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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2015/02/23 08:14:02

brandon-blaisdell
brandon-blaisdell 52 Hello! My name is Brandon and I am 1/...
日本語

①チェックするときは二つ以上手にとって見ること
②物を見るときは必ず両手にとって見ること
③実用状態と同じ姿勢にしてチェックすること
④組合わせたり結合したりして確かめること
⑤動くべきところや回転すべきところは手で動かしたり、回したりしてみること
⑥手で叩いたり、ゆすったりしてみること
⑦引張ったり、押したりしてみること
⑧分解したり、カットしてみること
⑨使用限界状態にしてみること
⑩時間または日が経つと変化する(経時変化)物もある事を考えてチェックすること
責任と誇りをもって作業する

英語

①When you are performing the check, using your hands try picking it up at least twice.
②When looking at the item, without fail pick it up using both hands.
③Check it as if you were using it in real practice.
④Make sure you can put it together and combine it.
⑤Attempt to move or revolve it using your hands while seeing if it's better to move it or rotate it.
⑥Try hitting it with your hands and shaking it.
⑦Try pushing and pulling it.
⑧Try disassembling and cutting it.
⑨Try using it to its maximum limit.
⑩As time passes, check the items and think about what changes (changes over time) have occurred.
Take responsibility and have pride in your work.

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yxn667 52 Conyacでの翻訳経歴(2014年10月登録): Standard依頼...
yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/24 09:18:15

元の翻訳
①When you are performing the check, using your hands try picking it up at least twice.
②When looking at the item, without fail pick it up using both hands.
③Check it as if you were using it in real practice.
④Make sure you can put it together and combine it.
⑤Attempt to move or revolve it using your hands while seeing if it's better to move it or rotate it.
⑥Try hitting it with your hands and shaking it.
⑦Try pushing and pulling it.
⑧Try disassembling and cutting it.
⑨Try using it to its maximum limit.
⑩As time passes, check the items and think about what changes (changes over time) have occurred.
Take responsibility and have pride in your work.

修正後
①When you are performing the check, use your hands trying to pick it up at least twice.
②When looking at the item, without failing to pick it up using both hands.
③Check it as if you were using it in real practice.
④Make sure you can put it together and combine it.
⑤Attempt to move or revolve it using your hands while seeing if it's better to move it or rotate it.
⑥Try hitting it with your hands and shaking it.
⑦Try pushing and pulling it.
⑧Try disassembling and cutting it.
⑨Try using it to its maximum limit.
⑩As time passes, check the items and think about what changes (changes over time) have occurred.
Take responsibility and have pride in your work.

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