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Thank you for your reply.

I duly understand that this ball-point pen is 20 years old.

Even a slightest defalt can deprive the whole virtue of the collection. Being old does not justify peelings of the paint or scratches.

I bought this item because the description said it was new, thus assumed it should have no scraches or anything.

It is very regrettable that you failed to give detailed description of the item when you put it on sale.

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Thank you for your reply.

I definitely understand that this ball-point pen is a 20 year old item.

Even a slightest defect removes the value of the collection. It is not an excuse that the paint comes off or there are scratches because it's old.

I bought this item because it was described as new, and assumed that there are no such thing as scratches.

It is very regrettable that you failed to give a detailed description of the item when you put it on sale.

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書留航空便（普通）では伝説の布は4枚送れますか、それとも2枚だけですか？

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書留航空便（普通）では聖衣は4枚送れますか、それとも2枚だけですか？

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This is to inform you about shipping of the item.

Unfortunately, we have found a defect on the fender gig case which comes along the bass. As we have ordered a new one, shipping to you will be delayed until Sep.1. We apologize for the inconvenience this may cause you.

The bass guitar is brand new without any issue. We will let you know the tracking number as soon as it is available.

We appreciate your patience.

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This is to inform you about the shipping of the item.

Unfortunately, we have found a defect on the fender gig case which comes along with the bass. We have ordered a new one, so shipping it to you would take until September 1. We apologize for the inconvenience this may cause you.

The bass guitar is brand new and has no problems. We will let you know the tracking number as soon as it is available.

Thank you for your patience.

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のこぎりはまだ発送していません。それ自体には何の問題も無く、説明どおりのものなのですが、工場に在庫が無いので、現時点ではお送りすることができないのです。どうしたらよろしいでしょうか？
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（訳注：在庫が車で待つ、とか、それならキャンセルする、とかお返事を）

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のこぎりはまだ発送していません。それ自体には何の問題も無く、説明どおりのものなのですが、工場に在庫が無いので、現時点ではお送りすることができないのです。どうしたらよろしいでしょうか？

元の翻訳
Thank you for buying from us.

We inspected your item before shipping to find a dent on the box, although the item is new and unpacked.

If you would not want to buy it with this condition, we would accept cancel of your order. Please let us know.

We apologize for the inconvenience.

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Thank you for buying from us.

We inspected your item before shipping and found a dent on the box, although the item is new and unopened.

If you do not want to buy it in this condition, we would accept cancellation of your order. Please let us know.

We apologize for the inconvenience.

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Hello,

I live in Japan. I received the item today.

Although the product description said it was new, unused and unpacked, the item inside the box was damaged and the wire that is supposed to fix the power code was removed. This is not unpacked at all.

I expected to use it for a gift, but I cannot give this to someone.

I demand you either to accept return or 30% ($39) of partial refund. (I need extra time and money for just returning it to the U.S.)

If I will not hear from you, I will report to PayPal.

Thank you for your help.

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Hello,

I live in Japan. I received the item today.

Although the product description said it was new, unused and unpacked, the item inside the box was damaged and the wire that is supposed to fix the power code was removed. ↵
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This is not unpacked at all.

I expected to use it for a gift, but I cannot give this to someone.

I demand you either to accept return or 30% ($39) of partial refund. (I need extra time and money for just returning it to the U.S.)

If I will not hear from you, I will report to PayPal.

Thank you for your help.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.↵
We will refund you the full amount of the item as long as you return it to us within a week, however, please note that the shipping charge will not be refunded.

Thank you for your email.↵
I am also very glad that you are satisfied with our service.↵
I look forward to your next order.

Thank you for your email.↵
Has the item not arrived to you yet?↵
Let me look into it to see if we did anyting wrong.↵
I will ship it again as soon as I confirm the cause.↵
I will include a small gift for you then.↵
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(訳注：「確認取れ次第」というのは「こちらの不手際であったことが明らかになったら」かと思ったのですが、そうすると、他に原因があったときには送らないわけ？と思い、「原因が明らかになり次第送る」ということにしています）

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Thank you for your email. We will refund you the full amount of the item as long as you return it to us within a week, but please note that the shipping charge will not be refunded.

Thank you for your email. I am also very glad that you are satisfied with our service. I look forward to your next order.

Thank you for your email. Has the item not arrived there yet? Let me look into it to see if any mistake was made on this end. If necessary, I will ship it again as soon as I confirm the cause. At that time I will also include a small gift for you.

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I think I am going to win 8 of your products in the auction. As I would like to have them packed in one box, I would like to pay after I obtain all of the 8 units.

I know that you are not shipping out of the U.S.
But if possible, I would like to have my items shipped to Japan, all packed in a box.
Could you ship to Japan?

If not, I will be asking you to ship them to my address in the U.S.

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I hope to win 8 of your products in the auction. As I would like to have them packed in one box, I would like to pay after I obtain all of the 8 units.

I know that you are not shipping out of the U.S.
But if possible, I would like to have my items shipped to Japan, all packed in a box.
Could you ship to Japan?

If not, I will be asking you to ship them to my address in the U.S.

