Chris Ishii　 (bluejeans71) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your warm words.
I was healed by your kindness and care.
It is so nice to have a real best friend like you.
I'm really glad you're my only best friend.
I love you so much!
When spring comes, I might give you cockatiels again.
I forgot to mention last time, but I prefer the blue color than the red.

I also think that I to draw a new picture of my heart.
I'm not very good at drawing manga characters.
I guess the amount of my practice wasn't still not enough.
But I will do my best.

The doctor told me to recuperate at home for the whole month in February, and work again starting March.

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Thank you for your warm words.
I was healed by your kindness and care.
It is so nice to have a real best friend like you.
I'm really glad you're my only best friend.
I love you so much!
When spring comes, I might have cockatiels again.
I forgot to mention last time, but I prefer the blue color than the red.

I also think that I star to draw new pictures for a new start.
I'm not very good at sketching manga characters.
I am afraid I have not yet practiced enough for sketches.
But I will do my best.

The doctor told me to recuperate at home for the whole month in February, and work again starting March.

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I was majored in an accoustic and recording engineering when I was a student in university. I am very much curious about A even though I haven't been working for the music industry. I believe this product must be having possibility to users who aren't familiarised in music for theirs daily life. As you know Japan is facing ageing society these days. Treatment of Alzheimer's disease can be obtained along with support of health care programmes of Japan. We have a various kind of ideas at facility other than creative activity using ORBA.
Of course, we are also specialised in approaching the route except for musical instruments or other appliances.
Wouldn't you be considering you to deal with our products?

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I majored in accoustic and recording engineering when I was a college student. I am very much curious about AI even though I haven't been working for the music industry. I believe this product must be beneficial to users who do not listen to music regularly in their daily life. Japan faces ageing society these days. Treatment of Alzheimer's disease can be obtained along with support of health care programmes of Japan. We have a various kind of ideas at facility other than creative activity using ORBA.
Of course, we also specialise in approaching the route except for musical instruments or other appliances.
Would you be have a contract with us regarding our items?

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A coward man
He would always described himself as an "office worker" in the occupation section of a questionnaire.
Real estate broker, business owner, or managing director was never the case.
It was nothing but a shame to describe self as a managing director of a business entity with no employee.
He had no confidence in this job which was succeeded from his parents.
This is a story of myself being a looser who left a design and construction company less than a year after graduated from an art college and spent the rest of his life goofing around while hopping from one part-time job to another whose parents happened to run a real estate business.
After all, it was a typical family business with no other employees, and

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A coward man
He would always describe himself as an "office worker" in the occupation section of a questionnaire.
Real estate broker, business owner, or managing director was never the case.
It was nothing but a shame to describe self as a managing director of a business entity with no employee.
He had no confidence in this job which was succeeded from his parents.
This is a story of myself being a loser who left a design and construction company less than a year after graduating from an art college and spent the rest of his life goofing around while hopping from one part-time job to another whose parents happened to run a real estate business.
After all, it was a typical family business with no other employees, and

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Hello.

Sorry to respond you late. I have been busy at work these days. I would like to ask you some more time.

I would love to work with your company.

Our company is now considering to increase our trade with Vietnam.
So, we are going to hire Vietnamese so that we can trade with Vietnam smoothly.

It will take some more time, but I will compile the material and send it to you.
I would appreciate it if you could wait for a few days.

Thank you for your patience.

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Hello.

Sorry to respond you late. I have been busy at work these days. I would like to ask you some more time.

I would love to work with your company.

We are now considering to increase our trade with Vietnam.
So, we are going to hire Vietnamese so that we can trade with Vietnam smoothly, though they will join us ↵
next April.

It will take some more time, but I will compile the material and send it to you.
I would appreciate it if you could wait for a few days.

Thank you for your patience.

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I have kept reserching the price of tuning parts of TOYOTA well in Japanese market.
Your offering price is unfortunately over budget for me to do resale them here and hopefully I would like you to reconsider it.
We would like to get them with ※※USD in total including sending costs. If you are fine with it, I am ok to pay you via credit card without paypal as your wish. When you accept my wish, I would lke to keep buying turning parts of TOYOTA from you and think of buying more in future. We hope we can get along with you in business for long term.

