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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 16 Jul 2014 at 08:26
original [May]. Tour 2014~Message for Tomorrow~] Pre-Sale of T shirt and face towel from goods is decided! National Tour starting from Zepp Sapporo July 5th(Sat.) [May]. Tour 2014 ~ Message for Tomorrow ~]. Pre-Sale of T shirts (2 kinds) and face towel (2 kinds) from the goods of this tour is decided! Run Up of the items that enrich the tour of this year! You must check!	corrected [May J. Tour 2014~Message for Tomorrow~] T shirt and face towel from goods is on pre-sale! National Tour starting from Zepp Sapporo on July 5th(Sat.) [May J. Tour 2014 ~ Message for Tomorrow ~]. Pre-Sale of T shirts (2 types) and face towel (2 types) from the goods of this tour is on pre-sale! The items lined up to invigorate the tour this year! Check them out!

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 13 Jul 2014 at 07:39
original 警告：貴方の情報は、現在、有効です。追加の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。	corrected 注意：貴方の情報は、現在認証中です。追加の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 13 Jul 2014 at 07:51
original # For buyer has experience purchasing items at eBay and desire to purchase additional items I have had not communications before, but I am writing to you because I won your auction at eBay this time (before). I would like to purchase additional items from you, but would you be possible to give me a discount? I think if we have direct deal without through eBay, you would not need to be charged the eBay’s commission and I would purchase items cheaper without their commission. I would appreciate if you could take consideration on this matter.↵	corrected # When a buyer with prior purchase experiences wishes to place an additional order Nice to meet you. I am an import distributor in Japan.↵ I won your auction at eBay this time (before). As I would like to purchase additional items from you, would you give me a discount? If we could make a deal without going through eBay, you would not need to pay for the eBay’s handling fee, and I would purchase items cheaper that way. I would appreciate if you could take this matter into your consideration.

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13 Jul 2014 at 07:51

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# For buyer has experience purchasing items at eBay and desire to purchase additional items

I have had not communications before, but I am writing to you because I won your auction at eBay this time (before).
I would like to purchase additional items from you, but would you be possible to give me a discount?
I think if we have direct deal without through eBay, you would not need to be charged the eBay’s commission and I would purchase items cheaper without their commission.
I would appreciate if you could take consideration on this matter.↵

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# When a buyer with prior purchase experiences wishes to place an additional order

Nice to meet you. I am an import distributor in Japan.↵
I won your auction at eBay this time (before).
As I would like to purchase additional items from you, would you give me a discount?
If we could make a deal without going through eBay, you would not need to pay for the eBay’s handling fee, and I would purchase items cheaper that way.
I would appreciate if you could take this matter into your consideration.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 19 Sep 2014 at 14:09
Comment いい訳だと思います。「although not where you are」がわかりづらいというかいくつかの解釈に分かれるところだとおもうのですが、私だったら「あなたのいらっしゃるところまでは伺えませんが」と訳すかもしれません。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 19 Sep 2014 at 14:06
original 沢山のレンズを持っていて、多分あなたが興味を持つのでないかと思いメールしています。もし興味があるのであれば何処に住んでいようが価格交渉をしましょう。私はカリフォルニアに住んでいます。	corrected 沢山のレンズを持っているので、多分あなたが興味をお持ちでないかと思いメールしています。もしご興味があるのであればあなたのいらっしゃるところまでは伺えませんが価格交渉をしましょう。私はカリフォルニアに住んでいます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 11 Jul 2014 at 00:16
original I'm sorry for your waiting for luggage so long time. We shipped your product in X/Y via international post of Japan Post. As we used Standard shipment, There is no tracking number of luggage. You will usually reveive the product in 1 week. But as you said that You don' receive the one, We will prepare for shipping the same product as soon as possible. You will get the package in next week. I'm sorry for inconveniece from the bottom of the heart. We will refund whole price if you don't need ordered item at all. So, please contact with us.	corrected I'm sorry for having kept you waiting for the shipment for so long. We shipped your product on X/Y as an international mail via Japan Post. As we used Standard shipment, There is no tracking number provided for your item. The shipment will usually take 1 week. But as you said that You haven't received it, we are going to prepare for shipping the same product as soon as possible. You should be able to receive the package some time next week. I'm sorry for the inconveniece from the bottom of the heart. We will issue you a full refund if you don't need the ordered item any more. So, please contact with us.

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11 Jul 2014 at 00:16

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I'm sorry for your waiting for luggage so long time.
We shipped your product in X/Y via international post of Japan Post. As we used Standard shipment, There is no tracking number of luggage.

You will usually reveive the product in 1 week. But as you said that You don' receive the one, We will prepare for shipping the same product as soon as possible. You will get the package in next week.

I'm sorry for inconveniece from the bottom of the heart.
We will refund whole price if you don't need ordered item at all. So, please contact with us.

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I'm sorry for having kept you waiting for the shipment for so long.
We shipped your product on X/Y as an international mail via Japan Post. As we used Standard shipment, There is no tracking number provided for your item.

The shipment will usually take 1 week. But as you said that You haven't received it, we are going to prepare for shipping the same product as soon as possible. You should be able to receive the package some time next week.

