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I am very sorry for delivering the wrong design item for pick A.

Here are 2 reason why I made this mistake. 1) I trusted the wholesaler. 2) my re-checking was not enough.
I apology from my heart.

Could you please take a photo of the wrong item and send it to me?
I have saved the photo I showed you before, so I will compare with each other and show them to wholesaler.

And here is my suggestion that please you keep the item pick A as gift from me.
I will refund you $10 which includes $5 for the the purchase amount of 2 pieces items, and another $5 for delivery fee.

I would be happy if you accept my request.

Thank you very much for your understanding and support.

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I am very sorry for delivering the wrong design item for pick A.

Here are 2 reasons why I made this mistake. 1) I trusted the wholesaler. 2) my re-checking was not enough.
I apology from my heart.

Could you please take a photo of the wrong item and send it to me?
I have saved the photo I showed you before, so I will compare with each other and show them to wholesaler.

And here is my suggestion that please you keep the item pick A as gift from me.
I will refund you $10 which includes $5 for the the purchase amount of 2 pieces items, and another $5 for delivery fee.

I would be happy if you accept my request.

Thank you very much for your understanding and support.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry that I sent you the different design of A pick.

I was trust our supplier and the biggest my mistake was I did not check it well.
Again I feel very sorry.

I would like to ask you, please send me the photo of it?
I took the photo of it before I sent you. I want to compare them and will show to our supplier.

I want to propose you to keep the A pick as my gift?
I will refund you the purchase price $ 5 and shipping fee $ 4 total $ 10.

I thank you in advance for your kind understanding.
Best Regards,↵
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I thank you in advance for your kind understanding.↵
Best Regards,↵

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I am very sorry that I sent you the different design of A pick.

I trusted our supplier and the biggest mistake was I did not check it well.
Again I feel very sorry.

I would like to ask you, please send me the photo of it?
I took the photo of it before I sent you. I want to compare them and will show to our supplier.

I want to propose you to keep the A pick as my gift?
I will refund you the purchase price $ 5 and shipping fee $ 4 total $ 10.

I thank you in advance for your kind understanding.
Best Regards,

元の翻訳

I'm sorryfor the lately contact.
I am going to send the next product with a postscript number.
For the following items we would like to refund 30 dollars that were not in stock.
Or is there a response on full refund? We are really apologize for this inconvenience.
We are looking forward to your contact.

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I'm sorry for the late contact.
I am going to send the next product with a postscript number.
For the following items we would like to refund 30 dollars that were not in stock.
Or is there a response on full refund? We are really apologize for this inconvenience.
We are looking forward to your contact.

元の翻訳
I always make shoes by Goodyear welted shoe.
It is for the first time for me to have wooden shoe model with V hinge designed and made in USA in Hand.

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I always make shoes by Goodyear welt shoe.
It is for the first time for me to have wooden shoe model with V hinge designed and made in USA in Hand.

元の翻訳
I always fabricate shoes with the goodyear welt method. Because this is the fist time I try to take in my hands a V hinged shoe wooden mold designed and manufactured in United Stated of America.

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I always fabricate shoes with the goodyear welted method. Because this is the fist time I try to take in my hands a V hinged shoe wooden mold designed and manufactured in the United Stated of America.

元の翻訳
たくさん買った場合に、eBayで5ドルずつ売る人がいます。 500以上の場合、あなたも同様にしたり、あるいはより良い対処をすることができると思います:)

多くの人を知っていたり獲得するなり、特別な方法が必要です。

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たくさん買った場合に、eBayで5ドルずつ売る人がいます。 500以上の場合、あなたも同様にしたり、あるいはより良い対処をすることができると思います:)

数人の人を知っていたり獲得するなり、特別な方法が必要です。

元の翻訳
We are considering upgrading of server next year.
Although we are due to be ready for Windows2012 R2 for OS (we will prepare server.), is it possible to transfer to current system?
Currently, as JACA version is old, we worry in its security.
If possible, at this timing, we would like to control its start and stop of the OS, is it possible/
As for that, we would be happy if you tell us its predicted payment.
If you have anything not clear, please tell us.
1) transfer cost 2) version up cost 3) other costs

