yoppo (yoppo1026) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
私はそれも持っていません。OneGramとはどういう意味ですか? どのタグのことをおっしゃっていますか?お返事お待ちしています。

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私はどちらも持っていません。OneGramとはどういう意味ですか? どのタグのことをおっしゃっていますか？お返事お待ちしています。

元の翻訳
Thank you for explaining the item a few days ago.
I am Yamada and met you in Westin in Tokyo.
As I am considering making a sheet and cover of futon, would you make an estimate
Please check attached file.

I heard that if white cloth is used as a base, you can make a variety of design such as lace an line.
We will make a variation of size and design by small amount.

Would you advise the estimate and delivery period?

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Thank you for explaining the item a few days ago.
I am Yamada and met you in Westin in Tokyo.
As I am considering making a sheet and cover of futon, would you make an estimate?
Please check attached file.

I heard that if white cloth is used as a base, you can make a variety of design such as lace an line.
We will make a variation of size and design by small amount.

Would you advise the estimate and delivery period?

元の翻訳
I am Japanese.
I would like to buy items in your shop.
I would like to use my Japanese credit card.
Would you send items to Japan?

My job is to sell clothes in Japan.
When I was looking for suppliers overseas, I found your shop.
I found that your shop has very nice items.
Would you let me sell the items in your shop in Japan?
To do that, would you let me buy your items for discounted prices?
I believe that it will contribute to your profit.
I would appreciate it if you think about this.

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I am Japanese.
I would like to buy items in your shop.
I would like to use my Japanese credit card.
Would you send the items to Japan?

My job is to sell clothes in Japan.
When I was looking for suppliers overseas, I found your shop.
I found that your shop has very nice items.
Would you let me sell the items in your shop in Japan?
To do that, would you let me buy your items for discounted prices?
I believe that it will contribute to your profit.
I would appreciate it if you think about this.

元の翻訳
I am a Japanese.
I would like to buy the item which you sell in your shop.
I would like to buy it and to pay by a Japanese credit card.
Can't you please ship the item to Japan?

I sell apparel item in Japan.
When I was looking for overseas suppliers, I came across your shop.
Your shop sells excellent items.
Please let me sell the items of your shop in Japan.
Can you please let me buy your items in the VIP price in order to achieve it.
I believe I can contribute to your profit.
I appreciate if you can consider.

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I am a Japanese.
I would like to buy the item which you sell in your shop.
I would like to buy it and to pay by a Japanese credit card.
Can you please ship the item to Japan?

I sell apparel items in Japan.
When I was looking for overseas suppliers, I came across your shop.
Your shop sells excellent items.
Please let me sell the items of your shop in Japan.
Can you please let me buy your items in the VIP price in order to achieve it?
I believe I can contribute to your profit.
I appreciate if you can consider.

元の翻訳
Needless to say,I understand that you have to go back America.But if I want to continue
to work as Japanese teacher a bit more,are you supporting for me?

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Needless to say,I understand that you have to go back America. But even if I want to continue
working as Japanese teacher a bit more, are you supporting me in America?

元の翻訳
Needless to say, I understand that you have to go back to US in April. However, if I let you know that I would like to work hard as a Japanese teacher in Japan a little more, can you still cheer me up in US?

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Needless to say, I understand that you have to go back to US in April. However, even if I let you know that I would like to work hard as a Japanese teacher in Japan a little more, can you still cheer me up in US?

元の翻訳
I will report following as present adjustment state regarding request.

1. The conference with NEC that planing on January 7th. I am planning to confirm with Mr. Yamada manager of finance department who is the contact person of NEC side, and send official guide mail to all related person included IBM soon.

2. The forum on January 8th. It have been planed originally that as much as staying in the site mainly while Tom's talk.

修正後
I will report following as present adjustment state regarding the request.

1. The conference with NEC that planing on January 7th. I am planning to confirm with Mr. Yamada manager of finance department who is the contact person of NEC side, and send official guide mail to all related person included IBM soon.

2. The forum on January 8th. It has been planed originally that as much as staying in the site mainly while Tom's talk.

元の翻訳
Regarding the case which you asked, I will report about the current status of the arrangement as follows.

