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Thank you for sending me the bill.
At the moment,USD55- at Paypal is completed, please check it.

Furthermore, I am sorry to trouble you but, after shipping is completed, could you send me its tracking number.

As soon as the sample arrives, I would like to be finished the Landing Page. As for the items' features and appealing points, I would like to ask you, please continue further cooperation.

I am happy to deal with you.↵

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Thank you for sending me the bill.
I have sent USD55.00 via Paypal. Please confirm receipt.

Once shipped, please send me the tracking number.

I would like to finish the Landing Page as soon as the sample arrives. I may seek your advise on the items' features and points of appeal. I appreciate your cooperation in advance.

I am happy to work with you.

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Silk cotton is well moist and gentle to the hair and skin.↵
As it is well moist and well ventilated, you can go through the whole year comfortably. By choosing this linen, you can enjoy silky quality and shining, and easily washed.

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Silk cotton is excellent for moisturizing and gentle on hair and skin. It has superior moisture absorption and breathability, making it comfortable to wear all year round. By choosing this linen, you can enjoy the texture and luster of silk and easily wash it.

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メールありがとうございました。正式には正しいと言えません。アマゾンセラーのアカウントをもっちいます人は誰でも清和の商品をAmazon.comで販売することができます。小売業者、卸売業者、企業、または世界中の個人は誰でもできます。
あなたまたは、会社がAmazonではじめと販売する人である場合、タイトルを制作し、その製品の説明を作成します、あなたがその製品の製作者でなくてもできます。アマゾンんは、時間やお金を何百もの製品や独自のタイトルや説明を書くための時間を費やしたくないからです。

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メールいただきありがとうございます。残念ながら正しいとは言えません。Amazonで販売アカウントを持っている方は、誰でもセイワの商品をAmazon.comで販売可能です。これは、世界中の小売業者、卸売業者、企業、個人が対象となります。
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あなたがAmazonで、ある商品を最初に販売する個人または企業である場合、あなたがその商品の製造メーカーでなくとも、商品のタイトルと詳細説明の作成許可を有します。何百万もの製品に対し、Amazonが独自にタイトルや説明を記載するには膨大な時間と費用を要するため、この様な仕組みが採用されているのです。

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・ 小さい
私が期待していたものより遥かに小さく、私のコーギはお気に召しませんでした。
・満足度
エレガントで、サイズ、型もちょうど良い
・私の猫には完璧です
とても洗練されており、穏健です。大好きです！私が望んでいたものです。
・期待していたより小さいです
わたしはヨーキーの子犬にこのセラミクボウルを買いました、モダンで綺麗に制作されていますし、かわいいが、少し小さすぎ、浅すぎますが、とても気に入っています。

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・ 小さい
私が期待していたものより遥かに小さく、私のコーギーはお気に召しませんでした。
・大満足
とてもエレガントで、サイズ、型もちょうど良い。
・私の猫には完璧です
とても洗練されており、控えめです。気に入りました！　まさに私が望んでいたものです。
・期待していたより小さいです
わたしはヨーキーの子犬に、インテリアに合わせて、このセラミクボウルを買いました。モダンで綺麗に制作されていますし、可愛い、ただ少し小さすぎて浅すぎますが、それでも大好きです！

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Currently your item is on the way to you, and we cannot refund for it.
The refunding condition is either you will not accept the item and it comes back to Japan or you can ask for refund after you have received it. As you, I cannot get in tough with the forwarder and I cannot proceed the shipment to stop. Because of your customs or forwarder, it is hard to see it goes as we expect. And so please understand this situation.

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Currently your item is on the way to you, and we cannot refund for it.
The refunding condition is either you will not accept the item and it comes back to Japan or you can ask for refund after you have received it. As you, I cannot get in touch with the forwarder and I cannot proceed the shipment to stop. Because of your customs or forwarder, it is hard to see it goes as we expect. And so please understand this situation.

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I am in charge of a assistant of Japanese subsidiary of America's hotel chain. My main work is my boss's mail check, creation of files, phone calls, preparation of meetings, and ordering items. Now we are in preparation of a new hotel in Tokyo. I need to study English I have forgotten for I need it. In private, I sometimes do design for graphic designer. Before, I had worked as a graphic designer. I like designing but I like creative hotel developing work too.

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I am an assistant at a Japanese subsidiary of a American hotel chain. My main work includes checking my boss' mail, creating files, taking and making phone calls, preparing for meetings and ordering items. Now, we are preparing for the opening of a new hotel in Tokyo. I need to brush up on my English because I will need it. In private, I sometimes do some design work as a graphic designer. Previously, I had worked as a graphic designer. I like designing but I like creative hotel development work too.

