Brandon Blaisdell (brandon-blaisdell) — もらったレビュー

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Thanks for contacting me. The products still haven't arrived.
I think they might arrive tomorrow, though.
If the next products are already finished please send them out via the fastest shipping method.
We have quite a few customers waiting for the merchandise.

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Thanks for contacting me. The products have not arrived yet.
I think they might arrive tomorrow, though.
If the next products are ready, please ship them using the fastest shipping method.
We have quite a few customers waiting for the merchandise.

元の翻訳
What should I do so that I'm able to send the products to the Japan office?

Due to the fact I'm not that great at English, if your company doesn't make the shipping arrangements for us then we can't send it to Japan.


We made the order at the end of last year and the products STILL have not arrived.
This is an untenable situation.

Mr. King also won't assist me with the shipping arrangements.


Do you know why your company stopped shipping directly to Japan?

It takes quite a bit of time to make the necessary transportation arrangements, and if this happens every time we're will lose many, many potential business opportunities.


Isn't there some way you can make the arrangements to send the products to Japan?

I appreciate your assistance with this urgent matter.

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What should I do to send the products to the Japan office?

Due to the factthat I'm not that great at English, if your company doesn't make the shipping arrangements for us then, we can't send it to Japan.


We made the order at the end of the last year and the products STILL have not arrived.
This is an untenable situation.

Mr. King also won't assist me with the shipping arrangements.


Do you know why your company stopped shipping directly to Japan?

It takes quite a bit of time to make the necessary transportation arrangements, and if this happens every time, we will lose many, many potential business opportunities.


Isn't there some ways you can make the arrangements to send the products to Japan?

I appreciate your assistance with this urgent matter.

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Thank you very much for your order.
I do apologize for the delays of my response.
When we checked the bass (guitar) before shipment we found a flaw in the truss rod, and after we followed up with the serviceman we were told it take several months to fix. We are now confirming an exact due date.
Things being as they stand now, the situation is that we are unable to send it right away.
Dependent upon your request, we can do a refund or we can arrange for a replacement (we tried to find the same model, but we could not find it.).
Thank you once more, and please let us know how you would like to proceed.

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Thank you very much for your order.
I do apologize for the delay of my response.
When we checked the bass (guitar) before shipment we found a flaw in the truss rod, and after we followed up with the serviceman we were told it take several months to fix. We are now confirming an exact due date.
Things being as they stand now, the situation is that we are unable to send it right away.
Dependent upon your request, we can do a refund or we can arrange for a replacement (we tried to find the same model, but we could not find it.).
Thank you once more, and please let us know how you would like to proceed.

元の翻訳
Listing this as "in excellent condition" in your description is improper. Instead, it is an extraordinary exaggeration to make people think that that item's condition is in top shape. I believed in your listing of the item as "excellent condition," then bought the item from you. Foolhardily, I ended up buying your extremely over-rated junk items, the cause being that your description is a far cry from the actual condition of the item. That is not the proper way to conduct business. Accordingly, you should respond by accepting a return refunding my money.

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Listing this as "in excellent condition" in your description is improper. Instead, it is an extraordinary exaggeration to make people think that that item's condition is in top shape. I believed in your listing of the item as "excellent condition," then bought the item from you. Foolhardily, I ended up buying your extremely over-rated junk items, the cause being that your description is a far cry from the actual condition of the item. That is not the proper way to conduct business. Accordingly, you should respond by accepting a return and refunding my money.

元の翻訳
Thanks for introducing your little brother.
Is the product your brother is looking for this?
If he's going to buy this product there are other sellers besides me that sell it much more cheaply.
If he decides to buy from me I think it will be well over $300.
This is an item I will be selling again around June, so if he buys around that time I think I can sell it pretty cheap then.
The reason the other sellers are so cheap could be that it's leftover stock from a long time ago, or there's a chance that it could just be the June listing price that was posted by mistake.
If I send it through EMS, it will arrive approximately 3-7 days after shipment.
Please try sharing this information with your brother.
The weekend is my time off so my reply will come at the beginning of next week.

