Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

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Answer a survey! You can get 500 Yen of Starbucks coupon!

We are recruiting people who take a 10-mins survey.
Business person in the following area can take part in.

Otemachi, Yurakucho, Marunouchi
* Only workers in those area can take part in the survey this time.

The content of the survey is about business area in Tokyo.
First 300 persons only.

* This is a survey for non-Japanese residents, therefore Japanese can not join.

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Answer a survey! You can get Starbucks coupons worth 500 Yen!

We are expecting people who take a 10-mins survey.
Office workers in the following area can take part in.

Otemachi, Yurakucho, Marunouchi
* Only workers in these areas can take part in the survey this time.

The content of the survey is about the business areas in Tokyo.
First 300 persons only.

* This is a survey for non-Japanese residents, therefore Japanese cannot join.

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Thank you for your shopping at our shop.
Regarding the shipment to a different address, we had experienced some trouble that the item had not been delivered to the customer in spite that we shipped it to the specified address when we took care of the similar case.
We are sorry that we can send the item only to the buyer's address.
If you can accept it, we will arrange the shipment.
If not, we will cancel your order.
We appreciate if you can understand the circumstances.
First of all, we are looking forward to your reply.

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Thank you for your purchase.
Regarding the shipment to a different address, we had experienced some trouble that the item had not been delivered to the customer despite that we shipped it to the specified address when we took care of the similar case.
We are sorry that we can send the item only to the buyer's address.
If you can accept it, we will arrange the shipment.
If not, we will cancel your order.
We appreciate if you can understand the circumstances.
First of all, we are looking forward to your reply.

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We are very sorry that you had to return a product item due to wrong size.

We have been concerned about how to explain the size of item. Since they are products using very soft leather, there could be size gap between items depending on condition of leather or measurement. We should consider explaining to our customers that there may be error in size for some customers.

We have sent you an invoice. Please confirm that the billing address and the delivery address are correct.

Since the material leather becoming rare and scarce, it takes time to procure the product. It might take about 3 months this time to deliver you the product after confirming your payment.

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We are very sorry that you had to return the product due to its wrong size.

We have been concerned about how to explain the size of the item. Since those products use very soft leather, there could be a size gap among items depending on the condition of leather or measurement. We should consider explaining to our customers that there may be an error in the size for some customers.

We have sent you an invoice. Please confirm that the billing address and the delivery address are correct.

Since the material leather is becoming rare and scarce, it takes time to procure it. It might take about 3 months this time to deliver you the product after confirming your payment.

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we are sorry that you have returned a product because of the size difference. we will make sure to pay more attention when we make products.

as for the discription of size setting, it has been big problem for us. It is the soft product using a leather, it can cause the difference in size depending on the leather condition or the way to put a leather. should it be better to explain it to customers in advance.

we have issued an invoice. please confirm if the both invoice and delivery addresses are correct.

since the leather as material of the product is becoming hard to find, it takes time to stock the product. it would also take 3 months after we confirm your payment this time.

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We are sorry that you have returned a product because of the size difference. We will make sure to pay more attention when we make products.

As for the discription of size setting, it has been a big problem for us. It is the soft product using leather, it can cause the difference in size depending on the leather condition or the way to put a leather. Should it be better to explain it to customers in advance?

We have issued an invoice. Please confirm if the both invoice and delivery addresses are correct.

Since the leather as material of the product is becoming hard to find, it takes time to stock the product. It would also take 3 months after we confirm your payment this time.

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Of course, I trust you and your company.
But I did not know that we own the mould.
It is quite a surprise and good luck for me.

If you do not sell it to another seller and entrust the sales in Japan to me, it is all right if the price is higher than 3 dollars. It will also good for your company that you do not have to handle the troublesome shipment and reduction of the price. If I sell many, a number of sellers will inquire about purchasing this item.
I will sell at the major EC website in Japan.
As for box, the one we have used before is fine.

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Of course, I trust you and your company.
But I did not know that you would own the mould.
It is quite a surprise and good luck for me.

