Larry Huang (guaiyetta) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
感谢您特意进行了解。
请查收附件的excel文件。
我会使用我香港公司的银行账户（SHANDY　INTERNATIONAL）进行日元的汇款。
请您告诉我您的银行账户。

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感谢您特意进行了解。
请查收附件的excel文件。
我会从我香港公司的银行账户（SHANDY　INTERNATIONAL）用日元进行汇款。
请您告诉我您的银行账户。

元の翻訳
9:30 (预订)

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9:30 (预定)

元の翻訳
I am sorry for my late reply.

I has been in the hospital for about one month because of my fracture.
Now I resume my work.
Because the goods is not in stock, I will give you the refund.
Very sorry for your long-time waiting.

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I am sorry for my late reply.

I have been in the hospital for about one month because of my fracture.
Now I resumed my work.
Because the goods are not in stock, I will give you the refund.
Very sorry to make your wait for a long time.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your purchase.
We are not able to send the lithium battery to your country.
We can only send you the body without the lithium battery.
If you can not accept this, please cancel the order with below method.

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Thank you for your purchase.
We are not able to send a lithium battery to your country.
We can only send you the body without lithium battery.
If you can not accept this, please cancel the order with the below method.

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In Conyac, you can easily get below works through Web.

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In Conyac, you can easily get below works through [unclear] our website.

元の翻訳
Because the product I ordered on (month,date) is broken, I want to have a full refund.
Please tell me the necessary procedures to get the refund.

Below are the information about the order.
Product Name: yyyyy
Order number: xxxxx
Quantity: 1
Price: $ 58.99

The broken part is that part of the zipper can't be occlude well and will be open in the middle when closing the zipper. I can send a picture about the broken status, please tell me if you need it.

I am looking forward to your contact.

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Because the product I ordered on (month,date) was broken, I want to have a full refund.
Please tell me the necessary procedures to get the refund.

Below are the information about the order.
Product Name: yyyyy
Order number: xxxxx
Quantity: 1
Price: $ 58.99

The broken part is that part of the zipper can't be occlude well and will be opened in the middle when closing the zipper. I can send a picture about the broken status, please tell me if you need it.

I am looking forward to your contact.

元の翻訳
I get it. I will make a order as soon as it is in stock. By the way, does AAA still not in stock?

Also, when will BBB's shipment be? Please tell me the shipment date.

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I get it. I will make an order as soon as it is in stock. By the way, does AAA still not in stock?

Also, when will BBB be released? Please tell me the release date.

元の翻訳
d video website: http://video.dmkt-sp.jp/ti/10009052

Also, "IT’S THE RIGHT TIME" is going to release though PC/Mobile/Smart phone together on 12/3(Wed)!
Please also look forward to it!!

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d video website: http://video.dmkt-sp.jp/ti/10009052

Also, "IT’S THE RIGHT TIME" is going to be released through PC/Mobile/Smart phone simultaneously on 12/3 (Wed)!
Please also look forward to it!!

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AAA is awarded of "Shining 56th! Japan Record Award" Excellent work award!

AAA is awarded of "Shining 56th! Japan Record Award" Excellent work award!

AAA's song "Before say goodbye" is awarded of "Shining 56th! Japan Record Award" Excellent work award!

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AAA is awarded "Shining 56th! Japan Record Award" Excellent work award!

AAA is awarded "Shining 56th! Japan Record Award" Excellent work award!

AAA's song "Before saying goodbye" is awarded "Shining 56th! Japan Record Award" Excellent work award!

元の翻訳
Program name: TBS "Shining 56th! Japan Record Awards"
Broadcasting Date: December 30, 2014 (Tuesday)
http://www.tbs.co.jp/recordaward/

AAA "Before say goodbye"


Download AAA "Before say goodbye" here ↓
iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/sayonarano-qianni-single/id914781620

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Program name: TBS "the 56th Shinining Japan Record Awards"
Broadcasting Date: December 30, 2014 (Tuesday)
http://www.tbs.co.jp/recordaward/

AAA "Before saying goodbye"


Download AAA "Before saying goodbye" here ↓
iTunes: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/sayonarano-qianni-single/id914781620

元の翻訳
2015 1/18(Wed) AAA Nagoya talk show opens!

1/18(Sun) AAA Nagoya talk show opens!

Time: 2015, January 18th(Sun)
Entry: 17:30
Show open: 18:00~
Location: Nagoya International Hotel 2F International Hall
http://nagoyakokusai.com/

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2015 1/18(Wed) AAA Nagoya talk show confirmed!

1/18(Sun) AAA Nagoya talk show confirmed!

Date: 2015, January 18th (Sun)
Entry: 17:30
Show open: 18:00~
Location: Nagoya International Hotel 2F International Hall
http://nagoyakokusai.com/

元の翻訳
Hello, my name is EO(?)!
This illustration is from "TOHO Project", which is famous in Japanese Otaku culture!
I am also going to draw "TOHO Project"'s illustration and submit to it from now on.
Please enjoy the world of "TOHO Project"!

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Hello, my name is EO!
This illustration is from "TOHO Project", which is famous in Japanese Otaku culture!
I am also going to draw "TOHO Project"'s illustration and submit to it from now on.
Please enjoy the world of "TOHO Project"!

元の翻訳
Was there any question?
Was the shipment of the product already done?
If it was done please tell us the tracking number.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Was there any problem?
Was the shipment of the product already done?
If it was done please tell us the tracking number.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
About the channels in Japan

About the media channels in Japan

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Cumulative channel users number: 4 million or more
Total views: 1.1 billion or more
Media cover range: more than 10 million

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Canna and Akira

Estimated annual income: 300 million yen or more
Cumulative channel users number: 600 thousand or more
Total views: 1 billion or more
Media cover range: more than 10 million

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About the channels in Japan

About the media channels in Japan

HIKAKIN

Estimated annual income: 600 million yen or more
The total number of channel users: 4 million or more
Total views: 1.1 billion or more
Media cover range: more than 10 million

Max Murai

Estimated annual income: 300 million yen or more
The total number of channel users: 1.1 million or more
Total views: 600 million or more
Media cover range: more than 5 million

Canna and Akira

Estimated annual income: 300 million yen or more
The total number of channel users: 600 thousand or more
Total views: 1 billion or more
Media cover range: more than 10 million