翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

DHLにも問い合わせたのですが、MYusから受け取りの際に３個口から２個口に変更があったとの返事がありました。
明細にはゴルフクラブが記載されていますので、料金はし払っているのですが荷物は届いていません。
この荷物は今どこにあるのでしょうか？とても大事な荷物ですので至急返事をください。
私は荷物の弁償は望んでいません。また買いなおすことも不可能な貴重な商品です。必ず、一日も早く私の手元に届くようにしてください。

英語

I have inquired with DHL, and they say that the number of packages were changed to 2 from 3 when received from MyUS.

As the statement shows the golf club, I have paid for it but not received it yet.

Where is the package now? This is a very important package for me and I need an immediate answer.

I do not want a compensation, and it is so precious item that I cannot buy another. Please do whatever to deliver it to me as soon as possible.

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katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/11 02:07:22

元の翻訳
I have inquired with DHL, and they say that the number of packages were changed to 2 from 3 when received from MyUS.

As the statement shows the golf club, I have paid for it but not received it yet.

Where is the package now? This is a very important package for me and I need an immediate answer.

I do not want a compensation, and it is so precious item that I cannot buy another. Please do whatever to deliver it to me as soon as possible.

修正後
I have inquired with DHL, and they say that the number of packages was changed from 3 to 2 when received from MyUS.

As the statement shows the golf club, I have paid for it but have not received it yet.

Where is the package now? This is a very important package for me and I need an immediate answer.

I do not want compensation, and it is so precious an item that I cannot buy another. Please do whatever to deliver it to me as soon as possible.

[14pon]

number → was ですね、当然。
have はもう一回、ここにも必要　（書いてるときもあるのに）
compensation に a はいらない　←　これむずかしい！
so precious an ですね、当然。
う～～、くやしい！