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1. I understand that big items make shipping costs high and benefit low.
If it were item in light and small quantity, is it possible to be reduced 15%?↵
The items not sold in your ship, can I have them from DD Hammocks?
We would like to purchase an item called " ".
On this item page, it is £30, in €, it is €33.
Could you sell them by 15% reduction from €33?
We would like to have 33 pieces of this, as it takes work, we would like to have them in mass amount.

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1. I understand that big items make the shipping costs high and the benefit low.
If the items were light, is it possible to get a 15% discount?↵
Is it possible to order an item not sold in your store through DD Hammock?
We would like to purchase an item called " ".
On this item page, it is £30, so in €, it would be €33.
Could you sell this item with a 15% discount from €33?
We would like to have 30 pieces of these, and since it'll be too much effort to order multiple times, we would like to have them sent all together in one shipping.

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I found the same phenomenon in my environment.
Maybe, the first way would be that A and B setting does not work.

At the X system, the machine that got data carries out Y.
Therefore, first, by setting C, send the data to the machine and then as A and B must be executed, it will not work properly unless to make it for the second writing.

However, even with this way, I am as he is worrying it would belong to the bug.
As I also would like to know about this, is anyone commenting?

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I have had the same experience in my environment.
Perhaps with the first method, the A and B settings do not work.

With the X system, the machine that gets the data would carry out Y.
Therefore, first, use the setting C, send the data to the machine, and then A and B must be executed, so it will not work properly if you don't use the second method.

However, even with this method, I am worried that we might run into trouble like him.
I would also like to know more about this, does anyone have any idea?

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There, we are planning to reopen selling by changing from (Fulfilled by Marchant to FBA in selling style.

Under this condition, we are inspecting about firms which does FBA supply in place (Importer service) to the UK by using possible shipping EMS (Express Mail Service) in a short time in priority. We could get a contact with one of them at the momet.

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Therefore, we are planning to reopen by changing the selling method (Fulfilled by Marchant) to FBA.

We are researching for enterprises that do FBA delivery services (Importer service) to the UK by using EMS (Express Mail Service) that can do priority delivery in a short time even under the current situation. ↵
We are getting in contact with one of them at the moment.

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By Covid-19 pandemic, flights are greatly small in number, most of international packages are delayed, and by purchasers, negative feedback came, and Order Defect rate got over 1%.

As for the ordered delayed, we handle with issuing a refund after explaining its situation.

Not to increase these feedbacks in this situation, we suspend selling.
Currently we wait for revery of flights, and wait for reopen a selling chance, but recovery will not be seen yet.

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Due to Covid-19 pandemic, flights have greatly decreased and most of the international packages were delayed Due to this, many negative feedbacks were received, and the Order Defect rate became greater than 1%.

As for the delayed orders, we are providing explanations to the customers and giving a refund to all of these customers to solve the issue.

Recognizing this situation and in order to not increase these negative feedbacks, we have been temporarily pausing the selling since June.
Currently, we are waiting for the recovery of the flights but we are unaware when we would be able to resume our service.

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I am sorry. I was wrong.

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I am sorry. I have written it incorrectly.

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On 12 July, I asked for shipping, but it has not been shipped yet.
"Urgent Handling" has been paid.

Ship Request ID

Although shipping is delayed due to the Covid-19, when will it be to be shipped?

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On July 12th, I asked for the shipping of two items but they have not been shipped yet.
I have paid for "Urgent Handling".

Ship Request ID

Although shipping is delayed due to the Covid-19, when will it be to be shipped?

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Thank you for your mail!
I am so glad.

It has been a long while! I am fine too!
As Covid-19 is spread worldwide, I really worried about Stephan.
I am really happy to hear you are well.
Are your cute nephew and niece fine?
They must be grown up!

I hope the world becomes peaceful as quickly as possible.

Are you composing Son Columbia?
It is amazing!
Stephan's music is really wonderful.
I would like to listen to Stephan's music again!!

I am "C"'s staff, I like Sony very much (laugh).
I am happy you are connected with a Japanese firm.

I wish Stephan's success.
Please let me know what is going on again!

Thank you very much.
I am relieved.

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Thank you for messaging me!
I'm so glad to hear from you.

It's been such a long time! I'm doing well!
As the Covid-19 is spreading worldwide, I was really worried about you.
I'm really glad to hear you are doing well.
How are your adorable nephew and niece doing?
They must have grown up a lot!

I hope the world will be peaceful soon.

Are you a composer at the Sony Colombia?
That is amazing!
Your music is truly wonderful.
I would like to hear your music again!!

I work at "C", but I like Sony very much. haha
I am happy about you working with a Japanese company.