1. Regarding the meeting scheduled on January 7th, I will confirm the schedule with the director, Mr. Yamada in the financial department who is the contact of NEC side, and will send an official announce mail to all of concerned people including IBM members in near future.

2. Regarding the forum on January 8th, I had originally planned to stay in the venue mainly around the time when Tom will make a speech.

修正後
Regarding the case which you asked, I will report about the current status of the arrangement as follows.

1. Regarding the meeting with NEC scheduled on January 7th, I will confirm the schedule with the director, Mr. Yamada in the financial department who is the contact of NEC side, and will send an official announce mail to all of concerned people including IBM members in near future.

2. Regarding the forum on January 8th, I had originally planned to stay in the venue mainly around the time when Tom will make a speech.

元の翻訳
Regarding the message I sent a few days ago,
it was listed as "delivered" at delivery record of the item.
But as its storing period was expired, it was returned to me today.
It must be a mistake made by the post office in Germany.
I will issue you a refund.
If you still need it, would you order it again?

修正後
Regarding the message I sent a few days ago,
it was listed as "delivered" at delivery record of the item.
But as its storing period was expired, it was returned to me today.
It must be a mistake made by the post office in Germany.
I will issue you a refund.
If you still need it, please order it again.

元の翻訳
Regarding the topic which I let you know the other day, the delivery record of the package shows that the delivery completed.
However, it was returned back to me because the storage period limitation was expired.
I judge that this is a mistake of the post office in Germany.
I am going to issue a refund tentatively.
If you still need the item, please place another order again.

修正後
Regarding the topic which I let you know the other day, the delivery record of the package shows that the delivery completed.
However, it was returned to me because the storage period limitation was expired.
I judge that this is a mistake of the post office in Germany.
I am going to issue a refund tentatively.
If you still need the item, please place another order again.

元の翻訳
We cannot design NGC label number xxx001 subject to trade condition.
But I request to assign 001 to those who ordered on first-come, first-served basis and who ordered
by reservation before shipment. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
If I cannot designate it, I will wait and see until it is listed by auction. I will be waiting for your reply.

I need NGC label number xxx001. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
I will be waiting for your reply.

I request 001 as I asked a question subject to condition of trade.

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I'm afraid I cannot specify NGC label number xxx001 subject to trade condition.
But I request to assign 001 to those who ordered on first-come, first-served basis and who ordered
by reservation before shipment. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
If I cannot designate it, I will wait and see until it is listed by auction. I will be waiting for your reply.

I need NGC label number xxx001 if you have. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
I will be waiting for your reply.

I request 001 as I asked a question subject to condition of trade.

元の翻訳
· I am well aware that the NGC label number "*** - 001" cannot be specified as a condition of trade, but I would like 001 for the ones you ordered on a first-come-first-served basis, and the order you made before delivery. I would like to place an order if I can appoint it. If I cannot, then I would like to wait until it is put up for auction.
I will be looking forward on hearing your reply.

· As a condition o f trade, I would like to specify NGC label number "*** - 001". I will be placing an order immediately if I can specify it. I anxiously wait your reply.

· As I had previously requested as a condition of trade, I would like number 001.

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· I am afraid that the NGC label number "*** - 001" cannot be specified as a condition of trade, but I would like 001 for the ones you ordered on a first-come-first-served basis, and the order you made before delivery. I would like to place an order if I can appoint it. Otherwise, I would like to wait until it is put up for auction.
I will be looking forward on hearing your reply.

· As a condition o f trade, I would like to specify NGC label number "*** - 001". I will be placing an order immediately if I can specify it. I anxiously wait your reply.

· As I had previously requested as a condition of trade, I would like number 001.

