Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

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Please confirm the 2 points as below before you send the goods.
1. May you sent it as soon as possible? Also please send it with invoices with the good name and price.
2. Postal code of shipping address will be ○○, but sometimes there is unavailable to write on a postal code because of the shipping company, in this case, please use this postal code for △△, but the address will be the same. It is available to send to me if you use the postal code as ○○or△△.

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I ask you to confirm two points as below before you send the goods.
1. Could you send them as soon as possible? I would also like you to send them with the invoice showing the product names and prices.
2. I have set the postal code of the shipping address as ○○, but it cannot be registered, depending on the shipping company. We would like you, in this case, to use △△ for the postal code. There is no change of the address except for the postal code. I can receive the items sent to either of the postal code of ○○ or that of △△.

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Sorry for my late reply.

I checked bank account, but there was no payment. Probably there was a problem at this account, so money was returned to your account. Please kindly check it.

I arranged another account. After you confirm money is refunded, please send money to the following account again. I will send it out upon receipt of money. By the way, the guitar is made in Indonesia.

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Sorry for my late reply.

I checked my bank account, but there was no payment. Probably there was a problem at this account, so the money was returned to yours. Please kindly check it.

I arranged another account. After you confirm the money is refunded, please transfer the money to the following account again. I will send it out upon receipt of money. By the way, the guitar is made in Indonesia.

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There's a no frills (banana mark), a bus stop, underground station, and it's a convenient location.
The landlord lives separately but keeps the apartment clean.
There are 4 rooms in the house.
There are 2 large fridges in the kitchen with plenty of space.
The kitchen is fully-equipped with a rice cooker, instant water heater, a microwave oven, a toaster, pots, frying pans, plates, bowls, chopsticks, spoons and forks.
The bedroom includes a bed, closet, desk and chair.
The internet, water bill, electricity and gas are all included in the rent.

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There's a no frills (banana mark), a bus stop, underground station, and it's a convenient location.
The landlord lives separately but keeps the apartment clean.
There are 4 rooms in the house.
There are 2 large fridges in the kitchen with plenty of space.
The kitchen is fully-equipped with a rice cooker, instant water heater, a microwave oven, a toaster, pots, frying pans, plates, bowls, chopsticks, spoons and forks.
The bedroom includes a bed, closet, desk and chair.
The rent includes charges for the internet, water bill, electricity and gas.

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It is conveniently located with Nofuriruzu (banana mark), bus-stop and subway station.
The owner lives in a separate house but keeps the house clean.
There are 4 rooms.
There are 2 big wide-spaced refrigerators in the kitchen.
In the kitchen, there a rice-cooker, instantaneous water heater, a microwave , a toaster, pans, a frypan, plates, chopsticks, spoons, forks are facilitated.
In the room, there are a bed, a closet, a desk, a chair, and so on.
Internet, water, electric, gas bills are all included in the rent.

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It is conveniently located with Nofuriruzu (banana mark), bus-stop and subway station.
The owner lives in a separate house but keeps the house clean.
The apartment has four rooms.
There are two large refrigerators in the kitchen with lots of space inside.
The kitchen is equipped with a rice-cooker, instantaneous water heater, microwave , a toaster, pans, a skillet.↵
Dishes and plates, chopsticks, spoons, forks are also available there.
Each room has a bed, closet, desk, chair and more.
The rent includes charges for the Internet, water, electricity and gas.

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You order is currently in "Payment pending" status.
In case that your order gets canceled there is no need to make any further operation.

Regarding the concrete questions about the payment and the state of progress, I'll be happy if the enquiries about the payment settlements would be in charge of Amazon

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You order is currently in the "Payment pending" status.
If you have already canceled, you do not need to make any further operation.

Regarding the concrete questions about the payment and the state of progress, I will be happy if the enquiries about the payment settlements would be in charge of Amazon.

元の翻訳
The status of your order is “payment pending” at the moment.

In case you have already cancelled your order, no further action will be necessary.

For further troubles and progress, we would ask you to contact Amazon as they are in charge of the settlement of the payment.

Thank you for your business.

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The status of your order is “payment pending” at the moment.

In case you have already cancelled your order, no further action will be necessary.

For further troubles and progress, we would ask you to contact Amazon as they are in charge of the settlement of the payment.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Your order is now payment pending.

If you have already canceled the order
you don't need to do special process later.

To find out the procedure or problems of payment,
please ask Amazon that is in charge of the payment.

