Sakura (setsuko-atarashi) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
よく似た服を受け取りました。サイズは3XLです。ぴったりですが、なんとか入ります。冷水で洗濯し乾燥させません。上記の注文はXXLで小さすぎることが分かりました。実際３XL又は４XLが欲しいのです。
お考えをお聞かせください。とにかく、XXLは小さ過ぎるのでキャンセルしたいです。

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よく似た服を受け取りました。サイズは3XLです。ぴったりですが、なんとか入ります。冷水で洗濯し、干しません。上記の注文はXXLで小さすぎることが分かりました。３XL又はもしあるなら４XLが欲しいのです。
お考えをお聞かせください。いずれにせよ、XXLは小さ過ぎるのでキャンセルしたいです。↵
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
We had estimated to finish this work for 3 days, but actually it took for 5 days.

The owner tells us he can only pay for 3 days work as there is reason for us who took more than that days.

What should we do with the bill?

In addition, the owner says he wants to return the parts not used

They will be sent to our Tokyo office once.

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We had estimated to finish this work in 3 days, but actually it took 5 days.

The owner tells us he can only pay us for 3 days of work, as he believes the responsibility lies with us.

Please advise as to what we should with the additional cost.

Furthermore, the owner has said that he wants to return the parts that have not been used.

They will be sent to our Tokyo office for now.

元の翻訳
おはよう御座います。

下記のメールにつきまして、
いつも有り難う御座います。
荷物の荷物の配列の件了承致しました。
輸出業者にも同じことを伝えてあります。
昨日輸出業者と話したことを御連絡したいと思います。
彼によりますと、今回はすべての商品はコンテナに詰められました。
しかし、Skypeのメッセージでの、御社に再度全CBMを御連絡致しました。

よろしくお願い致します。

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おはよう御座います。

下記のメールにつきまして、
いつも有り難う御座います。
↵
荷物の荷物の配列の件了承致しました。
輸出業者にも同じことを伝えてあります。
昨日輸出業者と話したことを御連絡したいと思います。
彼によりますと、今回はすべての商品はコンテナに詰められました。
しかし、Skypeでお伝えしましたとおり、御社に再度全CBMを御連絡致したいと思います。

ご確認をよろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
販売者様、

アマゾンセラーサポーターです。

私はビッツです。あなたが提案されているこの件に関してサポートさせて頂きます。

あなたのセラーアカウントのVAT算出からVAT 取引報告に関する問題だと理解しております。

あなたの前回のご返事から確認させて頂きます。アマゾンのレポートセクションにはいり,
満足度を選択していた出来ますと、右端にTax 欄が御座います。そこからVAT 取引報告をダウンロードしてください。

しかし、前回私が提供致しましたのはAmazon VAT Transactions Report でした。そこであなたがご希望の月間報告をダウンロード出来ます。

リンクにアクセスする前にセラーセントラルのログインして下さい。

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販売者様、

アマゾンセラーサポーターです。

私はビッツです。あなたが提案されているこの件に関してサポートさせて頂きます。

ご懸念は、セラーセントラルからVATを計算できるVAT 取引報告書に関することだと理解しております。

あなたの前回のご返事どおり、アマゾンのレポートセクションにはいり,
fulfilment by amazonを選択していただきますと、右端に Tax section（Tax 欄（）が御座います。そこからVAT 取引報告をダウンロードしてください。

ただし、前回私が提供致しましたのはAmazon VAT Transactions Report でした。そこであなたがご希望の月間報告をダウンロード出来ます。

リンクにアクセスする前にセラーセントラルにログインして下さい。

元の翻訳
商品を郵送して頂く時に追跡番号を付けて頂けますか？
また、荷物上に＄１０と記載して頂けますか？

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商品を郵送して頂く時に追跡番号を付けて頂けますか？
また、荷物に＄１０と記載して頂けますか？

元の翻訳
I am ◯◯ who lives in Japan.
Is VAT included in the PayPay payment bill sent just before?
When you company's name was ◯◯ before, I used to pay amount reduced BAT.
Have your rule and display changed?
If the amount is correct, I will pay it right away.
I am sorry to trouble you. I look forward to hearing from you.

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I am xx who lives in Japan.
Is VAT included in the PayPay payment bill sent just before?
When you company's name was xx before, I used to pay amount reduced BAT.
Have your rule and display changed?
If the amount is correct, I will pay it right away.
I am sorry to trouble you. I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
At the moment, 3 shops are decided to handle it.

At the last order, A's verified date was August 2018 arrived.
The shortest limited date would be possible to be rejected by shops.
Please ship us items as long limited date as possible this time.

In addition, when is the limited date of real A product and B class?
Is item C's standard ※※？
Does item C include sugar?

Could you mail analysis certificate of each part except the flies you sent me before?
Also, I need ※※ documents too.

How much percent of sugar does items C contain per 1 bottle?

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At the moment, 3 shops decided to handle it.

