.
It will be open once more students come up and want to take it in the future.
I will upload you with its situation so the class for November is suspended for the time being.
Thank you for your understanding.

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At about what time are you going to check in?
I don't have the key to the room.
I will show you around the room after picking you up.
The room is on the second floor of the green building.
Chiyoko is living on the 1st floor.
The entrance gate is a shutter.
If the shutter is closed, please go through the narrow path on the left.
When you enter the building, there is a stairway at the corner that leads to 2nd floor.
The electric switch is on the left of the toilet.
Since January 1st is New Year holiday, many stores are closed.
From January 2nd, it may possible to go strawberry picking.
I will contact you then.

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About what time are you going to check in?
I don't have the key to the room.
I will show you around the room after picking you up.
The room is on the second floor of the green building.
Chiyoko lives on the 1st floor.
The entrance gate is a shutter.
If the shutter is closed, please go through the narrow path on the left.
When you enter the building, there is a stairway at the corner that leads to the 2nd floor.
The electric switch is on the left of the toilet.
Since January 1st is New Year holiday, many stores are closed.
From January 2nd, it may be possible to go strawberry picking.
I will contact you then.

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I would like to sell your products on my WEB site,
but would it be possible for me to become your distributor?
Please tell me the conditions for me to be your distributor.

Also please tell me about Private Label.
Do you mean that I can sell your product □□□ as my brand ○○○?
If so, please tell me the condition for me to sell them in that way.

And, please also let me know the condition for us to place orders for the products which use ☆☆☆ independently.

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I would like to sell your products on my website,
but would it be possible for me to become your distributor?
Please tell me the conditions for me to be a distributor.

Also please tell me about the private label.
Do you mean that I can sell your product □□□ as my brand ○○○?
If so, please tell me the condition for me to sell them in that way.

And, please also let me know the condition for us to order the products which use ☆☆☆ independently.

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I am sorry but I cannot write the product price discounted for the postal matter.
Also, I cannot ship it to the address not registered on PayPal.
If you would like to ship it to another address, please cancel this order once. After changing the address to ship, please purchase it again.
However, the product price has changed. When you purchase it again, there is possibility that you cannot have the same price offer as this time, please understand it.
Thank you.

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I am sorry but I cannot write the discounted product price for the package.
Also, I cannot ship it to the address not registered on PayPal.
If you would like to ship it to another address, please cancel this order once. After changing the address to ship, please purchase it again.
However, the product price has changed. When you purchase it again, there is possibility that you cannot have the same price offer as this time, please understand it.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

We would be interested doing business with you.

We would be glad if would tell us these information.

・Your homepage
・Prediction on the monthly transactions quantity
・Transaction conditions you hope

Our transaction condition would be
・Payment be done via Paypal

That is all.

We hope that we will be able to become good business partners.

If there is anything you find unclear, please do not hesitate to ask.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

We would be interested in doing business with you.

We would be glad if you would give us your feedback regarding the following.

・Your homepage
・Prediction on the monthly transactions quantity
・Transaction conditions you hope

Our transaction condition would be
・Payment be done via Paypal

That is all.

We hope that we will be able to become good business partners.

If there is anything you find unclear, please do not hesitate to ask.

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Dear***,
I will reserve the content of the mail now.
However, as for payment, could I pay directly to your site or PayPal and etc.?
I would like to avoid to pay by non-code mail credit number and check code.
※　I plan to use Amex or Visa for closing.

The flight expecting is as bellow.
Company/ flight name/ route/time
Information of customers are the following 2 persons.
1.
2.
Please reply me as soon as possible as I would like to handle with it.
(P.S. Please let me know where to complain about Japanese information service)

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Dear***,
I will reserve based on what the e-mail shows.
Regarding payment, however, could I pay directly to your site or PayPal and etc.?
I would like to avoid sending my credit card number and check code via a non-code e-mail.
※ I plan to use Amex or Visa for closing.

The flight expecting is as bellow.
Company/ flight name/ route/time
Information of customers are the following 2 persons.
1.
2.
Please reply me as soon as possible as I would like to handle it.
(P.S. Please let me know where to complain regarding the quality of the Japanese information service)

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Inscription based on specific trade
We receive inquiries 24 hours by email regarding a business name, address, telephone number, and email address.
We display the representative name, operation environment of an application, and selling price each time you process purchasing on the screen.
Regarding other entailing costs,
You are obliged to pay the communication charge necessary to download such as application.

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Inscription based on specific trade
We receive inquiries 24 hours by email regarding a business name, address, telephone number, and email address.
We display the representative name, operation environment of an application, and selling price each time you process purchasing on the screen.
Regarding other entailing costs,
you are obliged to pay the communication charge necessary to download such as application.

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Thank you for contacting me.
It is unfortunate that the position has been closed. I will apply if there is another opportunity.

Naturally, I am interested in cloud projects.
I heard that GCP in DC is going to be held in the latter half of 2016.
I believe that this will cause an increase in the opportunity to gain more users.
Furthermore, in my case, I believe that my experience in infrastructure and SI operations so far will be of use.

Thank you for forwarding the URL.
I would like to watch the live broadcast of GCPNEXT keynote speech tonight.

Thank you for your continued patronage.

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Thank you for contacting me.
It is unfortunate that the position has been closed. I will apply if there is another opportunity.

Naturally, I am interested in cloud projects.
I heard that GCP in DC was going to be held in the latter half of 2016.
I believe that this will cause an increase in the opportunity to gain more users.
Furthermore, in my case, I believe that my experience in infrastructure and SI operations so far will be of use.

Thank you for forwarding the URL.
I would like to watch the live broadcast of GCPNEXT keynote speech tonight.

Thank you for your continued patronage.