yoppo (yoppo1026) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I understood that the ASIN is a special thing.
Also I understood I can exhibit with another ASIN too.
I exhibit with another ASIN. Even though the lowest price of $48, I cannot sell at all.
As you know, this product page SEO is weak and has low ranking.
Even though they are the same products, if they cannot sell they are something else.
In the former ASIN, even though it was $54, I recall that they sold 10~100 perday.
What can I do?

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Thank you for your reply.
I understood that the ASIN is a special thing.
Also I understood I can exhibit with another ASIN too.
I exhibit with another ASIN. Even though the lowest price of $48, I cannot sell at all.
As you know, this product page SEO is weak and has low ranking.
Even though they are the same products, if they cannot sell they are something else.
In the former ASIN, even though it was $54, I recall that they sold dozens~100 perday.
What can I do?

元の翻訳
こんにちは、　私たちのオフィスは週末は閉まっています。月曜日にこの件は確認します。もし私達の商品発送に間違えがあった場合、商品引換券か別のパーカーで対応しますがよろしいですか？

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こんにちは、　私たちのオフィスは週末は閉まっています。月曜日にこの件は確認します。もし私達の商品発送に間違えがあった場合、商品引換券か別のパーカーで対応しますがよろしいですか？↵
よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
Kindly please let us cancel the order for now as the shipment cost from Florida is too high so we can't make much profit.
Sorry about the trouble but please advise us with your return address.
If we can find a way to directly send the goods to Japan, we will place the order again later.

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Kindly please let us cancel the order for now as the shipment cost from Florida is so high that we can't make much profit.
Sorry about the trouble but please advise us with your return address.
If we can find a way to directly send the goods to Japan, we will place the order again later.

元の翻訳
I am terribly sorry, but the delivery of the item which you bought to the warehouse has been delayed.
I will take another approach send the item to you in a hurry.
I will ship the travelers note and the refill of the set separately to you.

The travelers note will be delivered to you on January 8th.
The refill set will be delivered on January 9th.
The refill set is the one listed on the URL below.
There are four refills, so it has better cost performance than the one you bought.

Please wait for the arrival of the item a little more.
Thank you for your patience.

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I am terribly sorry, but the delivery of the item which you bought to the warehouse has been delayed.
I will take another approach to send the item to you in a hurry.
I will ship the travelers note and the refill of the set separately to you.

The travelers note will be delivered to you on January 8th.
The refill set will be delivered on January 9th.
The refill set is the one listed on the URL below.
There are four refills, so it has better cost performance than the one you bought.

Please wait for the arrival of the item a little more.
Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。本件の詳細を拝見する前に、貴方に未確認の取りやめがないことを確認してください。もし取りやめを受け取っていないのであれば、以下をご一読ください。各取りやめにおいて、弊社は確認のリンクをメールにてお送りしています。もし未確認の状態であれば、確認してください。貴方の取りやめは処理されます。これは重要事項です。貴方の取りやめの確認と開始を実行するため、ウィンドウをログインしてください。そうすればこのリンクが開きますが、そうしなければ開きません。もしリンクが作動しない場合、まずログインして、既にログインした場所にあるブラウザーのウィンドウのアドレスボックスへ確認のリンクを張り付けてください。

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こんにちは。本件の詳細を拝見する前に、貴方に未確認の取りやめがないことを確認してください。もし取りやめを受け取っていないのであれば、以下をご一読ください。各取りやめにおいて、弊社は確認のリンクをメールにてお送りしています。もし未確認の状態であれば、確認してください。貴方の取りやめは処理されます。これは重要事項です。貴方の取りやめの確認と開始を実行するため、ウィンドウをログインしてください。そうすればこのリンクが開きますが、そうしなければ開きません。もしリンクが作動しない場合、まずログインして、既にログインした場所にあるブラウザーのウィンドウのアドレスボックスへ確認のリンクを貼り付けてください。

元の翻訳
その商品は、Paypalは我々のPaypalアカウントから現在お金を控除しましたので、彼らと議論をしている限り、発送されません。あなたが議論を終わらせ次第、我々は発送します。心配しないでください、我々に任せてください。書きましたように、我々は、多くの日本人客を持ち、ほぼ毎日発送しているのですから。
敬具

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Paypalは我々のPaypalアカウントから現在お金を控除しましたので、彼らと議論をしている限り、その商品は発送されません。あなたが議論を終わらせ次第、我々は発送します。心配しないでください、我々に任せてください。お伝えしましたように、我々は、多くの日本人客を持ち、ほぼ毎日発送しているのですから。
敬具

元の翻訳
Good day!
Thank you for your invoice.
But I am afraid that I could not log in PayPal on this page, either.

I asked the PayPal to check it again. They said that security was locked by some reason.
They told me to log in again after more thann24 hours.
I hate to ask you, but may I ask you a patience?

修正後
Good day!
Thank you for your invoice.
But I am afraid that I could not log in PayPal on this page, either.