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Thanks for introducing your little brother.
Is this the product your brother is looking for?
If he's going to buy this product there are other sellers besides me that sell it much cheaper.
If he decides to buy from me I think it will be well over $300.
This is an item I will be selling again around June, so if he buys around that time I think I can sell it pretty cheap then.
The reason the other sellers are so cheap could be that it's leftover stock from a long time ago, or there's a chance that it could just be the June listing price that was posted by mistake.
If I send it through EMS, it will arrive approximately 3-7 days after shipment.
Please try sharing this information with your brother.
The weekend is my time off so my reply will come at the beginning of next week.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for contacting you so late.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Was it your wish for us to send a completely assembled bicycle per your request?
That, or did you want it in parts?

If you want a completely assembled bicycle the shipping fees will be quite expensive, so if that is what you would prefer please let us know in advance. If possible, please send the requested product URL, name, and the number of parts (if it is split).

We will look into the shipping costs and approximately how many days it will take to get there.
Thank you very much.

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I am sorry for contacting you so late.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Was it your wish for us to send a completely assembled bicycle?
Or did you want it in parts?

If you want a completely assembled bicycle, the shipping fees will be quite expensive, so if that is what you would prefer, please let us know in advance. If possible, please send the requested product URL, name, and the number of parts (if it is split [mistranslation]).

We will look into the shipping costs and approximately how many days it will take to get there.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for contacting you so late.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Was it your wish for us to send a completely assembled bicycle per your request?
That, or did you want it in parts?

If you want a completely assembled bicycle the shipping fees will be quite expensive, so if that is what you would prefer please let us know in advance. If possible, please send the requested product URL, name, and the number of parts (if it is split).

We will look into the shipping costs and approximately how many days it will take to get there.
Thank you very much.

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I am sorry for contacting you so late.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Was it your wish for us to send a completely assembled bicycle?
Or did you want it in parts?

If you want a completely assembled bicycle the shipping fees will be quite expensive, so if that is what you would prefer please let us know in advance. If possible, please send the requested product URL, name, and the number of parts (if it is split).

We will look into the shipping costs and approximately how many days it will take to get there.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
There was a product defect found with A.
The front jib and end jib don't connect.
This is because the connecting piece for the front jib is deformed.
This was discovered after it was sold to the customer.
Many attempts were made unsuccessfully to connect and separate and it made a lot of scratches.
Please send 1 additional unit of A together with this order.
It's a little difficult to grasp from the picture, but I am attaching a photo just in case.


Is the product picture for this rug the size 5' x 8'?
If this rug is the size 7'6" x 9'6" will the pattern also increase?
Furthermore, will it enlarge the size of the pattern itself?

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There was a product defect found with A.
The front jib and end jib don't connect.
This is because the connecting piece for the front jib is deformed.
This was discovered after it was sold to the customer.
Many attempts were made unsuccessfully to connect and separate and it made a lot of scratches.
Please send 1 additional unit of A together with this order for free.
It's a little difficult to grasp from the picture, but I am attaching a photo just in case.


Is the product picture for this rug the size 5' x 8'?
If this rug is the size 7'6" x 9'6" will the pattern also increase?
Furthermore, will it enlarge the size of the pattern itself?

元の翻訳
Please inform me of the following 2 things.

・Once their company finds a bank, when shall initiate the wire-transfer to the bank A company specifies?
Also, is it possible to obtain all of the necessary information?

・I plan to go to Paris for a business trip March 19th and 20th.
If possible I was thinking that I would like to attend the board meeting for A company, however, is this possible?
If we go by the list I received the other day, I am under the impression that I would be able to attend the the planned meeting for March 20th regarding the Series D investments.

Further, if you are able to inform me of any meetings I can attend on March 19th it would be a great help.

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Please inform me of the following 2 things.

・Once their company finds a bank, when shall initiate the wire-transfer to the bank A company specifies?
Also, is it possible to obtain all of the necessary information?

・I plan to go to Paris for a business trip on March 19th and 20th.
If possible I was thinking that I would like to attend the board meeting for A company, however, is this possible?
If we go by the list I received the other day, I am under the impression that I would be able to attend the planned meeting for March 20th regarding the Series D investments.

