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As I lived in Moscow, I know about the Russian postal services well.

I marked $10/Gift on the invoice. Usually, packages are delivered to Russia without problem, but your local customs office seems to be strict in particular.
(訳注： invoice はshipping statement かもしれません）↵

I can send you a merchant invoice or receipt by email.

What do you need to collect your package?

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I am selling products on behalf of a Japanese razor collector.

Last time I listed an item with a big discount.
(商品が複数なら listed items with big discounts）

This time, as requested by the razor collector, I have elevated the price and made the item "Buy It Now".
（商品が複数なら　I have elevated the prices and made the itmes

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I know about the Russian postal services well because I lived in Moscow for three years.

I marked $10/Gift on the invoice. Usually, packages are delivered to Russia without problems, but your local customs office seems to be strict in particular.

I can send you a merchant invoice or receipt by email.

What do you need to collect your package?

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I am selling products on behalf of a Japanese razor collector.

Last time, I listed an item with a big discount.
(商品が複数なら listed items with big discounts）

This time, as requested by the razor collector, I have increased the price and made the item "Buy It Now".
（商品が複数なら　I have elevated the prices and made the itmes

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I have been inquiring you for these few days about seven golf clubs that I had asked you to transfer, however, I have NOT heard anything from you yet.

What is goin on?

I believe that the clubs have arrived at the warehose up there, and I believe they are still there as long as they have not come to Japan yet.

As I said previously, they are very precious products and are impossible for me to obtain replacements. I already have some damage.

I am not asking you for compensation, but I just need them as soon as possible.

Please be sure to answer me TODAY.

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I have been inquiring you for these few days about seven golf clubs that I had asked you to transfer, however, I have NOT heard anything from you yet.

What is going on?

I believe that the clubs have arrived at the warehose up there, and I believe they are still there as long as they have not come to Japan yet.

As I said previously, they are very precious products and are impossible for me to obtain replacements. I already have some damage.

I am not asking you for compensation, but I just need them as soon as possible.

Please be sure to answer me TODAY.

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Hello, this is XX, calling from Japan.

I don't speak English well, so I'm speaking looking at some written English. Please forgive （フォギブ） my poor English.

I have a corporate account with this bank. I want to know my ID. I know that IDs are given only by phone, so I am calling you.

My security number is xxxx.
Is there any other information needed?

I wish I could speak with somebody who speak Japanese. Is there any such people up there?

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Hello, this is XX, calling from Japan.

I don't speak English well, so I'm talking to you and looking at some written English at the same time. ↵
Please excuse my poor English.

I have opened a corporation account of your bank. ↵
I would like to know my ID and I am making a phone call to you is because I have heard that this is the only way to know my ID.

My security number is xxxx.
Is there any other necessary information I need to provide?

I would like to speak to somebody who can speak Japanese. Is there anyone available for Japanese?

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Thank you for your inquiry.
This is an old item and has some used atmosphere.
Still, it is among the good used ones traded in Japan. And I have listed it at a rather low price for its condition. It's been traded less and less even in Japan.
Providing this price, this item is a bargain.
As for the performance, I have confirmed it with an expert professional, so please stay assured.
Before shipment, I will clean it as much as I can.

I am willing to discuss with you, so feel free to ask anything when you win the item, if necessary.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
This is an old item and has the atmosphere of some use.
Still, it is among the good used ones traded in Japan. And I have listed it at a rather low price for its condition. It's been traded less and less even in Japan.
Given this price, this item is a bargain.
As for the performance, I have confirmed it with an expert professional, so please rest assured.
Before shipment, I will clean it as much as I can.

I am willing to discuss it with you if necessary, so feel free to ask anything when you win the auction for this item.

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I want CSV to display Japanese yen.
The current app cannot do that.
You said it can do that now, though.

I want you to send such app that can do it.
The app I received is yet to be completed.

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I want CSV to display Japanese yen.
The current app cannot do that.
Although you said that it would be able to do it.

I would like you to send me an app that can do it.
The app I received has yet to be completed.

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I have inquired with DHL, and they say that the number of packages were changed to 2 from 3 when received from MyUS.

As the statement shows the golf club, I have paid for it but not received it yet.

Where is the package now? This is a very important package for me and I need an immediate answer.

I do not want a compensation, and it is so precious item that I cannot buy another. Please do whatever to deliver it to me as soon as possible.

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I have inquired with DHL, and they say that the number of packages was changed from 3 to 2 when received from MyUS.

As the statement shows the golf club, I have paid for it but have not received it yet.

Where is the package now? This is a very important package for me and I need an immediate answer.

I do not want compensation, and it is so precious an item that I cannot buy another. Please do whatever to deliver it to me as soon as possible.

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I apologize for the inconvenience.
I did not describe the status of the booklet, however, I posted a picture of it instead, which should explain the status well.