If you do not sell it to another seller and entrust the sales in Japan to me, it is all right if the price is higher than 3 dollars. It will also be good for your company that you do not have to handle the troublesome shipment and reduction of the price. If I sell many, a number of sellers will inquire about purchasing this item.
I will sell at the major EC website in Japan.
As for the box, the one we have used before is fine.

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(1)
Please send ordered goods to the company named myus.com in Florida or directly to Japan.

I would like to select the cheaper one regarding the shipping cost.

(2)
I do not have a credit card issued in United States.

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(1)
Please send ordered goods to the company named myus.com in Florida or directly to Japan.

I would like to select the cheaper one regarding the shipping cost.

(2)
I do not have a credit card issued in the United States.

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The translator will have done well instead of me, because him/her is trusted by ●●.

He/She can be schedule at November 6th-9th.

I would like you to consider it.

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The translator will have done well instead of me because ●● trusts him/her.

He/She can adjust the schedule between November 6th-9th.

I would like you to consider it.

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Thank you for your email.
It is difficult for us to do financing investigation within two weeks.
Usually, financing investigation will take about two months.↵
While in the period of financing investigation, if the other party make any adjustment, please consider discussing with the KPMG side once.

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Thank you for your email.
It is difficult for us to decide on a new investment plan within two weeks.
It usually takes two months until we reach an agreement to a new plan to invest in.↵
We would like to hear from those in KPMG to discuss the investment period if they are available.

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Product details
[Premium Replica Bat]
Manufactured by Mizuno Technics Corporation (Yoro Province, Gifu Prefecture), this bat has practically the same specifications as the bat Ichiro Suzuki intended to use in actual games during the 2015 season. It is delivered displayed in a specially made box. The product is also engraved with "Model 2015".

New bat materials and color
The bats in the 2015 season were changed from black to plain wood with a transparent coating. The bat's material is white ash which is soft when being hit. It also inherits the overall slim-line shape.

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Product Details
[Premium Replica Bat]
Manufactured by Mizuno Technics Corporation (Yoro Province, Gifu Prefecture), this bat has practically the same specifications as the bat Ichiro Suzuki intended to use in actual games during the 2015 season. It is delivered displayed in a specially made box. The product is also engraved with "Model 2015".

New Bat Materials and Color
The bats in the 2015 season were changed from black to plain wood with a transparent coating. The bat's material is white ash which is soft when being hit. It also inherits the overall slim-line shape.

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The white space in the left side is the huge offertory box. You should be curious about how much they can collect, but they say that the amount is not published. The number of people who visit shrines in the first three days of the year each year is about 317,000,000 only Meiji shrine. It means that they collect 475,500,000 yen, because the average amount that each Japanese offer in new year days is about 150 yens. Amazing!

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The white space in the left side is a huge offertory box. You should be curious about how much they can collect, but they do not disclose the precise amount. The number of people who visit shrines on the first three days of the New Year's season is about 3.17 million only to the Meiji shrine. It means that they collect 475.5 million JPY because the average amount that each Japanese offer in new year days is about 150 yens. Amazing!

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高度な（西洋の）医療が無償で利用できる。救急サービスと外科的な状態における入院加療はアロフィのLord Liverpool病院で提供されている。専門家の治療を必要とする患者は近隣諸国へ飛行機で送られる。各村への訪問を含む外来治療は複数の診療所で提供されている。公衆衛生監視と疾患予防は医療サービスの重要な側面である。これはごみの衛生的な処理、飲用に適した水の供給、げっ歯類と蚊などの管理、そして育児相談と児童期のワクチン接種プログラムを通じて成し遂げられる。

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高度な(西洋式)医療が無償で利用できるます。救急サービスと外科的な状態における入院加療はアロフィのLord Liverpool病院で提供されている。専門家の治療を必要とする患者は近隣諸国へ飛行機で送られる。各村への訪問を含む外来治療は複数の診療所で提供されている。公衆衛生監視と疾患予防は医療サービスの重要な側面である。これはごみの衛生的な処理、飲用に適した水の供給、げっ歯類と蚊などの管理、そして育児相談と児童期のワクチン接種プログラムを通じて成し遂げられる。

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Your item has been shipped from the Global Shipping Center on august 18.
please wait a while until it arrives.
The checking of its status until it arrives is being carried out in the attached screen.
Hoping for your kindness.

