Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I have decided to return this product to the seller.
I will start negotiating with the seller and move to the returning step.
Could you keep the product until I prepare the label for returning?

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I have decided to return this product to the seller.
I will start negotiating with the seller and proceed to the returning step.
Could you keep it until I prepare the label for returning?

元の翻訳
I am ordering your companies product from Japan.

Also, I am receiving delivered goods to a transportation company in New Jersey who I use to send thing to Japan.
Yesterday I got contact from staff recipient in NJ who refused to accept the luggage on the grounds that the box was damaged.
When i looked up the tracking number, the item had already been returned to your company.
Could you please inspect the item, and if there are no problems with the contents, resend them for me?
It is something with embroidery inside, so I would like you send it as is.
Thank you.

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I am ordering your companies product from Japan.

Also, I am receiving delivered goods to a transportation company in New Jersey who I use to send thing to Japan.
Yesterday I got contact from staff recipient in NJ who refused to accept the luggage on the grounds that the box was damaged.
When I looked up the tracking number, the item had already been returned to your company.
Could you please inspect the item, and if there are no problems with the contents, resend them for me?
It is something with embroidery inside, so I would like you send it as is.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
So sorry for the late reponse.
Thank you very much for the latest payment.

At your pace we should be able to send it on the 28th.
I will send you a tracking number after I send it.

Just give me a little more time, and please look forward to it's arrival.

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(I am) So sorry for the late response.
Thank you very much for the latest payment.

At your pace we should be able to send it on the 28th.
I will send you a tracking number after I send it.

Just give me a little more time, and please look forward to it's arrival.

元の翻訳
私の友達は私が言ったように「まずそれを試してみて、よくなかったら、返品して全額返金してもらうだけのことさ」と言っている。そう思うか？

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前にもお伝えした通り、まずそれを試してみて、作動しない場合は返品して、全額返金していただく形でよろしいでしょうか？

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
Then, how about meeting up at B in A at 16:00?
I will choose a place for dinner.
Please let me know again.

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Thank you for your reply.
Then, how about meeting up at 4:00 PM at Hotel B in A on the 15th?
I will choose a place for dinner.
Please let me know again.

元の翻訳
I am looking forward to meeting you on February 15th next month.
It is about time to fix the time to meet.
My schedule is flexible, so please let me know your available time at your convenience.
I await your reply.

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I am looking forward to meeting you on February 15th next month.
It is about time to fix the time to meet.
My schedule is flexible, so please let me know when you will be available.
I am expecting to hear from you.

元の翻訳
The condition seems good! I am thinking to buy it, but may I wait until the item that you have snt arrives in Japan?

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The condition seems good! I am thinking to buy it, but could you wait until the item being shipped to Japan arrives here?

元の翻訳
I made the order thinking that I was A.
I realised that the product is listed with B.
It is possible that I may have mistaken it for A and ordered.
Would this product be A?
If it is not A, I wonder if it would be ok for me to cancel the order.
I'm bery sorry for causing such trouble.
I await your reply.

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I made the order thinking that it was A.
I realised that the product was listed with B.
It is possible that I may have mistaken it for A and ordered.
Would this product be A?
If it is not A, I wonder if it would be okay for me to cancel the order.
I'm very sorry for causing such trouble.
I await your reply.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、たった今メッセージを受け取りました。そのハンマーが本当に欲しいので新しい物を１個送ってください。今のものはあまりにも早く壊れてしまい失望しています。

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こんにちは、たった今メッセージを受け取りました。そのハンマーが本当に欲しいので新しい物を１個送ってください。今のものはあまりにも早く壊れてしまい、いささかがっかりしています。

元の翻訳
Thank you for the enquire.
I established the Best Offer so I'll count with you from there

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Thank you for the inquiry.
I established the best offer, so I would like you to proceed.

元の翻訳
I am very glad that you like Japanese tea.
Other than Iemon tea that you ordered, we have a variety of tea for you.
Would you like Iemon tea or other tea?

Your questions are always welcome so please don’t hesitate to ask us.

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We are very glad that you have become interested in Japanese tea.
Other than Iemon tea that you ordered, we have a variety of tea leaves for you.
Would you like Iemon tea or others?

Please feel free to contact us anytime if you have anything you would like to inquire about.

元の翻訳
下記のフィードバックとポケモンルーラーを頂きましたことに心よりお礼を申し上げるためにご連絡させていただきました。大変ありがたいです。
新年に一緒にお仕事できることを楽しみにしております。
よい年末年始をお過ごしください。

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下記のフィードバックと、ポケモンルーラーを頂きましたことに、心よりお礼を申し上げるため、ご連絡させていただきました。↵
大変ありがたいです。
新年も一緒にお仕事できることを楽しみにしております。
よい休暇をお過ごしください。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I understood. Then, I will contact you again.

By the way, do you have any items in stock for past seasons that cannot be sold in store?
If so, I would like to buy them in some volume.
Would it be possible?

I await your reply.
Thank you in advance.
Regards,

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Thank you for your reply.
I understood. Then, I will contact you again.