At the last order, A's verified date was August 2018 arrived.
The shortest limited date would be possible to be rejected by shops.
Please ship us items as long limited date as possible this time.

In addition, when is the limited date of real A product and B class?
Is item C's standard xx？
Does item C include sugar?

Could you mail analysis certificate of each part except the flies you sent me before?
Also, I need xx documents too.

How much percent of sugar does items C contain per 1 bottle?

元の翻訳
Thank you for the price.
I would like to purchase all!

As I would like to lessen product's damage during transportation, I would like to purchase by case.
◯◯ product contained 20 pieces in one case. I checked it when I purchased last time.

How many pieces are there in one case for other products?
Are they all 20 pieces in one case?

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Thank you for the price.
I would like to purchase all!

As I would like to lessen product's damage during transportation, I would like to purchase by case.
20 pieces of ◯◯ product were in one case. I checked it when I purchased last time.

How many pieces are there in one case for other products?
Are they all 20 pieces in one case?

元の翻訳
The first payment date is to be on the last day of March.
The last day of March is on Saturday, and so please prepare the payment arriving on the 30th on Friday.

To be sure, if the payment cannot be found on the 30th, we are ready to stop your asset lawfully.
We do not execute this process, please be sure to pay without fail.

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The first payment date is to be on the last day of March.
As the last day of March is Saturday, please prepare the payment arriving to our bank account on the 30th on Friday.

To be sure, if the payment cannot be found on the 30th, we are ready to stop your asset lawfully.
As we do not like to execute this process, please be sure to pay without fail.

元の翻訳
Subject: To request for Web meeting at 13:00~15:00 on 30 March (Fri.)
Content:
To Mr Mark,

Although a real discussion will be after April, is it possible to have a Web meeting at 13:00~15:00 (Hong Kong time) on 30 March?↵
While asking about the documents sent, we would like to understand more of your company's business content.
As we are not good at English, we are going to accompany an interpreter.
We are sorry for the precise time, but please consider it.

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Subject: Re: Requesting a web meeting between 13:00 and 15:00 on March 30th (Fri.)
Content:
Dear Mark,

Can we have a web meeting between 13:00 and 15:00 (Hong Kong time) on March 30th before we have a substantive meeting probably after April?↵
We would like to learn more about your company's business by asking you questions about the documents that you provided us.
An English interpreter will also attend the meeting as we are not so familiar with English language.
Please forgive us for giving you the specific time and date for a proposed meeting. We look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you as always.
Today, the item ordered was delivered.
I have ordered stainless material figure, have not you made the material wrong?
The color of the stainless material figure is quite different from the one I ordered before.
The stainless material necklace ordered this time is the same color with the former one.
Only the this time's ordered stainless material figure has problem.
Please compare the photos, the right one is the former order and the left one is this time's order.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello.
Thank you as always.
Today, the ordered item was delivered.
I have ordered stainless material figure, have not you made the material wrong?
The color of the stainless material figure is quite different from the one I ordered before.
The stainless material necklace ordered this time is the same color with the former one.
Only the this time's ordered stainless material figure has problem.
Please compare the photos, the right one is the former order and the left one is this time's order.
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
It seems I have told you a wrong schedule.
(One day was shifted.)

As ◯◯ has some other thing to do on 13 March, he will return home in a morning flight.
I will come back to Japan on the 16:00 flight.

As I was thinking this time's main theme was a meeting with A company (technology transfer), though there was not enough time, by adjusting ◯◯‘s schedule, I planed this business trip.

As for the meeting with B company, I would like you to arrange on the next business trip.
As I think there is a chance to go on a business trip, please let me discuss about the schedule.

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It seems I have told you a wrong schedule.
(One day was shifted.)

As ◯◯ has some other thing to do on 13 March, he will return home in a morning flight.
I will come back to Japan on the 16:00 flight.

As I was thinking this time's main theme was a meeting with A company (technology transfer), though there was not enough time, by adjusting ◯◯‘s schedule, I planned this business trip.

As for the meeting with B company, I would like you to arrange on the next business trip.
As I think there is a chance to go on a business trip, please let me discuss about the schedule.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I understood that the ASIN is a special thing.
Also I understood I can exhibit with another ASIN too.
I exhibit with another ASIN. Even though the lowest price of $48, I cannot sell at all.
As you know, this product page SEO is weak and has low ranking.
Even though they are the same products, if they cannot sell they are something else.
In the former ASIN, even though it was $54, I recall that they sold 10~100 perday.
What can I do?

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Thank you for your reply.
I understood that the ASIN is a special thing.
Also I understood I can exhibit with another ASIN too.
I exhibit with another ASIN. Even though the lowest price of $48, I cannot sell at all.
As you know, this product page SEO is weak and has low ranking.
Even though they are the same products, if they cannot sell they are something else.
In the former ASIN, even though it was $54, I recall that they sold dozens~100 perday.
What can I do?