I wish your success always.
Please let me know how you are doing anytime!

Thank you again for writing me.
I am relieved.

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As for shipping method
When to ship this kind of item usually, we ship by a SAL unnecessary to be signed for receiving, as to ship quickly during the holiday season, we ship the item registered. (As there increase more cargos during holiday seasons, items for SAL are handled later and reached a lot later.) During this season, normal shipping method (SAL) takes about 1 month to reach the customer. Registered items needed sign make a lot of inconvenience to customers who are often out of home, but please understand it.

Although it took a lot of inconvenience, please contact the nearest Post Office.
(By 31 December, if there is no contact to re-deliver, it will be back to Japan.)

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As for shipping method
When we ship this kind of item, we usually use SAL, which is unnecessary to be signed for receiving, as to ship quickly during the holiday season, we ship the item by registered mail. (As there increase more cargos during holiday seasons, items for SAL are handled later and delivered a lot later.) During this season, normal shipping method (SAL) takes about 1 month to reach the customer. Registered items needed signature make a lot of inconvenience to customers who are often out of home, but please understand it.

Although it took a lot of inconvenience, please contact the nearest Post Office.
(if there is no contact to re-deliver by 31 December, it will be returned to Japan.)

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In the future, we are going to sell daily necessities at amazon. The clients are purchases at Amazon. Although there is no items on the above listed URL except toile paper, we are going to increase listing daily necessities in the future.

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In the future, we are going to sell daily necessities at amazon. The clients are purchasers at Amazon. Although there is no items on the above listed URL except toilet paper, we are going to increase listing daily necessities in the future.

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Hello, how are you?
I am so happy that you will come to Japan again.
Shall we climb a mountain without fail. This summer, I climbed the Mt Fuji 30 times.

We will climb the mountain on the day! I have the day vacant as it is next year.

What route I recommend you is Yoshida route, but Suhashi route is recommended too. I will be all right with either route.↵
Cabin will be bee at the 4th level to go up to the peak on the next day. The cabin I am a member is good.

I will write what you need to bring as follows.

I look forward to seeing you then.

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Hello, how have you been?
I am so happy that you will come to Japan again.
Let's go mountain climbing together. This summer, I climbed Mt Fuji 30 times.

Why don't we climb the mountain the day you come next year? My schedule is currently open as the target date is one year away.

My recommendation is via the Yoshida trail. The Subashiri trail is also recommendable. Whichever you like should be fine. I recommend staying at a mountain hut at the 8th station in order to reach the summit next day. The hut that I am member of would work.

The following is a list of necessary equipment:

I look forward to seeing you then.

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Thank you for purchasing the item this time.↵
We are really sorry but, we cannot deliver it on due time as with a shipping trouble.
Then, we refunded ¢10.
The item will be at your hand within 1-2 weeks.
If you would like to cancel it, we will issue you a fund.↵
Please contact us.
We apologize for this inconvenience.

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Thank you for your purchasing.↵
To our regret, it has turned out that we are unable to deliver the order on time due to shipping problems.
Under the circumstances, we have paid back $10 to you.
We will have the order delivered to you within 1-2 weeks.
However, If you would like to cancel your order, please contact us immediately so we that we can refund you the total amount.
We apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.

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I sure would like to go out with you though, as there were packages delivered yesterday and today, and the children are very tired. As I would like them to take some rest tomorrow, I feel sorry but we cannot go out. We look forward to seeing you on another day.

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I sure would like to go out with you though, our packages just having arrived yesterday and today, the children look very tired. As I would like them to take some rest tomorrow, I am sorry but we cannot go out. We look forward to seeing you on another day.

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Dear David,
I understand it.
How about meeting at Marriott hotel at 19:00?
It is on the 15th floor of Nagoya Station.
If it makes you hard to find, I can go to the Shinkansen platform at the time of our arrival.
Thank you for today.

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Dear David,
Understood.
How about the lounge of Marriott Hotel at 19:00?
It is on the 15th floor of Nagoya Station.
If it's too tricky to navigate, I can pick you up from the Shinkansen platform when you arrive.
I shall look forward to meeting you later today.

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Dear David,
I usually take time more, but as I had some errand to do and so went back to Nagoya.
I am sorry too,
I do not mind on Wednesday or Thursday.↵
Please tell me if you can get to know schedule.
Thank you.

Hannah-san,↵
Are there any improvement in HMRC inspection?

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Dear David,
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Normally I would hang around a bit but there was something I had to take care of, so I went back to Nagoya.
I am sorry I couldn't have stayed longer.
I can do either Wednesday or Thursday, I don't mind. Let me know once the schedule is confirmed.
Thank you.

Hannah, is there any more new on the HMRC audit?