yoppo (yoppo1026) — 付けたレビュー

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This time we are terribly sorry for our mistake of amounts of items.
We will refund full price of the products.
It can be a rude request,
but may we ask your favor to withdraw our feedback?
As our sincere apology wasting a long time and lots of troubles,
we will add 10 dollars to the refund price,
We are waiting for your response.

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This time we are terribly sorry for our mistake of amounts of items.
We will refund full price of the products.
It can be a rude request,
but may we ask your favor to withdraw your feedback about us?
As our sincere apology wasting a long time and lots of troubles,
we will add 10 dollars to the refund price,
We are waiting for your response.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry about shipping an incorrect number of products.
We would like to give you a full refund and add extra $10 to the refund because we keep you waiting and this mistake caused you much inconvenience.

If you wouldn't mind, please delete our feedback.

We will wait for your replay.
Please accept my apologies for the error and any inconveniences it may have caused.

Very truly yours

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We are very sorry about shipping because there were incorrect numbers of products.
We would like to give you a full refund and add extra $10 to the refund because we have kept you waiting and this mistake caused you much inconvenience.

If you wouldn't mind, please delete our feedback.

We will wait for your reply.
Please accept my apologies for the error and any inconveniences it may have caused.

Very truly yours

元の翻訳
Do you want to use the leather labels only for ◯◯?
Or do you want to use them for △△?

And, I received order, two large size items, from my customer.
I will send a new order sheet.
Also, I will take one XL item to check the exact size and two M size. Those items could be in two cardboard boxes.
Please kindly make it a priority to deal with this order for my customers.

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Do you want to use the leather labels only for ◯◯?
Or do you want to use them for △△?

And, I received the order, two large size items, from my customer.
I will send a new order sheet.
Also, I will take one XL item to check the exact size and two M size. Those items could be in two cardboard boxes.
Please kindly make it a priority to deal with this order for my customers.

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.
When we asked to Amazon to issue a refund of $84.56, they answered as follows:

To issue a refund of $84.56, at first we have to proceed to issue a refund of 150.84+75.42 dollars.
And to issue a refund of unpaid $9.14, you have to order our product again and then we have to add $9.14 on the process of the refund.
Therefore, first of all, we will issue a refund of $150.84+75.4.
We apologize for the inconvenience.

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Sorry for the late reply.
When we asked to Amazon to issue a refund of $84.56, they answered as follows:

To issue a refund of $84.56, first we have to proceed to issue a refund of 150.84+75.42 dollars.
And to issue a refund of unpaid $9.14, you have to order our product again and then we have to add $9.14 on the process of the refund.
Therefore, first of all, we will issue a refund of $150.84+75.4.
We apologize for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late reply. We asked Amazon about a refund procedure of the postage in the amount of USD 84.56 and got the following explanations from them.

In order to refund USD 84.56, we have to refund USD150.84 plus 75.42 in advance. Then, you will order the product to us again so that we can refund the rest in the amount of USD 9.14.
Therefore, we will refund a USD150.84 plus 75.42 fist.
We apologize for causing you so much difficulty.

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Sorry for my late reply. We asked Amazon about a refund procedure of the postage in the amount of USD 84.56 and got the following explanations from them.

In order to refund USD 84.56, we have to refund USD150.84 plus 75.42 in advance. Then, you will order the product to us again so that we can refund the rest in the amount of USD 9.14.
Therefore, we will refund a USD150.84 plus 75.42 first.
We apologize for causing you so much difficulty.

元の翻訳
I am troubled very much since last because I cannot complete the payment.

I click (Payments) after choosing (REPORTS) of the (Seller centra) page to find the item of (Payable to Amazon), but I do not know where I should make payment from. Please tell me where.

Also, it says that I would find the button of "Paying back the balance," where do I?
Or is it transcribed in different words? Please tell me.

I am really troubled. I need your help.

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I am troubled very much since last night because I cannot complete the payment.

I click (Payments) after choosing (REPORTS) of the (Seller centra) page to find the item of (Payable to Amazon), but I do not know where I should make payment from. Please tell me where.

Also, it says that I would find the button of "Paying back the balance," where is it?
Or is it transcribed in different words? Please tell me.

I am really troubled. I need your help.

元の翻訳
★The camera has been returned and I will send it to you again. (The reason for this return was that there was “no claim by a recipient.”

Please be assured that I will bear the shipping cost, which will incur to send it to you again. And if you don’t receive it more than two weeks after it is shipped. Please take a moment to contact a carrier.

Please make sure that the following address is correct.

★I am very happy that you like the product. I hope you can take great photos.

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★The camera has been returned and I will send it to you again. (The reason for this return was that there was “no claim by a recipient.”

Please be assured that I will bear the shipping cost, which will incur to send it to you again. And if you don’t receive it in more than two weeks after it is shipped. Please take a moment to contact a carrier.

Please make sure that the following address is correct.

