スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
出品者と商品を評価したいですすがその方法教えていただきませんか？

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御社と商品を評価したいのですがその方法を教えていただけませんか？

元の翻訳
I can not use this number for tracking, when will the rest of the products arrive?
Please tell me when the planned completion date for delivery completed. Thank you.

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I can not use this number for tracking. When will the rest of products arrive?
Please tell me the planned delivery completion date. Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting me. If you would like to pay with PayPal including the items you bid on previously I can do that for you.
Is that acceptable?

If there is no problems, I will send you a payment request. The shipping for the 7 LP's is $30.

LP X 4: US: $357.96　(previously bid items)
LP 3：US $270
Shipping: $30

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Thank you for contacting me. If you would like to pay with PayPal including the items you have bidded previously I can do that for you.
Is that acceptable?

If there is no problems, I will send you a invoice. The shipping fee for the 7 LPs is $30.

LP x 4 quantities: US: $357.96　(previously bidded items)
LP x 3 quantities：US $270
Shipping fee: $30

元の翻訳
I am sorry but another person has already purchased No.3839
I look forward to helping you at another time.

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I am sorry, but another person (→ customer) has already purchased No.3839.
I look forward to helping you at another occasion.

元の翻訳
Thank you for you message.
Can you you please check the tracking number?
Please let me check it from here.
After I have check the status of the item I will contact you.

Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you but,↵
could you please give me the URL or ASIN code of the product you wish to purchase?

Thank you for your message
I can not confirm if it has English subtitles.
Thank you

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Thank you for you message.
Can you please check the tracking number?
Please let me check it from here.
After I have checked the status of the item I will contact you.

Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you, but, could you please give me the URL or ASIN code of the product you wish to purchase?

Thank you for your message
I can not confirm if it has English subtitles.
Thank you

元の翻訳
Thank you for recommending the sale of the “Salba Chia Bar”. Analysis of the nutrients came out. Nutritional value per bar, energy 181.2kcal, protein 2.68g, fat 7.88g, carbohydrate 23.64g, dietary fiber 2.52g, sodium is 14.8mg. Calories corresponding to two bananas it is the best for a high-energy diet. The Japaneses label will display the date of manufacture. Please to sell it within 1 year of the manufacture date. I hope that this will be a hit product.

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Thank you for promoting the sale of the “Salba Chia Bar”. Analysis of the nutrients came out. Nutritional value per bar, energy 181.2kcal, protein 2.68g, fat 7.88g, carbohydrate 23.64g, dietary fiber 2.52g, sodium is 14.8mg. Calories equivalent to that of two bananas, it is the best for a high-energy diet. The label in Japan will indicate the manufacturing date. Please sell it with 1 year of the manufacturing date as the best-before date. I hope that this will be a hit product.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. Has anything changed with you?
My Google shop sales have slumped due to the Panda update, hits have been reduced
Also, I am really feeling the effect of the no time difference between the America and the Official Japan store and them selling new product in Japanese.

However, I will continue to promote the items items not sold in Japan via promotion and keep the shop going.

Luckily as I am replying to you, I just got 2 more orders.
Can we do business as usual?

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Thank you for contacting me. Has anything changed with you?
My Google shop sales have slumped due to the Panda update, and the number of page view has been reduced.
Also, I am really feeling the effect of the no time difference between the US and the Official Japan store and them selling new product in Japanese.

However, I will continue to promote the items not sold in Japan via promotion and keep the shop going.

Luckily as I am replying to you, I just got 2 more orders.
Can we do business as usual?

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Dear La siesta,

Thank you for your kindness as always.

I would like to purchase a CSL21-6, when will they be available?
I have to reply to a customer with this information so if you could get back to me soon it would be appreciated.

Regards.

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Dear La siesta,

Thank you for your kindness as always.

I would like to purchase a CSL21-6, when will they be available?
I have to reply to a customer with this information so if you could get back to me ASAP it would be appreciated.

Regards.

元の翻訳
I will attach a scanned copy of the EMS paperwork for the item I sent you, please check it.
I can not get a tracking number even from the UPS site, please view he status using the below.