Thanks

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Your order is now payment pending.

If you have already canceled the order
you don't need to do special process later.

To find out the procedure or problems of payment,
please ask Amazon that is in charge of the payment.

Thank you very much.

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「I can not understand you, that is why let's talk more and more」
The friend that is always with me, our families or lovers to what extend talk to us with their real intentions?.↵
Our mutual hurt us,to everyone the word "separation" means fear . I think that In order to protect ourselves showing sympathy to others without difference has been a form of worldly wisdom that we rely on since the past and until now .↵
However, do we sense an uncomfortable feeling in the same way we show our fake laughter hiding our real intentions?.

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"I can not understand you, that is why let's talk more and more."
How well can we communicate with friends, family members and our boyfriends or girlfriends? There may have been some words that all of us have stopped uttering as we would fear so they would hurt each other. It looks a sensible way to live we rely on that we try to be harmonized among ourselves anytime anywhere. Still have you ever been in doubt that you keep hiding who you really are with your fake smiles?↵

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I confirmed safery delivery.
I checked it after opening, I found some damage for coincapsule by sticking out of coin in case.
I think that I am going to take out for NGC examination,
So I can not accept it because examination rank will be inferior if there is some damage.↵
I am sorry to say that but I want to return this due to damage in coin.
Could you refund all price paid by PayPal and delivery cost $26.00?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I confirmed safety delivery.
I checked it after opening, I found some damage for coincapsule by sticking out of coin in case.
I think that I am going to take out for NGC examination,
So I cannot accept it because the examination rank will be low if there is some damage. I am sorry to say that but I want to return this due to damage on the coin.
Could you refund all price paid by PayPal and delivery cost $26.00?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Tony, who loves to listen to stories, will lends an ear anytime and will even help with homework.↵
I recommend him to those who think a homestay who only stays in their room is not a homestay at all, and to those who want to talk in English after arriving here at long last.
The staymate is Japanese but there are times when he helps too when the situation is reversed.
Not knowing much English but wanting very much to talk... are the type of people that are most welcome.

Also, people who worry about what they should do now that they're in Japan, and people who are in a complicated situation at their current homestay, do please give us a call.

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Tony, who loves listening to others talk, will be a good companion to you and ready to help you with your homework. A home stay where you keep remaining inside your room cannot be a genuine home stay. This is recommended for those who have taken the trouble to come here to talk in English.
The stay mate is a Japanese, but there are times when he helps too when the situation is reversed.
Not knowing much English but wanting very much to talk... are the type of people that are most welcome.

Also, people who worry about what they should do now that they're in Japan, and people who are in a complicated situation at their current home stay, please give us a call.

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Tony, who is a good listener, is always there for you to talk to and can even help you with your homework.
Homestay can not be a homestay if you ends up shutting yourself up in your room.
It is recommended for those who want to speak English taking the opportunity.
Although the stay mates are Japanese, they can help each other in time of need.
Those who do not understand English well, but want to speak it as much as possible are also welcome.

Those who are still in Japan and don't know what to do and those who are not quite satisfied with your current homestay, please feel free to contact me.

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Tony, who likes listening to peeple talk, is always there for you to talk to and can even help you with your homework.
A home stay while you remain inside your room cannot be a real home stay.
It is recommended for those who want to speak English taking the opportunity.
Although the stay mates are Japanese, they can help each other in time of need.
Those who do not understand English well, but want to speak it as much as possible are also welcome.

Those who are still in Japan and don't know what to do and those who are not quite satisfied with your current homestay, please feel free to contact me.

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☆The way I experienced my home stay in Toronto☆
Because I am not a native speaker it is hard to understand English↵
Can get to enter to the circle of the family's center↵
The feeling of not being at home of the stay
And such are things that are heard a lot.

However, my Tony is different.
Tony how is living together always talks to me
Some times going to dinner with friends, playing with them.
I think I can get to experience a "At home" feeling in the stay

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☆To Those Who Have Experienced Homestay in Toronto☆
•You find it a trouble to understand English because you are not a native speaker.↵
•You cannot feel part of the host family as they tend to care their own family members •You may feel somewhat uncomfortable as a member of the host family.
We have heard these complaints so far a lot. There is no wonder as those host family members run the homestay program as their side jobs.

However, our Tony is different.
Since he now lives alone, he is a good companion to talk with.
All of the roommates sometimes eat out and play games together. and going to dinner with friends, playing with them.
We think you will experience a real friendly homestay.