I asked the PayPal to check it again. They said that security was locked by some reason.
They told me to log in again after more than 24 hours.
I hate to ask you, but may I ask you a patience?

元の翻訳
I exchanged email about the followings details with the seller a few days ago, but the seller does not accept cancellation. As I do not understand English well, it is the first time for me to order via Buy it now to Commit this time causing this kind of situation. I will never forget that I have not considered the order well. As I would like to enjoy eBay in the future, would you prompt the seller to remove it? I appreciate your cooperation.

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I exchanged email about the followings details with the seller a few days ago, but he/she does not accept cancellation. As I do not understand English well, this is the first time for me to order via Buy it now to Commit this time causing this kind of situation. I will never forget that I have not considered the order well. As I would like to enjoy eBay in the future, would you prompt the seller to remove it? I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I exchanged the mail articles including the contents below with the seller the other day, but the seller would not accept the cancellation.
Since I did not fully understand the English and it was the first time for me to place an order by way of Commit from Buy it now, the current situation has become like this.
As I will not forget that my consideration upon the order was not enough and I also would like to enjoy eBay in the future, please urge the seller to accept my cancellation. I would appreciate if you can cooperate with me.

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I exchanged the mail articles including the contents below with the seller the other day, but he/she would not accept the cancellation.
Since I did not fully understand the English and it was the first time for me to place an order by way of Commit from Buy it now, the current situation has become like this.
As I will not forget that my consideration upon the order was not enough and I also would like to enjoy eBay in the future, please urge the seller to accept my cancellation. I would appreciate if you can cooperate with me.

元の翻訳
Is everybody all right?
I have the news about the shootings in Las Vegas on TV. It was really tragic accident and I hope that no one has anything to do with that.
Don’t worry about me since we are living without any change.
Please say hello to aunt, uncle, Bart and others.

PS
Has rice vermicelli already been eaten up? I will send it shortly.
Let me know if you have something you want.

*This text was translated.

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Is everybody all right?
I watched the news about the shootings in Las Vegas on TV. It was really tragic accident and I hope that no one has anything to do with that.
Don’t worry about me since we are living without any change.
Please say hello to aunt, uncle, Bart and others.

PS
Has rice vermicelli already been eaten up? I will send it shortly.
Let me know if you have something you want.

*This text was translated.

元の翻訳
How is everything going with you?
I saw the news of Las Vegas shooting on TV. It is a tragic incident and I am praying I am praying that you have been related to this incidents.

We are all doing well in here.
Please say hello to grandpa, grandma, and Bart.

PS
Do you have remained stock of rice vermicelli? I will send it again soon.
Please let me know if you want anything else.

※ This sentence has been translated.

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How is everything going with you?
I saw the news of Las Vegas shooting on TV. It is a tragic incident and I am praying that you have been related to this incidents.

We are all doing well in here.
Please say hello to grandpa, grandma, and Bart.

PS
Do you have remained stock of rice vermicelli? I will send it again soon.
Please let me know if you want anything else.

※ This sentence has been translated.

元の翻訳
Everyone, are you doing well?
I saw a news of Las Vegas shootings. It was very cruel and I will pray for all your safety.
My family is all doing well as usual so we are OK here.
Please tell my best regard to Grandmother, Grandfather, Bart and everyone there.

P.S. Is Rice Vermicelli all gone? I will send it to you soon. If you have something you want beside this, please let me know.

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Everyone, are you doing well?
I saw a news of Las Vegas shootings. It was very cruel and I will pray for all your safety.
My family is all doing well as usual so don't worry.
Please tell my best regard to Grandmother, Grandfather, Bart and everyone there.

P.S. Is Rice Vermicelli all gone? I will send it to you soon. If you have something you want beside this, please let me know.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I am sorry to trouble you many times.

I apologize to say for my convenience, but due to your negative feedback, I became restricted as a seller.

I know you are so busy, but could you revise your feedback?

I think the site for revision I sent you the other day was hard to understand. So, I checked again and knew the revised feedback would be sent by me.

I will send it afterwards, so please cooperate. Thank you in advance.

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Hello.

I am sorry to trouble you many times.

I apologize to say for my convenience, but due to your negative feedback, I became restricted as a seller.

I know you are so busy, but could you revise your feedback?

I think the site for revision I sent you the other day was hard to understand. So, I checked again and knew the revised feedback could be sent by me.

I will send it afterwards, so please cooperate. Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Hi,

I am sorry for sending email again.

I am sorry for our convenience,
but our website was limited as seller for the negative feedback from you.

You may busy, but could you please adjust the feedback ?

I thought, the site of use which I sent you before is unclear,
after my search, I can sent the correct of feedback.

Afterward, I will send it to you.
I would appreciate it if you could support.

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Hi,

I am sorry for sending email again.

I am sorry for our convenience,
but our website was limited as seller for the negative feedback from you.

You may busy, but could you please adjust the feedback ?

I thought, the site of use which I sent you before is unclear,
after my search, I can send the correcting of feedback.

Afterward, I will send it to you.
I would appreciate it if you could support.