Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ (11月25日更新)

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評価: 47 / 1 Review / 2016/12/13 06:41:29

koichi-t
koichi-t 47 初めまして。koichi-tと申します。御社の案件で私ができることは、日本...
日本語

妻の入院の件で思いのほかバタバタしましてしまいました。
本日午後に書類を出荷しましたので、到着まで今しばらくお待ちください。
お待たせして大変申し訳ございません。

英語

I was busy about my wife's hospitalization .
Today's afternoon so I did ship the document , please wait for arrived at it .
I ' m so sorry that waiting for you .

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[削除済みユーザ] 59 This is a Japanese freelance translat...
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2016/12/21 08:35:24

元の翻訳
I was busy about my wife's hospitalization .
Today's afternoon so I did ship the document , please wait for arrived at it .
I ' m so sorry that waiting for you .

修正後
I was busy arranging the procedure of my wife being hospitalized .
I did ship the document this afternoon, so I would appreciate if you would wait a little longer until you receive it.
I am very sorry I kept you waiting so long.

It is grammatically incorrect to use "be busy about"; the preposition should be "with" instead of "about". And the last sentence of yours "I ' m so sorry that waiting for you ." does not make any sense. Please learn English grammar more.

koichi-t koichi-t 2016/12/22 14:56:42

レビューありがとうございます。勉強になりました。

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