Still, I appreciate your taking the chance of bidding on the item, and would offer you $20 refund. What would you think? I also definitely accept a return. So, would you tell me what your thought is?

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I apologize for the inconvenience caused.
I did not describe the status of the booklet, however, I posted a picture of it instead, which should explain the status well.

Still, I appreciate your taking the chance of bidding on the item, and would offer a $20 refund. What do you think of this? I also definitely accept a return. So, could you tell me about your thought?

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The attached is the list of the shipping charges calculated by Commerce. If you look at the description for shipping charges in the following URL, you will know that shipping charges are different between for Europe and the U.S.

Originally, the shipping charges for Europe and the U.S. are supposed to be the same for shipping from Japan with "economy" option.

I repeat again that I am not accusing you at all.

Which tool are you using to find items sold on eBay from Japan?

Do you know the tool called "Telapeak"?

If you wish, I can lend you this tool with some conditions.

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The attached file includes the list of the shipping charges calculated by Commerce. If you look at the description for shipping charges in the following URL, you will know that shipping charges in Europe is different from the ones in the U.S.

Originally, the shipping charges for Europe and the U.S. are supposed to be the same for shipping from Japan with "economy" option.

I repeat again that I am not accusing you at all.

Which tool are you using to find items sold on eBay from Japan?

Do you know the tool called "Telapeak"?

If you wish, I can lend you this tool with some conditions.

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, A's system does not allow change of shipping method once a purchase is completed.

If you need to change the shipping mothod, please cancel your order once and go back to B's store front to place an order again with the shipping option of "Expedited".

Please note that we will keep the item's price at $200 if there is only one left in stock so that no one would come and buy it before you do.

We will remit the difference of $114 before we ship the item. The packaging is already completed, so we can ship off the item on the very next day of your order.

Please note if we do not receive your re-order, the original order will be cancelled as usual.

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Unfortunately, A's system does not allow change of shipping method once a purchase is completed.

If you need to change the shipping method, please cancel your order and go back to B's store front to place a new order, selecting the shipping option of "Expedited".

Please note that, as there is only one item left, we will set the price of the item at $200 so that others won't be purchasing it.

We will remit the difference of $114 before we ship the item. The packaging is already completed, so we can ship off the item on the very next day of your order.

Please note that if we do not receive your re-order, the original order will be cancelled as usual.

元の翻訳
ご注文番号No.2013112922173につきましては、大変申し訳ございませんが、QJ131107414-1の在庫を切らしております。もし、代わりに他の商品をご希望でしたら、その商品の品番、色、サイズを至急お知らせください。早くお返事いただければ、ご注文のお届けが遅れずに済みます。お返事なき場合は、在庫にある同価格のお品をお送りさせていただきます。

ところで、もし、変わりにご希望のお品も在庫がなかった場合は、入庫までお待ちしてからまとめてお送りいたしましょうか、それとも、それだけ別にお送りいたしましょうか？

ヒント：

もし、代わりのお品が私どもで48時間以内に入手できない場合は、配達期日を守るために、その他のものは出荷させていただきます。
order@lovelywholesale.comまで、代わりのご希望商品とともにご連絡いただけますようお願いいたします。

毎度お引き立てありがとうございます。
Lovelywholesale.com

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ご注文番号No.2013112922173につきましては、大変申し訳ございませんが、QJ131107414-1の在庫を切らしております。もし、代わりに他の商品をご希望でしたら、その商品の品番、色、サイズを至急お知らせください。早くお返事いただければ、ご注文のお届けが遅れずに済みます。お返事なき場合は、差額を返金とし、在庫のあるもののみを出荷させていただきます。

ところで、もし、変わりにご希望のお品も在庫がなかった場合は、再度変更するまで出荷をお待ちしますか？、それとも、それ以外の商品のみただちに出荷いたしますか？

ヒント：

もし、48時間以内に変更のご要望を受け取れなかった場合は、配達期日を守るために、その他のものは出荷させていただきます。
order@lovelywholesale.comまで、代わりのご希望商品とともにご連絡いただけますようお願いいたします。

毎度お引き立てありがとうございます。
Lovelywholesale.com

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I am sending you this email to ask for your advice on logistics of SAKE and wine that we are going to commit marketing. Especially, about SAKE.

We have had difficulties in finding a buyer specialized in SAKE in HK, so we plan to start with a small-scale business in EC territories.

However, sending SAKE bottles one by one costs a lot of shipping fees, and we are thinking of selling 6 bottles a set, which may consisits of different SAKEs.

In the meantime, usually we pick up SAKEs out of the CDS's warehouse to sort them by ourselves, and release them to a delivery company. However, we are still in Japan.

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I am sending you this email to ask for your advice on logistics of the SAKE and wine that we are going to commit to marketing. Especially about the SAKE.

We have had difficulties in finding a buyer who specializes in SAKE in HK, so we plan to start with a small-scale business in EC territories.