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We are considering upgrading of server next year.
Although we are due to be ready for Windows2012 R2 for OS (we will prepare server.), is it possible to transfer to current system?
Currently, as JACA version is old, we worry in its security.
If possible, at this timing, we would like to control its start and stop of the OS, is it possible?
As for that, we would be happy if you tell us its predicted payment.
If you have anything not clear, please tell us.
1) transfer cost 2) version up cost 3) other costs

元の翻訳
Another seller suddenly lowered the price significantly last week. We followed that price but as soon as we received a warning email from you we restored the price back. From the department in charge of Amazon Japan, we are asking whether you are an agency of your company. Although we are sorry for troubling you, will we be able to issue one memorandum of agreement for your company? Without this we can not sell your items on Amazon. Thank you.

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Another seller suddenly lowered the price significantly last week. We followed that price but as soon as we received a warning email from you we restored the price back. The department in charge of Amazon Japan are asking whether we are an agency of your company. Although we are sorry for troubling you, will you issue one memorandum of agreement that we are an agency of your company? Without this we can not sell your items on Amazon. Thank you.

元の翻訳

I have just found the payment bill, so I paid with paypal. Sorry to bother you. Thank you for shipping the items.

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I have just found the payment bill, so I paid with paypal. Sorry to bother you. Thank you for shipping the items in advance.

元の翻訳
I would like to apologize, however, we have to move the meeting date from 4th September.
We would like to let you know the preferable dates tomorrow after considering the date between the related departments.

Additionally, we have some news to tell you.

First of all, regarding the automatic machine, the maker decline to sell it.
The reason can be our relationship is not so strong relatively.

Second, we still have the samples in our company so we are testing if it works.

Third, taking these things into account, we are considering to finish this sells after selling samples.
Since these are our fixed asset, we would like to think about how we are going to sell them.

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I would like to apologize, however, we have to move the meeting date from 4th September.
We would like to let you know the preferable dates tomorrow after considering the date between the related departments.

Additionally, we have some news to tell you.

First of all, regarding the automatic machine, the maker declined to sell it.
The reason can be our relationship is not so strong relatively.

Second, we still have the samples in our company so we are testing if it works.

Third, taking these things into account, we are considering to finish this after selling samples.
Since these are our fixed asset, we would like to think about how we are going to sell them.

元の翻訳
Please let me pick some dates up from me because I am not available on Sep. 4th.
I need to arrange with related departments, so I will inform candidate date within tomorrow.

1. Regarding the automatic machine, the manufacturing maker rejected to sell.
(I guess this is because the relationship between our company and maker has not been deep yet.)

2. There is still test prototype machine in our company.
We are on the way of checking if it works or not.

We are thinking that we will stop selling this kinds of machine after we finish to sell the prototype machine because of this 1's situation. Because the prototype is our fixed assets, we are on the way of thinking how to sell.

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Please let me pick some dates up from me because I am not available on Sep. 4th.
I need to arrange with related departments, so I will inform candidate date within tomorrow.

1. Regarding the automatic machine, the manufacturing maker rejected to sell.
(I guess this is because the relationship between our company and maker has not been deep yet.)

2. There is still test prototype machine in our company.
We are on the way of checking if it works or not.

We are thinking that we will stop selling this kinds of machine after we finish selling the prototype machine because of this 1's situation. Because the prototype is our fixed assets, we are on the way of thinking how to sell.

元の翻訳
. Understanding current situation
You can check seo search ranking and organic inflow figure.
We summarize the measures released in the past at SEO.

. SEO measurement up to now
Correction of printing whole site
" Stock" item content release
Delete parameters within header and footer link
To renewal old information of glossary
Release to redirect xxx.com/ toxx.com/ja-jp/

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. Understanding current situation
You can check seo search ranking and organic inflow figure.
Summarize the measures released in the past at SEO.

