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Thank you for bidding our item successfully this time.
Since it is a very valuable item, we will conduct thorough inspections prior to shipment.
We sure will pack the item extra carefully lest it should cause any damage to the item.
Hence therefore, it may take little longer than the regular shipment.
Thank you for your kind understanding!
Also, if you notice anything about the item upon receipt, we'd appreciate if you could notify prior to lifting the case.
We will strive to attain your satisfaction till the end of the transaction.
Upon completion of the shipment, we will get in touch with you again.

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Thank you for bidding our item successfully this time.
(Thank you for making a successful bid this time!)↵
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Since it is a very valuable item, we will conduct thorough inspections once again prior to the shipment.
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We sure will pack the item extra carefully lest it should cause any damage to the item.
(We will sure to pack the item thoroughly with extra care to prevent content from damage in any way.)↵
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Hence therefore, we may take little longer to ship the item than the ordinary shipment.
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Thank you for your kind understanding!
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Also, if you notice any concern about the item upon receipt, we'd appreciate if you could notify us through the message page prior to opening the case.
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We strive to attain winning bidders’ satisfaction till the end of the business.
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Upon completion of the shipment, we will get in touch with you again.↵

元の翻訳
Caustic Window Digipak と空のCDrの御注文有難うございました。しかしながら御注文頂いたお品をお受け取いただくにあたり、当方で修正すべき問題が二点ございます。
英語表記のあて先の住所を印刷したいのでご連絡ください。ＰａｙＰａｌ上で住所登録を頂いてもアップデート可能で、こちらでも確認することが可能です。
お支払いオプションで御選択頂いたのがアメリカとなっておりますが、お客様の御住所が日本となっておりますので国際配送を御選択いただく必要がございます。金額で言うと2ドルの差です。御希望であれば現行の御注文を返金させて頂きますので、御注文ページの選択メニューより再度正しい国際配送オプションを御選択頂き御注文くださいますようお願い申し上げます。

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Caustic Window Digipak と生CD-Rの御注文有難うございました。しかしながら御注文頂いたお品をお受け取いただくにあたり、当方で修正すべき問題が二点ございます。
英語表記のあて先の住所を印刷したいのでご連絡ください。ＰａｙＰａｌ上で住所登録を頂いてもアップデート可能で、こちらでも確認することが可能です。
お支払いオプションで御選択頂いたのがアメリカとなっておりますが、お客様の御住所が日本となっておりますので国際配送を御選択いただく必要がございます。金額で言うと2ドルの差です。御希望であれば現行の御注文を返金させて頂きますので、御注文ページの選択メニューより再度正しい国際配送オプションを御選択頂き御注文くださいますようお願い申し上げます。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I am going to return #Y113709294, sokindly cancel the order.
I will notify the tracking number later on.

I would like to return the item, so please take care of the shipment.
We appreciate your thorough packing upon shipment.
Please let us know the tracking number after shipment.

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Thank you for your reply.
I am going to return #Y113709294, so please kindly cancel the order.
I will notify the tracking number later on.

I would like to return the item, so please take care of the shipment of the replacement.
We appreciate if you pack the replacement thoroughly upon shipment.
Please let us know the tracking number after shipment.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I am going to return #Y113709294, sokindly cancel the order.
I will notify the tracking number later on.

I would like to return the item, so please take care of the shipment.
We appreciate your thorough packing upon shipment.
Please let us know the tracking number after shipment.

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Thank you for your reply.
As I am going to return #Y113709294, please kindly cancel the order.
I will notify the tracking number later on.

Please ship it out as I I would like to return the item.
I would appreciate that you could pack it nicely.
Please let us know the tracking number after shipment.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your patience.
Your item will be shipped for Japan today.
After shipment, we will notify you with the tracking number.

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Thank you for your patience.
Your item will be shipped for Japan [Japan?] today.
After shipment is complete, we will notify you with the tracking number.

元の翻訳
販売中：　有名なディズニーアーティストJames Colemanの手書きサインと番号つきペーパーリトグラフです！タイトルは"Splendiferous Picnic”　「華麗なピクニック」。このイメージはMINT状態です。eBayの他のセラーとは異なり、これらの写真は在庫されたものではありません。あなたが見ているそのままの状態でお届けします。私も個人的に所有しておりますが、すでに梱包が完了し発送を待つのみの状態となっております！正真正銘本物であるという鑑定書をおつけいたします。
JAMES COLEMANの名作を手に入れるまたとないチャンスです！ディズニーの現代クラシック版くまのぷーさんのキャラクター達と彼のユニークなスタイルを融合させて、James Coleman がまたしても最高傑作を生み出しました。"Splendiferous Picnic”　「華麗なるピクニック」はColeman によるペーパーリトグラフ限定版で、彼により番号が振られ、手書きでサインされたものです。鑑定書付！

