Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

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Dear Laura Ping

I am sorry for having troubled you this time.
As you pointed out, the item was shipped from Japan.
The item which was in the warehouse in the USA had just been sold out.

To my regret, I didn't know your dayghter`s birthday. That`s why I thought a few days late would have no problem.
I apologize for what I did from the bottom of my heart.

I bought the same item at another shop. It will arrive on April 9th.
The item sent from Japan will arrive later than that. It will be returned to Japan when you deny to receive.
Thank you for your kind cooperation.

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Dear Laura Ping

I am sorry for having troubled you this time.
As you pointed out, the item was shipped from Japan.
The item stored in the US warehouse had just been sold out.

To my regret, I did not know about your daughter's birthday. This is why I thought a few days late would be no problem with you.
I apologize for this inconvenience.

I bought the same item at another shop. It will arrive on April 9th.
The item sent from Japan will arrive later than that. It will be returned to Japan if you refuse to receive it.
Thank you for your kind cooperation.

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Dear Laura Ping,

I am sorry to make you worry about it.
As you pointed out the item has been shipped from Japan.
The reason is as the stock in America had sold out.

And I did not know when your daughter's birthday is. Therefore I considered it would be all right if it had been a few days late. I am very sorry.

There, I purchased the same item at another shop. It will arrive 9 April.↵
Items from Japan will arrive some days later. As it is returned for rejecting it, please handle as it is.

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Dear Laura Ping,

I am sorry for your concern.
As you pointed out, the item was shipped from Japan.
This was because the item stored in the US warehouse had sold out.

And I did not know when your daughter's birthday was. Therefore I assumed a delay by a few days would be no problem with you. I am very sorry.

Then I purchased the same item at another shop. It will arrive on 9 April. Items from Japan will arrive some days later. They will be automatically sent back to Japan with your refusal to accept them, so please do that.

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Today I received the sample. Thank you for your quick response,

Regarding pens/kitting, it costs about USD0.9 if we buy Frixtion pens in Japan. If the costs makes such differences compared with the case buying Friction pens in The United States, we can secure Frixion pens locally and kitted with "Everbooks".

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Today I received the sample. Thank you for your quick response.

Regarding pens/kitting, it costs about 0.9 USD if we buy Frixtion pens in Japan. If the costs make such differences compared with the case buying Friction pens in the United States, we can secure them locally and kitted with "Everbooks".

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I purchased 7 pieces of the item of this package ID.
The number of the items delivered is different from the number written on the bill.
One piece of the item is missing.
As the items have been surely delivered, please look for the missing item.
I attach the picture of the bill. I appreciate your support.

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Regarding the product with this ID, I purchased seven items.
The number of the delivered items is different from what is written on the bill.
One item is missing.
As the items have surely arrived, please look for the missing one.
I have attached the picture of the bill. Thank you.

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I received the customer feedback.
Thank you very much for your action and feedback.
Thank you again.

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I confirmed the customer feedback.
Thank you very much for your action and attitude.
Thank you again.

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Thank you very much for always using our shop.

I am very sorry that the delivered item had some faults on the warping.

We will replace a new item or refund as soon as possible, so please let us know which do you prefer.

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Thank you very much for always using our shop.

I am very sorry that the delivered item had some faults on the wrapping.

We will replace a new item or refund as soon as possible, so please let us know whichever method you prefer.

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Thank you for dealing with us.

We apologize for the package inconvenience of which item you purchased this time.

We will ship a new item for exchange or issue you a full refund.
Please let us know which you would like to chose.

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Thank you for dealing with us.

We apologize for the package inconvenience of the item you purchased this time.

We will ship a new item for exchange or issue you a full refund.
Please let us know which you would like to choose.

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I am going to pay. Is it possible to do as to arrive in Berlin on Wednesday?

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I am going to pay today. Is it possible for you to arrange the item arrived in Berlin on Wednesday?

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I have received the item.
Do I confirm with HP if it is the genuine product or not by the serial card inside of the package?
Can't I confirm without opening the package?
What number is S/N6077862560, written on the back of the outer box?
Sorry to ask you many.

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I have received the item.
Do I confirm with HP if it is the genuine product or not by the serial card inside the package?
Can't I confirm the condition without opening the package?
What number is S/N6077862560, written on the back of the outer box?
Sorry to ask you many questions.↵
(Sorry to ask you so much).

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I read the note about my daughter's injury from the nurse. During school playtime she was kicked by John then rolled around and fell and hurt herself, she said. It became a big wound. Also actually this isn't the first time I heard the boy's name. Please check the truth of what happened yesterday.

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I read the note about my daughter's injury from the nurse. During school playtime she was kicked by John then rolled around and fell and hurt herself, she said. It became a big wound. Also actually this isn't the first time I heard his name. Please check the truth of what happened yesterday.

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I heard about my daughter's injury from the nurse by memo. My daughter saids che have been kicked by John anf fall down, and ended in injure. She god veru big hurt. Also in fact, I have heard his name bby te other insidents. I ask you to comfirn the facts what happened yesterday.