I'm sorry for the inconveniece from the bottom of the heart.
We will issue you a full refund if you don't need the ordered item any more. So, please contact with us.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 11 Jul 2014 at 00:27
original [Tokyo] "TV Asahi, Roppongi Hills Summer Festival SUMMER STATION" SUMMER STATION live music ↵ [May J ] SUMMER STATION live music [Dates ] August 14 ,2014 (Thu) 17:30 Doors open / 18:00 Start [Location ] SUMMER STATION LIVE Arena (Roppongi Hills Arena) [Ticket reservations start depending on the performance date. Please refer to the official HP. [Price ] free	corrected [Tokyo] "TV Asahi, Roppongi Hills Summer Festival SUMMER STATION" SUMMER STATION Music Live [Event Title ] SUMMER STATION Music Live [Date] August 14 ,2014 (Thu) 17:30 Doors open / 18:00 Start [Location] SUMMER STATION LIVE Arena (Roppongi Hills Arena) [Numbered Ticket Reservation] Ticket reservations start depending on the performance date. Please refer to the official HP. [Fees] Free

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 08 Jul 2014 at 09:05
Comment 御依頼主が提示されている記事のURLをご覧になっていたらお分かりになったと思うのですが、これはインターネット記事の抜粋なので、文面の先頭にある一文は記事の見出しであるために前置詞を除く単語が全て大文字表記になっています。必ずしも全て固有名詞が並んでいると言うわけではありませ...

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08 Jul 2014 at 09:05

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御依頼主が提示されている記事のURLをご覧になっていたらお分かりになったと思うのですが、これはインターネット記事の抜粋なので、文面の先頭にある一文は記事の見出しであるために前置詞を除く単語が全て大文字表記になっています。必ずしも全て固有名詞が並んでいると言うわけではありませ...

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 09 Jul 2014 at 21:23
Comment 日本語から英語への翻訳となっているので、書き直されたほうがよろしいかと思います。

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 08 Jul 2014 at 12:42
Comment 和訳に含まれる細かい加筆修正事項は、他の投稿と比較頂ければよいと思うので割愛させて頂きます。原文もわかりにくい言い回しをしている部分があると思いますが、わからないまま和訳してしまうと本来の趣旨から逸脱してしまうので、きちんと文章の構成や言い回しを理解して適確に日本語に置き換...

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08 Jul 2014 at 12:42

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和訳に含まれる細かい加筆修正事項は、他の投稿と比較頂ければよいと思うので割愛させて頂きます。原文もわかりにくい言い回しをしている部分があると思いますが、わからないまま和訳してしまうと本来の趣旨から逸脱してしまうので、きちんと文章の構成や言い回しを理解して適確に日本語に置き換...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 07 Jul 2014 at 21:52
original I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you. We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packaging. We are planning to place next order at the end of this month. Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to see your new products on your site. We would like to develop longterm relationship from our heart. Thanks with my very best regards.	corrected I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you. We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packing. We are planning to place next order by the end of this month. Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to seeing your new products on your website. We would like to develop a long-term relationship from our heart. Thank you and best regards.

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07 Jul 2014 at 21:52

original
I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packaging.

We are planning to place next order at the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to see your new products on your site.
We would like to develop longterm relationship from our heart.
Thanks with my very best regards.

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I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packing.

We are planning to place next order by the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to seeing your new products on your website.
We would like to develop a long-term relationship from our heart.
Thank you and best regards.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 07 Jul 2014 at 21:55
Comment とてもよくまとまって書かれた文章だと思います。肝心の連絡先携帯番号の情報が漏れていたのが大変残念です。

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 06 Aug 2014 at 16:07
original I will immediately pay for the items CUH16-2 and NPS16-5 which I ordered some time ago. If possible, please inform us of when you ship the items in advance. Thank you very much for your help and for your consideration, as always.	corrected I will immediately pay for CUH16-2 and NPS16-5 which I ordered some time ago. If possible, please inform us of when you ship the items in advance. Thank you very much for your help and for your consideration, as always.

