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I'd like to purchase this necklace, one each for silver (14 inches long) and gold (14 inches long). However since the inventory says there is only one left, it means I can only buy one. If there is anyway I could order those, please modify the stock quantity. Thank you and kind regards.

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I'd like to purchase these necklaces, a silver one (14 inches long) and a gold one (14 inches long). However, because there is only one left in stock, I can buy only one. If there is any way I could order those two, please modify the stock quantity. Thank you and kind regards.

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前述の通り、配送料を差し引いた返金をお願いします。配送料をお支払いする機会がなかったのでこのようなお願いをしています。eBay 返金保障を通じて減額された金額を返金いただけないということであれば、 こちらよりPayPal 経由で配送料分を御社の口座へ直接送金することも可能です。しかしながらこの場合は先に私へ連絡をお願いします。改めまして御迷惑をおかけしたことをお詫び申し上げます。

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前述の通り、配送料を差し引いた返金をお願いします。配送料をお支払いする機会がなかったのでこのようなお願いをしています。eBay 返金保障を通じて減額された金額を返金いただけないということであれば、 eBay 返金保障は使わずに、一般的なPayPalを通じた送金方法で返金頂いても結構です。それも不可能でしたら、こちらよりPayPal 経由で配送料分を御社の口座へ直接送金することも可能です。しかしながらこの場合は先に私へ連絡をお願いします。改めまして御迷惑をおかけしたことをお詫び申し上げます。

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<Impressive!>
My second visit to Korea. I travelled by myself this time. I saw NANTA during my first visit, so I booked Sachoom for trying something different. In addition to the high quality dance, sense of humour, and story itself, I was surprised to see the dancers spoke Korean, Japanese, Chinese, and Thai so fluently. I am learning multiple languages as well, so it was stimulating like no other. This experience made me fall in love with the Korean language even more. I sure will come to see the show again.

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<Impressed!>
This was my second visit to Korea. I travelled by myself this time. I saw NANTA during my first visit, so I booked Sachoom to try something different. In addition to the high quality dance, sense of humour and story itself, I was surprised to see the dancers spoke Korean, Japanese, Chinese and Thai so fluently. I am learning multiple languages as well, so it was a stimulating experience like no other. This experience made me fall in love with the Korean language even more. I will definitely come to see the show again.

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<BRAVO>
This show has been on my mind for quite sometime, but I had always ended up being swept away with other shows like NANTA. Just as usual, the best position was taken up, which was VELTRA unique, and just to see that part of the show made me feel exited. But once the show was started, in addition to its high artistic quality, mixed were the easy-to-follow commedies that has brought my tension at its height. The unforgettable part of the show was when I was brought up to the stage (got a T-shirt as a thank-you present).
Therer are four teams for respective themes, so next time I would like to try the other ones.

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<BRAVO>
This show has been on my mind for quite sometime, but I had always ended up being swept away with other shows like NANTA. Just as usual, the best position was taken up, which was VELTRA unique, and just to see that part of the show made me feel exited. But once the show was started, in addition to its high artistic quality, mixed were the easy-to-follow commedies that has brought my tension at its heighest. The unforgettable part of the show was when I was brought up to the stage (got a T-shirt as a thank-you present).
There are four teams for respective themes, so next time I would like to try the other ones.

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*The handshake event will be held per group, and those groups will be announced on the date of the event.
*The handshake event participation ticket will be handed out on the first-come-first-serve basis. Please know the handing out will end as soon as the last ticket will be gone.
*Upon reservation, please pay for the item and its shipping fee altogether (*the shipping fee will be applied for the mini album reservation only).
*Please be informed that no cancellation will be accepted after purchase through the reservation.
*The maximum quantity of purchase per person is limited up to 5 at a time.
*Please line up at the end of the queue if you wish to purchase more. Depending on the situation, the maximum quantity of your purchase may subject to change.

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*The handshake event will be held per group, and those groups will be announced on the date of the event.
*The handshake event participation ticket will be handed out on the first-come-first-serve basis. Please know the handing out will end as soon as the last ticket is gone.
*Upon reservation, please pay for the item and its shipping fee altogether (*the shipping fee will be applied for the mini album reservation only).
*Please be informed that no cancellation will be accepted after purchase through the reservation.
*The maximum quantity of purchase per person is limited up to 5 at a time.
*Please line up at the end of the queue if you wish to purchase more. Depending on the situation, the maximum quantity of your purchase may subject to change.

