Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

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It was a very beautiful house with a fully equipped kitchen facilty. It's perfect.
Also, it was by the ocean so I was able to spend some quality time.

Thank you very much for everything.

p.s. As I did not have the occasion to meet with you, so I left a souvenir I brought from Japan at the cottage: the popular Japanese chocolate and Japanese hand towel. I hope you will like them.

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It was a very beautiful house with a fully equipped kitchen facility. It was perfect.
Also, the ocean was very near so I could spend good quality time.

Thank you very much for everything.

PS As I did not have any chance to meet you, so I left some gifts I brought from Japan at the cottage: the popular Japanese chocolate and Japanese hand towel. I hope you will like them.

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At the end of Muromachi Era (AD 1336–1573), as Sukesada created swords at his studio, many swordsmith named themselves with Sukesada signature, there are many Sukesada works with a variety of secular names.
Amongst of all, Yozaemon Sukesada（原文に出てくる該当名称はこれ以外ではヨザエモンノジョウスケサダとなっているので、もしこちらも統一なさる場合はYozaemon no jo Sukesadaに変更をお願い致します） is first on the list known to be one of the best Bizen swordsmiths such as Kakimitsu and Kiyomizu.
Being slightly different from the signature of Yozaemon no jo Sukesada of Tenmon, and although the signature may have been named as the latter event, this sword is considered to be created from the same swordsmith's studio and it will enter tain you with the typical style of Yozaemon no jo Sukesada.

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At the end of Muromachi Era (AD 1336–1573), as Sukesada created swords at his studio, many swordsmith named themselves with Sukesada signature, there are many Sukesada works with a variety of secular names.
Amongst of all, Yozaemon Sukesada（原文に出てくる該当名称はこれ以外ではヨザエモンノジョウスケサダとなっているので、もしこちらも統一なさる場合はYozaemon no jo Sukesadaに変更をお願い致します） is first on the list known to be one of the best Bizen swordsmiths such as Kakimitsu and Kiyomizu.
Being slightly different from the signature of Yozaemon no jo Sukesada of Tenmon, and although the signature may have been named as the latter event, this sword is considered to be created from the same swordsmith's studio and it will entertain you with the typical style of Yozaemon no jo Sukesada.

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This razor has been sold out in the past already, but I made a mistake during the items management and operated it to be reshipped. Please accept my sincere apologies for the inconvenience that has been caused to you due to my lack of attention for the management. I will sell my items to you with 5% discount as the sign of my apologies to you.

I hope this misunderstanding will be resolved.

（ここから下の文章は翻訳における指示内容かとおもいますが、念のために英訳しておきます）
The buyer misunderstands that I am inappropriately pulling up the auction price by hiring a third-party agent.
The administrator at eBay should be able to confirm that I don't do such things.
Therefore, I would like eBay as an administrator to send the buyer an email to resove the misunderstanding.

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This razor has been sold out in the past already, but I made a mistake during the items management and operated it to be reshipped. Please accept my sincere apologies for the inconvenience that has been caused to you due to my lack of attention for the management. I will sell my items to you with 5% discount as the sign of my apologies to you.

I hope this misunderstanding will be resolved.

（ここから下の文章は翻訳における指示内容かとおもいますが、念のために英訳しておきます）
The buyer misunderstands that I am inappropriately pulling up the auction price by hiring a third-party agent.
The administrator at eBay should be able to confirm that I don't do such things.
Therefore, I would like eBay as an administrator to send the buyer an email to resolve the misunderstanding.

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お客様、
弊店にてご注文賜り大変ありがとうございます。
勿論DHL経由でお客様宛てに無料配送をお受けいたします。
小包の外面に請求書添付も対応可能です。請求書での申告金額はいくらに設定すればよろしいでしょうか？
ご連絡お待ちしております。
敬具

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お客様、
弊店にてご注文賜り誠にありがとうございます。
勿論DHL経由でお客様宛てに無料配送をお受けいたします。
小包の外面に請求書添付も対応可能です。請求書での申告金額はいくらに設定すればよろしいでしょうか？
ご連絡お待ちしております。
敬具

元の翻訳
All of our female staff at my company concurred in accordance and have come to the conlusion that the dress is wonderful.
As far as the dress is concerned, there were no issues at all. So we would love to do the business with you by all means.