元の翻訳
Yesterday, I went BAR with friends. It was spacious and beautiful inside and the staff members are very good with atmosphere. On the TV monitor, there were always sports, music and stock information. The best of all, alcohol was reasonable and good. I was content with the full of food in menu. I would like to go there again.

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Yesterday, I went to this bar with my friends. It was spacious and beautiful inside, and I really liked the atmosphere of the staff members. Sports, music, stock prices, etc. were streamed constantly on the television monitor. What I liked best was that alcoholic beverages were offered at very reasonable prices and they tasted good. I was also greatly satisfied with their extensive food menu. I would like to go there again.

元の翻訳
久慈博士と新規患者の診察予約を頂きたいです。宮崎産婦人科クリニックの宮崎先生からの紹介状を持っています。久慈先生は木曜日しか面会出来ないと知っており、それで結構です。私は現在妊娠11週で、８月13日出産予定です。

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久慈博士（先生）の初診予約を希望します。宮崎産婦人科クリニックの宮崎先生からの紹介状を持っています。久慈先生は木曜日しか診察出来ないことは存じ上げており、それで結構です。私は現在妊娠11週で、８月13日出産予定です。

元の翻訳
私はPS４ゲームは出来ません。あまり利点がありませんから。難し市場です。コンピュータとXboxは少し出来ます。

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私はPS４ゲームは出来ません。（値段的にも内容的にも）あまりいい商品がありませんから。難しい市場です。コンピュータとXboxは少し出来ます。

元の翻訳
相手への返信文
私は１０個購入致します。支払いはPayPalですので、このアドレスでお支払いください。

相手の返答
今日は。

そうです。PayPal（vincode.inc@gnail.com)に８５ドルお支払いください、そうしましたら、追跡番号をお知らせ致します。ご注文は本日又は明日の朝配送されます。

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相手への返信文
私は１０個購入致します。支払いはPayPalですので、このアドレスでお支払いください。

相手の返答
こんにちは。

そうです。PayPal（vincode.inc@gnail.com)に８５ドルお支払いください、そうしましたら、追跡番号をお知らせ致します。ご注文品は本日又は翌朝に発送されます。

元の翻訳
I think it is the best way to have one of your update kit sent to me.
Now I am going to my update kit repaired, I am not sure if it will be in time for Commissioning.
In the former work, A company got so angry about update kit issue.
If Commissioning is not in time, I will lose face from A company.

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I think it is best to have one of your update kits sent to me.
I am going to have my update kit repaired, therefore I am not sure if it will be done in time for commissioning.
Previously, A company got angry about the update kit issue.
If commissioning is not done in time, I will lose trust from A company.

元の翻訳
The most famous leather production in Japan, Himeji.

Himeji is picked as Japan's most active place for leather production.

To tan to raw leather needs massive water and in a narrow grange of Japan, places subjected to the best are quite little.

In Japan, there are three major leather production places, "Himeji", "Tokyo" and "Wakayama".

Tatsu-shi in Himeji there is Saho river to be used for water line, so many tanners thrived here.
And also now, its history continues and it is a region with most tanners in Japan.

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Himeji is famous for its most active leather production in Japan.

You can name Himeji to pick up Japan's most active place for leather production.

To tan raw leather, you need massive amout of water. Due to its small land area, places subjected to the best are fewer than you would think in Japan.

In Japan, there are three major leather production places, Himeji, Tokyo and Wakayama.

In Tatsuno City in Himeji, there is Saho river to be used for water line, so many tanners thrived there.
Now, its history still continues, and it is a region with most tanners in Japan.

元の翻訳
初めてのシーズンですので、PF18を80組しばらく進めていきましょう。最終的に、次の３月にAI18ファッションショーのための2在庫単位追加請求して頂けます。

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初めてのシーズンですので、今はPF18を80組で進めていきましょう。最終的に、次の３月にAI18ファッションショーのための2在庫単位追加提案できるかもしれません。

元の翻訳
お問い合わせ有り難う御座います。弊社はお客様にタービュレーター・チン・パッドの画像を提供しております。例えば、名前、人種番号、自国の住所をチン・パッドに加えれます。お客様のチン・パッドは＄75.00から購入して頂けます。あなたご自身の特別なものに興味が御座いました詳細情報を送って頂けますと必要なものをご手配致します。

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お問い合わせ有り難う御座います。弊社はお客様にタービュレーター・チン・パッドの画像を提供しております。例えば、名前、人種番号、自国の住所をチン・パッドに加えられます。お客様のチン・パッドは＄75.00から購入して頂けます。あなたご自身の特別なものに興味が御座いました詳細情報を送って頂けますと必要なものをご手配致します。

元の翻訳
2種類の商品のセールをしています。セット価格で現在ご提供出来ます。１種はこちらと2種目は◯◯パーカーです。 商談させて頂きたく思います。

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2つの商品を販売されているようですが、どちらも「Buy it now」価格（即決価格）が設定されています。１つはこの商品で、もう１つは◯◯パーカーです。値段交渉が可能かどうか、お伺いしたいです。