Further, if you are able to inform me of any meetings I can attend on March 19th it would be a great help.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for sending the products.
Can I have you email the invoice to me?

As of the writing of this email, PK still hasn't closed their account.
I will try inquiring with PK one more time.

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Thank you very much for sending the products.
Can I have you email the invoice to me?

As of the writing of this email, PK still hasn't closed their account.
I will try to inquire with PK one more time.

元の翻訳
①When you are performing the check, using your hands try picking it up at least twice.
②When looking at the item, without fail pick it up using both hands.
③Check it as if you were using it in real practice.
④Make sure you can put it together and combine it.
⑤Attempt to move or revolve it using your hands while seeing if it's better to move it or rotate it.
⑥Try hitting it with your hands and shaking it.
⑦Try pushing and pulling it.
⑧Try disassembling and cutting it.
⑨Try using it to its maximum limit.
⑩As time passes, check the items and think about what changes (changes over time) have occurred.
Take responsibility and have pride in your work.

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①When you are performing the check, use your hands trying to pick it up at least twice.
②When looking at the item, without failing to pick it up using both hands.
③Check it as if you were using it in real practice.
④Make sure you can put it together and combine it.
⑤Attempt to move or revolve it using your hands while seeing if it's better to move it or rotate it.
⑥Try hitting it with your hands and shaking it.
⑦Try pushing and pulling it.
⑧Try disassembling and cutting it.
⑨Try using it to its maximum limit.
⑩As time passes, check the items and think about what changes (changes over time) have occurred.
Take responsibility and have pride in your work.

元の翻訳
I will bring another company's unscented sample to Vietnam.

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I will bring an unscented sample from another company to Vietnam.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the response.

My reply is regarding the above mentioned incident.

We have inconvenienced you and caused you to worry.
We still do not fully understand the cause of the incident, but we think it is a problem with the driver.
Please install the newest driver from the home page, then try connecting once more.
Home page address:

In order to understand the causes for this incident, is it possible for you to tell us the specifications of the PC being used?

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Thank you for the response.

My reply is regarding the above mentioned incident.

We have inconvenienced you and caused you to worry.
We still do not fully understand the cause of the incident, but we think it is a problem with the driver.
Please install the newest driver from the home page,and try connecting it once again.
Home page address:

In order to understand the causes for this incident, could you please let us know us the specifications of the PC being used?

元の翻訳
Below you will find the details regarding how to manually adjust time on your watch.

1. After pushing and holding the A button for 5 seconds, the watch will enter time adjust mode.

2. Pushing the B button will move the time forward 1 minute.
(If you continue to push and hold the B button, the minutes will continue to move forward. Pushing the B button once more will cancel this operation.)

Pushing the D button will move the time back 1 minute.
(If you continue to push and hold the D button, the minutes will continue to move backward. Pushing the D button once more will cancel this operation.)

3. Pushing the C button will forward you to the next adjustment operation.

4. Pushing the A button will stop the time adjustment module.

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Below you will find the details regarding how to manually adjust the time on your watch.

1. After pushing and holding the A button for 5 seconds, the watch will enter time adjust mode.

2. Pushing the B button will move the time forward 1 minute.
(If you continue to push and hold the B button, the minutes will continue to move forward. Pushing the B button once more will cancel this operation.)

Pushing the D button will move the time back 1 minute.
(If you continue to push and hold the D button, the minutes will continue to move backward. Pushing the D button once more will cancel this operation.)

3. Pushing the C button will forward you to the next adjustment operation.

4. Pushing the A button will stop the time adjustment module.

元の翻訳
We are terribly sorry for the great deal of inconvenience we have caused your company and the buyer. I was not able to to maintain the 1%< unfulfilled order rate (ODR). I deeply apologize for this.
The problem's cause was the "Negative Feedback Rate" and "Filed A-to-Z Claim Rate" both fell below client expectations and they were not satisfied.
All of the orders from XX/XX up until now have been all completely processed.



This is the "Negative Feedback Rate" from the time of the implementation of my new selling plan.

