スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — もらったレビュー

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Playstation 4 began selling in Japan on the 22nd February.

The sale began late in Japan, and I think there were already plenty of people who had purchased them.

In March and April two major titles went on sale Final Fantasy XIV and Metal Gear Solid 5.

I would still like to keep my eye on what software will be released int he future.

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Playstation 4 began selling in Japan on the 22nd February.

The sale began late in Japan, and I think there were already plenty of people who had purchased them [tense confusion].

In March and April major titles such as Final Fantasy XIV and Metal Gear Solid 5 went on sale.

I would still like to keep my eye on what software will be released in the future.

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I must apologize in this instant.

I did know about the damage report.
Please return it as received damaged, sorry for the inconvenience.
If it is done this way it will not incur shipping costs.
I have already informed EMS in Japan of this case.
I have sent a request for investigation to the American EMS (UPS) also.

Even if there is no external scratches, as it is a precision instrument,↵
large shocks can cause the malfunction.

I purchased this item from a specialist shop, they had used it many times.
You are not mistaken on that point.
When you have completed the process for return, I will refund the cost of the goods and shipping costs.

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I must apologize in this instant.

I did know about the damage report [differs from the original].
Please return it as received damaged [differs from the original]. Sorry for the inconvenience.
If it is done this way, it will not incur shipping costs.
I have already informed EMS in Japan of this case.
I have sent a request for investigation to the American EMS (UPS) also.

Even if there are no external scratches, as it is a precision instrument, large shocks can cause the malfunction.

I purchased this item from a specialist shop and had used it many times.
You can be sure of that.
When you have completed the process for return, I will refund the cost of the goods and shipping costs.

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I am also confused. Please allow me to ask some questions again.
Why is the tag page of XYZ not displayed on the page below?
There is an XYZ tag on the right, but when clicked it does not display. Is that correct?
It is strange that it doesn't display, right?
When there are 2 or more tags there is no problem, but when there is only one, it does not display.
Is the demo site version an old one? Or is the post an old one therefore the XYZ page does not display?
Do you not understand my meaning?

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I am also confused. Please allow me to ask some questions again.
Why is the tag page of XYZ not displayed on the page below?
There is an XYZ tag on the right, but when clicked, it does not display. Is that correct?
It is strange that it doesn't display, right?
When there are 2 or more tags, there is no problem, but when there is only one, it does not display.
Is the demo site version an old one? Or does the XYZ page not display because the post is an old one?
Do you not understand my meaning?

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This huge amount of LEGO is available for sale in Japan.

However, I would like to warn that the items purchased should not be offered on eBay for the same price, it is necessary for the seller to first make a profit on the items.
Our target is a minimum of 35% profit.
This is included the sellers fee of 15% from eBay and PayPal
We will also be selling the items including free postage, so you add in the postage
Way of pricing the items
eg.
Purchase price X 1.35 + Postage X 1.15 = Selling price.

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As you can see, so many LEGOs are posted for sale from Japan.

However, I would like to warn that the items you found should not be offered on eBay for the same price before you confirm if the seller can make a profit on the items.
Our target is a minimum of 35% profit.
This includes the sellers fees of 15% for eBay and PayPal.
We will also be selling the items with free shipping charges (postages), so you need to add them on.
Way of pricing the items:
eg.
Purchase price X 1.35 + Shipping charge (Postage) X 1.15 = Selling price.

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I found the book cover you were looking for the other day so I bid on it.
The winning bid was 1000JPY (+postage) do you still want it?
If you would like I can send the book cover with your art book would that be ok?
If you don't want it, do not worry as I will use it myself.

Is Paris hot at the moment? The weather in Japan is very changeable, not good for my health, I'm getting a little tired of it...and would like to get rid of my cold....
I also don't feel like getting out and about if I could, but the less I work the less I get paid. I'm just getting on with my mundane work.

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I found the book cover you said you wanted the other day so I bid on it.
The winning bid was 1000JPY (+postage) do you still want it?
If you would like, I can send the book cover with your art book. Would that be ok?
If you don't want it, do not worry as I will use it myself.

Is Paris hot at the moment? The weather in Japan is very unstable, not good for my health, I'm getting a little tired of it...and would like to get rid of my cold....
I also don't feel like getting out and about if I could, but the less I work the less I get paid. I'm just getting on with my mundane work.

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Yearly sales of over 1,000,000 Japanese products all over the world on Amazon. I plan to make the 13hr flight from Japan to London to join in this event. I am seeking partners with an interest in Japanese products and partners to provide products from Europe. If you have inquiries about any Japanese manufacturers please consult me. Also, any representatives that can supply popular items please contact me. I am looking forward to seeing you all at the meeting.