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 07 Jul 2014 at 01:01
Comment 他の方の投稿を見て頂ければいいと思うので、細かい部分の加筆修正は割愛させていただきますが、メッセージの受け取り相手を意識しながら、謙譲語や尊敬語を使い分ける必要があります。なかなか日本人でも大変なので、根気良く앞으로도 힘내세요.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 06 Jul 2014 at 22:08
original #アビットさんツアー・イシューシャフトのジェットスピードドライバーヘッドの写真を撮ってお送りします。これらのヘッドはあなたが以前購入したツアー・イシュー製品と同様のものです。明日オフィスに戻り次第、画像をメールにてお送りします。	corrected #アビットさんツアー・イシュー(シャフト)のジェットスピードドライバーヘッドの写真を撮ってお送りします。これらのヘッドはあなたが以前購入したツアー・イシュー製品と同様のものです。明日オフィスに戻り次第、画像をメールにてお送りします。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 06 Jul 2014 at 09:09
original Although in the previous message you've said "In next days we'll make it available to choose Japan as shipping address", when I try to go to the purchase settlement page after putting item in the cart, "ERROR: SORRY, “product name” DOESN’T SHIP TO JAPAN" message pops out, and purchase can't be done. Please fix settings to make it possible to purchase items. Thank you.	corrected Although in the previous message you've said "In next days we'll make it available to choose Japan as shipping address", when I try to go to the purchase settlement page after putting item in the cart, "ERROR: SORRY, “product name” DOESN’T SHIP TO JAPAN" message pops out, and I cannot place my order. Please fix settings to make it possible to purchase items. Thank you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 06 Jul 2014 at 09:27
original Thank you for your message. I apologize for my delayed response. Unfortunately, this particular merchandise was sent back to the manufacturer. To remedy the situation we will issue you a full refund. Thank you for your understanding.	corrected Thank you for your message. I apologize for my delayed response. Unfortunately, this particular merchandise we shipped to you was sent back to us. To remedy the situation we will issue you a full refund. Thank you for your understanding.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 06 Jul 2014 at 09:13
original Thank you for your messsage. I must apologize for our delaying reaching this message. Regrettably, All items we had sent to you were returned to us. Therefore, we will refund the full amount that you have paid. Thank you.	corrected Thank you for your messsage. I must apologize for our delaying reaching this message. Regrettably, the item we had shipped to you were returned to us. Therefore, we will issue a refund for the full amount that you have paid. Thank you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 05 Jul 2014 at 15:59
original Thank you for replying. Now then, will you send me the PayPal payment invoice for the 6 [*******] that includes the handling fee? Once I receive the payment invoice, I would like to deposit the amount that is written. I thank you in advance.	corrected Thank you for replying. Now then, will you send me the PayPal purchase invoice for the 6pcs of [*******] that includes the handling fee? Once I receive the purchase invoice, I would like to deposit the amount that is written. I thank you in advance.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 05 Jul 2014 at 11:02
original 質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのように掃除するのですか。回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用潜在を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。	corrected 質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのようにクリーニングするのですか。回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用洗剤を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。

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05 Jul 2014 at 11:02

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質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのように掃除するのですか。
回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用潜在を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。

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質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのようにクリーニングするのですか。
回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用洗剤を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 06 Jul 2014 at 09:04
original レンズにかすみ、ホコリ、傷のない、メカニカルも状態の良い中古のNikon 20-35 AF ガラスレンズを探しています。もしそのようなレンズが入荷しましたら是非知らせて頂けますか。私のN6006とD-50Nikonカメラで使いたいと思っています。どうぞよろしくお願い致します。	corrected レンズにかすみ、ホコリ、傷のない、メカニカルも状態の良い中古のNikon 20-35 AF ガラスレンズを探しています。もしそのようなレンズの入荷予定の有無と時期ががおわかりでしたら是非知らせて頂けますか。私のN6006とD-50Nikonカメラで使いたいと思っています。どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

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06 Jul 2014 at 09:04

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レンズにかすみ、ホコリ、傷のない、メカニカルも状態の良い中古のNikon 20-35 AF ガラスレンズを探しています。

もしそのようなレンズが入荷しましたら是非知らせて頂けますか。私のN6006とD-50Nikonカメラで使いたいと思っています。

どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

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レンズにかすみ、ホコリ、傷のない、メカニカルも状態の良い中古のNikon 20-35 AF ガラスレンズを探しています。

もしそのようなレンズの入荷予定の有無と時期ががおわかりでしたら是非知らせて頂けますか。私のN6006とD-50Nikonカメラで使いたいと思っています。

どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 05 Jul 2014 at 01:34
Comment 元の英文が難解なので完璧な和訳は現実的に難しいように思いますが、それを差し引いても、誤訳が多いのと最後の一文も未完成のままとなっているのが気になりました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 05 Jul 2014 at 10:56
original Thank you for the message. I am happy to receive the product. I would appreciate it if you evaluate it. Thank you for the message. The tracking number was not correct. Please refer to the number below. RR905929239JP I'm sorry for the mistake. It will take about a week until you receive the product.	corrected Thank you for the message. I am happy to hear that you have received the product. I would appreciate it if you evaluate it. Thank you for the message. The tracking number was not correct. Please refer to the number below. RR905929239JP I'm sorry for the mistake. It will take about a week until you receive the product.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 05 Jul 2014 at 11:57
original As I informed you yesterday, if do not cancel and agree to our terms, we will send you the pre-release of this item on the release date, August 28th. It should take 8 to 14 business days for it to arrive.	corrected As I informed you yesterday, if you agree to our terms without cancellation, we will ship the pre-release item to you on the release date, August 28th. It should take 8 to 14 business days for delivery.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 03 Jul 2014 at 12:00
original Thank you very much for your message. Regarding to the orange amplifier items, we have deleted all we can from our side, however, if there is anything that can not be deleted, please kindly let me know ASIN or URL. If you let me know, we will delete them right away. Thank you very much for your cooperation.	corrected Thank you very much for your message. Regarding to the orange amplifier items, we have deleted all we can from our side, however, if there is anything that has not been deleted yet, please kindly let me know ASIN or URL. If you let me know, we will delete them right away. Thank you very much for your cooperation.

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