スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Good afternoon.
Glad to do business with you.

I would like to confirm some points.

I am registered under the name 6PMCOMPANY↵
The item documents are enclosed, how is the production process going?

In the middle of March I gave an advance payment of 40%, I think they should be near completion. Is this correct?

Has the advance payment from 6PMCOMPANY been payed?

Please confirm and reply as your earliest.

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Good afternoon.
Glad to do business with you.

I would like to confirm some points.

How is the progress with the production for the items for the enclosed documentation? Our name was under the name 6PMCOMPANY.

I think they should be near completion. as we have given you an advance payment of 40% in the middle of March, Is this correct?

Has the advance payment been paid from 6PMCOMPANY?

Please confirm and reply as your earliest.

元の翻訳
Have you been able to make contact with USPS?
Did you manage to get the backpack safely?

We have sent the items you wanted.
I am very sorry our reply has taken so long.
If you have already received the items what is the reason for wanting to return it?

If you could please provide a reason for return.

As is PayPal rules, a refund can not be issued until the item has arrived back, when it has arrived I will issue the refund for you.

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Were you able to contact USPS?
Did you manage to receive the backpack safely?

We have sent the items you requested.
We are very sorry our reply has taken so long.
If you have already received the item, what is the reason for wanting to return it?

We'd appreciate If you could provide us a reason for return.

As the PayPal rule states, a refund can not be issued until the item returns to the sender. I will issue a refund for you when it arrives .

元の翻訳
It is a very large volume of trade, if we do not get the money returned, we will be short of funds and unable to trade.
Can you somehow send the remainder of the goods to us?
For the moment, for a little while we intend to keep the goods at our store.

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It is a very large volume of trade and, if we do not get the money returned, we will be short of funds and unable to do business.
Can you somehow send the remainder of the goods to us?
At the moment, we intend to keep the goods at our store for the time being.

元の翻訳
Regarding calling by telephone, we have very poor English conversation skills, so is it alright if I make my request in email.
I have made payment and received notification for the item 1 to my mail address.
I will send a payment request for the remaining 6 through PayPal.
Why are the 'Neko Noren' priced at $15 each?
This time they are a reduced item, from now on they are planned to sell for $30.
The item will be packaged together and postage is $6.80.
If you have any further questions please feel free to ask.

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Regarding calling by telephone, we have very poor English conversation skills. Is it alright if I make my request in email?
Once you make payment for the item 1 I'll be notified to my mail address.
I will send a payment request for the remaining 6 through PayPal.
How about $15 each for "Neko Noren"?
This time they were sold at reduced prices, but they'll be selling for $30. It is a great deal.
The item will be packaged together and postage is $6.80.
If you have any further questions please feel free to ask.

元の翻訳
Thank you as always.
I have a customer wanting a spring for attaching the hammock chair, do you have stock of these.

Keigu

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Thank you as always.
I have a customer wanting a spring for attaching the hammock chair, do you have stock of these.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
In pre-war Japan household appliances centered around the iron and the radio, the ratio of vacuums and washing machines etc. compared to western countries was relatively low. Personal use automobile ownership was also low, it did not go over 0.07% even in 1940. Heating demand in urban areas was configured as 40-70% for home heating 15-35 cooking and 15-30% for bathing. According to the investigation by the Yamaguchi Agricultural Experiment Station, the comparable rate was 33%, 12% and 55% respectively. Hardwood oak, sawtooth oak, and Castanopsis etc. all with excellent combustion rates for heat generation were used for the firewood.

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In pre-war Japan, household appliances were mainly irons and radios and the diffusion of the appliance that lightens the load of housework such as vacuum cleaners and washing machines was relatively low compared to western countries. The automobile ownership for personal use was also low and it did not go over 0.07% of the population even in 1940. Heating demand in urban areas was configured as 40-70% for home heating, 15-35% for cooking, and 15-30% for bathing. According to the research conducted by the Yamaguchi Agricultural Experiment Station, the comparable rates in rural areas were 33%, 12% and 55% respectively. For the firewood, broad‐leaved trees such as hardwood oak, sawtooth oak, and castanopsis were used since they are excellent in combustion and generating heat.

