14pon — もらったレビュー

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I am satisfied with obtaining this instrument. However, before I give you a "natural" feedback, I just wanted to know if you could refund me part of 50,000 yen (approx. $500) I spent to overhaul (repair) it, as the description about the defect did not reflect actual problems. If you could do so , I would be able to give you a positive feedback.

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I am satisfied with obtaining this instrument. However, before I give you a "naeutral" feedback, I just wanted to know if you could refund me all or part of the 50,000 yen (approx. $500) I spent to overhaul (repair) it, as the condition of the pad is not as described. If you could do so , I would be able to give you a positive feedback.

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Q) Where will the address for download be displayed?
A) If you chose payment via PayPal or a credit card, the products can be downloaded from the link below (at the location of the image). If you to pay by bank transfer, we will let you know the address for download as soon as we confirm the receipt of payment.

In addition, you can download the product once ordered as signed-in from your history of purchase in your account.

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Q) Where will the address for download be displayed?
A) If you chose to pay via PayPal or a credit card, the products can be downloaded from the link below (at the location of the image). If you to pay by bank transfer, we will let you know the address for download as soon as we confirm the receipt of payment.

In addition, you can download the product once ordered as signed-in from your history of purchase in your account.

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I have received a mail saying "Complete your purchase" again.

I have completed payment. What is going on?

When do you ship my order?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

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I have received a message saying "Complete your purchase" again.

I have completed payment so what is going on?

When will my order be shipped?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

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We removed ruster from the razor we sold to you. It was unused (new) and we sold it at a low price, but as you were not satisfied with it, we accepted you returning it.

Usually, we would refund once we receive the returned item, but for this time, we would refund you immediately US$127.94 IF you could remove your claim filed to the Resolution Center at eBay and give us a positive feedback.

We hope you would understand our efforts to display more detailed pictures than any other sellers as well as to bear the return shipping costs.

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We removed rust from the razor we sold to you. It was unused (new) and we sold it at a low price, but as you were not satisfied with it, we accepted you returning it.

Usually, we would refund once we receive the returned item, but for this time, if you could remove your claim filed to the Resolution Center at eBay and give us a positive feedback we will refund you immediately US$127.94.

We hope you understand our efforts to display more detailed pictures than any other sellers as well as to bear the return shipping costs.

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この商品が説明どおりでなかったのは俺のせいではない。もし使える状態のものだったら、手元に置いておく。でも、刃にヘコミがある。これは単に使ったもの、というだけではなく、悪い使い方をされたもので、出品したのも間違いだし、ぶっちゃけ、使えるようにするまでが大変なこんなものはクズだね。言ったように、刃にへこみがなかったらよかったのになぁ。それなら持っていたのに。
俺に落ち度はないので、返金を猶予する義理もないわけだが・・・
そうは言っても、そちらがすぐに返金したくないのも分かる。悪いやつがいるからね。でも、俺はそうじゃないから。もう送り返したよ。

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この商品が説明どおりでなかったのは俺のせいではない。もし使える状態のものだったら、手元に置いておく。でも、刃にヘコミがある。それさえなきゃ満足したかもしれないけど。これは単に使ったもの、というだけではなく、悪い使い方をされたもので、出品したのも間違いだし、ぶっちゃけ、使えるようにするまでが大変なこんなものはクズだね。言ったように、刃にへこみがなかったらよかったのになぁ。それなら持っていたのに。
俺に落ち度はないので、返金を猶予する義理もないわけだが・・・
そうは言っても、そちらがすぐに返金したくないのも分かる。悪いやつがいるからね。でも、俺はそうじゃないから。もう送り返したよ。

元の翻訳
I attached to my earlier email a captured image from the email sent from PayPal.
They are also waiting for the packages, so please ship them to the above address as soon as possible.
Also, please be sure to let me know the tracking number once you ship them out. I need the tracking number to get refunded by PayPal.
As these total as much as $4400, I will be in trouble if I fail to receive the refund.
I am sorry to give you an extra job, but would appreciate your reaction at your earliest convenience.
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Thank you.

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I attached to my earlier email a screen capture from the email sent from PayPal.
They are also waiting for the packages, so please ship them to the above address as soon as possible.
Also, please be sure to let me know the tracking number once you ship them out. I need the tracking number to get a refund from PayPal.
As these total as much as $4400, I will be in trouble if I fail to receive the refund.
I am sorry to give you an extra job, but would appreciate your reply at your earliest convenience.

Thank you.

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Thank you for informing me. I have already made payment via PayPal, I'm sorry. As for the insurance, I do not mind if you ship without it. All I hope you to do is a secure packaging. I look forward to receiving my order.

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Thank you for contacting me. I'm sorry but I have already made payment via PayPal. As for the insurance, I do not mind if you ship without it. All I hope you do is have secure packaging. I look forward to receiving my order.

