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こんにちは。もしあなたがそれら2枚のSACD仕様のCDを見つけた場合、eBayで販売するのに問題はないですか。

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こんにちは。もしあなたがそれら2枚のSACD仕様のCDを見つけた場合、eBayで販売するのに問題はないです。

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◯ Do you know a smoker's face (Tobacco bace)？
It is said the face that persons who smoke become smoker face.
We will pick up features roughly.
Specially it is important for women to read.
＊ Increase white hair/hair loss
＊ Facial dullness (tar deposits)
＊ Deep lines at corner of the eyes/around mouth/lines
＊ The wings of a nose's pores open/darkness
＊ Teeth/gum coloring
＊ Dry lips/darkness
＊ Cheekbones stand out, frustrating look
＊ Face lines slack
＊ Vocal cords hurt, ratting voice (smoker's voice)

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◯ Do you know a smoker's face (Tobacco face)?
It is said the face that persons who smoke become smoker face.
We will pick up features roughly.
Specially it is important for women to read.
* Increase white hair/hair loss
* Facial dullness (tar deposits)
*Deep lines at corner of the eyes/around mouth/lines
* The wings of a nose's pores open/darkness
* Teeth/gum coloring
* Dry lips/darkness
* Cheekbones stand out, frustrating look
* Face lines slack
* Vocal cords hurt, ratting voice (smoker's voice)

元の翻訳
"Jagariko" with Japanese sukiyaki taste!
Yet another new flavor has appeared in "Jagariko" pproduct series! So far they have developed and released more than 70 new flavors of Jagariko. This specific new taste is Japanese sukiyaki taste! (* Sukiyaki is a Japanese dish where meat and vegetables are cooked or simmered in a pot, and seasoning is basically with soy sauce and sugar which is melted raw eggs.) Taste of the beef and the scent of the onion and the sauce of sukiyaki which is full of sweetness and richness matching firmly and being reproduced! Try the taste in conjunction with the crispy texture. Since it is the limited item in convenience stores, try to get it as soon as possible!

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"Jagariko" with Japanese sukiyaki taste!
Another new flavor has appeared in "Jagariko" product series! So far they have developed and released more than 70 new flavors of Jagariko. This specific new taste is Japanese sukiyaki taste! (* Sukiyaki is a Japanese dish where meat and vegetables are cooked or simmered in a pot, and seasoning is basically with soy sauce and sugar which is melted raw eggs.) Taste of the beef and the scent of the onion and the sauce of sukiyaki which is full of sweetness and richness matching firmly and being reproduced! Try the taste in conjunction with the crispy texture. Since it is the limited item in convenience stores, try to get it as soon as possible!

元の翻訳
In case that electrical leakage breaker would be turned off due to electrical leakage of the carry-in product, please inform us before construction.

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In case that electrical leakage breaker would be turned off due to electrical leakage of the carry-in product, please contact us before construction.

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I am sorry to be late in contacting you.
Thank you for your last payment.

I will send your base on 28th.
I will let you know the tracking number after sending it.

You have to wait for a little more.
Thank you for your patience.

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I am sorry for not contacting you soon.
Thank you for your last payment.

I will send your base on 28th.
I will let you know the tracking number after sending it.

You have to wait for a little more.
Thank you for your patience.

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Hi.
I've got your Request payments. I tried to make a payment, but the receiver's address had to be in Japan. I thought about it and decided to contact Paypal. The answer from Paypal was that if I wanted to pay by Request payment, the address had to be in Japan. Though, it is possible if you use my address in Florida on Create invoice. So, could you please send me the payment by xx again?

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Hi.
I've got your Request payments. I tried to make a payment, but the receiver's address had to be in Japan. I thought about it and decided to contact PayPal. The answer from PayPal was that if I wanted to pay by Request payment, the address had to be in Japan. Though, it is possible if you use my address in Florida on Create invoice. So, could you please send me the payment by xx again?

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Good day!
I receive request payment from you.
I tried to pay it, but could set only Japanese address for the address to which it is sent.
After considering it for a while, I inquired Paypal.
They said that I can set only the address in Japan at request payments.
But if you set the address to which it is sent my address in Florida at create invoice,
it is possible.
So would you charge me the payment by XX again?