★I am very happy that you like the product. I hope you can take great photos.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I will ask a lens maker if it is possible to fix it by updating firmware.
I am sorry to say this, but will you wait for one or two days because I am not able to contact them because of weekend? I will get back to you as soon as I get an answer from them. Thank you.

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Thank you for your reply.
I will ask a lens maker if it is possible to fix it by updating firmware.
I am sorry to say this, but will you wait for one or two days as I am not able to contact them because of weekend? I will get back to you as soon as I get an answer from them. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for inquiry.

We have contacted USPS about the shipping status. They told us that it is difficult to redeliver the package because it was returned as address unknown.

If we re-ship the package to you after it was returned to us, it might take about three to five weeks to be delivered to you.

I understand that you order was expedite order so we will cancel this order and refund your money.

If we do not receive any replay from you within 24 hours, we will start processing your refund.

Thank you very much for your corporation.

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Thank you for inquiry.

We have contacted USPS about the shipping status. They told us that it is difficult to redeliver the package because it was returned as address unknown.

If we re-ship the package to you after it was returned to us, it might take about three to five weeks to be delivered to you.

I understand that you order was expedite so we will cancel this order and refund your money.

If we do not receive any replay from you within 24 hours, we will start processing your refund.

Thank you very much for your corporation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
The release date of the Japanese version of Amiibo R.O.B has not been determined yet, so I cannot sell them yet. I will sell them as layaway as soon as the lease day is set. I thank you for your patience.

*Amiibo is the name of a toy.

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Thank you for contacting me.
The release date of the Japanese version of Amiibo R.O.B has not been determined yet, so I cannot sell them yet. I will sell them as layaway as soon as the release date is set. I thank you for your patience.

*Amiibo is the name of a toy.

元の翻訳
I heard sometimes that delivery trouble occurs in your country.
It takes a little time to purchase because of auction. Please wait.
We are stocking the genuine one.
Please wait because now we are checking.
Please let me know if there are any japanese goods you.
I'm sorry, I couldn't find the goods you are looking for.
i lost the goods during the delivery.
Please wait for the reply a little longer because i have to go now.
...day...hour i will contact you as soon as possible for the return

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I heard that delivery trouble sometimes occurs in your country.
It takes a little time to purchase because of auction. Please wait.
We are stocking the genuine one.
Please wait because now we are checking.
Please let me know if there are any Japanese goods you.
I'm sorry, I couldn't find the goods you are looking for.
I lost the goods during the delivery.
Please wait for the reply a little longer because I have to go now.
...day...hour I will contact you as soon as possible for the return.

元の翻訳
I heard delivery trouble can happen from time to time in your country.
It takes a bit of a little time to stock the goods because of auction. Please wait a while.
I'm stocking that as the genuine article.
I confirm it to source of supply, please give me a time.
And please let me know if you have something of Japanese products you want.
I'm sorry I was not able to find the goods you need.
The goods were missing on the way deliver my home.
Please wait a while to reply you because I'm busy outside.
I come back at AM or PM **:** of *th, I will contact you when I get back.

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I heard delivery trouble can happen from time to time in your country.
It takes a bit of time to stock the goods because of auction. Please wait a while.
I'm stocking that as the genuine article.
I will confirm it to source of supply, please give me a time.
And please let me know if you have something of Japanese products you want.
I'm sorry I was not able to find the goods you need.
The goods were missing on the way deliver my home.
Please wait a while to reply you because I'm busy outside.
I come back at AM or PM **:** of *th, I will contact you when I get back.

元の翻訳
Schedule(for reference)

PM3:00- Start to make ceramic by hands (about one hour)
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PM4:00- Serve a green tea and take a break (about one hour)
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PM5:00- Shave and finish ceramic (about 90 minutes )
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PM6:30- Complete to make ceramic
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PM6:45- Dinner at Chasitsu (Kyo-kaiseki)
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PM8:15- Go to Kameoka station from Kobo by Taxi

Expense( bill to make ceramic, postage of ceramic, meal bill, Taxi bill from kobo to Kameoka station, before tax)

The number of participants
aggregate payment (before tax)
Bill for the experience per one person (before tax)

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Schedule(for reference)

PM3:00- Start to make ceramic by hands (about one hour)
↓
PM4:00- Serve a green tea and take a break (about one hour)
↓
PM5:00- Shave and finish ceramic (about 90 minutes )
↓
PM6:30- Complete to make ceramic
↓
PM6:45- Dinner at Chashitsu (tea-ceremony room) (Kyo-kaiseki)
↓
PM8:15- Go to Kameoka station from Kobo by Taxi

Expense (bill to make ceramic, postage of ceramic, meal bill, Taxi bill from kobo to Kameoka station, before tax)

The number of participants
aggregate payment (including tax)
Bill for the experience per one person (including tax)

元の翻訳
I assume calling from domestic call would make it faster for you to get the information. I am afraid it will take quite long to figure it out if you call from overseas.
I am truly sorry for the situation. Thank you for understanding.