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I have kept reserching the price of tuning parts of TOYOTA well in the Japanese market.
Your offering price is unfortunately over the budget for me to do resale them here and hopefully I would like you to reconsider it.
We would like to get them with ※※USD in total including sending costs. If you are fine with it, I am okay to pay you via credit card without paypal as your wish. When you accept my wish, I would like to keep buying turning parts of TOYOTA from you and think of buying more in the future. We hope we can get along with you in business for long periods of time.

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How are doing?
Do you have any plans to go to the melee the show starting from August 10th?
One of the tenants is a Japanese company called ［AD］. They have the world's first technology to weld diamonds and metals together, and they want your observation and opinion.
If you have any plans to visit the show, please stop by their booth.

I went to a jewelry shop in Aoyama and Ginza.
The best seller price range is around 1000USD, so I find it difficult.

I will contact you again soon.

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How are you doing?
Do you have any plans to go to the melee the show starting from August 10th?
One of the tenants is a Japanese company called ［AD］. They have the world's first technology to weld diamonds and metals together, and they want your observation and opinion.
If you have any plans to visit the show, please stop by their booth.

I went to a jewelry shop in Aoyama and Ginza.
The best seller price range is around 1000USD, so I find it difficult.

I will contact you again soon.

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Thank you for sending quotation.
Contents are ok like that.
Credit card is ok with the AMEX card I used before with last 4 digits with 1005.
Thank you in advance.

We received contact from Kasey san about the new commercial trade with your company.
Sadly, I can't speak in English so I will answer by e-mail.

Our company is Japanese so we don't have the Copy of resale license.

We supposed to sell only by Amazon, like Amazon.com or Amazon.co.jp

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Thank you for sending quotation.
Contents are ok like that.
Credit card is ok with the AMEX card I used before with last 4 digits with 1005.
Thank you in advance.

We received contact from Kasey san about the new commercial trade with your company.
Sadly, I do not speak in English so I will answer by e-mail.

As we are a Japanese company, we do not have the Copy of resale license.

We will sell the items only by Amazon, like Amazon.com or Amazon.co.jp

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Maybe I can use only one card to purchase it because in a couple days my credit card’s limit will increase. Therefore, Could you wait for a couple days?
It’s is ok for that shipping from the US

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Maybe I can use only one card to purchase because in a couple of days my credit card’s limit will be set higher. Therefore, could you wait for another few days?
It’s is OK that you send the item from the US.

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Hello,

Thank you for letting us know the cost for the stand mirror.

Since it is far more expensive than we expected,
we would like to cancel the request.
You do not have to make any sample as well.

Regards,

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Hello,

Thank you for letting us know the cost for the stand mirror.

Since it is far more expensive than we expected,
we would like to cancel the order.
You do not have to make any sample, either.

Thank you very much.

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The product is on the way to Italy using this tracking number. I wonder if this number is correct?
Is the eBay item (LP) included in this package as well? I'd like you to check that for me right away.

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The product is on the way to Italy using this tracking number. I wonder if this number is correct.
Is the eBay item (LP) included in this package as well? I would like you to check that for me right away.

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I'm very sorry for late notice. I stayed at hospital until yesterday due to the health problem. I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.

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I am very sorry for this late notice. I stayed at the hospital until yesterday due to a health problem. I am sorry I have failed to contact you so far.

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Just a note to confirm that you haven't sent the record yet?
I receaved the email that says the record has been sent to Pasadena.
I am leaving Pasadena at the end of the month, so let me know if you have sent it to Pasadena.

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Just a note to confirm that you haven't sent the record yet?
I received an email notifying me that the record had been sent to Pasadena.
I am leaving Pasadena at the end of the month, so let me know if you have sent it to Pasadena.

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Hello.
I uploaded the document that was signed to the Shuttle yesterday.
I attached the same document to this e-mail just in case.
I'd appreciate you if you could check it for me.

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Hello.
I uploaded the document that was signed to the Shuttle yesterday.
I attached the same document to this e-mail just in case.
I would appreciate you if you could check it for me.

