翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

ポップアップで表示されるウィンドウの閉じるボタンが表示されていません。
あと私もチャットはもっと複数の人間でできると良いと思います。その他、Twitterでログインする機能とiTunesと連動する機能を検討してください。

英語

There is no close button on the screen which pops up.
I also think that it would be better if we can chat with more people at the same time. Please think about a function which is to log in with Twitter and a function which is to connect with iTune.

レビュー ( 1 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/27 10:58:46

元の翻訳
There is no close button on the screen which pops up.
I also think that it would be better if we can chat with more people at the same time. Please think about a function which is to log in with Twitter and a function which is to connect with iTune.

修正後
There is no close button pops up on the screen.
I also think that it would be better if we can chat with multiple people at the same time. Please take into your consideration about functions for Twitter log-in and iTune connection.

基本的な情報はきちんと網羅できていて良いと思います。あとは文章を簡潔にできると更に良くなると思います。