元の翻訳
When will you know when the items can be sent?
Does it seem as if it may still take some time?

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Could you tell me when the items will be sent?
Do you think it will still take some time?

元の翻訳
The payment I received $9 is shipping for 1 book, the additional cost for the 2nd book is $4, I will send a payment request please check it and make payment.

Are the type of person that is OK with a manga plot spoiler?
If you are OK with it, I will tell you a shocking story I heard....
Speaking of the break up of A and B, the reason was to protect B.
but....A loves B therefore they can't quit..........

I went to send the item today, but the packaging size was [], which was over the allowed size, so it couldn't be sent.
I will repackage it tomorrow in a new wrap around box, please wait a little further.

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The $9 payment I received is shipping for 1 book, the additional cost for the 2nd book is $4. I sent a payment request so please check it and make the payment.

Are you the type of person who is OK with manga plot spoilers?
If you are OK with them then I will tell you a shocking story I heard...
The reason for ◯ and ☆'s breakup was to protect ☆.
but... ◯ also loves ☆ therefore ◯ can't give ☆ up...

I went to send the item today, but the packaging size was ◇, which was over the allowed size, so it couldn't be sent.
I will repackage it tomorrow in a new wrap-around box, please wait a little longer.

元の翻訳
As there are already several offers on you product it is a testament to the attractiveness of it I feel.
I believe that a great deal of Japanese people will want your product.
I am increasingly fascinated by the product.
I understand you have not had the Bluetooth tested in the US as of yet, I will let you know of some inspection agencies.

Please let me know when you have mad your preparations.
I am looking forward to the day when we can speak with each other.

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I think that there being already several offers is a testament to the attractiveness of your product.
I believe that a great deal of Japanese people will want your product.
I am increasingly fascinated by it.
I understand you have not had the Bluetooth tested in the US as of yet, I will let you know of some inspection agencies.

Please let me know when you have made your preparations.
I am looking forward to the day when we can speak with each other.

元の翻訳
何の話でしょうか？　税関が取り上げた未着商品の返金依頼しています。全額の返金が希望です、その後あなたが税関とかかわることしてください。
あなたが£26でなく、購入価格の全額を返金を確認できますか？

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何の話でしょうか？　私は、税関が取り上げた未着商品の返金を依頼しています。全額の返金が希望です。その後あなたが税関とかかわることとしてください。
あなたが£26でなく、購入価格の全額を返金すると確認できますか？

元の翻訳
I have posted the method for attaching the Fender BASS VI handle on YouTube.
The specs require only inserting the handle in the holes like this.
As you only have to insert it in the hole, if it is facing downward it will not fix in place and fall out.
This is not a defect, it was designed this way originally, and is not a problem.

Firstly we need to check the photographs.
Could you please send us some close up photographs of the handle area of the BASS VI?
I will send them to Fender for confirmation.

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I have posted the method for attaching the Fender BASS VI handle on YouTube.
The specs require only inserting the handle in the holes like this.
As you only have to insert it in the hole, if it is facing downward it will not fix in place and fall out.
This is not a defect, it was designed this way originally, and it's not a problem.

Firstly we need to check the photographs.
Could you please send us some close-up photographs of the handle area of the BASS VI?
I will send them to Fender for confirmation.

元の翻訳
先のメールはちょっとわかりません。
画像にて通常のテキストと違って９１１ＤＡＹＳを印刷して欲しいですか？
そうですか？

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先のメールはちょっとわかりません。
画像を見ると、通常のデザインのテキストではなく９１１ＤＡＹＳと印刷して欲しいんですね。
そうですか？

元の翻訳
By the way, do you have plans to go to the Q&A concert? It is fortunate they are coming to Japan. I think the summer heat will be a little too much for me to stand, but I don't think I might get another chance, so I bought a ticket. At the last Summer Sonic I was pushed around so much it felt like I was thrown into a washing machine, its a bit of a bad memory for me. I don't know if my condition is up to it anymore (Ha ha!). Oh yes, your baby has arrived safely? Congratulations. Having more family is always a joyous thing. I can't wait to see his photographs.