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I sell over 1,000,000 dollars worth of Japanese products all over the world on Amazon. I plan to make a 13 hr flight from Japan to London to join in this event. I am seeking partners with an interest in Japanese products and partners who can provide products from Europe. If you have inquiries about any Japanese manufacturers' products then please consult with me. Also, any representatives that can supply popular items please contact me. I am looking forward to seeing you all at the meeting.

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I am looking at buying either A or B. If I do go ahead with the purchase I will use PayPal.

How will the item be packaged? Will it be packed securely to prevent scratching or damage?
If I purchase from Japan, do I still have to pay the 6.25% MA State Tax?
Does it include the genuine foot switch?
Can you discount a little bit from either A or B?

In the future, if I purchase large quantities of amplifiers from you shop, would it be possible to get a better price?

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I am looking at buying either A or B. If I do go ahead with the purchase I will use PayPal.

How will the item be packaged? Will it be packed securely to prevent scratching or damage?
If I purchase from Japan, do I still have to pay the 6.25% MA State Tax?
Does it include the genuine foot switch?
Can you discount a little bit from the price of either A or B?

In the future, if I purchase large quantities of amplifiers from you shop, would it be possible to get a better price?

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The body size of the regular model ST57 is about 85% scale, smaller.
Basically the specification is the same, just packaged in a more compact style.
The sound is identical to the quality of a Stratocaster
It is not of cheaper quality.

This smart sized model is ideal for kids bands, family bands, and of course a traveling or bedside guitar.
An original GIG Bag is included.
We can offer it in 2 colors, black or tobacco brown.

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The body size of the regular model ST57 is about 85% scale, smaller.
Basically the specification is the same, just packaged in a more compact style.
The sound is identical to the quality of a Stratocaster.
It is not of cheaper quality.

This smart sized model is ideal for kids bands, family bands, and of course a traveling or bedside guitar.
An original GIG Bag is included.
We can offer it in 2 colors, black or tobacco brown.

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Last week if I went to a live event, I was outside A's shop dancing!

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Last week when I went to the live event, I passed by A's store!

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We can make your own one off iPhone case.
You can choose your favorite Japanese Kanji (1-3 characters) and have it custom made to cover the entire back surface.
Up to 3 characters are possible
I can also recommend Kanji for you to depict your desired image even if you don't know Kanji.
Please enjoy the unique presence of having Japanese characters, the beauty of Japan.
Included: 1 X 6 sided wrench, 4 X fastening screws, 1 X Cleaner.

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We can make your own one off iPhone case.
You can choose your favorite Japanese Kanji (1-3 characters) and have it custom made to cover the entire back surface.
Up to 3 characters are possible
I can also recommend Kanji for you to depict your desired image even if you don't know Kanji.
Please enjoy the unique presence of Japanese Kanji characters - the beauty of Japan.
Included: 1 X Hex Key, 4 X Fastening Screws, 1 X Screen Protector, 1 X Cleaner.

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I am sorry to say that I can offer no further discount on this item re tax, due to the cost of damage compensation costs when I purchase the item (70-80% of wholesale)

It is therefore difficult for me to issue a receipt for $800 as you have requested.

The GPS on this watch has a worldwide functionality.

At present, we just ran out of stock. If you are not in a hurry we would be glad of your business on another occasion.

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I am sorry to say that I cannot indicate lower prices for the customs purpose, due to the cost of damage compensation costs when I purchase the item (70-80% of wholesale)

It is therefore difficult for me to issue a receipt for $800 as you have requested.

The GPS on this watch has a worldwide functionality.

At present, we just ran out of stock. If you are not in a hurry we would be glad of your business on another occasion.

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I would like to place an order for 20 units of the Garmin eTrex 10

How much is the Garmin 310 X without the HRM (Hard Red Monitor)?

Also I did a comparison on the Logitech 550 and 485 and cant find a difference, if you pictures and more information could you please send it.
** If you have any other items as well as Logitech please let me know.

I have no need for rebuilt/repaired items.

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I would like to place an order for 20 units of the Garmin eTrex 10, so please send me a bill.

How much is the Garmin 310 X without the HRM (Hard Red Monitor)?

Also I did some research on the Logitech 550 and 485 and couldn't find anything. If you have more information such as images, could you please send it to me?
** If you have any other items of Logitech please let me know.

I have no need for rebuilt/repaired items.