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Good day!
I received the request payment from you.
I tried to pay it, but could set only Japanese address for the address to which it is sent.
After considering it for a while, I inquired PayPal.
They said that I can set only the address in Japan at request payments.
But if you set the address to which it is sent my address in Florida at create invoice,
it is possible.
So would you charge me the payment by XX again?

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Thank you for contacting me!

I have filled in the attached document .
I would like to make the payment by bank transfer.
I do not want to pay by credit cards.
Since we will not be using credit cards we will send the other two documents by e-mail
and not our card information.

Best regards.

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Thank you for contacting me!

I have filled in the attached document .
I would like to make the payment by bank transfer.
I do not want to pay by credit cards.
Since we will not be using credit cards I will send the other two documents by e-mail
and not our card information.

Best regards.

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I am very much fond of your games made, I support since last October.
I have a question. Do you plan to do your game with Japanese version? I cannot read English and understand the phrases.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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I am very much fond of your games, and I have been supporting since last October.
I have a question. Do you plan to do your game with Japanese version? I cannot read English and understand the phrases.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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I love the game you are producing, and has been supporting it since October last year.
I have a question. Will your game be applicable in Japanese?
As I cannot read English, I cannot understand the phrases.
I appreciate your reply.

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I love the game you produce, and has been supporting it since October last year.
I have a question. Will your game be applicable in Japanese?
As I cannot read English, I cannot understand the phrases.
I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I really got to like the games which you make, and I have been supporting them since last October.
I have one question. Do you have any plan to support Japanese in your games? As I cannot read English, unfortunately I cannot understand the conversation in the games. I look forward to your reply.

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I really liked the games which you make, and I have been supporting them since last October.
I have one question. Do you have any plan to support Japanese in your games? As I cannot read English, unfortunately I cannot understand the conversation in the games. I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
A happy new year.

I have been worried about you since you have not contacted.
Would you please reply as soon as possible when I make an order?
Also, I would like you to send me the invoice with the name of the company.

Then, I'm waiting for your reply.

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A happy new year.

I have been worried about you since you have not contacted.
Would you please reply as soon as possible when I make an order?
Also, I would like you to send me the invoice with the name of the company.

I'm waiting for your reply.

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I retransmit the sentence of the request.
Please load Dow from following LINK.

I think that the part of the explanation of the product does not have any problem, but the check of the origin of copyright may be necessary because a part of the explanation of the product of the movie of SW in particular is the part which is related to the setting of the character.
As for my sentence, it is to the thing which translated an expression for English in a sentence of the product explanation that has been supervised of the origin of copyright listed on the homepage of the Tokyo head office.

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I retransmit the sentence of the request.
Please download from following LINK.

I think that the part of the explanation of the product does not have any problem, but the check of the origin of copyright may be necessary because a part of the explanation of the product of the movie of SW in particular is the part which is related to the setting of the character.
As for my sentence, it is to the thing which translated an expression for English in a sentence of the product explanation that has been supervised of the origin of copyright listed on the homepage of the Tokyo head office.

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I currently live in Paris, so I would like to know where I can buy it here.
Im also going to London for a month soon - are there any places I can buy it in London?

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I currently live in Paris, so I would like to know where I can buy it here.
I'm also going to London for a month soon - are there any places I can buy it in London?

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I live in Paris and which stores can I buy in Paris?
Also I will go to London for a month, in which stores can I buy?

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I live in Paris and in which stores in Paris can I buy it?
Also I will go on a trip to London for a month, in which stores can I buy it?

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I contacted Samuel. I am asking a person in charge in the bank to process to send money to the account of Samuel. I will be able to send money tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.
But it takes time to process in the bank when we send money abroad.
So I will not be in time since Samuel can check the receipt of it on around 20th.
When will the account by US dollar of your company opened?
After Chinese New Year, when will you start business?

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I contacted Samuel. I am asking a person in charge in the bank to process to send money to the account of Samuel. I will be able to send money tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.
But it takes time to process overseas transmittance in the bank.
So I will not be in time since Samuel can check the receipt of it on around 20th.
When will the account by US dollar of your company opened?
After Chinese New Year, when will you start business?