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★Name
Mariya Suzuki
★Height
158cm
★DOB
09/26/1999
★Hometown
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood type
O
★Hobby
Karaoke, exercise,
★Special talent
Copying Donald Duck
★Favourite talent
Ayumi Hamasaki
★Favourite artist/talent
Michael Jackson, AAA

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★Name
Mariya Suzuki
★Height
158cm
★DOB
09/26/1999
★Hometown
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood type
O
★Hobby
Karaoke, exercise
★Special talent
Imitating Donald Duck
★Favourite talent
Ayumi Hamasaki
★Favourite artist/talent
Michael Jackson, AAA

元の翻訳
<NANTA is the best!>
I have watched NANTA for about five to six times before, but I took my wife with me for the first time this time. I wasn't able to describe how good it was to her, but she was impressed and very satisfied with the show. NANTA is the best no matter how many times I watch.

<NANTA>
"Completely satisfied" is the word for it. I took my parents and they were very happy about it.
They felt like they were not just watching but were a part of the show. They say that they want to take the aisle seats and participate for the next time.

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<NANTA is the best!>
I have watched NANTA for about five to six times before, but I took my wife with me for the first time this time. I wasn't able to describe how good it was to her, but she was impressed and very satisfied with the show. NANTA is the best no matter how many times I watch.

<NANTA>
"Completely satisfied" is the word for it. I took my parents and they were very happy about it.
They felt like they were not just watching but were a part of the show. They say that they definitely want to take the aisle seats and participate for the next time.

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<Expected too much.>

Thanks to the overwhelming effective publicity, I went to Seoul at the end of the year to see the show "Nanta". I went there with excitement and beating heart, but compared to expectations, I felt it was a bit half-baked. There was too much repetition of the same things. I think their performance was of a really high level. The originality of using tableware and foodstuffs was amazing.

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<Expected too much.>

Thanks to the overwhelming effective publicity, I went to Seoul at the end of the year to see the show "Nanta". I went there with much excitement and enthusiasm, but compared to what I was expecting I felt it was a bit half-baked because there was too much repetition of the same things. Still (however), I think their performance was of a really high level. The originality of the way they used tableware and foodstuffs was amazing.