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On June 16th, "The Ordinary General Meeting, Heisei 26" was held at Keio Plaza Hotel by Japan Congress Convention Bureau. Approved were the report on the business activities and the settlement of accounts, as well as the business plan in Heisei 26.

Chairman Kuniko Inoguchi expressed her aspiration that "the Olympic/Paralympic games as an opportunity to appeal Japan's innovation, advanced science and technology, Japanese culture, and traditions, is the world's largest MICE. In order to further develop the international convention/ the fields of MICE, JCCB will further enhance its roles.

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On June 16th, "The 2014 Annual General Meeting" was held at Keio Plaza Hotel by the Japan Congress Convention Bureau. The report on the business activities and the settlement of accounts were approved, as well as the business plan for 2014.

Chairman Kuniko Inoguchi expressed her aspirations that, "the Olympic/Paralympic games is an opportunity to show off Japan's innovation, advanced science and technology, Japanese culture, and traditions, and the world's largest MICE. In order to further develop the international convention, the fields of MICE and JCCB will further enhance its roles."

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I have requested the forwarding company to receive the item.
Since the item was shipped due to the inconsistencies caused at your end, please cancel the order # Y113709294 upon receipt of the returned item at your end.

Considering the return shipment fee from Japan as well as the tariff for receiving an alternate item are too costly.

Although the wrong item was sent to me, I will just keep it.
Hencce therefore, I will decline receiving Order # Y113709294, so please cancel it accordingly.

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I have requested the forwarding company to receive （Rejectではないですか？）the item.
Since the item was shipped due to the mistake caused at your end, please cancel the order # Y113709294 upon receipt of the returned item at your end.

Considering the return shipment fee from Japan as well as the tariff for receiving an alternate item are too costly.

Although the wrong item was sent to me, I will just keep it.
Hence therefore, I will decline receiving Order # Y113709294, so please cancel it accordingly.

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One other thing to note, regarding the pricing error, we admit the fact that our response was not satisfactory.
Currently we have added an extra headcount in order to avoid such errors and conduct our item registration.
Nevertheless, if an error occurred and with a warning from your end, we promise to reinvestigate the issue within 24 hours and revise the price as appropriate.

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One other thing to note, regarding the pricing error, we admit the fact that our response was not satisfactory.
Currently, we have added an extra headcount in order to avoid such errors and conduct our item registration.
Nevertheless, if an error occurred and a warning comes from your end, we promise to re-investigate the issue within 24 hours and revise to suitable price.

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Avoiding sun, heat and humidity, keep the item in a place under 28 degree Celsius.

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Avoiding sun, heat and humidity, keep the item in a place under 28 degree Celsius (where possible).

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When would this package be reflected on my account?
I would like to proceed with the shipping request COB today.

What a nice surprise to know you are Jon's sister and the same age as me since he has never told me about you before.
Thank you for showing me the pilot model for A. I think it's a wonderful product.
In addition too my previous order with 2 sets, I would like to place an order with 4 sets this time.

The last 2 sets were delivered to the third party company I entrust. However since the package had a wrong shipping address with a wrong name of recipent, it was routed and kept in another warehouse. Please be sure to have the sender to ship with the correct information.

Does B come with an aluminum case?

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When will this package be reflected on my account?
I would like to proceed with the shipping request COB today.

What a nice surprise to know you are Jon's sister and the same age as me since he has never told me about you before.
Thank you for showing me the pilot model for A. I think it's a wonderful product.
In addition to my previous order with 2 sets, I would like to place an order with another 4 sets this time.

The last 2 sets were delivered to the third party company I entrust. However since the package had a wrong shipping address with a wrong name of recipient, it was routed and kept in another warehouse. Please be sure to have the sender to ship with the correct information.

Does B come with an aluminum case?