. SEO measurement up to now
Correction of printing whole site
" Stock" item content release
Delete parameters within header and footer link
Renew old information of glossary
Release to redirect xxx.com/ toxx.com/ja-jp/

元の翻訳
Thank you as always.
As for the item of the tracking number you asked, we could find it.
There was no name and membership number written.
We will attach the photo.
Please write your name and your membership number address 2 starting from M without fail from next time.
We will update the item on the system later.

If you give us a little more time, we can start purchasing agency service.
We are to start form late September or early October..
We can help items which are not able to write in English to purchase by that.
Thank you.

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Thank you as always.
As for the item of the tracking number you asked, we could find it.
There was no name and membership number written.
We will attach the photo.
Please write your name and your membership number address 2 starting from M without fail from next time.
We will update the item on the system later.

If you give us a little more time, we can start purchasing agency service.
We are to start form late September or early October..
We can help items which cannot be input in English to purchase by that.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I had been busy at work while this English lesson was closed.
Last Sunday, I finished half a transfer of the warehouse. On Monday, went to work at 4 o'clock AM and had been working until night. It was exhausting.
I will complete a transfer of the warehouse next Sunday, and perhaps will have to go to work at 4 o'clock AM on Monday again to clear up there. It is going to be hard but I will do my best.

Regarding Sunday night lesson, could you please change it to every Thursday starting 11 o'clock PM?

I have not been able to have enough time for a lesson for a while, but tried studying even a little when possible.

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I had been busy at work while this English lesson was closed.
Last Sunday, I finished half of a transfer of the warehouse. On Monday, went to work at 4 o'clock AM and had been working until night. It was exhausting.
I will complete a transfer of the warehouse next Sunday, and perhaps will have to go to work at 4 o'clock AM on Monday again to clear up there. It is going to be hard but I will do my best.

Regarding Sunday night lesson, could you please change it to every Thursday starting 11 o'clock PM?

I have not been able to have enough time for a lesson for a while, but tried studying even a little when possible.

元の翻訳
The calendars are stored separately and have no covers. Therefore,
the chronicles are not clear.

The calendar misses the page of March.

The calendar is old and has some stains and burnt stains by sunshine.

Although the rid of the box is open, the figure in it has never been taken out.

It is the rare materials of Meiji era which contains various Japanese beautiful “wave designs”.

The old set of the characters of Dragon Ball.
They consist of 80 pieces in all and all of them are not opened.

I traced your item by tracing number and found it under Customs Inspection.
I am sorry that I cannot handle this problem as it is beyond my reach.
I appreciate your kind understanding about it.

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The calendars are stored separately and have no covers. Therefore,
the chronicles are not clear.

The calendar misses the page of March.

The calendar is old and has some stains and burnt stains by sunshine.

Although the lid of the box is open, the figure in it has never been taken out.

It is the rare materials of Meiji era which contains various Japanese beautiful “wave designs”.

The old set of the characters of Dragon Ball.
They consist of 80 pieces in all and none of them are opened.

I traced your item by tracing number and found it under Customs Inspection.
I am sorry that I cannot handle this problem as it is beyond my reach.
I appreciate your kind understanding about it.

元の翻訳
As it has been kept in mess without face paper, the calendar's age is not know.

There is March missing.

There are burns and smears.

Although the box lid is open, the figure has not been out of the box.

A rare documents recorded many Meiji era's beautiful Japanese "wave design"

Dragon ball's old face set
There are altogether 80 faces without opened.


After checking with the tracking number, your item is at the customs.
As we cannot contact to your country's customs, I cannot contact your customs.

Thank you.

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As it has been kept in mess without face paper, the calendar's age is not known.

March is missing.

There are burns and smears.

Although the box lid is open, the figure has not been out of the box.

A rare documents recorded many Meiji era's beautiful Japanese "wave design"

Dragon ball's old face set
There are altogether 80 faces without opened.