If the goods do not arrive, I can re-post or refund,whichever is convenient for you.

I hope it work on your eczema you described!
Previously I ate a lot of junk food and foods with additives, but recently I have been having a lot more fruit and vegetables.
I was able to get a signed copy of OO's book at the book store fair.

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I have attached a scanned image of the EMS documentations for the item I sent you, please check it.
Also, please find the list of statuses regarding the tracking information for the shipments which I was able to obtain through USPS home page as follows.

If the goods do not arrive, I can reship or refund, whichever is convenient for you, so please let me know.

I am interested in the item which you claim to be effective for eczema!
Previously I ate a lot of junk food and foods with additives, but recently I have been having a lot more fruits and vegetables.
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I was able to get a signed copy of OO's book at the book store fair.↵

元の翻訳
From the above site, I have confirmed you have received the returned product.
So hurry up and return the money. Don't forget the $30 you owe for return postage.

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From the above site, I have confirmed you have received the returned product.
So hurry up and return the money. Don't forget the $30 you owe me for the return shipment fee.

元の翻訳
At present we are ordering every week on Monday And Wednesday.
We got the invoice for the goods we ordered on Wednesday, Friday night Japan time.
With this timing we can not prepare customs paperwork very efficiently, and goods do not arrive on schedule to Japan.
Is there a way to get the invoice to us by Thursday night your time, in other words Friday morning Japan time?
If that isn't possible then we will have to change the days on which we order, I would like you to be able to assist us with this.

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At present we are ordering every week on Monday And Wednesday.
We got the invoice for the goods we ordered on Wednesday, Friday night Japan time.
With this timing we can not prepare customs paperwork very efficiently, and goods do not arrive on schedule to Japan.
Is there a way to get the invoice to us by Thursday night your time, in other words Friday morning Japan time?
If that isn't possible then we will have to change the days on which we order, so I would like you to be able to assist us with this.

元の翻訳
I have ordered 3 items. When the arrive in can you please send them? I will be paying by PayPal, could you please send me a payment request including the postage cost. I await your reply

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I'll order 3 items. When it's arrived, can you please send them? I will be paying by PayPal, could you please send me a payment request including the shipping cost. I'm awaiting your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
It is not the first time for me, please give my regards to all.
I get most of my goods from Japan and sell them.
In order to satisfy all customers, items are packaged carefully and shipped expediently.
If you have anything you are looking for, please don't hesitate to ask me.

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Thank you for visiting our store.
It has not been long since the launch of our store, but we look forward to serving you.
I am selling goods that are mostly purchased from Japan.
In order to satisfy all customers, items are packaged carefully and shipped expediently.
If you have anything you are looking for, please don't hesitate to ask me.

元の翻訳
[Title]
For those who want to improve their English ability! Welcome to our study community

[Body]
The Conyac site operates as a meeting place for like minded lovers of foreign languages, where you can study languages. If you register at Conyac, you can earn some pocket money, and enjoy the free content.

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[Title]
For those who want to improve their English ability! Welcome to our study community

[Body]
Conyac is a language study website which operates as a meeting place for like-minded lovers of foreign languages. If you register with Conyac, you can earn some pocket money, and enjoy various free content.

元の翻訳
I will purchase 50
Please ship to the address below

I will be using PayPal for payment.
PayPal Address:
Please send me a payment request.

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I will purchase 50
Please ship to the address below

I will use PayPal for payment.
PayPal Address:
Please send me a invoice.

元の翻訳
[] Reason for the problem
- Late shipping

[] Prevention of Recurrence of problem
- Establish a daily schedule in order to meet the requirements of all purchasers
- Reduce the lead time to shipping
- Management of Stock
- Increased communication with buyers
- Policy Infringements
- Prohibited Content / OR limit Items

[] Appeal
We will endeavor to do our best to make our buyers happy by applying the sales plan and establishing better business practice. I hope this will see an increase in sales.
Japan will be providing strong support from now on for A's prosperity.
I wish you all good luck.