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I assume the domestic call would make it faster for you to get the information. I am afraid it will take quite long to figure it out if you call from overseas.
I am truly sorry for the situation. Thank you for understanding.

元の翻訳
It will be faster to find out the situation if you could contact them directly since it will take longer to receive a response when we inquire from foreign country.
We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you and we appreciate your understanding.

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It will be faster to find out the situation if you could contact them directly since it will take longer to receive a response when we inquire from a foreign country.
We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you and we appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Upon inquiry from abroad, it takes a very long time until it turned out, those of inquiries from domestic It is assumed that it is found early situation.
Sorry to bother with you, but thank you.

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Upon inquiry from abroad, it takes very long time until it turned out. It is assumed that the inquiries from domestic will find the situation earlier.
Sorry to bother you, but thank you.

元の翻訳
(908 FESTIVAL 2015 in OSAKA ) starring decision on 8/26 ( Wed ) and 27 ( Thursday) !! fan club preceding reception also start!

Starring Miura Daichi has decided to perform at (908 FESTIVAL in OSAKA 2015 ) which will take place on August 26 (Wed) , 27 days (Thursday ) at the Osaka Festival Hall !

Miura Daichi official fan club (large knowledge) limited ticket reception is also there . Please come by all means .

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(908 FESTIVAL 2015 in OSAKA) starring decision on 8/26 ( Wed ) and 27 ( Thu) !! fan club preceding reception also start!

Daichi Miura has decided to perform at (908 FESTIVAL in OSAKA 2015 ) which will take place on August 26 (Wed) and 27 (Thu) at the Osaka Festival Hall!

Daichi Miura official fan club (Daichishiki) limited ticket reception is also there. Please come by all means.

元の翻訳
Dear sellar support team

Koichi Kamowara left the company in November last year and he is not involved with us any longer. I own 100% of our stock.

Please contact me if you need any other information.

Thank you very much and thank you for your business.

Kaichi Kawamura
Chairman, SUNONE Ltd.

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Dear sellar support team

Regarding the e-mail you sent us, Koichi Kamowara left the company in November last year and he is not involved with us any longer. I own 100% of our stock.

Please contact me if you need any other information.

Thank you very much and thank you for your business.

Kaichi Kawamura
Chairman, SUNONE Ltd.

元の翻訳
Dear Seller Support Team

Thank you for doing business with us.
Regarding the e-mail that you sent to us, Koichi Kamohara quit our company in November 2014. He has nothing to do with us since he had quit. I own stock of our company by 100 percent.

If you need further information, please let us know.
Thank you for your understanding.

SUNONE
Kaichi Kawamura President

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Dear Seller Support Team

Thank you for doing business with us.
Regarding the e-mail that you sent to us, Koichi Kamohara quit our company in November 2014. He has nothing to do with us since his resignation. I own 100% stock of our company.

If you need further information, please let us know.
Thank you for your understanding.

SUNONE
Kaichi Kawamura President

元の翻訳
パーソナライズ研究結果：Eメールが1番実施可能; SNS, web, や広告は2番以降:多様なデータ取得の必要性

パーソナライズ(個別カスタマイズ化)は、お客様が期待している重要なポイントである。

パーソナライズにより自分ごと化される事で、お客様のクリック数、オープンレート、コンバージョン、リテンションの上昇、引いては購入意欲につながる。

だが、どうやってパーソナライズするか？

「パーソナライズ」するには、お客様が購買意思決定までたどり着いた多様に異なる経緯を考慮して実施する必要がある。

現在は、多様なチャネルとデバイスでお客様にリーチ出来る。データ、コンテンツ、さらに配信方法を各お客様事に個別カスタマイズし、お客様個人用のメッセージとして配信することは重要である。

従って、私たちがお客様（今この記事を読んでいるあなた自身を含む）を研究し、お客様が何をどのようにして購買意思決定まで行っているのかを理解する必要がある。

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パーソナライズ研究結果：Eメールが1番実施可能；SNS、ウェブや広告は2番以降；多様なデータ取得の必要性

パーソナライズ（個別カスタマイズ化）は、お客様が期待している重要なポイントである。

パーソナライズにより自分ごと化される事で、お客様のクリック数、オープンレート、コンバージョン、リテンションの上昇、引いては購入意欲につながる。

だが、どうやってパーソナライズするか？

「パーソナライズ」するには、お客様が購買意思決定までたどり着いた多様に異なる経緯を考慮して実施する必要がある。

現在は、多様なチャネルとデバイスでお客様にリーチ出来る。データ、コンテンツ、さらに配信方法を各お客様ごとに個別カスタマイズし、お客様個人用のメッセージとして配信することは重要である。

従って、私たちがお客様（今この記事を読んでいるあなた自身を含む）を研究し、お客様が何をどのようにして購買意思決定まで行っているのかを理解する必要がある。