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Your item was shipped from the Global Shipping Center on August 18.
Please wait a while until it arrives.
The checking of its status until it arrives is being carried out in the attached screen.
Hoping for your kindness.

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Hello.
I ask you the package which was shipped August 8th.
FDX Econ to: JP 19.90 lbs Tracking# 779851424508

I couldn't find below item in the package.
PACKAGE ID　01-387-5391　Shopsapien　$49.98

There is a probability that you make a mistake like wrong packing, so please check.

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Hello.
I ask you the package which was shipped on August 8th.
FDX Econ to: JP 19.90 lbs Tracking# 779851424508

I could not find the item listed below in the package I received:
PACKAGE ID　01-387-5391　Shopsapien　$49.98

I am afraid you may have made a mistake such as wrong packing, so please check it out.

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Thank you very much for purchasing from this store this time.
The product was shipped from this store on August 10 by special delivery mail.
However, because it is taking more time than usual to pass through Japan's customs the shipping departed today from Japan's international airport.
In case that the shipping passes smoothly by America's custom, the shipping is arranged to arrive at your address on August 17.
I am very sorry for having you waiting for the arrival of the shipping but please wait a little longer, thank you for your comprehension.
Tracking number:
URL for the tracking :

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Thank you very much for purchasing an item from us this time.
We had it shipped by express on August 10.
However, because it took more time than usual to proceed at the Japanese customs office, it the departed today from the international airport.
In case that the shipping passes smoothly by the American customs office, the shipping is scheduled to arrive at your address on August 17.
We are very sorry for having you waiting for the arrival of the shipping but please wait a little longer, thank you for your comprehension.
Tracking number:
URL for the tracking :

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I require the actula product.

If can't the actual product,i want to cancel the order.
Please refund whole amount.

If can't cancel the order, i will use protection program for buyer of Paypal to request the claim.

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I require the actual product.

If I do not receive the item I request, I would like to cancel the order.
Please refund me the whole amount.

If I cannnot cancel it, I will use the protection program for buyers by Paypal to complain.

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そう、遠隔制御が、遠隔制御車を操作します。

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そう、遠隔制御で遠隔制御車を操作します。

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リモートコントロールがリモートコントロールカーを動かしています。

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遠隔操作で、リモコン対応の自動車を操作できます。

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Dear
Thank you for your cooperation
I am 〇〇
I heard about you from △△△, and I email to you.
I have been staying in Tokyo, Japan now and my previous job was in Shangri-la Hotel in Singapore
I was in charge of manager at the restaurant ☓☓☓ in Tokyo

I am looking for the food manager job in Singapore
Could you please tell me your hire condition ?

I will sent you my resume.

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Dear
Thank you for your cooperation.
I am 〇〇.
I heard about you from △△△, and I decided to email you.
I am now staying in Tokyo, Japan and I previously worked for Shangri-la Hotel in Singapore.
I was a general manager of the Tokyo branch of Restaurant ☓☓☓.

I am looking for a post for a food manager in Singapore.
Could you please notify me of your conditions for employment?

I will send you my resume soon.

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As I have finished buying items and arrive at Paris, I shipped them on 26th.
However, unfortunately, there seem to be no shipping directly to Mexico from France neither Fedex nor DHL.
I am really sorry.

And so, I will ship them to Japanese buyer first, and once again after checking and packaging properly, I will ship them to Mexico by Fedex or DHL.

Please understand as it takes a little longer time because of caring to arrive safely.

Please let me know if you have any questions.

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As I had finished buying items and arrived at Paris, I shipped them on the 26th.
Unfortunately, however, neither Fedex nor DHL .has direct shipping from France to Mexico.
I am really sorry.

And so, I will ship them to a Japanese buyer first, and once again after checking and packaging properly, I will have them dispatched to Mexico by Fedex or DHL.

Please understand as it takes a little longer time because of caring to arrive safely.

Please let me know if you have any question.