元の翻訳
もっと下のナンバーの003とか009ならお売りできます。でも指定はできません。特定のナンバーのものをお売りできるとは限らない、ということです。通常、001とか002とか、時には003も、特別価格にしたプリオーダーや先行予約で売れてしまいます。それでオークションにかけたときも落札されてしまいます。ありがとう。

はい。001ラベルの付いたものはあります。

今週の後半にはＮＧＣからこれらのコインが戻ってきます。ラベルの印刷時にどのようにグループ分けされるかによりますが、001はあるでしょう。ただ、保証はできません。たいていＮＧＣにはまとめてコインを送ります。ですから同じインボイスに種類の違う多くのコインがあるわけです。すべてのコインのシリーズが001で始まるわけではありません。ともかくどのようにインボイスが作られるかによるんです。

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もっと下のナンバーの003とか009ならお売りできます。でも指定はできません。特定のナンバーのものをお売りできるとは限らない、ということです。通常、001とか002とか、時には003も、特別価格にしたプリオーダーや先行予約で売れてしまいます。それでオークションにかけたときも落札されてしまいます。ご了承ください。

はい。001ラベルの付いたものはあります。

今週の後半にはＮＧＣからこれらのコインが戻ってきます。ラベルの印刷時にどのようにグループ分けされるかによりますが、001はあるでしょう。ただ、保証はできません。たいていＮＧＣにはまとめてコインを送ります。ですから同じインボイスに種類の違う多くのコインがあるわけです。すべてのコインのシリーズが001で始まるわけではありません。ともかくどのようにインボイスが作られるかによるのです。

元の翻訳
弊社で003や009といったより低い番号でお出しすることもできますが、それは指定されたものではありません。言い換えれば特定の証明書の番号が試用できるとは限りません。通常、001や002、ときに003のものまでも特別価格で先行受注や予約に基づいて販売されるか、または、オークション形式で販売されます。よろしくお願いします。

はい。弊社ではこれを -001ラベルのものに適用しています。

弊社はこれらのコインを今週後半にNGCから取り戻す必要があります。彼らがラベルを印刷するときにどのようにコインがグループ分けされるかによって、弊社は-001のラベルを使えるかもしれませんが、保証はありません。通常弊社はコインをNGCへまとめて送付します。従って同一のインボイスに多数の異なったコインが混在しています。それぞれの異なるコインシリーズが-001で始まるわけではなくなります。つまりかれらがインボイスをどのように処理するか、に完全に依存している、というわけです。

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弊社で003や009といったより低い番号でお出しすることもできますが、それは指定されたものではありません。言い換えれば特定の証明書の番号が使用できるとは限りません。通常、001や002、ときに003のものまでも特別価格で先行受注や予約に基づいて販売されるか、または、オークション形式で販売されます。よろしくお願いします。

はい。弊社ではこれを -001ラベルのものに適用しています。

弊社はこれらのコインを今週後半にNGCから取り戻す必要があります。彼らがラベルを印刷するときにどのようにコインがグループ分けされるかによって、弊社は-001のラベルを使えるかもしれませんが、保証はありません。通常弊社はコインをNGCへまとめて送付します。従って同一のインボイスに多数の異なったコインが混在しています。それぞれの異なるコインシリーズが-001で始まるわけではなくなります。つまりかれらがインボイスをどのように処理するか、に完全に依存している、というわけです。

元の翻訳
I responded to you. Did you receive the message ?
I was afraid to your no reaction.
May I get your several photos differ from you up-loaded "webshop"
I know to send amount of photos is immense work, please send as you can take that time.

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I think I responded to you. Did you receive the message ?
I was worried because you didn't contact me.
May I get your several photos different from you up-loaded "webshop"？
I know it is hard to take a lot of photos at one time is immense work, please send them separately.

元の翻訳
I must have replied, but you have not received it yet?
I was worrying since you have not contacted me.
Would you take a picture that is different from the one uploaded in your web shop
and send it to me?
As it must be difficult for you to take numerous pictures at the same time,
you can send them separately.

修正後
I must have replied, but you have not received it yet?
I was worrying since you have not contacted me.
Would you take a picture that is different from the one uploaded in your web shop
and send it to me?
As it must be difficult for you to take numerous pictures at one time,
you can send them separately.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for getting you involved.
I can't ask to the post office in UK.
Would you please ask to the post office and I'm sorry for taking your time.
When you know the situation, I would be happy to let me know.
Thank you.

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I'm sorry for getting you involved.
I can't ask to the post office in UK.
Would you please ask to the post office and I'm sorry for taking your time.
When you know the situation, I would be happy if you could let me know.
Thank you.