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「セクターによるアプローチがあり、子供、健康そして金融サービスを守る物があります。しかし、収集すべきデータもたくさんあります。IOT、貴方の家庭、車、日々の生活におけるデータです。米国において個人の権利を守るためのベースライン且つ永久的なルールが必要です」とオコーナー氏はマクマミと同様に「クロジングベル」において言及しました。
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データが使用者の所有物であるかまたは基本的な人権であるかについて同氏は「個人と会社間の均等性のバランスを取らなければならない」時期であると述べました。

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「セクターによるアプローチがあり、子供、健康そして金融サービスを守るものがあります。しかし、収集すべきデータもたくさんあります。IOT、貴方の家庭、車、日々の生活におけるデータです。米国において個人の権利を守るためのベースライン且つ永久的なルールが必要です」とオコーナー氏はマクナミ氏と同様に「クロジングベル」において言及した。
データが使用者の所有物であるかまたは基本的な人権であるかについて同氏は「個人と会社間の均等性のバランスを取らなければならない」時期であると述べた。

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I entered a coupon code,but I couldn't use it because of an error.
Please inform me again available coupon codes.

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I typed the coupon code ,but I was unable use it because of an error.
Please inform me again of the coupon code which I could use.

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I am very sorry.
Please refrain from purchasing non-alcohol perfumes also.
We will sell this product by subscription.
Since we will start selling this from this August, you cannot buy it now.
Thank you.

I contacted you about the wrong size, however it was my mistake.
We don't accept returns.

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I am very sorry.
Please refrain from purchasing non-alcohol perfumes also.
We will sell this product by subscription.
Since we will start selling it this August, you cannot buy it now.
Thank you.

I contacted you about the wrong size, however it was my mistake.
We don't accept returns.

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Regardless of what happened, we would like to apologize because we have caused worry and unhappiness to the customer. As requested by the customer, we will refund the entire amount. We are sorry about this but there is a problem with my account A so it will take about 2 to 3 days for the issue to be resolved. Due to the settings of B, the situation is that the refund will have to be routed through A. Once the problem is resolved, I promise that the full refund will be processed immediately. I will let you know the status of A as and when there is a development and contact you again once the refund is completed.

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Anyway, we would like to apologize to you for the inconvenience you have experienced. As your request, for a full refund, we will handle that. We are sorry about this but there is a problem with my account A so it will take about a few days for the issue to be resolved. Due to the settings of B, the situation is that the refund will have to be routed through A. Once the problem is resolved, I promise that the full refund will be processed immediately. I will let you know the status of A as and when there is a progress and contact you again once it is completed.

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I want to check the claim. This is a case where tracking number was registered after sending but the registration was not reflected correctly at Japan Post, and then the item sent was returned by reason that it was damaged.
I sent the same item as this one again and registered the tracking number at B, but the registration has not been reflected yet. I received a question from the customer about this, and foolishly misunderstood that I had replied.
As a result of which, it was decided to be C. The item I sent again is being transported. What will be the result of my C in this case? What can I do to solve it now?

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I want to check the complaint. This is a case where a tracking number was registered after being sent but the registration was not reflected correctly at Japan Post, and then the item sent was returned by reason that it was damaged.
I sent a copy of the same item again and registered the tracking number at B, but the registration has not been reflected yet. I received a question from the customer about this, and foolishly misunderstood that I had replied.
As a result of which, it was decided to be C. The item I sent again is being transported. What will be the result of my C in this case? What can I do to solve it now?

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4. In this case I misunderstood, I mistook and I wouldn't deny it. It is a fact that I made Amazon representatives confused.
　I am very sorry. Here I swear I will double-check not to cause matter like this.

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4. In this case I made a mistake and I wouldn't deny it. It is a fact that I made Amazon representatives confused.
　I am very sorry. Here I swear I will double-check not to cause another matter like this.

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This case is my misunderstanding and my mistake. It is true that I confused Amazon.
I really apologize. I will never do this kind of thing and I will be sure to recheck in the future.

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This case is my misunderstanding and my mistake. It is true that I confused Amazon.
I really apologize for the error. I will never do this kind of thing and I will be sure to recheck in the future.

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I'm thinking of purchasing this product. Can you negotiate with the seller?
Can you obtain some photos of the product from the seller?
I also want to know the specific size of the product.

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I'm thinking of purchasing this product. Can you negotiate with the seller?
Can you obtain some photos of the product from the seller?
I also want to know its specific size.

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I'm thinking about buying this item, is it possible to negotiate with the seller?
Can you get other photos showing the condition of item from the seller?
Also, I'd like to know details of measurement.

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I'm thinking about buying this item, is it possible to negotiate with the seller?
Can you get other photos showing the condition of the item from the seller?
Also, I'd like to know the details of the concrete size.