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Hello, George,

I would like to order the following. Please send me an invoice if you see no issue with them.

The resent depreciation of yen has been eating most of our profits out.
Is there any item that you could offer any discount for?
If possible, I would like to have the invoice with the discounted prices.

I hope to continue business with you, and also hope to increase the amount of our purchase.

I would appreciate if you could name as many items as possible that sells well yet are inexpensive for us to buy.

Also I would be glad if you would lower the prices to declar on the invoice to include in the package for customs clearance.↵
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Thank you for your cooperation.↵

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Hello, George,

I would like to order the following. Please send me an invoice if you see no issue with them.

The recent depreciation of yen has been eating most of our profits out.
Is there any item that you could offer any discount for?
If possible, I would like to have the invoice with the discounted prices.

I hope to continue business with you, and also hope to increase the amount of our purchase.

I would appreciate if you could name as many items as possible that sells well yet are inexpensive for us to buy.

Also I would be glad if you would lower the prices to declar on the invoice to include in the package for customs clearance.

元の翻訳
We tried recalibraion on WF01 some times to see no correction at all. It is getting even worse.

You will bear the return shipping, won't you?

As we must deliver the replacement to our customer within a week, we would like you to arrange shipping tomorrow. Can you do so?

Also can you send the replacements of WF01 and a MAG202 case first?

We will see about the ER02 battery tomorrow.

Do you have battery chargers compatible to Japanese power outlet in stock? Are they ready for shipment?

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We tried recalibration on WF01 several times and saw no correction at all. It is getting even worse.

You will bear the return shipping charges, won't you?

As we must deliver the replacement to our customer within a week, we would like you to arrange shipping tomorrow. Can you do so?

Also can you send the replacements of WF01 and a MAG202 case first?

We will see about the ER02 battery tomorrow.

Do you have battery chargers compatible with Japanese power outlets in stock? Are they ready for shipment?

元の翻訳
I accept to deal as you offered.

The total amount you are going to pay will be $2203, which includes $2186 for the product price and $17 for the shipping cost.

First I will revise the product price listed on eBay to $300. You are requested to bid it,win it and pay the price.

For the remaining $1903, I will send you a PayPal invoice.

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In Japan we name the razor types differently from you do in the western countries, and I did not fully understand what you said.

So, I filmed a video for you to understand.↵

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I accept your deal.

The total amount you are going to pay will be $2203, including $2186 for the product and $17 for the shipping cost.

At first, I will revise the product price listed on eBay to $300 so please bid it, win it and pay the price.

For the remaining $1903, I will send you a PayPal invoice.

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In Japan we call razor types differently from what you do in western countries so that I did not fully understand what you said.

Therefore, I made a video clip for your better understanding.

元の翻訳
As you referred to A previously, we have found that they do not deal with this product XX.

I have confirmed with their website that they are not the exclusive agent for H either.

As far as I konw XX has not marketed in Japan yet.
XX is just great!
It is a shame that XX is not availabe in Japan.
I definitely recommend you to introduce it in the market here.

If A is just one of the distributors of H, could we become an exclusive distributor limited to handle XX alone?

We appreciate your consideration.

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As you referred to A previously, we have found that they do not deal with this product XX.

I have confirmed with their website that they are not the exclusive agent for H either.
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As far as I konw XX has not marketed in Japan yet.
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XX is just great!
ビジネスの表現としては"just great"はくだけすぎかと思います。↵
原文もかなりカジュアルですが、really a wonderful productくらいでいかがでしょう。↵
It is a shame that XX is not availabe in Japan.↵
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I definitely recommend you to introduce it in the market here.

If A is just one of the distributors of H, could we become an exclusive distributor limited to handle XX alone?

We appreciate your consideration.

元の翻訳
I'm very happy that I won such a wonderful C/S. I would prefer to have it shipped via USPS express international. Would it be possible? If yes, please send me the invoice, and I will pay you at once.↵
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I would appreciate your consideration.↵
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Thank you.↵

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I am happy to win a wonderful C/S. Could you please ship it through the express mail international of USPS? If possible, please send an invoice. I will make the payment immediately. I request you to consider my request and oblige.

元の翻訳
1.5 Times Membership, for a New Sphere: Japan PCO Association

Japan PCO Association held its annual convention in the Hotel Nikko Tokyo on May 24. More than 90 people from about 50 companies/groups attended the special seinor and party there.

Hirotake Chikanami, secretary general, who is also the CEO of Japan Convention Services Inc. （訳注：正式名称確認要）, addressed to kick off the meeting. He reviewed the preceding year of 2012 with the achievements: the membership increased to 90 parties from 60, international affiliations made with the counterparties in Korea and Singapore, and enhanced educations including the seminor held in Sendai as well.

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1.5 Times Membership, for a New Sphere: Japan PCO Association

Japan PCO Association held its annual convention in the Hotel Nikko Tokyo on May 24. More than 90 people from about 50 companies/groups attended the special seminor and party there.

Hirotake Chikanami, secretary general, who is also the CEO of Japan Convention Services Inc. （訳注：正式名称確認要）, addressed to kick off the meeting. He reviewed the preceding year of 2012 with the achievements: the membership increased to 90 parties from 60, international affiliations made with the counterparties in Korea and Singapore, and enhanced educations including the seminor held in Sendai as well.