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These are the 10 items out of the 20 that I bought.
Other 10 items were priced correctly.
Please revise the price of these 10 to $2000.00, which is the correct one. (I bought them at a wholesale discount.)
Otherwise, I will need to pay a tax more than I should only to lose my money.

Please note that unrevised price would affect our future business with you.

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These are 10 out of the 20 items that I bought.
The other 10 items were priced correctly.
Please revise the price of these 10 to $2000.00, which is the correct one. (I bought them at a wholesale discount.)
Otherwise, I will need to pay more tax than I should and I will lose money.

Please note that if you are unable to revise the price, it will affect our future business with you.

元の翻訳
Regarding the TourIssue I heard that there should be a "/" between "PENTA" and "TP5". The marketed issue have 350 to 360 dimples on them, whereas the TourIssue only has 332 of them.

Please confirm these two points with the item concerned.

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Regarding the TourIssue I heard that there should be a "/" between "PENTA" and "TP5". Apparently, the ones commercially available have 350 to 360 dimples on them, whereas the TourIssue only has 332.

Please confirm these two points above-mentioned with the item concerned.

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How to price an item: For example, you may find an item on a Japanese webshop good for posting on eBay. Its price is 880 JPY. How to price this item to sell on eBay.

My exchange rate is $1 = 90 JPY.

So, 880JPY x 1.8 = 1589 JPY, then 1589/90 JPY = $17.6

I will be able to give you the manual for Commerce, the eBay listing tool, tomorrow night at the latest.

At the beginning, search and list items that are also posted on Amazon U.S.

I see you have a child. Are you available at night? I will have time on Monday, so let's talk on Monday.

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How to price an item: For example, you may find an item on a Japanese online shop good for posting on eBay. Its price is 880 JPY. This is how to price this item to sell on eBay.

My exchange rate is $1 = 90 JPY.

So, 880JPY x 1.8 = 1589 JPY, then 1589/90 JPY = $17.6

I will be able to give you the manual for Commerce, the eBay listing tool, tomorrow night at the latest.

At the beginning, search and list items that are also posted on Amazon U.S.

I see you have a child. Are you available at night? I will have time on Monday, so let's talk on Monday.

元の翻訳
Thank you for adjusting the invoice.

Unfortunatelly, there is no money left in my PayPal account, so I cannot use the personal option. I have to pay as I said. I am sorry to have troubled you.

In the meantime, the invoice shows the amount as $514.80, while it was $511.80 when I bought 20 units last time.

You said you would give us an additional unit for free since the previous units lacked one. So please ship us 21 units at $511.80 as the last time.

Please revise the invoice again with the amount that I am to pay.

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Thank you for adjusting the invoice.

Unfortunately, there is no money left in my PayPal account, so I cannot use the personal option. I have to pay as I said I would. I am sorry for the trouble.

There is also something I'd like to confirm. Last time I purchased 20 units for $511.80, and this time the price is $514.80.

You said you would give us an additional unit for free since you forgot to include one the last time. So please ship us 21 units at $511.80.

Please revise the invoice again with the correct price.

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Translate the Japanese websites to English by google's translator function. The outcomes should be weird English. What you need to do is to fix these weird English sentences and words to legible English.

When you refer to any eBay sellers, use the same shipping costs of theirs for our items.

As for the pricing, deduct $1 from that of the referred seller and put the cents as 99, that is, when the seller puts the price as $88.50, ours should be $87.99.

Would you be willing to help me if you have time?

This is the new tool we are going to use to post items.

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Translate the Japanese websites to English by google's translator function. The outcomes should be weird English. What you need to do is to fix these weird English sentences and words to understandable English.

When you refer to any eBay sellers, use the same shipping costs of theirs for our items.

As for the pricing, deduct $1 from that of the referred seller and put the cents as 99, that is, when the seller puts the price as $88.50, ours should be $87.99.

Would you be willing to help me if you have time?

This is the new tool we are going to use to post items.

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I will be moving to SF within 17th, and will be heading for Atlanta via LA in the morning of 18th. From Atlanta (arriving at 13:35), I will be driving a rent-a-car (reserved with hertz) myself to the hotel you booked for me.

As for the workshop on 19th, should I visit your company directly? I would be glad if you could give me any advice for preparations necessary for the workshop.

Thank you.

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I will be moving to SF within 17th, and will be heading for Atlanta via LA in the morning of 18th. Arriving at Atlanta at 1:35pm, I will rent a car (reserved with hertz) and drive myself to the hotel you booked for me.

Should I visit your company directly for the workshop on 19th?↵
I would be glad to have your advice if there is any preparations necessary for the workshop.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your proposal.

Do you think you are available in either of the evening on Sep 3 or 4? I also would definitely like to meet you. However, I am not good at speaking English, and would like to accompany an interpreter. Is this all right with you?

If you have any request, please feel free to tell me.

Thank you very much for your offer to spare your precious time for me.

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Thank you for your proposal.

Do you think you are available on either the evening of Sept. 3rd or 4th? I also would definitely like to meet you. However, I am not good at speaking English, and would like to bring an interpreter. Is this all right with you?

If you have any requests, please feel free to tell me.

Thank you very much for your offer to spare your precious time for me.