However, sending SAKE bottles one by one costs a lot of shipping fees and we are thinking of selling 6 bottles in a set, which may consist of different SAKEs.

In the meantime, usually we pick up SAKEs out of the CDS's warehouse to sort them by ourselves and release them to a delivery company. However, we are still in Japan.

元の翻訳
1.
The wireless modules have two versions of zigbee and wifi.
As you noted, you need Gateway only when you use the zigbee version.

You do not need Gateway when you use the wifi version, and you can directly connect to the access point. At this moment it is necessary to set the SSID and password of the access point to the module software in advance.
Therefore, we have picked up the method of setting with the pre-paired wireless rooter.
For the future models, we plan to use an easier way such as using WPS.

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1.
The wireless modules have two versions which are zigbee and wifi.
As you noted, you need Gateway only when you use the zigbee version.

You do not need Gateway when you use the wifi version, and you can directly connect it to the access point. At this moment it is required to set the SSID and password of the access point to the module software beforehand.
Therefore, we have applied the method of setting up the pre-paired wireless rooter.
For the future models, we are thinking about making a better product than WPS.

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Hello. I asked you earlier to log the missing package (worth $130) back to my account, however, I do not see it back yet. I expected that the package would be shipped last week together with my last order. Please advise the current status of the package.

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Hello. I asked you earlier to refund the missing package (worth $130) back to my account, however, I do not see it refunded yet. I expected that the package would be shipped last week together with my last order. Please advise the current status of the package.

元の翻訳
不具合/動作不良
購入者のコメント：　イヤフォンが、時々勝手にオンになったりオフになったりするし、音を調節するとガリガリいう。

音を大きくしたり小さくしたりすると、時々音が途切れ足りガリガリいったりするんです。この商品は気に入っているので、送り返して取り替えてもらえますか。よろしくお願いします。
トニー

客は４５ポンドの関税を請求され、そのことを売り手に伝えた所、客に４５ポンドの返金をすると言った。返金の確認が客に送られてから１０日以上経つが、販売者はいまだに返金をしていない。

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不具合/動作不良
購入者のコメント：　イヤフォンが、時々勝手にオンになったりオフになったりするし、音を調節するとガリガリいう。

音を大きくしたり小さくしたりすると、時々音が途切れ足りガリガリいったりするんです。この商品は気に入っているので、送り返して取り替えてもらえますか。よろしくお願いします。
トニー

客は４５ポンドの関税を請求され、そのことを販売者に伝えた所、客に４５ポンドの返金をすると言った。返金の確認が客に送られてから１０日以上経つが、販売者はいまだに返金をしていない。

元の翻訳
I received the watches and am very satisfied with them. Thank you very much.
You mentioned $4800 for the black watches, but I wonder how many watches is this for.
I want 50 pieces of the black watch.
Is it correct to say $4250 for 50 of the black watches?
If yes, I will send you $4250 via PayPal.

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I received the watches and am very satisfied with them. Thank you very much.
You mentioned $4800 is the total price for the black watches, but I wonder how many watches I can get on the price of $4800.
I want to buy 50 black watches.
Is the price for 50 black watches $4250?
If yes, I will send you $4250 via PayPal.

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Were the manual and e-mails I sent to you written in so poor English that you could not understand?

If my English is not understandable, we cannot communicate.

You listed items without product descriptions, shipping costs or payment details.

When you would buy something from a webshop like eBay, what would make you to decide buying it?

Would you buy an item with just seeing a picture and product name?

Once you buy an item and find a wrong size or function delivered to you, what would you do?

On eBay, an item should never fail to be returned in such a case. And the return shipping cost is to be paid by me.

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Were the manual and e-mails I sent to you written in so poor English that you could not understand?

If my English is not understandable, we cannot communicate.

You listed items without product descriptions, shipping costs or payment details.

When you wish to buy something from a webshop like eBay, what would you base your purchase decision on?

Would you buy an item after just seeing a picture and its product name?

Once you buy an item and find that the wrong size has been delivered or the product's function is not what you expected, what would you do?

On eBay, an item should never fail to be returned in such an event. Of course, the return shipping cost is to be paid by me.

元の翻訳
us

I was suggested by you to contact the delivery company (xx) to confirm the delivery status.
The following is the proof of delivery e-mailed from them, as per your request.
I did ship the item, and it has been delivered to the buyer, whereas there has not been any payment received, and I can't believe it.
Such a thing should not happen.
Please look into the situation well, and send me the money for what I sold.
I hope you to judge this matter right.

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us

I was instructed by you to contact the delivery company (xx) to confirm the delivery status.
The following is the proof of delivery e-mailed from them.
It is unconceivable that payment is not made when the item has been shipped and delivered to the buyer.
Such a thing should not happen.
Please look into the situation well, and send me the money for what I sold.
I look forward to your fair resolution.