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I am concerned about the item not having yet reached you in spite that you purchased it because you liked it.
Generally speaking, it takes 2-3 weeks for the items to arrive.
It has been 2 weeks after the shipment so could you please wait for another week?
I will track the tracking number from time to time.↵
I am hoping that you get it before long.

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I am concerned about the item which you have not yet received despite that you purchased it after being interested in it.
Generally speaking, it takes 2-3 weeks for the items to arrive.
It has been 2 weeks after the shipment so could you please wait for another week?
I will be confirming the tracking number regularly. I hope that you will receive it before long.

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I am also concerned that you have not received the item you purchased. Typically, items arrive approximately two to three weeks after being shipped. It has been two weeks from today now, so please wait about one more week for your item to arrive.

I will also check the tracking number as the occasion calls for it. I hope your package arrives early, even if only by a day or two.

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I am also concerned that you have not received the item you purchased. Typically, items arrive approximately two to three weeks after shipment. It has been two weeks from today now, so please wait for another week.

I will also check the tracking number regularly. I hope your package arrives early, even if only by a day or two.

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I am also slightly concerned that the item you were interested in and purchased has not been delivered yet.
The item is usually delivered within two to there weeks.
Today is passing the 2 week mark so please wait one more week.
I am also frequently checking the tracking number.
I hope for it to be delivered soon.

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I am concerned that the item you purchased has not arrived yet.
The item usually arrives at the customer within two to there weeks after shipment.
Two weeks have elapsed today, so please wait one more week.
I keep checking the tracking number regularly.
I hope you will receive it as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

Regarding how to wash the clothes, please do not wash it with white clothes for the first several times because the dye compound coming out from the item may affect the white clothes.
Also, please do not use bleaching agent. If you use it, the item would be rapidly and extremely decolored.
When you dry the clothes, please let it dry in the shade, if possible. Once direct sunlight or extremely hot air from the drying machine is applied, please pay attention because the clothes might be extremely shrunk. When you dry the trousers, please hang upside down, which is the hem is upside, and the waist is downside, may prevent to be shrunk.
As the item is made from 100% of cotton, you can do the ironing without any special care.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Regarding how to wash the clothes, please do not wash them with white clothes for the first several times because the dye compound may leak to affect the white ones.
Also, please do not use any bleacher. If you use it, the color of the item would excessively fade.
When you dry the clothes, please let them dry in the shade, if possible. Once direct sunlight or extremely hot air from the drier is applied, please pay attention because they might be extremely shrunk. In drying the pants, please hang them so the waist and hems would be upside down.
As the item is made of cotton 100 %, you can press them with an iron.

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Thank you for sending the photo offer of Sonu Handicraft.

I would like to list up the questions below.
As for IRON WOODEN COFFEE TABLE, I am afraid the price is a little too high.
I am afraid you have made a mistake.↵
The price of SH003, where the same roof panel is used, is $90 USD, but the price of IRON WOODEN COFFEE TABLE, $195 USD, is more expensive by more than two times in spite that the size is almost the same as SH003.
Can you please double check?

Also, regarding the picture below which was taken when we inspected the factory. please tell them to let me know the price and the dimensions.

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Thank you for sending the photo offer of Sonu Handicraft.

I would like to list up the questions below.
As for IRON WOODEN COFFEE TABLE, I am afraid the price is a little too high.
Are the figures accurate?↵
While The price of SH003, where the same roof panel is used, is $90 USD, the price of this item $195 USD, which is more than twice even though the size is almost the same as SH003.
Can you please double check?

Also, regarding the picture below which was taken when we inspected the factory. please have them to notify me of the price and the dimensions.

元の翻訳
aaaのカスタマーサービスからメールが送信され、その対処方法を教えてくれました。以下がその内容です。
「さとうさん、貴方のセラーに連絡してください。そうすれば、この取引の代金を返金してくれますので。既にキャンセルが承認されたのであれば、返金されます。売れなかったので、セラーは商品を再出品するかもしれません。その後、貴方はセラーから返金を受け取り、再度、本品の購入をトライすることができます。ここでご注意いただきたいことは、セラーは多様な方法で取引を操作できると言うことです。例えば、バイヤーの要件を設定したり特定したメンバーを購入できないようにブロックすることができます。

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aaaのカスタマーサービスからメールが送信され、その対処方法を教えてくれました。以下がその内容です。
「さとう様、貴方の売り手に連絡してください。そうすれば、この取引の代金を返金してくれますので。既にキャンセルが承認されたのであれば、返金されます。売れなかったので、売り手は商品を再出品するかもしれません。その後、貴方は売り手から返金を受け取り、再度ご購入をお願いいたします。ここでご注意いただきたいことは、売り手側は買い手側の要件を設定する、そして特定したメンバーが購入できないようにする、といった多様な方法で取引を操作できると言うことです。

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Hello, I come from Japan and my name is 〇〇.
I am so glad to reserve the item which I want very much.
I can't wait for the launch day on December.