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I heard about my daughter's injury from the nurse by memo. She says she has been kicked by John and fell down, and ended in injure. She got very big hurt. Also in fact, I have heard his name bby te other insidents. I ask you to comfirn what happened yesterday.

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Thank you for your inquiry this time.

This item is currently in stock.

If you have any questions, please contact us.

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Thank you for your inquiry this time.

This item is currently in stock.

If you have any question, please contact us.

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I understand it.
Would you make a new one again under the following condition?
I ask you above again.

Handle: 2 inches body: 6 inches length: 8 inches
No color at both handle and body.
Fine smoke type
50 kilograms in total

As I do not need the one made by wrong order, please do not send it to me and dispose it by yourself. As for price, would you give me a discount by considering it?

After you find the price, please let me know.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I understand it.
Would you make a new one again under the following condition?
I ask you above again.

Handle: 2 inches body: 6 inches length: 8 inches
No color at both handle and body.
Fine smoke type
50 kilograms in total

As I do not need the one made by wrong order, please do not send it to me and dispose it by yourself. As for the price, would you give me a discount by considering it?

Please let me know the amount of the price as soon as possible.
Thank you very much.

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I send you ＄〇to your bank account(paypal account) just before.
The name of remitter , Mark is my business partner and helps me to do the remittance.
After confirmation, you send it to a warehouse in Florida.
I would appreciate it if you could send the made e-mail to ○○company a mail addressed Suzuki as the invoice.

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I sent $ 〇 to your bank account (paypal account) a while ago.
Mark, the name of the remitter, is my business partner and helps me remit the money.
Please send it to a warehouse in Florida.
I would appreciate if you could send the made e-mail to ○○company a mail addressed to Suzuki as the invoice.

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I have a question regarding the UPC at the time of shippment.

･ In the case of 2nd hand products, is it not necessary to input UPC?

･ What should we do for UPCs at the time of postage for our companies original products?

When there is no UPC, it seems like the ID number for each individual item will be given, but what is the appropriate procedures?

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I have a question regarding the UPC at the time of shipment.

･ In the case of secondhand products, is it not necessary to input UPC?

･ What should we do for UPCs at the time of postage for our companies original products?

When there is no UPC, it seems like the ID number for each individual item will be given, but what is the appropriate procedures?

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Thank you for using our shop.

I apologize for causing you a trouble about our communication.

Our company purchases goods from an official agent of SEIKO in Japan and sells them. However, it is not an official agent in U.S.

I think that's why you received such an answer from SEIKO U.S.

If you don't mind, would you please return the goods to us? Then we are able to refund to you.
Could you let us know the order number?

Thank you and again, I am very sorry to bother you.

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Thank you for using our shop.

We apologize for the late reply to the case you inquired us about.

We purchase goods from an official agent of SEIKO in Japan and sells them. However, it is not an official agent in U.S.

I think that is why you received such an answer from SEIKO U.S.

If you don't mind, would you please return the goods to us? Then we are able to refund you.
Could you let us know the order number?

Thank you very much.

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I have decided to return this product to the seller.
I will start negotiating with the seller and move to the returning step.
Could you keep the product until I prepare the label for returning?

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I have decided to return this product to the seller.
I will start negotiating with the seller and proceed to the returning step.
Could you keep it until I prepare the label for returning?

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I am ordering your companies product from Japan.

Also, I am receiving delivered goods to a transportation company in New Jersey who I use to send thing to Japan.
Yesterday I got contact from staff recipient in NJ who refused to accept the luggage on the grounds that the box was damaged.
When i looked up the tracking number, the item had already been returned to your company.
Could you please inspect the item, and if there are no problems with the contents, resend them for me?
It is something with embroidery inside, so I would like you send it as is.
Thank you.

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I am ordering your companies product from Japan.

Also, I am receiving delivered goods to a transportation company in New Jersey who I use to send thing to Japan.
Yesterday I got contact from staff recipient in NJ who refused to accept the luggage on the grounds that the box was damaged.
When I looked up the tracking number, the item had already been returned to your company.
Could you please inspect the item, and if there are no problems with the contents, resend them for me?
It is something with embroidery inside, so I would like you send it as is.
Thank you.

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So sorry for the late reponse.
Thank you very much for the latest payment.

At your pace we should be able to send it on the 28th.
I will send you a tracking number after I send it.

Just give me a little more time, and please look forward to it's arrival.

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(I am) So sorry for the late response.
Thank you very much for the latest payment.

At your pace we should be able to send it on the 28th.
I will send you a tracking number after I send it.

Just give me a little more time, and please look forward to it's arrival.

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私の友達は私が言ったように「まずそれを試してみて、よくなかったら、返品して全額返金してもらうだけのことさ」と言っている。そう思うか？

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前にもお伝えした通り、まずそれを試してみて、作動しない場合は返品して、全額返金していただく形でよろしいでしょうか？