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By the way, do you have plans to go to the Q&A concert? It is fortunate that they are also coming to Japan. I thought that the summer heat will be a little too much for me, but I don't think I might get another chance, so I bought a ticket. At the last Summer Sonic, I was pushed around so much it felt like I was thrown into a washing machine, it was tough for me. I don't know if I am up to it anymore (Ha ha!). Oh yes, your baby was born safely? Congratulations! Having more family is always a joyous thing. I can't wait to see his photographs.

元の翻訳
I gave the author of the script a one star rating.

The reason being was poor support. There was no response to my comment even after 20 days.
I think they should have regard for the users opinions.
At the very least, leaving a reply is good manners.
The script was extremely poor quality source code and I will not use it.

After leaving the one star rating, I received direct mail from them many times containing abuse.
For a poor quality script with bad support a one star rating is appropriate. Is that correct?
That is entirely up to the user's discretion.

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I gave the author of the script a one star rating.

The reason was due to the poor support. There was no response to my comment even after 20 days.
I think they so not listen to the users' opinions.
At the very least, it is considered as good manners to leave a response.
The script itself was extremely dirty and I will not use it for the source code.

After leaving the one star rating, I received a number of mails from them containing abusive language.
For a poor quality script coupled with bad support a one star rating is appropriate, isn't it?
That is entirely up to the user's discretion.

元の翻訳
This guitar a limited edition Gibson only made for Japan.
The color is the popular TV Yellow. It is a very rare Les Paul Special, unavailable in the United States.

Selling prices from various net shops.
Fender　A　　US$**⇒US$**
Fender　B　　US$**⇒US$**

To change all the black parts to aged white would be $60, including part cost and workmanship.
With new 57st & a 1985 pickup, I think you will get a better sound from 85's.

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This guitar is a limited edition Gibson only made for Japan.
The color is the popular TV Yellow. It is a very rare Les Paul Special which is unavailable in the United States.

Discount prices from our internet shops as follows:
Fender　A　　US$**⇒US$**
Fender　B　　US$**⇒US$**

To change all of the black parts to the aged white would be $60, including part and labor fee.
Comparing with new 57st & a 1985 pickup, I think you will get a better sound from 85's.

元の翻訳
When I made direct inquiry, I received the following reply

XXXX

In eventuality perhaps the brackets were thrown out by MYUS staff.
Or
While it was in transit to Japan it was lost, either is possible I think.
Why I say this is that when I received the first package, only the bumper was in there, the packaging was damaged quite badly.
There were no brackets in either the first or second package.

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When I made a direct inquiry, I received the following reply

XXXX

The brackets might have been thrown away by MYUS staff.
Or
During the delivery to Japan, it might've fallen off.
Why I say this is because when I received the first package, only the bumper was in the package, but the packaging was damaged quite badly.
There were no brackets in either the first or second package.

元の翻訳
The items from the order have arrived.

The fixing screw for the Tilt Brake on A was damaged↵
All 3 units.
Please include 3 of these in the current order.
I have attached a photograph. Please confirm.

There are lots of cases where the instruction manual is not included or damaged.
I request that you package it in such a way that it not become dirty or damaged in the box.

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The items from the previous order have arrived.

The fixing screws for the Tilt Brakes on A were damaged; for all of the 3 units.
Please include 3 of them with the current order.
I have attached a photograph. Please confirm.

There are lots of cases where the instruction manual is not included or damaged.
I request that you package it in a cardbord box so that it may not become dirty or damaged.

元の翻訳
I received the email below from the script programmer after leaving a low evaluation on ABC Script.
Do you know the user name from the evaluation?
Previously, I have had communication back and forth with support, I think you would know their email address.
Is this kind of direct email sent to me a infringement of your contract laws? Also is there some sort of problem that the user name can be understood from evaluation?

Also, when I posted this script, it did not work with Japanese. Can I ask for a refund please?↵

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I received the email below from the script programmer after leaving a low evaluation on ABC Script.
Would it be possible for them to know the user name who had evaluated?
I have had communication back and forth with support before so that I think they would know my email address.
Would it be a infringement of your contract laws if they directly sent this kind of mail to me ? Would you think this is a problem that the users name who evaluate is disclosed?

Also, when I posted this script, it did not work with Japanese. Can I ask for a refund please?