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Thank you for your message.
Although we are not able to take the photos of the item being kept in the warehouse, the item comes with the flower prints, ribbons, metal mascots attached on the ears aadn soles.
◆Size: Approximately 170 x 150 x 75 mm
◆Features: made with boa, attached metal mascots

Please also be informed that this item has already been shipped under the following tracking number:
RR906333451JP
It should be before long to receive your item as it was shipped via EMS.

Certainly.
We will reship the item.
Thank you for your kind regards.

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Thank you for your message.
Although we are not able to take the photos of the item being kept in the warehouse, the item comes with the flower prints, ribbons, metal mascots attached on the ears and soles.
◆Size: Approximately 170 x 150 x 75 mm
◆Features: made with boa, attached metal mascots

Please also be informed that this item has already been shipped under the following tracking number:
RR906333451JP
It should be before long to receive your item as it was shipped via EMS.

Certainly.
We will reship the item.
Thank you for your kind regards.

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<Applicable event items>
Mini album released on Wed 6/18 "Together" Loppi/HMV limited version（AVC1-39164）, CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

*Your participation will be rejected if both tickets "Numbered event ticket" and "Handshaking event participation ticket" as a set. These tickets will be collected at the handshaking event.
*Please assemble on the below scheduled time and line in the queue.
*The handshaking event will be finished once the queue ends.

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<Applicable event items>
Mini album released on Wed 6/18 "Together" Loppi/HMV limited version（AVC1-39164）, CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

*Your participation will be rejected if both tickets "Numbered event ticket" and "Handshaking event participation ticket" are not presented as a set. These tickets will be collected at the handshaking event.
*Please assemble at the scheduled time below and join the queue.
*The handshaking event will be finished once the queue ends.

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*Applicable CD for the event is scheduled to be delivered to the stores on Tuesday, June 17.
*Those stores issuing the event numbering ticket will also be the venues for the handshaking event.
*Only the limited quantity of the numbering tickets for the event is available.

<Notice>
*Baggage inspection or baggage room may be established for the safetiness of our customers, artists, or talents.
*Those event venues are administered with high security, however if you happend to find suspicious individual or objects, please let our security guards know.

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*Applicable CD for the event is scheduled to be delivered to the stores on Tuesday, June 17 afternoon.
*Those stores issuing the event numbering ticket will also be the venues for the handshaking event.
*Only the limited quantity of the numbering tickets for the event will be available.

<Notice>
*Baggage inspection or baggage room may be established for the safety of our customers, artists, or talents.
*Those event venues are administered with a high security, however if you happened to find suspicious individual or objects, please let our security guards know.

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18：00-
Yuuna Sekine, Rino Shimazaki, Yuriya Suzuki, Mariya Suzuki

19:00-
Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizorogi, Hina Nagai

Assembling time: 17:45
Event start: 18:00

<Notice from SHIBUYA TSUTAYA>
- No space available for audiences for the store event.
- No locker/cloak available at the venue. Please take care of your own belongings.
- Phone reservation available (tickets may subject to the maximum quantity set for phone reservation).

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18：00-
Yuuna Sekine, Rino Shimazaki, Yuriya Suzuki, Mariya Suzuki

19:00-
Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizorogi, Hina Nagai

Assembling time: 17:45
Event start: 18:00

<Notice from SHIBUYA TSUTAYA>
- No space available for audiences for the store event.
- No locker/cloak available at the venue. Please take care of your own belongings.
- Phone reservation available (tickets may be subject to the maximum quantity set for phone reservations).

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*Please know prior to event that the item and content of the portrait may subject to rejection by the staff's decision.
*Drawing pens for the portrait will be provided from our end.

<Common notice for all>
*The entire members will show at the event.
*Respective parts for the event will end once their queues end. Thank you in advance.
*Respective parts' event cannot be participated with the event ticket only. Please be sure to bring it together with the handshaking participation ticket.

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*Please know prior to event that the item and content of the portrait may be subject to rejection by the staff's decision.
*Drawing pens for the portrait will be provided from our end.

<Common notice for all events>
*All members will appear at the event.
*Respective parts for the event will end once their queues end. Thank you in advance.
*You cannot participate in the event activities with the event ticket only. Please be sure to bring it together with the handshaking participation ticket.

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[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30) for New York by air
----- crossing International Date Line-----
Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

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[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30 JST) for New York by air
----- crossing International Date Line-----
Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25 EDT), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]