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販売中：　有名なディズニーアーティストJames Colemanの手書きサインと番号つきペーパーリトグラフです！タイトルは"Splendiferous Picnic”　「華麗なピクニック」。このイメージはMINT状態です。eBayの他のセラーとは異なり、これらの写真は在庫品のものではありません。あなたが見ているそのままの状態でお届けします。私も個人的に所有しておりますが、すでに梱包が完了し発送を待つのみの状態となっております！正真正銘本物であるという鑑定書をおつけいたします。
JAMES COLEMANの名作を手に入れるまたとないチャンスです！ディズニーの現代クラシック版くまのぷーさんのキャラクター達と彼のユニークなスタイルを融合させて、James Coleman がまたしても最高傑作を生み出しました。"Splendiferous Picnic”　「華麗なるピクニック」はColeman によるペーパーリトグラフ限定版で、彼により番号が振られ、手書きでサインされたものです。鑑定書付！

元の翻訳
#ani

Is the new Tour Issue SLDRs460 Hot Head available for sale?
We are looking for the real loft between 9.8 to 10.5 degrees.
The colour is silver for US spec.

It is non-hosel without sleeve, and to stick the shaft in the head and glue as usual.

Could we also order for Matrix TP7HDe in addition to that?
It has to be TP7HDe instead of TP7HD.

Lastly, please let me know if you have the driver head for low loft (6 to 7 degrees).

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#ani

Is the new Tour Issue SLDRs460 Hot Head available for sale?
We are looking for the real loft between 9.8 to 10.5 degrees.
The colour is silver for US spec.

It is a non-hosel without a sleeve, and we would like the shaft glued to the head as usual.

Could we also order the Matrix TP7HDe in addition to that?
It has to be TP7HDe instead of TP7HD.

Lastly, please let me know if you have the driver head for low loft (6 to 7 degrees).

元の翻訳
#abit
We have barely started the sales of Tour Issue Jet Speed here in Japan.
As we cannot foresee the demand trend, we will keep our eyes on it and will get back to you when wee need extra.

On a separate note, in another email, we have requested the following inventory check. We were wondering if we could order some of them? If possible we need them ASAP.

#abit
Would it be possible to place an order for the below items?
We assume the it would be hard to get since the item is quite maniac.
It'd be great if you could confirm with the manufacturer.

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#abit
We have barely started the sales of the Tour Issue Jet Speed here in Japan.
As we cannot foresee the demand trend, we will keep our eyes on it and will get back to you when wee need extra.

On a separate note, in another email, we have requested the following inventory check. We were wondering if we could order some of them. If possible, we need them ASAP.

#abit
Would it be possible to place an order for the below item?
We assume the it would be hard to obtain since the item is quite maniac.
It'd be great if you could confirm with the manufacturer.

元の翻訳
#abit

配送料と手数料および税金の合計金額は: $0.00です。

もしお手続きがまだお済でない場合は、eBayよりお支払い金額を御送金ください。郵送にて支払いを御希望される場合はこちらのメールのコピーを下記住所宛にお送りください：

事前にお伝えしておこうと思ったのですが、ツアーイシューのJet Speedドライバーとフェアウェイウッドのヘッドがもう１バッチございます。これからすぐの入庫予定については不明ですが、こちらの商品が売り切れとなる前にもしお客様がいくつか御希望になられるかもしれないと思いご連絡差し上げた次第です。
ドライバーヘッド (9.5と 10.5)はそれぞれ10個、ロフトフェアウェイウッドヘッド (13, 15および 19)も各10個ずつ在庫がございます。
ある程度まとまった数量を御希望でしたら、お値引きもさせて頂きたいと存じます。

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#abit

配送料と手数料および税金を含めた合計金額は: $0.00です。

もしお手続きがまだお済でない場合は、eBayよりお支払い金額を御送金ください。郵送にて支払いを御希望される場合はこちらのメールのコピーを同封し、下記住所宛にお送りください：

事前にお伝えしておこうと思ったのですが、ツアーイシューのJet Speedドライバーとフェアウェイウッドのヘッドがもう１バッチございます。これからすぐの入庫予定については不明ですが、こちらの商品が売り切れとなる前にもしお客様がいくつか御希望になられるかもしれないと思いご連絡差し上げた次第です。
ドライバーヘッド (9.5と 10.5)はそれぞれ10個、ロフトフェアウェイウッドヘッド (13, 15および 19)も各10個ずつ在庫がございます。
ある程度まとまった数量を御希望でしたら、お値引きもさせて頂きたいと存じます。

元の翻訳
★Name
Seron Mizorogi
★Height
157cm
★DOB
04/22/1997
★Hometown
Tokyo
★Nickname
Seran
★Blood type
A
★Hobby
Make friends with animals
★Special talent
Self hair make
★Favourite talent
Lady GaGa
★Favourite artist/talent

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★Name
Seron Mizorogi
★Height
157cm
★DOB
04/22/1997
★Hometown
Tokyo
★Nickname
Seran
★Blood type
A
★Hobby
Make friends with animals
★Special talent
Self hair make
★Favourite artist/talent
Lady GaGa

元の翻訳
★Name
Yuuna Sekine
★Height
152cm
★DOB
09/28/1994
★Hometown
Saitama
★Nickname
Yu-nyan, Yuuna
★Blood type
B
★Hobby
Karaoke, shopping, movies, absolute hearing
★Special talent
Piano, balance ball
★Favourite talent
Girls' Generation
★Favourite artist/talent
Shota Shimizu