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We are terribly sorry for the great deal of inconvenience we have caused your company and the buyer. I was not able to to maintain the 1%< unfulfilled order rate (ODR). I deeply apologize for this.
The cause of the problem is reduced level of satisfaction of buyers in the occurrence of Filed A-to-z Claim Rate and Negative Feedback Rate.
All of the orders from XX/XX up until now have been all completely processed.



This is the "Negative Feedback Rate" from the time of the implementation of my new selling plan.

元の翻訳
■『Ayumi Hamasaki premium showcase ～Feel the love～ goods』Featured page
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/ayu14ms/(in coordination with PC/MB)

■mu-mo shop's featured item：Stationery set （clear mini file, memo sheets, ball point pen）

※ABC-MART Shibuya store's special edition bag not included.
※Scheduled delivery for end of July（possibility thatt delivery date may change without notice）

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■『Ayumi Hamasaki premium showcase ～Feel the love～ goods』Featured page
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/ayu14ms/(compatible with PC/MB)

■mu-mo shop's featured item：Stationery set （clear mini file, note pad, ball point pen）

※ABC-MART Shibuya store's special edition bag not included.
※Scheduled delivery for end of July（It is possible that the delivery date may change without notice）

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
I apologize for my delayed response.

Unfortunately, this particular merchandise was sent back to the manufacturer.
To remedy the situation we will issue you a full refund.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for your message.
I apologize for my delayed response.

Unfortunately, this particular merchandise we shipped to you was sent back to us.
To remedy the situation we will issue you a full refund.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
*Thermal, cooler, the "Magic Bottle Tumbler" with its slim and compact design fits snugly in your bag. Whether it's hot drinks in the winter or cool drinks in the summer, it's your go-to tumbler for any occasion all year long.
*The anti-leak safety lock, "one-push opening lid" can be opened wide even with only one hand. You'll be able to enjoy your beverage in no time without having to hassle with the lid.
*The inside of the bottle was manufactured with the "super clean" interior. Difficult to stain, easy to wash, you'll have no trouble keeping it clean with even a simple wash.
*Effective hot beverage holding time/temperature (1 hour/6 hours): 85℃ and above/65℃ and above Effective cold beverage holding time/temperature: (6 hours): 7℃ and below

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*It heats, it cools, the "Magic Bottle Tumbler" with its slim and compact design fits snugly in your bag. Whether it's hot drinks in the winter or cool drinks in the summer, it's your go-to tumbler for any occasion all year long.
*The anti-leak safety lock, the "one-push opening lid," can be opened wide even with only one hand. You'll be able to enjoy your beverage in no time without having to hassle with the lid.
*The inside of the bottle was manufactured with the "super clean" interior. Difficult to stain, easy to wash, you'll have no trouble keeping it clean with even a simple wash.
*Hot beverage insulation times: 1 hour for 85℃ and above, 6 hours for 65℃ and above; cold beverage insulation time: 6 hours for 7℃ and below

元の翻訳
I saw your email.

After investigating the causes of the issue, we found the following problems and have detailed them for you below.

1. After receipt of the order, there was a mistake when the shipment was made from the manufacturer's warehouse
2. The courier responsible did not confirm the products from the order

Until we received communications from you we were not aware of aforementioned errors regarding the products.
Furthermore, after that we also did not give you appropriate service to make up for the error.
I deeply apologize for the mistakes and the inconvenience.

From now on, we will resolve the causes of the problem and commit to giving you the best service that meets your needs and brings you satisfaction.
Thank you for your valuable contributions in pointing out this mistake.

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I saw your email.

After investigating the causes of the issue, we found the following problems and have detailed them for you below.

1. After receiving the order, there was a mistake when the shipment was made from the manufacturer's warehouse
2. The courier responsible did not confirm the products from the order

Until we received communications from you we were not aware of aforementioned errors regarding the products.
Furthermore, after that we also did not give you appropriate service to make up for the error.
I deeply apologize for the mistakes and the inconvenience.

From now on, we will resolve the causes of the problem and commit to giving you the best service that meets your needs and brings you satisfaction.
Thank you for your valuable contributions in pointing out this mistake.