I have some questions.
My friends and brothers also like this item very much so, if it's possible to reserve more same items?
So if it's possible send more same items together to the same address?

Sorry to bother you.
I am waiting for your reply.

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Hello, I come from Japan and my name is 〇〇.
I am so glad to reserve the item which I want very much.
I can't wait for the launch day in December.

I have some questions.
My friends and brothers also like this item very much, so is it possible for me to reserve more of the same item? Of course I promise you that I will not cancel any order of mine.
And is it possible that another person can have the item sent to the same address?

Sorry to bother you.
I am waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
Hello. Thank you very much for your purchase.
May I ask if the product arrived safely? We would be so happy if you are satisfied with it.
Please contact us if there are any problem with your goods (non-arrival, damage or defect) or if you have any question
Please don't hesitate to contact us immediately if you need any support.
If it's possible, please give us your feedback.
We hope to have long term relationship with you for many years to come in the future.

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Hello. Thank you very much for your purchase.
May I ask if the product arrived safely? We would be so happy if you are satisfied with it.
Please contact us if there is any problem with your goods (non-arrival, damage or defect) or if you have any question
Please do not hesitate to contact us immediately if you need any support.
If it is possible, please give us your feedback.
We hope to have long term relationship with you for years to come.

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Hi, Lisa. Thank you sending me the picture taken in Hawaii, and the smile of the two shown in it!
As I am not good at English, I am sorry that I could not reply to you right after I read your mail.
Every time I receive e-mail from you, I wish I could speak English, but I cannot remember English any more because I'm not good at studying English. Oh my God. (>_<)

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Hi, Lisa. Thank you sending me the picture taken in Hawaii, and the smile of the two shown in it!
As I am not good at English, I am sorry that I could not reply to you right after I read your mail.
I wish I spoke English, but I cannot memorize new words in English. Oh my God. (>_<)

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Dear amazon.com
I have deleted the item （B0087BXMT0） from the shop.
I am sorry from the bottom of my heart that I put it on by my mistake.
I will take care not to put this item on.
I am sorry for bothering you.
Thanks
Name
Shop name

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Dear amazon.com
I have deleted the item （B0087BXMT0） from the shop.
I deeply apologize for having put the item on the website by mistake.
I will be careful so this will not recur.
I am sorry for putting you in trouble.
Thanks you so much for your continuous support.
Name
Shop name

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As the date to visit your office is just around the corner, and we are looking forward to seeing you very much.
However, we are really disappointed at the news this time.
We had been going through our enterprise based on the amount of money you previously proposed.
Before, you told that there were a vehicle which included what we had ordered, and recommended it to us.
At that time, the amount of money you offered and our budget matched up, So we paid the deposit.
We are aware such issue accidentally happened by mistake, but we can hardly be persuaded with the additional fee at this stage, so that we cannot make payment unfortunately.

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As my visiting day is just around the corner, I am thrilled to see you all.
But I find this announcement quite regrettable.
We had been going through our enterprise based on the amount of money you previously proposed.
Before, you told that there were vehicles which included what we had ordered, and recommended them to us.
At that time, the amount of money you offered and our budget matched up, So we paid the deposit.
We are aware such issue accidentally happened by mistake, but we can hardly be persuaded with the additional fee at this stage, so that we cannot make payment unfortunately.

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I have a hard time of this matter.
The product arrived on September 12.
And, she asked me about the refund on September 13.
I asked her about that because I could not understand the meaning of her query.
Her query was the following:
Customer stated that she does not want to pay for postage because she did not buy the item.
If she did not but the product, I cannot understand why she said, "does not want to pay for postage".

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I am in trouble now.
The product arrived on September 12.
And she inquired about the refund on September 13.
I asked her about that because I could not understand what she meant.
Her query was the following:
"Customer stated that she does not want to pay for postage because she did not buy the item."
If she did not buy the product, I cannot understand why she said, "does not want to pay for postage".