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[] Reason for the problem
- Late shipping

[] Preventive measures for the recurrence of the problem:
- Establish a daily schedule in order to meet the requirements of all purchasers
- Reduce the lead time for shipping
- Inventory control
- Increased communication with buyers
- Policy Infringements
- Prohibited Content and/or restricted Items

[] Appeal
We will endeavor to do our best to make our buyers happy by applying the sales plan and establishing a better business practice. I am hoping for the reinstatement of my sales privilege from the bottom of my heart.
At last but not least, I am sincerely wishing for A's prosperity.
I wish you all good luck.

元の翻訳
I understand that I caused a problem in the application.
I am very sorry for this.
I do not know what was the cause of the trouble in this instance.
However, I plan to release a new version with in the next few days.
I hope to resolve this in the next new version.

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I understood that there is a problem with the application.
I am very sorry for this.
I do not know what was the cause of the trouble in this instance.
However, I plan to release a new version with in the next few days.
I hope to resolve this in the next new version.

元の翻訳
Thank you for you message.

The function of the item is stated below.
According to the content it does not have an alarm function.
Specs: White lettering, tough solar,10bar waterproof, neon light, radio receiver, automatic compensation of hand position, world timer, stopwatch, day/date calendar, white pearl (lettering color), silver (strap color).

Thank you for your message.
I would like to cancel the item please.

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Thank you for your message.

The function of the item is stated below.
According to the details, it does not have an alarm function.
Specs: White mother of peral dials, tough solar, 10bar waterproof, neon light, radio receiver, automatic compensation of hand position, world timer, stopwatch, day/date calendar, white pearl (dial color), silver (strap color).

Thank you for your message.
I would like to cancel the item please.

元の翻訳
あなたのメールをありがとうございました。私はあなたが間違った商品を受け取ったことを非常に残念と思っています。私はあなたが受け取った項目については全額を返金することを要求しました。お支払先に返金をするには2〜4日かかります。私はこれがあなたを起こしていることをご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございません。

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メールをご送信いただきありがとうございました。間違った商品が届いたのこと、非常に申し訳ございません。お客様が受け取られた商品については全額返金を手配いたしました。お支払方法に返金をするには2〜4日かかります。私はこれがあなたを起こしていることをご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございません。

元の翻訳
I was sort of able to change it.
I'm sorry to keep asking but there is one point I have some concern over.

1) If the file I go to upload has a Japanese file name, the picture does not display ( I will attach a file with a Japanese file name)
Not just for Japanese, but anything other than alphabet characters would return an error I think. So Russian or Chinese etc would also be an error.
The file lettering appears illegible.

2) When the file extension is .jpeg it can not be posted.

There is no need for a reply to the above question, and the questions I have asked previously, only if you can I would like a reply.

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I was sort of able to change it.
I'm sorry to keep asking, but there is one point I have some concern over.

1) If the file, I go to upload has a Japanese file name, the picture does not display (I will attach a file with a Japanese file name)
Not just for Japanese, but anything other than alphabet characters would return an error I think. So Russian or Chinese, etc. Would also be an error.
The file lettering appears illegible.

2) When the file extension is.jpeg it can not be posted.

There is no need for a reply to the above question, and the questions I have asked previously, only if you can I would like a reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
This item is a genuine Sony product.
The settings can be changed to English.
I recommend a voltage adapter be purchased for this item.

Thank you for your message.
I mus apologize.
I will get back to you with the details of this item at a later date.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your message.
This item is an official Sony product.
You can change the language to English.
I would recommend you to purchase a voltage adapter for appropriate voltage for this product.

Thank you for your message.
I am sorry.
I will send you an email about this product
Thank you very much for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I was not intending to deceive you when I sold the camera to you.
I had no intention of doing an international transaction.
In this instance the it was not the lack of precision in the explanation rather that it was vague, I apologize for this.

For me this is also very regrettable.
Please return the Camera.
I understand that I will be refunding you your full price.

Thank You.

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I was not intending to deceive you when I sold the camera to you.
I had no intention of doing an international transaction.
In this instance it was the lack of precision in the explanation thereby making it vague, I apologize for this.

For me this is also very regrettable.
Please return the Camera.
I would like to give you a full refund.

Thank You.