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★Name
Yuuna Sekine
★Height
152cm
★DOB
09/28/1994
★Hometown
Saitama
★Nickname
Yu-nyan, Yuuna
★Blood type
B
★Hobby
Karaoke, shopping, movies, perfect pitch
★Special talent
Piano, balance ball
★Favourite entertainer
Girls' Generation
★Favourite artist/entertainer
Shota Shimizu

元の翻訳
★Name
Mariya Suzuki
★Height
158cm
★DOB
09/26/1999
★Hometown
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood type
O
★Hobby
Karaoke, exercise,
★Special talent
Copying Donald Duck
★Favourite talent
Ayumi Hamasaki
★Favourite artist/talent
Michael Jackson, AAA

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★Name
Mariya Suzuki
★Height
158cm
★DOB
09/26/1999
★Hometown
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood type
O
★Hobby
Karaoke, exercise
★Special talent
Imitating Donald Duck
★Favourite talent
Ayumi Hamasaki
★Favourite artist/talent
Michael Jackson, AAA

元の翻訳
In particular, □□□ is very popular.

If it is of your interest, would you please send us necessary information regarding your wholesale prices and terms of condition along with the sales agency contract?

As for our major sales distribution channel, we have a wide variety ranging from the wholesales to the individual retail stores across the country to EC sites such as Rakuten, Amazon and the like.
Also, by making the most of our strengths in international trading, you could possibly expand your sales opportunities mainly in Europ and Asia.

We promise to contribute to your company's profits.

List of manufacturers we deal with:

How to apply for the sales agency contract

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In particular, □□□ is very popular.

If it is of your interest, would you please send us necessary information regarding your wholesale prices and terms of condition along with the sales agency contract?

As for our major sales distribution channel, we have a wide variety ranging from the wholesales to the individual retail stores across the country to EC sites such as Rakuten, Amazon and the like.
Also, by making the most of our strengths in international trading, you could possibly expand your sales opportunities mainly in Europe and Asia.

We promise to contribute to your company's profits.

List of manufacturers we deal with:

How to apply for the sales agency contract

元の翻訳
Here is the procedure:

1. First of all, please notify the delivery company with the damage of your item (*Sorry for the trouble, but you cannot move forward without this step). Write an incident report. They might ask you for the detailed explanation about what is stated in the report, but please be sure to explain the overview and the consequence of the incident with the item being damaged, though you are not a pro to make a proper judgment (we cannot do anything without it).

2. Your report will be submitted to our delivery company. This is where we will be able to submit a request for verification as our first action. Accordingly the incident will be verified at our end.

3. Upon confirmation, we will arrange a refund for the item price, shipping fee, and return shipment fee.

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Here is the procedure:

1. First of all, please notify the delivery company about the damage to your item (*Sorry for the trouble, but you cannot move forward without this step). Write an incident report. They might ask you for a detailed explanation about what is stated in the report, but please be sure to explain the overview and the consequence of the incident with the item being damaged, though you are not a professional to make a proper judgment (we cannot do anything without it).

2. Your report will be submitted to our delivery company. This is where we will be able to submit a request for verification as our first action. Accordingly the incident will be verified at our end.

3. Upon confirmation, we will arrange a refund for the item price, shipping fee, and return shipment fee.

元の翻訳
Sorry for my belated replly.
I, too love footbal. Japan seems like loosing the group league matches at the World Cup, but I will continue cheering them up till the end.
Anways, I am going to send you the invoice for two items through PayPal shortly.
I was wondering if you are going to purchase the below items of your interest?
Please let me know, then I could issue you the invoice for additional $○○.

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Sorry for my belated reply.
I, too love footbaｌl. Japan seems like loosing the group league matches at the World Cup, but I will continue cheering them up till the end.
Anyways, I am going to send you the invoice for two items through PayPal shortly.
I was wondering if you are going to purchase the below items of your interest?
Please let me know, then I could issue you the invoice for additional $○○.

元の翻訳
Here is the bug report. The admin itself gets banned when it bans other users at the admin panel under the admin authorization.
The problem is that information such as the admin's fullname and its email address are replaced with a user's value which is different from those banned. I was able to handle the issue by fixing the database directly via phpMyAdmin.

No need to reply. The bug fixed file is not necessary either.

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Here is the bug report. The admin himself gets banned when he bans other users at the admin panel using admin rights.
The problem is the value of the admin's fullname and email address are replaced with values of other users who were banned. I was able to handle the issue by fixing the database directly via phpMyAdmin.

No need to reply. The file with the bug fixed is not necessary either.

元の翻訳
今から注文します。正式な製品名の代わりにギフトとかその他の名称を記入して頂けますか？それからアメリカまで到着にどれぐらい時間を要しますか？

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今から注文[or発注]します。実際の製品名の代わりに[or実際の製品名ではなく]ギフトとかその他の名称を記入して頂けますか[orギフトなどと記入していただくことは可能ですか／明記していただけますか]？それからアメリカまで到着に[orアメリカまで郵送で／郵送すると]どれぐらい時間を要しますか[orどのくらいかかりますか]？