By the way, do you have any items in stock for the past seasons that you cannot sell in store?
If so, I would like to buy them in some volume.
Would it be possible?

I await your reply.
Thank you in advance.
Regards,

元の翻訳
私はクリスマス休暇が終わるまでイギリスで旅行に出ており、１月の予定はすでに埋まっています。

２月に名古屋でAに参加するつもりであり、その後新横浜にあるBホテルに１日泊まる予定です。恐らく２月１５日水曜日に日本に付くと思います。少し休憩した後夜に再度お会いするというのが最良のオプションではないでしょうか？

あなたのご都合をお知らせください。

その間にあなたがクリスマス休暇の間に送ってくださった添付ファイルを確認いたします。

あなたが回復され、すぐに元気になって復帰されることを祈っています。

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私はクリスマス休暇が終わるまでイギリスで旅行に出ており、１月の予定はすでに埋まっています。

２月に名古屋でAに参加するつもりであり、その後新横浜にあるBホテルに一泊する予定です。恐らく２月１５日水曜日に日本に着くと思います。少し休憩した後夜に再度お会いするというのが最良のオプションではないでしょうか？

あなたのご都合をお知らせください。

その間にあなたがクリスマス休暇の間に送ってくださった添付ファイルを確認いたします。

あなたが回復され、すぐに元気になって復帰されることを祈っています。

元の翻訳
I was busy about my wife's hospitalization .
Today's afternoon so I did ship the document , please wait for arrived at it .
I ' m so sorry that waiting for you .

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I was busy arranging the procedure of my wife being hospitalized .
I did ship the document this afternoon, so I would appreciate if you would wait a little longer until you receive it.
I am very sorry I kept you waiting so long.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I'm not good at English.
I'm considering of purchasing this item, so would you tell me how much does the shipping fee to Japan cost?
Also, please tell me the fee to France.
In France, there is a forwarding company which send the item to Japan, and I would ask them to send it.
Please tell me the weight of the item, too.
What kind of the payment method can I choose?
I would like to pay by paypal.
I'm sorry for asking so many things.
I would appreciate if you reply me as soon as possible.

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I am sorry that I am not good at English.
I am considering purchasing this item, so would you tell me how much the shipping fee to Japan costs?
Also, please tell me the fee to France.
In France, there is a forwarder which sends the item to Japan, and I would ask them to send it.
Please notify me of how much the item weighs.
What kind of the payment method can I choose?
I would like to pay by paypal.
I am sorry for asking so many things.
I would appreciate if you reply to me as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for my poor English. I am interested in buying this product, but please tell me how much would the shipping to Japan cost. Also, tell me the shipping cost to France. There is a forwarder company in France that would forward the product to Japan, so I might ask you to deliver it there instead. Another thing, please tell me the weight of the product. What payment methods are available? I prefer to use Paypal myself. I am sorry for the many questions. Please reply ASAP.

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I am sorry for my poor English. I am interested in buying this product, but please tell me how much the shipping to Japan would cost. Also, tell me the amount of that to France. There is a forwarder company in France that would forward the product to Japan, so I might ask you to deliver it there instead. Another thing, please tell me the weight of the product. What payment methods are available? I prefer to use Paypal myself. I am sorry for the many questions. Please reply ASAP.

元の翻訳
since there are full of distribution during the holiday period, some delivery will be delay.
Please purchase the goods for Christmas!
The package except Expedited won't be delivered.
It won't be delivered in Christmas.
We would appreciate for your understanding and hope you will enjoy shopping.

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Since we deliver a number of items during the holiday season, there may be some delays.
Please purchase the goods for Christmas as soon as possible!
Packages except Expedited will not be delivered.
They will not be be delivered in time for Christmas.
We would like you to understand the policy and enjoy your shopping.

元の翻訳
You have a feedback from a customer.
When this bat is used, you can hit by pulling the ball and I understand meeting capacity will be up but what kind of merits are there in other ways? When a bat is not swing outward, does flying distance become farther?

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You have feedback from the customer.
When this bat is used, you can hit by pulling the ball and I understand meeting capacity will be up but what kind of merits are there in other ways? When a bat is not swing outward, does flying distance become farther?

元の翻訳
I have received the feedback from one of the customers.

I understood that I can hit the ball at the point closer to myself and the meet performance is increased by using this bat. But can you please tell me some other advantages than those if I practice with this bat? Would the flying distance of the ball be improved if my swing gets more sharply and fast?

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I have received the feedback from one of the customers.

I understood that I can hit the ball at the point closer to myself and the meet performance is increased by using this bat. But can you please tell me some other advantages than those if I practice with this bat? Would the flying distance of the ball increase if my swing gets more sharply and fast?

元の翻訳
I get the feedback from the customer.

I can take a grip on a ball and hit the ball with this bat, and I understand I can improve to meet the ball. What kind of other merits are there by practicing with this bat? If I won't swing a bat-head detour, would the flown distance of a hit ball improve?

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The customer has given us feedback.

Though I realize that this bat allows me to hit the ball with it approaching and the meet force increases, what are other merits of practicing with this bat? Will the flying distance of the ball also increase once I have stopped swinging the bat remotely?