翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2016/11/17 09:35:09

sujiko
sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
日本語

・ 取引条件でNGCラベルの番号"***-001"を指定することが出来ないと思いますが、先着順で注文した方、入荷前に予約注文された方に001番を希望です。指定することが出来るならば直ちに注文します。指定することが出来なければオークション形式に出品するまで様子をみます。返答をお待ちしています。

・ 取引条件でNGCラベルの番号"***-001”があれば欲しいです。指定することが出来れば直ちに注文します。返答をお待ちしています。

・ 取引条件で質問した通りに001番でお願いします。

英語

We cannot design NGC label number xxx001 subject to trade condition.
But I request to assign 001 to those who ordered on first-come, first-served basis and who ordered
by reservation before shipment. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
If I cannot designate it, I will wait and see until it is listed by auction. I will be waiting for your reply.

I need NGC label number xxx001. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
I will be waiting for your reply.

I request 001 as I asked a question subject to condition of trade.

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yoppo1026 57 プロフィールをご覧いただき、誠にありがとうございます。 日本語ネイティブ...
yoppo1026はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2016/11/18 10:38:54

元の翻訳
We cannot design NGC label number xxx001 subject to trade condition.
But I request to assign 001 to those who ordered on first-come, first-served basis and who ordered
by reservation before shipment. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
If I cannot designate it, I will wait and see until it is listed by auction. I will be waiting for your reply.

I need NGC label number xxx001. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
I will be waiting for your reply.

I request 001 as I asked a question subject to condition of trade.

修正後
I'm afraid I cannot specify NGC label number xxx001 subject to trade condition.
But I request to assign 001 to those who ordered on first-come, first-served basis and who ordered
by reservation before shipment. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
If I cannot designate it, I will wait and see until it is listed by auction. I will be waiting for your reply.

I need NGC label number xxx001 if you have. If I can designate it, I will order immediately.
I will be waiting for your reply.

I request 001 as I asked a question subject to condition of trade.

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