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Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter
I have checked it. It is wonderful, thank you.
I am unsure about A, what is best to do with it?
Is a server or FTP necessary?

I have understood. So I will send you the information listed below. Thank you.

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Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter
I have checked it. It is wonderful, thank you.
I am unsure about A, what would be the best approach to do with it?
Is a server or FTP necessary?

I have understood. So I will send you the information listed below. Thank you.

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Regarding the merchandise I shipped yesterday, I discovered I still have 6 of the 13 records.
It was my fault for not checking. I will post the records asap tomorrow.
(I have already sent the jackets/sleeves)
I am truly sorry for the inconvenience and I apologize.

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Regarding the merchandise I shipped yesterday, I discovered that I still have 6 of the 13 records.
It was my fault for not checking. I will post the records asap tomorrow.
(I have already shipped the jackets/sleeves)
I am truly sorry for the inconvenience this might have caused you and I apologize.

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Regarding the merchandise I shipped yesterday, I discovered I still have 6 of the 13 records.
It was my fault for not checking. I will post the records asap tomorrow.
(I have already sent the jackets/sleeves)
I am truly sorry for the inconvenience and I apologize.

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Regarding the items I shipped some days ago, I found that I still have 6 of the 13 records on my side .
It was my fault since I did not check it. I will ship the records asap tomorrow.
(I have already sent the jackets/sleeves)
I am truly sorry for the inconvenience caused.

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Good afternoon
Thanks to you keeping us busy we are all healthy and happy.
Mr. OO how are you doing?
As Japan is approaching spring the working day is getting a little easier with the better weather, the gloves your company provides us are selling very well

The address is the same, no problems there.
I look forward to your contact
Thank You

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Hello.
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I've been great and keeping busy lately.
How are you?
As Japan is approaching spring and the weather is becoming perfect for outdoor activities, the gloves your company supplied us is selling great.

Please use the same address.
I look forward to your reply.
Thank You.

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RE; Tracking number 940551189956005814591
It has been sent with USPS
It has already arrived on the the 10th March, however it is not yet registering on the web page inbox. Please update me on the information as soon as possible.

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RE: Tracking number 940551189956005814591
It has been sent with USPS
It must have already been delivered on March 10. However, it has not yet been reflected on the web page inbox. Please update me on the situation as soon as possible.

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Good afternoon, I am the bidder OO.
I tried using PayPal to make payment but it indicated that "Goods can not be shipped to Japan", and I could not complete payment.
If you can change the settings on the sellers side to accept from Japan I can make payment. Please arrange this.
I do not understand English very well so reading text takes me a long time.
Do you have a photograph of the movement? If you do could you please send it to OO@gmail.com

Thank You

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Good afternoon, I am the bidder OO.
I tried using PayPal to make a payment but it indicated that "Goods can not be shipped to Japan", and I could not complete the payment.
If you can change the settings on the sellers side to accept from Japan I can make a payment. Please arrange this.
I do not understand English very well and it takes long for me to read .
Do you have a photograph of the movement? If you do could you please send it to OO@gmail.com

Thank You

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The product description was made by Amazon, I can not change it
The product photograph is old, and the packaging has changed I am told, but the product is the same.
If you are unhappy, please return the product to Japan for a refund.
Thank you.

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The product description was made by Amazon, I cannot change it
The product photograph is old, and the packaging has changed I am told, but the product is the same.
If you are unhappy, please return the product to Japan for a refund.
Thank you.

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Thank you indeed for such wonderful feedback, my daughter loved it and that made me extremely happy. I'm glad we got your new product. If you need anything from me please feel free to contact me.

I can ship products to your country, however, I can only use a tracking number/ID for products shipped from Japan, once it arrives in your country I can no longer track it. I can not guarantee items that may get lost during domestic postal processing in your country,is that OK?

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Thank you very much for such a wonderful feedback, your daughter loved it and that made me extremely happy. I'm glad you got our new product. If you need anything from me please feel free to contact me.

I can ship products to your country, however, I can only use tracking numbers/IDs while the packages are still in Japan. Once they arrive in your country, I can no longer track them. I can not guarantee that items never get lost during the domestic postal processing in your country. If it is all right with you, I can make a shipment. Thank you.

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Thank you very much for your reply. My current location is Florida State, so I need to know if the quoted price is inclusive of State Tax? If it is inclusive of State Tax, I would like to place the order, please advise me of the purchase procedure for your company.

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Thank you for your reply. My shipping address is Florida but can I understand that the price is including the State tax? If it is so, I would like to purchase, please let me know how we should proceed with the transaction.↵