After checking with the tracking number, your item is at the customs.
As we cannot contact to your country's customs, I cannot contact your customs.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
The year of the calendar is not sure since they were kept separately without the cover.

The March is missing in the calendar.

There is some burnt and stained part as the calendar is old.

The box is open but the figure has never taken out of the box.

The rare documents from Meiji era where so many beautiful “designs of waves” in Japan are included.

Old Dragon ball Menlo game set
There are 80 menkos in total that are all unopened.

Your item has been under Custom’s inspection as I checked out with your tracking number. Since I’m not able to do anything for your customs from Japan that Im afraid but I can’t contact Custom myself.
I would appreciate your understanding.

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The year of the calendar is not clear since they were kept separately without the cover.

March is missing in the calendar.

There is some burnt and stained part as the calendar is old.

The box is open but the figure has never taken out of the box.

The rare documents from Meiji era where so many beautiful “designs of waves” in Japan are included.

Old Dragon ball Menlo game set
There are 80 menkos in total that are all unopened.

Your item has been under Custom’s inspection as I checked out with your tracking number. Since I’m not able to do anything for your customs from Japan that Im afraid but I can’t contact Custom myself.
I would appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
I negotiated the price, but $ 200 was the best offer.
The owner of A is a collector, so I asked whether he also has B or not.
However, even that person answered "I am looking for it, but it is seldom sold".
Those in attached picture are goods of the movie ◎, it seems that these goods are traded at $100 per 1pc.
Conversely, A and B are frequently distributed in Japan as well.
Do you want to buy at this price? It is possible to cancel the order if you don't.
Please also see the second picture.

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I negotiated the price, but $200 was the best offer.
The owner of A is a collector, so I asked whether he also has B or not.
However, even that person answered "I am looking for it, but it is seldom sold".
Those in attached picture are goods of the movie ◎, it seems that these goods are traded at $100 per 1pc.
Conversely, A and B are frequently distributed in Japan as well.
Do you want to buy at this price? It is possible to cancel the order if you don't.
Please also see the second picture.

元の翻訳
If we do transactions directly without using ebay, I can discount the fee you pay for ebay.
Therefore, I can sell you at your desired price, which is $ 175.
If you agree to the transaction that not using ebay, I will send you an invoice via PayPal immediately.
In that case there is one condition I would like to ask.
Could you make a promise that "Do not say anything about transactions without using ebay on the page of ebay (message section)" ?
If you can promise, I will send you an invoice of $ 175 via PayPal immediately .

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If we do transactions directly without using ebay, I can discount the fee you pay for ebay.
Therefore, I can sell you at your desired price, which is $175.
If you agree to the transaction that not using ebay, I will send you an invoice via PayPal immediately.
In that case there is one condition I would like to ask.
Could you make a promise that "Do not say anything about transactions without using ebay on the page of ebay (message section)" ?
If you can promise, I will send you an invoice of $175 via PayPal immediately .

元の翻訳
Can you hear the audio on Skype?
The image on Skype is frozen though so do you have any issues?

There is no problem at my end.

I spent the weekend leisurely at home as usual.
I wanted to go out but due to the typhoon, there was heavy rain. As such, I stayed at home to study English.

Were you affected by the typhoon?

It is good that there was no impact.

As I couldn't hang my laundry to dry, I had to go to the coin laundry to dry my clothes while braving the rain.

Although I dislike the rain, the sunny weather is equally bad for me because the temperature is at a high of 40 degrees Celsius every day.

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Can you hear the audio on Skype?
The image on Skype is frozen though, so do you have any issues?

There is no problem at my end.

I spent the weekend leisurely at home as usual.
I wanted to go out but due to the typhoon, there was heavy rain. As such, I stayed at home to study English.

Were you affected by the typhoon?

It is good that there was no impact.

As I couldn't hang my clothes to dry, I had to go to the coin laundry to dry them while braving the rain.

Although I dislike the rain, the sunny weather is equally bad for me because the temperature is at a high of 40 degrees Celsius every day.