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It's been more than a month since I sent you the receipt. Nevertheless, there has been no sign of shipping from the U.S. It has been unreasonably late. All you are doing is just sending me similar emails, but you never start to procede. If you need the EIN, you could have noticed me much earlier. Due to this delay at your end, I have lost considerable chances to sell the products in Japan. It should be here much earlier even if it had been transported by time-consuming sea. I AM doing a business. Why can't you understand that?

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It's been more than a month since I sent you the receipt. Nevertheless, there has been no sign of shipping from the U.S. It has been unreasonably late. All you are doing is just sending me similar emails, but you never start to proceed. If you need the EIN, you could have notified me much earlier. Due to this delay at your end, I have lost considerable chances to sell the products in Japan. It should be here much earlier even if it had been transported by time-consuming sea. I AM doing a business. Why can't you understand that?

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Aside from Payoneer, I am proceeding with a new account at Union Bank in California.

So please suspend your payment until I get a new account at Union Bank or my account at Payoneer is restored.

I would like to ask for your advice. Currently, I cannot receive payment and am in trouble continuing business of sales.

I live in Japan and wonder if you know any other way to send me money.

Your help would be highly appreciated.

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Aside from Payoneer, I am proceeding with a new account at Union Bank in California.

So please suspend your payment until I get a new account at Union Bank or my account at Payoneer is restored.

I would like to ask for your advice. Currently, I cannot receive payment and am in trouble continuing business.

I live in Japan and wonder if you know any other way to send me money.

Your help would be highly appreciated.

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Thank you for emailing me regarding my bank account.

Actually, my account at Payoneer has been suspended tentatively. It is because my posting of a toy gun on Amazon.com violated Payoneer's policy.

I have been discussing with Payoneer to solve this issue, hoping to have my account restored.

I will register the account to My Seller Account Information Page as soon as I can use it again.

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Thank you for emailing me regarding my bank account.

Actually, my account at Payoneer has been suspended tentatively. It is because my listing of a toy gun on Amazon.com violated Payoneer's policy.

I have been discussing with Payoneer to solve this issue, hoping to have my account restored.

I will sign in to my Seller Account Information page as soon as I can use it again.

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What did "specific packages" indicate?
I did not understand what you meant.
I was just about to inquire with you as the shipping was so delayed.

I have checked what was interrupting export to find nothing that would be against the law.

Could it be the "military strap", which is the band of the watch? Just in case, I attach the invoice for your reference.

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What did "specific packages" indicate?
I do not understand what you mean by that.
I was just about to inquire with you as the shipping was so delayed.

I have checked what was interrupting export to find nothing that would be against the law.

Could it be the "military strap", which is the band of the watch? ↵
I have attached the invoice for your reference; please review.

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Actually, I have been working on it for 2 months now. That's why I have been re-doing the body panel :)

The welding of the cage is Tig welding. The light cage attached to 〇〇, I made it by T (Tで作った、にしました）, so I hope it may be a reference for the welding finish.
I plan to use resin to duplicate the body panel so that it will be tougher than FRP. If your budget and time allow, I can make the same thing from an aluminum panel myself for you.
As for the pipes of the cage, a good quality iron with welded finish will definitely make it much different.

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Actually, I have been working on it for 2 months now. That's why I have been re-doing the body panel :)

The welding of the cage is Tig welding. The light cage attached to 〇〇, I made it by T (Tで作った、にしました）, so I hope it may be a reference for the welding finish.
I plan to use resin to duplicate the body panel so that it will be tougher than FRP. If your budget and time allow, I can make the same thing from an aluminum panel for you.
As for the pipes of the cage, a good quality iron with welded finish will definitely make it much different.

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保証
２５年以上の長きに亘り、「メーカー」は多くのご家庭から、高品質で実用的、また多機能な製品であることへのご信頼をいただいております。弊社では熟練の技の品質を誇りとし、製品を１００％支えております。これが、弊社が全製品を、その素材や製造上の不具合が生じた場合には、お買い上げいただいた方がお使いいただく限り保証する理由です。*

万一、素材や製造上の不具合がございましたら、こちらへメールにてお知らせください。また、その際には、状況を詳しくお教えいただくとともに、デジタル画像とお買い上げ時の領収書のコピーもご提示ください。

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保証
２５年以上の長きに亘り、「メーカー」は多くのご家庭から、高品質で実用的、また多機能な製品であることへのご信頼をいただいております。弊社では熟練の技の品質を誇りとし、製品を１００％支えております。これが、弊社が全製品を、その素材や製造上の不具合が生じた場合には、お買い上げいただいた方がお使いいただく限り保証する理由です。*

万一、素材や製造上の不具合がございましたら、こちらへメールにてお知らせください。また、その際には、状況を詳しくお教えいただくとともに、デジタル画像とお買い上げ時の領収書の画像ないしコピーもご提示ください。