I believe I heard the item is made in Thailand, but I found the item's tag said made in China. Is it really so?

If made in China, please do let me know as we will have to confirm a few concerns from the customs point of view.

Rather than simply selling as a Japanese distributor, we will be able to deal with your items with full of responsibility and morale.

As a result of our internal discussion, based upon the judgment for 00 being wonderful,

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All of our female staff at my company concurred in accordance and have come to the conlusion that the dress is wonderful.
As far as the dress is concerned, there were no issues at all. So we would love to do the business with you by all means.

I believe I heard the item is made in Thailand, but I found the item's tag saying it is made in China. Is it really so?

If made in China, please do let me know as we will have to confirm a few concerns from the customs point of view.

Rather than simply selling as a Japanese distributor, we will be able to deal with your items with full of responsibility and morale.

As a result of our internal discussion, based upon the judgment for 00 being wonderful,

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#will

Today the item has arrived in Japan. Thank you for seinding the hats, stickers, etc. Please let me know, for my sales reference, if these items are for general sales merchandises? Or are they TOURISSE items? It would be helpful if you could share the manufacturer's website where the product descriptions are found. I also found FUJIKURA's catalogue included, but I did not quite understand the point. Does this mean that I could order what I want from the catalogue?

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#will

Today the item has arrived in Japan. Thank you for sending the hats, stickers, etc. Please let me know, for my sales reference, if these items are for general sales merchandises? Or are they TOURISSUE items? It would be helpful if you could share the manufacturer's website where the product descriptions are found. I also found FUJIKURA's catalogue included, but I did not quite understand the point. Does this mean that I could order what I want from the catalogue?

元の翻訳
もしこの製品の支払を済ませたら、11月6日前に彼宛に送ってくれますか？在庫があることとブラジルへの出荷は対応頂けますか？ご確認頂いてもよろしいでしょうか？宜しくお願い致します。

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もしこの製品の支払を済ませたら、11月6日までに彼宛に送ってくれますか？　在庫はありますでしょうか？　そしてブラジルへの出荷は対応頂けますか？　ご確認頂いてもよろしいでしょうか？　宜しくお願い致します。

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The item was ready for shipping, and we were able to receive the item after payment.
However, according to the delivery details received to day, there are only about 50 pieces of clothes we could receive.
To what extent of the item shipping stauts shall we trust to send the money?
Due to the issue of the shipping content this time, our client considers you are not trustworthy.
It would be acceptable if it was within the reasonable range of the quantity change, but the present status does not make any sense to us.
Is there any way you could change back to the delivery details as were stated on the invoice we received two weeks ago?

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The item was ready for shipping, and we were able to receive the item after payment.
However, according to the delivery details received today, there are only about 50 pieces of clothes we could receive.
To what extent shall we trust the item shipping stauts to send the money?
Due to the issue of the shipping content this time, our client considers we are not trustworthy.
It would be acceptable if it was within the reasonable range of the quantity change, but the present status does not make any sense to us.
Is there any way you could change back to the delivery details as they were stated on the invoice we received two weeks ago?

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Although I have received the ordered item the other day, I noticed it has quite a few differences from the original one I have with me.
Is this really original?
And did you conduct an inspection properly? Nothing shows when connecting this one with the main machine.
It seems to be a defected item, so please replace or refund.
Of course, I will return the item right away.
So, please let me know the return shipping address.

Anyways, please check the below URL as I have uploaded the movie as a proof of the defected item.

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Although I have received the ordered item the other day, I noticed it has quite a few differences from the original one I have with me.
Is this really original?
And did you conduct an inspection properly? Nothing shows when connecting this one with the main machine.
It seems to be a defected item, so please replace or give me a refund.
Of course, I will return the item right away.
So, please let me know the return shipping address.

Anyways, please check the below URL as I have uploaded the movie as a proof of the defected item.